fanfic..My Version of Monday prt3pg6

This is my version of monday..........and its before i read the promo...so its completely different......😆😆😆inthezaarrrrrrrrr

As Jai intered the room the wind began to howl and the candles began to flicker…." Bheege hont tere was playing in the back ground…"the curtains swayed with the direction of the wind. Bani had heard the door swing shut and the footsteps approaching yet she was to scared to turn around…scared to face the lie, the deception the heart break with this thought silent uncontrollable tears fell down her face they kept falling but no sound came out…….as they came closer wham she heard a bang she quickly turned around to see jai had tripped just in time she grabbed him by the shoulders and brought him up. she could tell he was completely dazed…out of it he couldn't even stand still he was swaying crazily….yet he managed to keep eye contact he looked deep into her eyes…there he found warmth understanding, passion, love…..but he could tell she was hurt …he knew he had treated her badly…..silently their eyes spoke what they could not say. kyun Mr Walia Bani thought kyun aisa kiya?kyun mera barosa thora….lekhin mera apna kasoor hai…yeh jazbaat mere andar hai tho gussa aap par nahi muj per hona chahiya…..Jai noticed Bani had no sindoor and no manglasutra…he was hurt…and annoyed

Sensing how close they were and tears streaming down her face Bani turned back around to face the howling wind, her hair blew and was slightly brushing Jai in the face…….a strong emotion was building inside him he didn't know whaturge of desire was arising he just wanted to take this girl in his arms and to never let her go……without thinking he grabbed her around the waist. Bani startled yet full aware felt his warm hands on her tummy it felt like a tingling sensation that sent chills up her spine this new emotion the desire she had never felt it before. She didn't know what to do………his hands slowly began to move up although she wanted him to stop….part of her wanted him to continue…..he swung her around…..they were now face to face…..eye to eye Bani couldn't stop staring she felt the fire within her burning every inch of her with his one hand touching her, then the other hand began to untie her dori…she felt her blouse loosen…….her cheeks were burning ….she was shaking,she was nervous yet in control he moved her hair from her face and came close to her ear and whispered…."Bani I Love You" She couldn't control herself any longer she broke down she cried and cried and he held her close to his heart he hugged her really tight whilst stroking her hair………….he could feel her warm breath on his chest it was causing emotions to become stronger…his heart was beating fast….…….there was something missing he pushed her away and walked towards his bed ….Bani felt rejected and empty and heart broken she turned again to face out side she looked up at the sky there was nothing left here anymore. Why couldn't he be clear why couldn't he just give me a bit of space in his heart ab kya…lagtha ab jaana hain mujhe….kyun kyun bhagwaan…mera saath ap yeh khel kyun kel rahein hai…mere naseeb main kyun khusiyaan nahi likhi…… He probably meant to say I love you Roshni and my name out bani sobbed her heart out…then suddenly someone grabbed her arm and swung her around….It was him…"Bani tum bhool gaye ho kuch aaj…" Bani was feeling confused and fed up of these games……before she could say anything jai took out her sinddor ka dibba…dipped his hand in and filled her maang………….Bani felt her heart stop beating for a minute…then it beat faster…tears just dropped as his fingers touched her maang and filled it all her dreams and aspirations were fulfilled at that moment nothing mattered there was no other doubts..then he tied her manglastra around her neck she was a suhagaan…she remembered there wedding the force the compromise the hate and the rage in his eyes but today………………he did it all by himself she couldn't control herself she hugged him…and mumbled I love you to jai…..with this Jai could not control himself….it was what he had been longing to hear…he pulled her real close he could feel her breathing on his neck…their heartbeats became one…Bani pulled away and gazed a Jai he put his hand on her cheek and wiped away her tears…..and moved close to kiss her…her heart was pounding…she could feel his hand on her tummy again…she was getting really warm and her blood was flowing faster as he kissed her…she had never felt like this before she never wanted him to stop or let her go…..then she pulled away thinking was this for real?yah kya Mr Walia nashe main hain…mujhe apne aap ko rokhna paregha yeh koi bunyaad hai rishte ki…nashe main kuch bi hosakhtha hai……aur subha Mr Walia sab bhool jayenghe she pulled away and began to leave.but then her sari ka paloo dropped and Jai picked it up and began pulling her towards him but she didn't know what to do any second now she would be back in his strong arms.......

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thats the my other fanfic...be prepared to be scared😆

Becky your fiction was awesome 👏

OMG!!!! I have never read a whole fanfic before. I really enjoyed it Rebecca.......It was really good, so real and so touchy....
lol...how did see her blood flowing faster 😆 😆
I am just kidding yaar...really it was nice..I got those pinch in the heart couple of times 😆

excellent !marvelous!fantastic!amazing.
gosh . i hope it happens.
its tooo goood . 👏 u really made my day.
i was feeling that i was actually reading a real update.

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a fantastic part
I can not want to monday 😭 😳

Muskan

OMG tinkerbell that's really good...superb work.. 👏 👏 As nahar siad I was also feeling like I was reading real update.. 😃

👏 hey tink nice one yaar gosh we are all caught by this monday fever 😆 even i wrote my prediction in tanya's post n i was just thinking how did bani manage to even even give a shot like this one god cant imagine her awkwardness as i am of almost of her age 😆
lots of love
anu

beautiful! i almost cired...keep up the good work

tinku that was so darn romantic 😳
it seems to me you are reading to much romance novel also and watching romantic movies 😆
keep it up! 😉

so romatic....great going .... 👏