What a fab performance by Ram!! - Page 94

Originally posted by: Piscean

Where's the rest of my gang 😭 Itne crucial time pe mujhe akeli chhod kar kahan chale gaye sab! 😛

No I am back today...as a regular...no more bahanas starting today...just read the update and am still processing the comical nature of it...though RK seems to be very very good eye-candy today...ok when is he NOT???

Pi,
Crucial time? kya hua? Wahan koi cute hot and totally male tujhe aankhen dikha raha hai kya?
Kya help chahiye bol?
Men get turned on by witty women they say, Oh boy u are funny so koi probs nahi honi chahiye 😉

~*WoOoW*~ So well writin ufff..got to mention this plenty of timezz ufff...!!! 👏 👏 👏

Super duper Part 5!! I loved it. Aditee.. really, you have a gift! I am not just saying that! Its wonderful and super sensual. Crackling yaar!

Can't wait to read more!

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Originally posted by: armaandeewani

Ok yaar here they are...but bfr I write them I must warn u these are not written anywhere close in terms of creativity as other FF's are here...actually these aren't even really FF's...more so situations that could be turned into very dreamy FF's...

-Bani's birthday---JW being of the male gender has forgotten amdist other stuff---Bani decides it is best to let it pass and doesn't bring it up but regardless he comes to know when her sisters call to wish her---pati dev therefore takes Mrs. Walia out shopping...Bani and JW are out shopping---Bani falls in love w/a sari but JW doesn't like it so of course Bani decides not to get it---afterall if her hubby won't be drooling over her wearing it wat's the point...post-shopping on JW's suggestion they're heading for a birthday dinner...JW drops Bani off at the front telling her he'll park and join her (yes there's a reason he didn't valet)...Bani walks in to a dim-lighted front entrance...being the Bani Holmes she is...instead of going out she walks through several doors attempting to figure out wat is going on...suddenly all the lights went off w/Bani standing in total darkness...frantically trying to get out Bani walks past a set of doors startled by a loud crowd (yes which includes a disgusted Jigs and Roshni) wishing her a very happy birthday...with JW standing in the center of the grand hall holding a package in his hands...handing her the package he pulled close to her and whispered something in her ear...something more then a mere 'happy birthday' for sure...taking her by arm he pulls her away to a private room where she finds in the package that sari she loved along w/matching jewellery...as JW waited...Bani came out looking absolutely gorgeous in the sari...he sat her down and helped her put on the necklace...earrings...and bangles...ehh cheezy yes...very movie-like yes...but come on JW and Bani would give it their own touch...

Gotta head out...will type up second one from the computer lab...

Cute scene AD! Now reading it I just thought of a slight modification...how about making Jai turn and face the other way so Bani can change in the room while he is there 😉 This brings out another chivalrous side of him and I just am dying to see him make that little head spin with that cute smile of his decorating his face like never before! His anticipation of seeing Bani in the sari and his temptation to turn around will make JW's expression priceless and I'm sure RK can capture it so well that it'll make our hearts flutter for the millionth time! 😳 Hope you don't mind the slight modification....but then again it's RK we're talking about I"m sure you wouldn't! 😛

Originally posted by: aditee

Pi,
Crucial time? kya hua? Wahan koi cute hot and totally male tujhe aankhen dikha raha hai kya?
Kya help chahiye bol?
Men get turned on by witty women they say, Oh boy u are funny so koi probs nahi honi chahiye 😉

😆 Yaar Aditee I wasn't kidding when I said you guys make my life seem much more interesting than it is 😛 Certainly hope you're right though about witty women😉 Nahi yaar....I was just referring to the mazedaar episode and the hug! You can't all leave me to discuss it all by myself! I'm boring but not sad! 😛😆😆 Chal everyone's back so now I'm a happy JnB camper 😉

oohhh! loved this one too AD!

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Hi buddies RK mania is is very much alive because of you all 👏 👏 and this RK is making me more attracted towards him with each passing day 😉 todays hug scene must be awesome oh this hunk how I wish I were Bani and hug my sweetu Jai 😆

Wow aditiee you fiction is fabulous 👏

Aditee.. any chance you would be using any of the suggestions I sent your way ( ok, its purely selfish.. I just want to see how your mind conjures up the scenes... dying to read more ;)

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