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Posted: 19 years ago
#11
wow, that was really good, looking forward to more!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thank you for all of the support guys!It is due to everyones support that I am able to keep on going thanks! Hopefully you'll like today's... so here it goes

Recap
Jai is about to tell bani something, but never finishes what he wants to say because Jiggy storms in
Jiggy tells Jai that he should go see for himself who has come to meet him
Jiggy, Jai and Bani are seen going downstairs to the front door & find a weeping Pia at the front door….

Jai: (see Jai's hand curl into a fist) Tum?! What the hell are you doing here?! Kya leney ayi hoa yahan?!
Pia: Voh Mr. Walia…
Jai: Shut up! Jigayasa usko andhar kisney anay diya?!
Jiggy: Jai bhaiya mushy malum bhi nahi parah ke yeh kabhi andhar ayi!
Jai: Kya chahthi hoon tum?! Get the hell out of my house!
Bani is seen with worry in her eyes and she puts a hand on Jai's shoulder… Jai turns around and his look softens and his hand uncurls
Bani: (little scared) Mr. Walia, kya main aapsey doh mint ke liye study main baat kar sakthi hoon?
Jai: Lekin Bani.. Tum jaanthi hoa ke Pia ne mere saath
Bani: Main jaanthi hoon.. Lekin please sirf doh mint
Jai: (hesitant) teek hai

We now see Jai and Bani in the study, Jai is pacing and Bani is standing still

Bani: Mr. Walia kya aap please baitengey?
Jai: Main kaisey Baiton?! Tum jaanthi hoa ke Pia ne mere saath kya kiya.. Lekin tum phir bhi uska side le rahi hoa?! Kya Pia tumarey liye ithni important hai Bani.. Ke tumey kisi aur ki izzat ka kheyaal nahi hai! Kya tumey uskey siva kisi aur ki feelings dikayi nahi dethi?!

Bani now has tears in her eyes and Jai turns to see her

Bani: Mr. Walia, main jaanthi hoon ke aapki izzat ko tais poonchi hai Pia ki vaja se.. lekin mainey aapsey pehley bhi kaha tha ke meri bhenein mere liye subh kuch hain. Aur Pia aisey toh yahan nahi ayi hai, voh bhi ithnay dino ke baadh. Voh yahan kabhi nahi aathi Mr. Walia jab takh koi bari problem nah hoa.
Jai: So! Mujhey kya lena hai uski problem se?
Bani: Aapko kuch lena dena nahi hai, lekin meri bhenon ki zimedaari mere upar hai. Rano aur Pia ke paas mere siva koi aur nahi hai. Dekhiye, mujhay sirf Pia se tori dair baat karney dhijey, aur aapko saari problem batha ke aap phir aapna faisla sunayiga.
Jai: hesitant teek hai

Bani and Pia shown sitting in the family room

Bani: Pia, kya hua hai? Aaj tum achanak kaisey ah gayi?
Pia: Di, main kya bataon aapko, Pushkar ke saath mera jagra hoa gaya.
Bani: Kis baarey main?
Pia: Di.. Pushkar ki family hamesha mushy har baat par neecha dekhnay ki koshish kartey hain… aur pushkar par apna eisaan jathathay hain kyon ke usko ek ghar diya hai.. Lekin pushkar ne pehla ghar toh kudh hi sambhala Di.. Mujhay uski baisthi nahi dekhi jaathi aur apni insult bhi nahi sahi jaathi dhi (Pia crying) Iss liye main Pushkar ko bola ki voh voh ghar chor ke naya ghar le le.. Tha ke humko kisi ki baat nah suni parey. Lekin voh mana nahi aur bol diya ke main jah sakthi hoon agar main chahon.
Bani: Piaa.. Dekho aisey jagrey shaadi main hoti hain.. Lekin compromise karna partha hai
Pia: Bahut kar chuki main Di.. Pushkar ko chuna hoga.. Aur abhi takh usney apni family ka saath diya hai..Aur agar aap nahi rakh sakthi mujhay sirf ke dijeye.. Main apna tikana kahin nah kahin dhoond loongi
Bani: Dekho Pia
Pia: Di.. Main yahan ayi hoon kyon ke mujhay koi aur raasta nahi dikhayi diya aur aur koi apna nahi dikhayi diya.. Par main uss ghar main vapas nahi jaongi jahan meri aur puskhar ki har roz insult hoti hai
Bani: Teek hai.. Tum doh min rukho..

