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Itna to koi episode ka bhi analysis nahi karta. BINGO. Jo toone likha hai sab SAHI...............

OMG! U are getting to be detailed and picky like Pi and Soap......... woh dono bhi mera har dialog line dissect karti hain..........
the clothes, the watch the shoes, ALL FOR YOU AND U ALONE 😉

Originally posted by: aditee

Itna to koi episode ka bhi analysis nahi karta. BINGO. Jo toone likha hai sab SAHI...............

OMG! U are getting to be detailed and picky like Pi and Soap......... woh dono bhi mera har dialog line dissect karti hain..........
the clothes, the watch the shoes, ALL FOR YOU AND U ALONE 😉

Yaar woh toh main hamesha dissect karti hoon while reading it...but PI and soap beat me to it and do such a good job of putting it all in writing so I stay silent (in agreeance). So now see...if u write for a profession we'll be ur biggest and best critics.

So here I am pathetic as ever...Friday evening w/the rest of the AF having a life. Though technically I shouldn't be whining because last week at home was all fun for me and was in PI's desh at this time.

Have been watching some of the old episodes making mini-videos deleting the extra scenes. And I was thinking abt Aditee's FF...so in the episode where JW presents Bani w/the necklace...his expression right after he says 'mein pehena doon' as he reaches for necklace box...Aditee that is the very expression I imagine in scenes like the ending of ur last FF where JW is left amused...I also imagine this same expression when "Bani cannot help remember how those lips felt on hers.......... atingle shoots through her body and her lips part in anticipation and just that moment her eyes rise only to be arrested by his in that knowing look and Bani wants the earth to swallow her"...and this ""I will buy out all the supplies of this cologne in Mumbai when I get that money"...

While it is actually an injustice to choose one...this has to be one of topper fave lines of the FF'...'Bani wonders if that Rolex costs more than her personal loan. I probably did she concludes angrily'...this being another..."For a man who usually went after what he wanted, and got them too, JW was showing incredible patience and perseverance where Bani was concerened".

While I was reading the FF and read the bit abt Tarun and Bani's closeness that itched JW...Aditee one of these days w/Bani staying at JW's can he have a lunch date w/a Ms. Sonia Kapoor that Bani is forced to attend w/him and also watch him torment her by being a through gentleman and charmer w/Ms. Kapoor? Dono baju gopiyaan beech mein kanaiya (ya Ram???).

JW can txt her once in a while too...I am sure his txt styling is also sophisticated.

Continuing my pathetic streak (please read these posts for my sake AF)...I finally dl'd the video and watched it...and skip the other stuff am going to write straight on the slap scene...

Damn Jigs was on a roll...Masi emotional I can understand...her munna lied to her. But Masi munna is grown up now and can hide stuff from u...let him free in the real world now 😆. Ok sorry no jokes in a serious scene. Jigs made me laugh when she started to ask Bani once Masi left...so in control. Apparently bhai-behen dono like to be in control when they are around. And JW's jhapaat...it actually pulls of her earring...damn Ashwini I think RK ne sickness ka saara ghussa tumpe uttara. Btw sidenote...RK's face looked thinner in that shot...and it was very nice...he looked younger and very handsome. Now if looks could kill---the JW's looks would've killed Jigs and the look Jigs gives Bani post-slap would've proven lethal for both mother and child.

Other scenes eh...well the hospital scene w/masi and Jigs is quite funny...esp when masi is thrilled abt a little Jai or little Bani coming...masi how do u know it's not twins? Or do u fear for nazuksi Bani having to deliver twins? Jigs smile plastered on her face is something any idiot could've figured out but masi...not our dear masi.

And masi when Jigs tells u all that rubbish...u thought of them lying to u...didn't the woman in u make u angry at JW for the way he treated Bani??? I know Jigs didn't leave that info out.

Bani dear if ur leaving the house and u HATE JW then wat's w/the sindoor and MS? Woh rakh ke jaati JW ke liye so he could weep in guilt...waise bhi u HATE him na...he ruined ur life? Ur sisters lives? Yaha taak ke he's responsible for the foolish decisions made by ur father.

Bani's changed clothes...does JW plan too? Lol actually I think they've heard our appeals and decided to keep him in that attire for as long as possible. But atleast roll up ur sleeves damnit. RK definitely looks thinner in these shots...and he looks VERY HOT.

