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Posted: 19 years ago
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The reason I felt u didnt like the last part was becoz mujhe laga, u felt he is stalking her and also when he wants to kill her on finding out she "may" want to date Tarun mujhe laga, tujhe mera JW pasand nahi aaya...........

Thats why I felt I let u down and u hated the last part
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

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Where are u now? Pi is melting away listening to karunya, Soap is partying..........
Bachi main aur tum, where are u



Arre nahi yaar...here I am. Was just getting a snack...khaa khaa karke mein bhes ki taara ho jaungi ek din sach mein...
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

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The reason I felt u didnt like the last part was becoz mujhe laga, u felt he is stalking her and also when he wants to kill her on finding out she "may" want to date Tarun mujhe laga, tujhe mera JW pasand nahi aaya...........

Thats why I felt I let u down and u hated the last part



No yaar I meant differently...more along the lines of...I like how he violates her and yet it is actually not wrong. It's not like he is crossing any boundaries and doing something unacceptable...
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thx for clarifying warna main seriously JW ke character ko kuch mellow down karne ki soch rahi thi. AB NAHIII
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

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thx for clarifying warna main seriously JW ke character ko kuch mellow down karne ki soch rahi thi. AB NAHIII



Did u see the bits Soap and me talked abt in regard to some more masala for FF?
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Posted: 19 years ago
Nahi abhi main likh rahi hoon
Can u imagine what a loser I am
I am actually loving thsi AD
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: aditee

Nahi abhi main likh rahi hoon
Can u imagine what a loser I am
I am actually loving thsi AD



U'd feel a lot better if u knew how many times I refresh the page in a matter of an hour (not even a day).
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Posted: 19 years ago
PART 7
AD tumhe dedicate kiya yeh.............

(All those who hate to read abt dry biz stuff can skip this part, I hate what they show in Hindi movies and TV shows where they say things like "Hamara maal pasand aaya is liye hame 5 crore ka order mila, is liye 2 crore ka fayda hoga" crap. It ANNOYS ME, so I decided to write some sensible stuff, so rdrs who dont care for it can skip. Thx)


Bani had managed to tell all the 20 staff members at Mr A's Mumbai office. Tarun was away at Darjeeling ands he wanted to break this news in person so she refrained form calling his cell abt it.......... Unless one of the others had already called him and spilled the beans...........Valley Resorts main office was at Shimla where Mr A's biggest resort was (which had 42 cottages:-), and the one in Darjeeling had 28.......... Mr JW was going to lease part of Darjeeling but buy out Shimla in full, but suddenly a month or so ago, Bani tries to recollect, Mr A ack having recvd the offer to

sell...... Bani herslf had found out abt the sale on the day Mr A dropped the bombshell about her personal loan..............

Wednesday morning Bani not at all feeling peachy, not in the best of the moods either gets in to work, doesnt have a bite to eat or drink...........she knows that she has to head to Mr JW's to present the initial losgistics of Shimla AND Darjeeling. She is wearing her black pant suit with a cream/yellow blouse, hair OPEN framing her face. She didn't want to give JW a chance to touch her when she was in HIS territory. She hadnt seen him after the phone call on Monday morning, she again wondered where he was and who he was with (:-))
Checked, re-checked, loaded all her slides in her lap top and got ready to head out to JW's for the meeting at 11AM


JW's "buy offer" was contingent upon disclosure of full facts and "inspection of facilities" and other such real estate buy logistics. Bani's job today was to present ALL the facts as known to Mr A about hsi two properties, full and fair..........
Gets off the cab, takes the elevator to Mr JW's offices, the meeting today was with his whole Corp team consisting of his accounting head, Operations head, HR lead and and a third party company that usually pitched in to handle all legal and govt formalities..........

Ms Singh greeted her cheerfully at the front office, and sent her off in the direction of the Bd room. Bani prayed for her facts to be accurate and enters the room...