We now see Bani walk into the study and Jai looks up and sees her coming in and stands up
Jai: Hoa gayi baat?
Bani: Ji
Jai: Kya kaha usnay?
Bani then tells Jai everything Pia tells her
Jai: Pia galath hai
Bani: Mujhey malum hai.. Lekin main kya karon?! Aap hi bataeyah Mr. Walia?! Ek taraf aapki izzat aur aapki samaan hai.. Aur ek taraf meri bhen ki izzat ka sawaal hai! Jaisi aapki zimedaari hai apni khandhan ki izzat sambhalnay ki.. Vaisey meri bhi hai! Aapka gusa jayaz hai Mr. Walia lekin aap hi batayeh main kya karon aapni bhen ka akhir main hi uski ma aur papa dono hoon!

Bani is now sobbing and Jai turns around to see a tear drop fall down her cheek. Jai comes closer and catches the tear drop on his index finger.

Jai: Yeh dekh rahi hoa… bani is nodding her head yes and still sobbing ** Jai then sighs
Jai: Bani, dekho… he sighs again.. Chalo mere saath
Bani: Kahan?
Jai grabs her hand and walks her out of the study to the family room and swings her slightly around. Bani is surprised, while Pia is scared he's gonna kill her sister and her.

Pia: Mr Walia Dekhiye
Jai: Chup
Jai then turns to Bani
Jai: Bani…. Pia yahan rehey sakthi hai
Bani smiles widely through her tears.. And Pia is also shown smiling. Jai then turns to Pia
Jai: Tum yahan rehey sakthi hoa, aur iss liye kyon ki tum aapni bhen ki zimedaari hoa.
Pia: Thank you Mr. Walia

Jai leaves and Pia comes to hug Bani
Pia: I love you Di
Bani: I love you too, abh mujhay kuch kaam hai tum jao guest room main aur tora araam kar loh
Pia: teek hai Di, hum baadh main miltey hain

Bani is seen walking into her and Jai's room and Jai is sitting down on the bed and staring at the wall in front of him

Bani: Mr. Walia
Jai looks over and gets up
Jai: Yes
Bani: Voh main..
Jai: Yes
Bani: Um.. Main aapsey thank you kehna chahthi thi.. Pia ko rakhney ke liye
Jai: Bani, dekho thank you kehney ki zarurat nahi hai.. Tumney kaha tumari zimedaari hai Pia aur main samaj gaya.. Aur mainey Pia ko maaf bhi kar diya hai aur voh bhi sirf tumari vaja se.
Bani: Ji
Bani is about to walk away when Jai says with his back to her
Jai: Bani
Bani: Ji (Bani turns around)
Jai: Idhar aao
Bani then walks towards him. Jai then comes closer and wipes both of her cheeks dry.
Jai: Mainey pehley bhi kaha tha ke main tumey kush dekhna chahtha hoon… so.. No tears okay? (Jai smiles and walks away)
Bani: (thinking in her mind) Ji Mr. Walia.. Main samajh gayi (Bani slightly smiling)
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
hey gr8 one buddy,..... do continue....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
Wow that was awesome 👏 👏 ...waiting for next 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice story
plz continue soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
Thanx for the comments guys since i hurt my ankle and didn't have to go to my classes today my story is long.. sorry it is long but once I got the idea I couldn't stop writing so.. enjoy ... and thanks for all your love and support.. without you guys this wouldnt be possible! I promise you'll enjoy this one b/c it is my fav one!!

Recap:
Jai yells @ Pia that how dare she come to his home. What does she want now?
Bani talks to Jai about having a chance to hear Pia out and he agrees
Bani talks to Pia about why Pia left Pushkar's house
Bani pleads to Jai to keep Pia with them for where is she to go?
Jai agrees to let Pia stay and he says he doesn't want to see Bani cry

Next day @ the Walia Mansion everyone is in the family room waiting for breakfast to be ready and be called to the table. Everyone expects to see Bani come and tell them to come and eat breakfast, but Pia shows up.