'phir bhi haar rishte mein...mein baas tumhe hi dekhta hoon'...very nice dialogue...very nice...

JW's expressions in that last scene are everything...his eyes say it all...even if they hadn't given him any dialogues it would've been fine...Prachi was right on w/her expressions too...very nicely done by both of them...so real. But in terms of character I don't agree w/Bani. I can understand her hurt and pain and confusion...but I cannot understand her overall character at this current moment. Can't relate to it. These two need to take a class on communication...waise aaj kaal JW does his part (bfr he was guilty of lack of communication too) but it's not enough...both need to talk to each other. Nonetheless that last scene touched to the core...

Oh yeah I forgot...so that bit in the last scene where JW remembers 06/19 shots...there is a look of guilt on his face...very bad guilt and at the same time sympathy for Bani. It was clear he realized wat he had done w/Bani wasn't 'right' according to him...and I thought that was portrayed excellently. How tragic...she is willing to live w/that memory for the rest of her life and he believes he has committed a grave sin.

Originally posted by: aditee

One of the readers is tired of the alphabetizing this whole thing so here is
PART 6

SOAP THIS IS FOR YOU...................... HOPE I DID A GOOD JOB..........😳

Love u three..........

PART 6

Man Aditee how do you manage to satisfy every one of us with the same part!!!! 👏👏👏 You are just amazing! Again obviously I love my watch, hand through hair, and "in your dreams"...."all the time Bani...all the time!" 😳
I loved the entire part of course but I do have to pick out the highlights! 😉 So sorry for not being there earlier to let you know but I'm back....with comments of course! 😃

Originally posted by: aditee

Pi,
I LOVE KARUNYA'S VOICE
I WANTED HIM TO WIN, INFACT IWAS SO SURE HE WUD 😭

I am soooooooo fr*****g jealous of u right now, haan ab tum kyon poochogei mere FF ko aaj, Karunya jo hai tumhaare saamne

Tell us if he picked YOU from the audience for that last song/dance routine..........
Love

Sorry guys too many pages to reply to so I'm gonna do it for select posts 😊
Aditee I LOVE MY KARU!!!! 😳 I told AD this but I came back to IF only for my Karu coz I just couldn't help but be vocal about him.....result of which I was voted as the most vocal Karu fan! 😳
I did feel extremely lucky to finally watch him live! And to top it all off I got to actually meet him backstage 😃 I spoke to him....mentioned to him about my insanity and about our Karu parivaar in IF and of course took a pic with him! 😃 It was just absolutely AMAZING....couldn't believe it for a while but it's slowly sinking in now! 😃 I got to meet MY IDOL! I might sound like a crazed fan but for the talent that boy has it's the least I could do 😳

Originally posted by: tisha

Hello Members of SRA( Swooning Romantic Anonymous),
I am glad you liked the poem.
Soapu, its a poem from hubby dearest 😳 . I am planning to publish all his poems, but that guy doesn't have any confidence that it will get publishaed one day.

Tisha firstly thanks for coining another acronym in our honour! 😳 Loved the poem (am yet to read the ode for Aditee but I'm positive I'll love it!).
You did tell me that your hubby writes but I didn't know he was this good! 👏 Man I can see where you both derive your inspirations from 😉
Ok so you publish his poems and we'll publish your odes along with Aditee's book! 😃 All we ask for is a small note somewhere in the book crediting us SRA! 😳
Tish if one day you do finally decide to go professional with your writing I'd like you to remem all those PM's and posts from me prodding and practically pushing you to do so! 😛 Arre yaar agar main likh nahi sakti kam se kam likhne waalon se credit toh le sakti hoon! 😆

Originally posted by: vazz

Padhai apne aap will fit into the schedule... not to worry 😉.. these lessons will help you more in life 😉

That has been our mission statement (for AD and I at least) ever since we moved to the forum Vazz! Who's thinking of actively adding padhai into the schedule (waise RK ke baare mein sochne se phursat hi kaha milti hai 😉)

Originally posted by: aditee

PART 7
AD tumhe dedicate kiya yeh.............

