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Erandeep Kaur

@eran

Voyager

Posted: 19 years ago

#21

OMG!!
i fell off my seat!! 😆 😆 😆
how intence was that!!!
thanks!!!

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**Tinkerbell**

@**Tinkerbell**

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#22

Part 2:
Bani tried to pull away but she couldn't so stopped trying……as jai pulled her in she walked backwards not daring to look into his eyes…..she slammed her back into him…it was to late to leave she could feel his heartbeat…..he could hear hers…it was just him and her….the wind was howling the curtains were flowing and the music was playing…she could hear him breathing and her own heart began to thud thud thud…any minute her heart would jump out……jai put his hands on her shoulders she could feel his strong hands working at the skin of her arms, stroking her arms slowly grabbing her wrists and moved them down to her hands……Jai interwined both his hands into hers…Bani closed her eyes and sucked in her breath….she felt complete they were one……Jai began to kiss her neck..slowly moving down to her back…if she turned she would be in his arms…what would he do then… she began to panic Her dreams had started out this way once or twice Bani daringly turned around to face him they looked into each others eyes….within they found what they had been longing for…Jai kissed Bani on the cheek…Bani blushed and turned her the other way she couldn't meet his nazar emotions were rising……..jai picked up her face and kissed her forehead gently then her nose..and then finally her lips. Bani felt like her soul was leaving her body……"ouch" she whispered. The sharp pain of a fresh cut on her wrist jerked her back to reality. Her bangle had broken and pierced her skin.
Jai had taken her hand in concern and lead her to the bathroom. He was
sometimes over attentive to the point of madness. Other times he was lost in his obsession of Park Road and practically ignored her. She liked it, this side of him. No one else in her life had ever
tried to take care of her. Bani was nothing but independent.
Always strong. Be strong. The first lesson her father had taught her. She sighed at herself. Had she become too strong? Unable to let her walls down,even when she desperately wanted to.

She had the same desires as any other woman. To be held and to hold, to be cared for and to provide care, to love. She wanted to wake up and snuggle closer to someone who loved her and cared for her More often than not, those silent wishes held Jai's face. So were her dreams coming true.
Jai had a cotton ball in hand and was applying antiseptic. The
bathroom had been large enough, but with her and Jai inside it seemed very cramped. He was in front of her, blocking the door and there was no way to delicately push past him. She started to take her hand back. "mein teek ho...mein karloonghi" she mumbled.But he pulled her hand back. Once again, he was too close to her. It was making her feel uncomfortable but yet she felt like bursting with energy…..she just didn't know what to do…. He leaned his head down
and blew lightly over her wrist, teasing over the cut. "theek hua?" Bani
couldn't speak. Her mouth had gone dry. Jai let his breath caress her
skin again.
The twinkle in Jai's eyes was irresistible. He just gazed at her, Bani got up as she turned her face Jai did so at the same time, her mouth accidently but quickly brushed over his smooth cheek, She would have pulled back quickly until she made
the mistake of breathing in his aftershave yum he smelt so good . So close. Just a slight movement and their lips would brush. She could feel her body urging her to move forward. Her
heart beat with the fluttery quickness of butterfly wings. So close. Ab kya hoga she thought…..Jai moved in really close…..

To be continued………

Edited by **Tinkerbell** - 19 years ago

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pop77

@pop77

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 19 years ago

#23

awsome writing..give some idea to ekta...

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*Sky16*

@*Sky16*

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#24

pleaz continue soon!
your mazeing, so emotional, and romantic! 👏

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LiSa

@KHJL

Rocker

Posted: 19 years ago

#25

omg...omg...hey jaanu😳...plzzz continue soon!!!!😛😛😛.....its too damn good👏👏👏......i can't stop.....infact i don't want to stop reading😳 plzzzz write soon!!!!😳😳😳.....u r so talented😊😊😊.....n now all i m hoping is for it to happen like this on Monday!!!!.......itz rocking.....😳

LUV IT!!!😳

lotz of luv,🤗

**LiSa**😛