Mr JW already in there, Bani is used to the usual flip flop her stomach does on seeing him, today he is dressed in coffee colored pants and a cream/yellow full sleeve shirt, rolled up signature style (1/3rd 😉 style), his shoes match his pants accurately, may be they were custom sewn she thinks bitterly, his silver Rolex making patterns on the Bd Room ceiling playing with sun's rays 😆 ....
There are a few from the meeting team already present............

J looks up from his laptop when he sees the door swing open, eyes meet hers, she looks away
B: (looking in general at a spot behind JW's head on the wall) Good morning all!
J is too quick, he has already caught her look at the disgust she felt at his shoes (;)
The folks in the room wave a cheerful hello and " Hi! Baneeeee"and tease her about how prepared she is and go back to work

The projector cable is by Mr JW laptop she sets her laptop down, pulls the power cord from under the table and leans over to hook it up with the projector cable......... notices a nick in JW's jaw where he has obviously hurt himself shaving in the morning he notices that she has noticed it....................
The same cologne, mingled with the man's scent, made Bani even more ill..........
J: U dont like my shirt? (softly)
B: (deliberately cheery and loud) Excuse Me Mr W what did u say?
J: (two can play this game kinda look on his face louder than her ) I thot u didnt like my shirt Banee

Now Bani is is not so sure
B: I am sorry but what gave u the idea?
J: Tum zyaada khush nahi lagi jab tumne kamre mein enter kiya aur mujhe dekha so I am just assuming its just my shirt and not ME! (looks around for approval from the audience)
B:I shall reserve my opinion on the man and his shirt at this time Mr W (she smiles forced....)
Hushed laughter spreads.
More people join in............Meeting begins............

Bani starts off with Shimla.............
The sales figures, occupancies future outlook, licensing, everything and anything her research cud find she shared...........
B:It wud be the second foothold for Walia Properties and Investments in the North of India, after Shimla and considering the increased Southern tourist exodus to Northern hill stations in summer it would do very well in JW's portfolio
J: What about the landslide in Shimla last year?
B: (a little nervous) yes?
J: (very biz like, not at all like a hubby. He prepared well for his meetings he expected everyone to do the same)Shimla-Mandi road was closed for over 6 days and the property being bang on the highway....... the HP govt forced the resort to act as public shelter, how much revenue was lost?
B: goes thru her files and is able to answer, Well....... a little over Rs.1lakh 37 thousand
J: Over 37 thousand or under?
B: (trite) 1,37,765 to be precise.
J: Why shud I buy if I have to lose that kind of money, may be even more than once a year?
B: The road paving project has begun HP govt has assured ki kaam 18 months mein ho jaayega, and already 9 months have passed.............. so landslides shud not affect the road going fwd.
(Looks like he has collected all the nasty questions from the group for himself , she thinks, the team questions are a breeze, she walks tall:-)
J: One more question Bani........... may be the last before we break for coffee.
B: Hmm?
J: Himachal Govt is not new issuing building permits to resorts, then how can we construct on the vacant piece of land by the back cottages, Mr A informed that HP govt and Shimla zoning commission are at loggerheads over it, how can u help
B is stumped.......... She seriously does not have a clue.
B: I can get back to you on that Mr W. I havent recvd any new notices or directives from the govt regarding the property....
J: I am sure your ppl have back in shimla, aapki last kab hui unse baat?
B: A week ago
J: It pays to talk every day when u are selling (mockery)
PPl start getting up to leave for coffee, JW chats casually, some decide to take a walk to relax some go for coffee..... Bani in no mood for coffee, still feeling sick decides to review her Darjeeling notes............

J DOES NOT GO..... 😉
Bani does not lift her head up from her laptop she knows its only her and him and is in no mood to talk after the recent drubbing.........
J sits back down and starts punching keys in his laptop
J: Banee, so are u sorry for the cut on my jaw? (taunting)
B Noooo! (still doesnt look up)
J: I know what cud heal it...........
B: I dont, and dont want to know............
Pause ............. he watches angry color rush up her face..................
J: Arent u taking a break? u shud go stretch out and relax and have something to eat......
B I am not hungry
B: I dont see YOU realxing?
J: I am...........
B: Agar yeh aapka relaxation hai to i really dont think i will like it when u are excited...........
J: (huskily)Oh banee.........Tumne mujhe excited dekha hai and you didnt hate me at all.
THATS IT!!!
She cant have this conv now, she gets up and leaves................ his amused eyes following her .........................