Aditya: Pia tum?
Pia: Ji Uncle, main aap sub ko kehna chahthi thi ke breakfast ready hai, aur aap sabh table par ah jayee.
Aditya: Oh… chalo phir
(Everyone gets up and goes to the table, but as one might notice Bani is missing)
Jai: Arrey, Bani kahan hai?
(Just then Bani walks down the stairs in a light blue sari)
Mausi: Dekha munna, tumney naam liye aur bahu ah gayi (mausi laughs and so do Aditya and Dadi)
Bani: Breakfast ithni jaldi lagh gaya? Lekin mainey toh breakfast main kya bana hai abhi Tony ko bataya tha.
Jai: Lekin Pia toh keh rahi thi ke breakfast ready hai.
(Pia walks out now)
Pia: Di! Baitiyeh, aaj breakfast mainey order kiya hai resteraunt se.
Bani: Lekin Pia..
Pia: Nahi Di.. aaj mainey sabh ki mann pasand dish resteraunt se mangayi hai aap bas baitkey kah lijeye
Bani: Lekin Pia, Mausi ko bahar ka kahna mana hai Doctor ko mana hai aur Mr. Walia ko bhi apni diet ka kheyaal rehna chaiyeh iss liye mainey kahna bana toh pehley se shuru kar diya tha
Pia: Oh Di, come on, chalo aap mausi ko unka breakfast de doh, raha Mr. Walia toh mainey unkey liye unkey favorate resteraunt se breakfast mangaya hai. Rememeber Mr. Walia… aapkey favorate aloo ke paranthay! Aur Jigayasa Aunty aapkay liye aapka diet breakfast bhi order kiya hai (jigayasa giving evil smile).
Bani: Piaa..
Pia: Diii..
Jai: Bani, aaj Pia ko breakfast deney doh.
Bani: (looks hurt)
Pia: YES! Thank you Mr. Walia! You'll love it Di!
(Bani smiles slightly)
Bani thinking to herself: Kya Mr. Walia saachi main Pia ko bhul gaye hain?
(getting frustrated Bani stands up fast)
Jai: Bani kya hua?
Bani: Voh main mausi ka kahna dekhey aathi hoon, aap Pia ko keh dena ke agar main time par table par nahi poonchi toh mera kahna kitchen main hi rakh dey.
(Bani gets up and goes to the kitchen)
Bani: Tony..
Tony: Yes, ma'am
Bani: Voh breakfast kah kya hua?
Tony: subh kuch ban gaya hai ma'am lekin Pia madam batha rahi thi..
Bani: Lekin Mausi apna breakfast yehi kahengi
Tony: Aur Jai sir ka breakfast?
Bani: Uss ko tum phenk doh.
(Jai says from behind): Nahi Tony, voh breakfast maath phenkna
(Bani turns around and looks at Jai and Jai comes closer and still looking at Bani sternly he says)
Jai: Meri biwi ne meri liye itney pyaar se banaya hai toh kaisey phenk sakthay hain hum. Usko mere lunch ke tiffin main daal dena, main lunch ke liye hi kah loonga.
Bani: Lekin Mr. Walia, lunch ke liye breakfast… koi sense nahi banthi
Jai: Kahin baton ki sense hoti hai Bani, lekin uss sense ko dhoondney main aur samajney main time lagtha hai (looks at bani lovingly)
(Tony comes)
Tony: yeh lijeye sir.
Jai: Thank you Tony. Thank you Bani.
(Masi comes in as Jai is leaving)
Masi: Jai, yeh kaisa bye hua? Nah koi hug, nah kuch?
Jai: Voh masi…
Masi: Dekh munna jab takh thu Bani ko pyaar se bye nahi kehey detha main tujhey nahi jaaney doongi.
(Jai looks at Bani and walks over to her. He bends down and plants a kiss on her cheek)
Jai: Main Jaon aab?
Bani: (looking down) Ji
(Masi blushes and smiles)

Later in the day at the Walia Mansion Rano, Pia, and Bani are sitting in the family room talking