(All those who hate to read abt dry biz stuff can skip this part, I hate what they show in Hindi movies and TV shows where they say things like "Hamara maal pasand aaya is liye hame 5 crore ka order mila, is liye 2 crore ka fayda hoga" crap. It ANNOYS ME, so I decided to write some sensible stuff, so rdrs who dont care for it can skip. Thx)


Bani had managed to tell all the 20 staff members at Mr A's Mumbai office. Tarun was away at Darjeeling ands he wanted to break this news in person so she refrained form calling his cell abt it.......... Unless one of the others had already called him and spilled the beans...........Valley Resorts main office was at Shimla where Mr A's biggest resort was (which had 42 cottages:-), and the one in Darjeeling had 28.......... Mr JW was going to lease part of Darjeeling but buy out Shimla in full, but suddenly a month or so ago, Bani tries to recollect, Mr A ack having recvd the offer to

sell...... Bani herslf had found out abt the sale on the day Mr A dropped the bombshell about her personal loan..............

Wednesday morning Bani not at all feeling peachy, not in the best of the moods either gets in to work, doesnt have a bite to eat or drink...........she knows that she has to head to Mr JW's to present the initial losgistics of Shimla AND Darjeeling. She is wearing her black pant suit with a cream/yellow blouse, hair OPEN framing her face. She didn't want to give JW a chance to touch her when she was in HIS territory. She hadnt seen him after the phone call on Monday morning, she again wondered where he was and who he was with (:-))
Checked, re-checked, loaded all her slides in her lap top and got ready to head out to JW's for the meeting at 11AM


JW's "buy offer" was contingent upon disclosure of full facts and "inspection of facilities" and other such real estate buy logistics. Bani's job today was to present ALL the facts as known to Mr A about hsi two properties, full and fair..........
Gets off the cab, takes the elevator to Mr JW's offices, the meeting today was with his whole Corp team consisting of his accounting head, Operations head, HR lead and and a third party company that usually pitched in to handle all legal and govt formalities..........

Ms Singh greeted her cheerfully at the front office, and sent her off in the direction of the Bd room. Bani prayed for her facts to be accurate and enters the room...

Mr JW already in there, Bani is used to the usual flip flop her stomach does on seeing him, today he is dressed in coffee colored pants and a cream/yellow full sleeve shirt, rolled up signature style (1/3rd 😉 style), his shoes match his pants accurately, may be they were custom sewn she thinks bitterly, his silver Rolex making patterns on the Bd Room ceiling playing with sun's rays 😆 ....
There are a few from the meeting team already present............

J looks up from his laptop when he sees the door swing open, eyes meet hers, she looks away
B: (looking in general at a spot behind JW's head on the wall) Good morning all!
J is too quick, he has already caught her look at the disgust she felt at his shoes (;)
The folks in the room wave a cheerful hello and " Hi! Baneeeee"and tease her about how prepared she is and go back to work

The projector cable is by Mr JW laptop she sets her laptop down, pulls the power cord from under the table and leans over to hook it up with the projector cable......... notices a nick in JW's jaw where he has obviously hurt himself shaving in the morning he notices that she has noticed it....................
The same cologne, mingled with the man's scent, made Bani even more ill..........
J: U dont like my shirt? (softly)
B: (deliberately cheery and loud) Excuse Me Mr W what did u say?
J: (two can play this game kinda look on his face louder than her ) I thot u didnt like my shirt Banee

Now Bani is is not so sure
B: I am sorry but what gave u the idea?
J: Tum zyaada khush nahi lagi jab tumne kamre mein enter kiya aur mujhe dekha so I am just assuming its just my shirt and not ME! (looks around for approval from the audience)
B:I shall reserve my opinion on the man and his shirt at this time Mr W (she smiles forced....)
Hushed laughter spreads.
More people join in............Meeting begins............