Edited by aditee - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Umm ok Aditee I have stuff to say...but give me a few minutes to get myself together...go wash my face w/cold water...and also which might wipe off that BIG grin I have on my face right now...btw...cream/coffee attire...umm Aditee ur lucky I am still alive 😳...warna u'd be in serious trouble...
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Posted: 19 years ago
Ok so did wash my face...didn't really help wipe that grin off my face because as always u leave the best for the end...and the ending is still wat is replaying in my mind over and over again...

Originally posted by: aditee



so I decided to write some sensible stuff, so rdrs who dont care for it can skip

This is actually wat I really enjoyed abt this story...gave it a very realistic touch...could actually imagine it happening in an office here in LA.

Valley Resorts main office was at Shimla where Mr A's biggest resort was (which had 42 cottages:-), and the one in Darjeeling had 28..........

Like the Swiss Bank account have Bani-JW ever travelled out here...*hint hint Aditee*...damn can I be more obvious...

Wednesday morning Bani not at all feeling peachy, not in the best of the moods either gets in to work, doesnt have a bite to eat or drink

Why dear? Because for a change ur hubby didn't wish u a good morning w/a love postcard??? Arre if we here can survive w/out JW fixes every once in a while Bani u too can 😛 Btw don't make it a habit JW!!!

She is wearing her black pant suit with a cream/yellow blouse, hair OPEN framing her face. She didn't want to give JW a chance to touch her when she was in HIS territory.

Ok this is wat I love...my whole little philosophy of he violating her and yet it all being completely legal...nothing that she can have him prosecuted for. And Bani by now u must know that where JW is...it automatically becomes his territory...so u will never have home-field advantage...and I LOVE it like that.

Gets off the cab

See Bani stay w/ur hubby and u'll be getting out of NOTHING but Benzes...ok ok I know that sounds so superficial-so Pia-like eww...

Mr JW already in there

Beautiful JW...two birds one stone...not only is that thoroughly professional but also this way u are there to welcome ur pyari si biwi...

today he is dressed in coffee colored pants and a cream/yellow full sleeve shirt, rolled up signature style (1/3rd 😉 style), his shoes match his pants accurately, may be they were custom sewn she thinks bitterly, his silver Rolex making patterns on the Bd Room ceiling playing with sun's rays 😆


Umm ok this is STRICTLY dedicated to me...and I have nothing else other then to say that Aditee I don't know abt JW but I need to have u put behind bars for sure...😳 x one trillion

J is too quick, he has already caught her look at the disgust she felt at his shoes (;)

Here too JW dons that classic grin creeping at the corner of his lips and I know it irritates Bani to no end...

notices a nick in JW's jaw where he has obviously hurt himself shaving in the morning he notices that she has noticed it

Wonder wat he was daydreaming abt when that happened...because JW normally ur very much on top of things??? 😛 And I love the whole shirt bit only because it is so husbandly on his part and at the same time manages to keep the upperhand in the convo...JW wat...just wat if she had had the nerve to say that color suits Tarun well???

very biz like, not at all like a hubby. He prepared well for his meetings he expected everyone to do the same

This is my favorite part of this FF...his ability to switch from hubby to businessman in the span of a say 10 seconds and then back to hubby in another 10 seconds...

She seriously does not have a clue.

JW's expression at this point has to be priceless because u know it is one of a businessman but at the same time somewhere unconsciously there is the hubby part of him slightly amused...slighty...and also thinking 'meri pyari biwi oh I love u so'.

J: It pays to talk every day when u are selling

Well if u got off the phone w/her for a change she might be able to recover and talk to somebody else...

J: (huskily)Oh banee.........Tumne mujhe excited dekha hai and you didnt hate me at all. THATS IT!!! She cant have this conv now, she gets up and leaves................ his amused eyes following her .........................

She was able to move...physically carry herself out??? How!!! JW oh how I love u...😳😳😳...

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