Rano: Bani Didi, kithney dino baadh hum miley hain, kya hum vaisey nahi kar sakthey joh hum Mt. Abu main kartey thay jab hum teeno masti ke mood main hotey thay?
Pia: YEH Did please!
Bani: Pia, abh meri shaadi ho gayi hai voh main aisey nahi kar sakthi.
Pia: Oh come on Did! Meri bhi shaadi hui hai, lekin iska mathlab nahi hai ke hum fun nahi kar sakthey!
Bani: Pia… Mr. Walia bhi nahi managey aur yeh tum bhi jaanthi hoa
(Just then Jai walks in and says)
Jai: Main kya nahi manonga?
(Bani blushes and Pia gets up to talk to Jai)
Pia: Mr. Walia, hum bhenon ki ek tradition hoti thi jab hum Mt. Abu main thay, jab hum teen bhenein tension aur stress se guzarthi thi aur subh kuch teek hoa jaatha tha, we used to have a slumber party. Sirf hum teen bheno hi iss main hoti thi. Main Di Se keh rahi thi hum kyon nah phir se vohi karein. Lekin Di nahi mann rahi, aap hi samjahye
Jai: Bani, mujhey toh koi problem nahi, tum teeno guest house use kar sakthi hoa tah ke tum disturbance bigair apni party kar sakthi hoa.
Pia: YEY! DI! ABH TOH HAAN KARDO!
Bani: (smiling at Jai) Haan.
Pia and Rano: YES!!
(Pia and Rano pulling Bani away all excited that they are having the party and talking about preparations, while Bani looks back at Jai while being pulled away, and he smiles at her)

That night Jai walks into his room and finds his gown laid out for him on his bed. He touches the gown smiling knowing that Bani put it out for him. He then finds Sahil at his window looking out.

Jai: Sahil, tum yahan kya kar rahey hoa?
Sahil: (jumps) Voh… kuch nahi
(Jai walks over to him and looks at what he's looking)
Jai: Kya dekh rahey thay tum?
Sahil: Voh mama ji main..
Jai: yeh tumarey peechey kya hai haath main
Sahil: Kuch nahi mama
Jai: Give it here..
(Jai finds binoculars in Sahil's hands behind his back and looks at Sahil and nods in disappointment)
Jai: Yeh kya hai Sahil
Sahil: Voh mama main … bas curious tha
Jai: Curious?
Sahil :haan
(Jai looks confused)
Sahil: Dekho mama ji, jab laadkhiyan ikahti hoti hain, voh aisi cheezain karthi hain, joh voh hum laadkho ke samney nahi kar paathi, par aaj takh koi laadkha mere college main yeh nahi jaan paya ke voh kya karthi hain.
Jai: Voh kyon?
Sahil: Kyon ke jaaney se pehley laadkhiyan mil ke uski dulhayi kar dethi hain
Jai: haha
Sahil: So mainey laadkho se bet lagayi thi, ke main dekhonga ke yeh laadkiyan akhir karthi kya hain
Jai: Sahil tum pagal hoa
Sahil: Come on mama, aap nahi jaana chahtey ke akir yeh karthi kya hain jab aap nahi hotey?
(Jai looks as if he is contemplating it and then he looks at Sahil and gets a kiddish grin)
Jai: Sure
(Sahil smiles back at him)
Jai: lekin agar unhey paatha chala ke hum dekh rahey hain, its your fault
Sahil: Fine mamu.


At the guest house the girls all have mud masks on and their hair in towels. Pia is in her nightgown, Bani is still in her suit and Rano is in a tank top and pajamas. They all are laughing, talking and doing each others nails when they hear a knock on their upstairs bedroom door.
Bani: Ithni raat ko kaun hoa saktha hai?
Rano: Patha nahi
Pia: Di aap jaakey dekho, main aur rano iss haal main nahi hain ke hum door answer karein.
Bani: teek hai

Back at Jai's room Sahil and Jai are camping out in his room. Jai has his night gown on while Sahil has his grey pajamas and a grey tank top on. Jai is sitting up in his bed while Sahil is sitting on the windowsill with his binoculars.

Jai: Sahil tum kuch dekh bhi rahey hoa, yeh phir tum apni bet haar rahey hoa.
Sahil: Mamu, abhi toh voh kuch kar rahi hai lekin, kuch interesting nahi hoa raha
Jai: Tum apni bet harogey dekhna
Sahil: Dekhthay hain mamu

