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Neha

@nellie_2

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Posted: 19 years ago

#41

OMG!!!!i feel like i am there!!! 😳 Its so good!!! please continue!!! Your such a romantic writer!!! I cant write to save my life!!! Please continue soon!!!

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sima

@xsimzxchickx

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Posted: 19 years ago

#42

Omg that is wicked man………toooo good… keep it up hun!!
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Edited by xsimzxchickx - 19 years ago

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**Tinkerbell**

@**Tinkerbell**

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Posted: 19 years ago

#43

Part 3:

Bani sucked in her breath again…….ab kya … Bani with all her might pushed passed him and walked towards the balcony she needed air…lots of it…her oxygen flow had stopped…her head was spinning what was she going to do….please let him go…please…his not in his senses he is going to wake up in the morning and forget it all…he is going to regret it…I need to leave….Jai was fighting a storm inside him if he stopped now he knew he would lose her forever…he never wanted something so bad so he moved forward…and from behind he again began to caress her shoulders…if she turned around all would be lost Bani felt something she had'nt done in ages..she was happy…I need to let these walls down its time…time to think about my happiness I don't care about th consequences…..aaj is waqt mein apne dil ki sunnongi…mein woh karoongi joh mein karna chahthi hoon…..she shut her eyes feeling a strain of tears come to her. Only now did she allow her defenses to crumble. Jai couldn't take her tears…it hurt, with every tear that was shed….it pierced his heart…..he wasn't in control of his body…like a robot it just moved forward…..he held her hands and enveloped her into his arms…there was no escape….Bani bit her lip…her heart was beating fast…..he kissed her cheek taking away her falling tears…. She felt words rise in her throat. Words she had shoved down again and again for a long time. Avenues she was fearful to take. Choices that lay unresolved in her heart, taking her concentration away she realized there was nothing to say nothing to hear…it was just him and her and their emotions that spoke The trees yielded no answers and swayed without sound in the wind…The beginning of love was
never easy, but once started, it became a current that was nearly impossible to stop….
Bani felt tears of frustration and happiness both at the same time begin to run slowly over her cheek. "How did I get here? Is this really happening" She shook her head and felt her shoulder begin to tremble. Bani's head tilted so that it was resting against Jai's neck…Jai moved into hold her tighter…he turned Bani around to face him….Bani kept looking down she couldn't face him. But he lifted her chin…….and looked into her eyes Her eyes were so soft and tired all at the same time. It hurt him to see her looking at him like that. As if he was snake that might bite her. Jai stroked a fallen lock of hair away from her eyes with his hand, Bani's hands reached out to him, feeling he was about to pull away. She didn't want him to . She took his fingers in her own…..
Her eyes leapt to his. He smiled. A beautiful, heartfelt smile. He tilted his head to one side, his eyes glowed with warmth, inviting her inside them. Much more dangerous. his arms came around her automatically. His fingers trailed up and down her back. He felt her spine adjust to the contact. He lowered his head, setting his cheek against hers. Her mouth had gone dry. Her lips parted, watching his own, now so close to hers once again. their bodies were teasing each other..Jai moved in and kissed her…a long passionate kiss that caused a trance she never wanted to come out of…gently Jai backed away…the flurry of her heart was ringing in her ears….his large warm hand clasped hers and lead her towards the bed.....towards something unknown Bani felt so scared yet at peace inside…her walls were finally down she felt safe…Jai walked around the room blowing out the candles one by one with each candle he blew out her heart fluttered…with...it sent her into a crazy flutter as he was getting nearer and nearer, he came to the last candle "phoo" and that was out to Bani sucked in her breath as she felt jai's hand on hers……jai whispered " I love you Bani " teasingly his breath played games on her neck and sent shivers everywhere.. Jai thought to himself Roshni kithni theek kehrahi thi…aaj tho meri duniya badaljayegi…lekin yeh duniya ab tum nahi bani badleghi….thanks Roshni…he smiled to himself.

All that could be heard was the howling wind…the curtains were swaying and the full moon shone on them…supplying them with a new light that would shine in their lives for ever with the moon the stars also sparkled and twinkled all night long…….

The End

Edited by **Tinkerbell** - 19 years ago

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Pooja

@pooja.walia

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Posted: 19 years ago

#44

OMG.... that was fantastic.... awsome... romantic... great... words will fall short...
i loved it... 👏

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Loran Maddi Lee

@LoranMaddiLee

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Posted: 19 years ago

#45

HOW CUTE! AND AWSOME! wow... it reminds me of sum of the books by R.L. STINE! really good !!! Tink u goo gurl! 👏

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sweetu144

@sweetu144

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Posted: 19 years ago

#46

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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!that was amazing...it stole my breath away...Your writing was soo good...so unique yet so powerful that it had be gripped onto your every word awaiting, wanting to know what would occur next!!
pls why did u stop?? it was amazing and i mean it..it was WOW!!!!You writing flowed with a powerful and mesemrizing rhythm that had me trapped, and wanting to know more...about what wld happen next..!...thats how amazing it was!!
luv sweetu 😃