Bani starts off with Shimla.............
The sales figures, occupancies future outlook, licensing, everything and anything her research cud find she shared...........
B:It wud be the second foothold for Walia Properties and Investments in the North of India, after Shimla and considering the increased Southern tourist exodus to Northern hill stations in summer it would do very well in JW's portfolio
J: What about the landslide in Shimla last year?
B: (a little nervous) yes?
J: (very biz like, not at all like a hubby. He prepared well for his meetings he expected everyone to do the same)Shimla-Mandi road was closed for over 6 days and the property being bang on the highway....... the HP govt forced the resort to act as public shelter, how much revenue was lost?
B: goes thru her files and is able to answer, Well....... a little over Rs.1lakh 37 thousand
J: Over 37 thousand or under?
B: (trite) 1,37,765 to be precise.
J: Why shud I buy if I have to lose that kind of money, may be even more than once a year?
B: The road paving project has begun HP govt has assured ki kaam 18 months mein ho jaayega, and already 9 months have passed.............. so landslides shud not affect the road going fwd.
(Looks like he has collected all the nasty questions from the group for himself , she thinks, the team questions are a breeze, she walks tall:-)
J: One more question Bani........... may be the last before we break for coffee.
B: Hmm?
J: Himachal Govt is not new issuing building permits to resorts, then how can we construct on the vacant piece of land by the back cottages, Mr A informed that HP govt and Shimla zoning commission are at loggerheads over it, how can u help
B is stumped.......... She seriously does not have a clue.
B: I can get back to you on that Mr W. I havent recvd any new notices or directives from the govt regarding the property....
J: I am sure your ppl have back in shimla, aapki last kab hui unse baat?
B: A week ago
J: It pays to talk every day when u are selling (mockery)
PPl start getting up to leave for coffee, JW chats casually, some decide to take a walk to relax some go for coffee..... Bani in no mood for coffee, still feeling sick decides to review her Darjeeling notes............

J DOES NOT GO..... 😉
Bani does not lift her head up from her laptop she knows its only her and him and is in no mood to talk after the recent drubbing.........
J sits back down and starts punching keys in his laptop
J: Banee, so are u sorry for the cut on my jaw? (taunting)
B Noooo! (still doesnt look up)
J: I know what cud heal it...........
B: I dont, and dont want to know............
Pause ............. he watches angry color rush up her face..................
J: Arent u taking a break? u shud go stretch out and relax and have something to eat......
B I am not hungry
B: I dont see YOU realxing?
J: I am...........
B: Agar yeh aapka relaxation hai to i really dont think i will like it when u are excited...........
J: (huskily)Oh banee.........Tumne mujhe excited dekha hai and you didnt hate me at all.
THATS IT!!!
She cant have this conv now, she gets up and leaves................ his amused eyes following her .........................

Aditee like AD said tum hume maar dena chahti ho kya! Coffee and cream attires! 😳😳😳 I'm no fashion expert (in fact far far from it!) but I know fashion when I see it (or in this case read it 😛) and you had me as soon as you mentioned this! 😳
Wow my sis would've loved to read this....she's into business....very detailed Aditee....I just pretend like I know what you're talking about and use my vivid imagination for the rest! 😉
Aditee!!!! "buy offer", "inspection of facilities"!!!! Yaar I have no idea if you meant it this way but my imagination took me far away with this! 😳😉 Can't write it all here....need to take into consideration that there are kids around even though this is an R rated thread! 😆 What innuendo! 👏👏 So this is my fav part for this FF part! 😉
I loved the little exchange between J n B open for public (about liking his shirt and the man in the shirt!) 😉 It was so bold yet incredibly vulnerable on both their parts! Ded broke any tension in the room but said a lot that meant only to them both......great undertones hun!
Also loved how Jai irritates her not just in personal but in professional life as well! 😆 He just gets under her skin everwhere she goes! 😉 But it's only coz she LETS him affect her so much! 😉
So I lied THIS IS MY FAV PART!
"Tumne mujhe excited dekha hai and you didnt hate me at all." - How does he do that to her every single time! I see that you always save the best for the last 😉 Great tactic Chica! 😃 It's like he goes into her mind and steals her every thought process! How many guys would kill to have that ability! 😛 But of course only our JW possess it! Is that why we love him so? 😳 Oh I could prolly come with a million more reasons but for today that did it for me! 😳

Pi
HI! HI! hi1 HI! HI!
It looks like n episode analysis, mera threesome jo likhta hai
Gmorning

Karrrrrrruuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
I LOVE HIS VOICE, He is a teen so a lil young for me, but man does he have TALENT!

I am glad u enjoyed it

Also I will be able to listen to ur file today

LOVE U
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