Back @ the guest house Bani opens the door and finds Dadi and Mausi standing there and gets all embarrassed. Dadi and Mausi look at each other and smile
Bani: Koi problem toh nahi hai Mausi?
Mausi: Nahi.. um.. hum sooch rahey thay.. ke
Dadi: Arrey bol dey! Kya hum tum logon ki party join kar sakthi hain?
Bani: Voh…
Dadi: Dekh Bani.. hum promise kartey hain, hum koi rokh tokh nahi karengey.. actually hum tum logon ki party main rang jaamanay aye hain
Bani: umm…
(Rano and Pia come now)
Pia: Dids! Aayo Dadi! Aap bhi masi! Aaj sirf hum laadkiyan hi hoongi!
Dadi: Arrey meri Kareena Kapoor! Hum tumari party main rang lah deengey!
Pia: Voh kaisey Dadi?
Mausi: Dekho, jab main aur tumari Dadi tumari umar ki hoti thi, hum bhi masthi karthi thi. Aur hum ek game kheltey thay thai.
Bani: Kaisi game mausi?
Mausi: Dikaye inko? (Dadi nods) Chalo hum dono tumko game samjathey hain.

Back @ Jai's room: Jai still sitting on bed and Sahil at the window
Sahil: Mamu, abh toh dadi aur mausi bhi unko join kar rahey hain!
Jai: What?!
Sahil: Yes! Yeh dekho!
Jai: (looking in binoculars) voh aisey check up karney gayi hoongi.
Sahil: Shayad
(Jai gives Sahil his binoculars back )
Jai: Jab tum apni bet jeetogey, mujhey batah dena, main ithni dair bed par bait key paper partha hoon.
Back @ the guest house: Dadi , Mausi, Bani , Pia and Rano sitting in a circle around the floor Dadi about to explain the rules of the game.

Dadi: Iss game main hum kya kartey hain ke hum ek situation/theme rakthey hain aur uss situation par hare ek laadkhi ek Ghana naachthi hai. Game ke rules hain ke theme ke upar aur hum joh sabh agree Karen vohi sabh ko karma parega. How about it?

Pia: mmm… sure
Rano:mmmm.. sure
Bani: mmm… ji
Mausi: Aur haan joh bhi aaj iss kamrey main hoga… voh kisi ko bhi nahi bata sakthey hain samjhey.. sooooo No SHARMANA… samjhi bani beta?
Bani: Ji

Back @ Jai's room Sahil is still looking for signs of what is happening, but still hasn't found anything. Jai looks at him and laughs and says

Jai: Sahil, tum kuch nahi dikney vala nahi hoa, just watch.
Sahil: Dekhthay hain..

Back @ guest house

Dadi: Toh aaj ki situation hogi ke samaj tum sabh kisi se pyaar karthi hoa… kis ghaney se aur kaisey manaogi? Rano sabsey choti hai voh sabsey pehley jayegi. Hum subko uska Ghana aur voh kya pehneygi (not her pajamas duh) kyon ki usko apni character ke role nibhana parega.

(Everyone discusses what they want rano to do and come to a conclusion)

Mausi: Rano… tumey apnay voh ko apnay pyaar ko kaisey izhaar karogi… humney Preity Zinta ka Ghana chuna hai "Mera Dil Ka Tumsey Hai Kehna" Bani aur Pia tumey teyaar karkey ayengey.
(We see Mausi and Dadi waiting for Rano to come out and Bani and Pia are also waiting for her. Rano steps out in a Red Silk Dress that comes to her knees and it is sleeveless. She looks a bit uncomfortable)
Rano: Didi! Kya mujhey saachi main nachna hoga?!
Bani: Ranoo.. please
Rano: Teek hai. Ghana lagao
(The song starts and Pia dances to this song (mere dil kaa tumse hai kahnaa
bas mere hi rahnaa, nahin to, samjhe) -2
o..., apni ho ye daastaaN, banke rahen ham yahaaN
do jism aur ek jaaN, samjho jo kahti hooN
(mere dil kaa tumse hai kahnaa
bas mere hi rahnaa, nahin to, samjhe) -2

main to yahi bas chaahooN, ki mujhko chaaho har ghaDi tum
kitni main hasin hooN, mujhe samjhaao har ghaDi tum
huN, dil mein samaao mujhe, paas bulaao mujhe
dekhe hi jaao mujhe, samjho jo kahti hooN
mere dil kaa tumse hai kahnaa
bas mere hi rahnaa, nahin to, samjhe)

At the same time Sahil is looking through his binoculars and his mouth is open and Jai is looking at him.
Jai: Kuch hoa raha hai kya?
Sahil: (mouth still open)
Jai: Sahil!
Sahil: huh! Ji nahi nahi
Jai: Idhar doh binoculars main dekhon toh sahi tum kya dekh rahey hoa!
Sahil: Nahi! Kuch nahi mama ji!
(just then aditya walks in and sees them fighting over the binoculars at the windowsill)
Aditya: Jai? Sahil? Tum dono kya kar rahey hoa ithni raat ko? Aur binoculars ke liye jaghra kyon kar rahey hoa?
Jai: Huh? Oh kuch nahi main bas Sahil ki binoculars admire kar raha tha.
Sahil : haan haan sach keh rahey hain yeh.
(Aditya knowing something is up takes the binocular from Sahil's hand and looks outside the window and sees Pia dancing and looks at Sahil then and says..)
Aditya: Kya hai? Yeh kya hai? (sahil is scared and then aditya busts out laughing) Dekhtey jao dekhtey jao. Hahaa. Patha hai tumari ma ko bhi main aisey chup chup ke dekha kartha tha. Ab tum dono ki baari hai. Main soney chaltha hoon haha… good luck Jai shayad… nah .. anyways Good night. (Aditya walks out)

Back to the guest house (all the girls laughing and now considering what Pia should do and wear and they all come to a conclusion and Dadi tells her what her song is and that Bani and Rano will help her with her outfit)

Same time Jai is given the binoculars and says…
Sahil: Mama ji aap dekhiye kya kar rahey hain yeh laadkiyan. Hahaha. Main apni sharat jeet jaonga
Jai: (he looks in the binoculars and sees nothing b/c Pia is still getting ready) Mujhey toh kuch nahi dikhayi deh raha.
Sahil: Bas doh min rukhiyeh kuch nah kuch hoga.
(Jai looks in the binoculars again and sees Pia)

At the same time Pia is out in a white silk gown and a white scarf with feathers and she dances to the song "Aa Rang De Dupatta Mera" and all the girlz are laughing and she is dancing around them on these lyrics:
Na Peela Na Neela Na Kala Na Gora
Abhi Hai Dupatta Mera Kora Kora
Na Peela Na Neela Na Kala Na Gora
Abhi Hai Dupatta Mera Kora Kora
Mera Mann Dole Mera Tann Dole
Mera Tann Dole Mera Mann Dole
Agar Kare Dil Tera Agar Kare Dil Tera Oh Agar Kare Dil Tera
Aa Rang De Dupatta Mera Aa Rang De Dupatta Mera
Mera Mann Dole Mera Tann Dole
Mera Tann Dole Mera Mann Dole
Agar Kare Dil Tera Agar Kare Dil Tera Oh Agar Kare Dil Tera
Aa Rang De Dupatta Mera Aa Rang De Dupatta Mera
Na Peela Na Neela Na Kala Na Gora
Abhi Hai Dupatta Mera Kora Kora

Jai at the same time is looking at her through her in the binoculars and doesn't laugh, but gives the binoculars back to sahil without saying a word. Sahil takes the binoculars. He then looks into them and waits for the next act.

This time Bani is up and everyone makes a decision and Mausi tells her the song. "Sanu Ek waari Takh" and Rano will assist her in her song for since she is not so outgoing they will make her let her hair down tonight. So we see Bani leave to go change and so does Rano. Rano then steps out a few minutes later, but Bani refuses to come out.

Masi: Bani! Bahar niklo! Koi baat nahi main kuch nahi kahongi aur Jai bhi yahan nahi hai! Please!
Dadi: Oye Rani Mukherji bahar nikal!
Pia: Diiii! Come on!
(Bani from the bathroom NAHI MAIN YEH NAHI PEHAN SAKTHI and Pia walks over and pulls bani out and Bani looks so uncomfortable pulling at her little black sleeveless dress that by the way comes to her knees)
Bani: Main iss main nahi naach sakthi please!Mujhey sharam ah rahi hai. (Bani's blushing)
Mausi: haha (laughing along with dadi) Koi baat nahi Bani. Sirf aaj raat ke liye! Mere liye?
Bani: pulling at her dress but getting ready to dance.

Back at Jai's room…

Sahil: Oh my god! Haha! Bani Mami! Haha!
Jai: Kya?! Kya hua Bani ko?! Give me the binoculars Sahil!
(Jai snatches the binoculars from him angerly and looks into them and his mouth again opens up in surprise)

Meanwhile Bani is dancing to the song with to this lyrics and Rano is being the guy haha it's would be a cute scene if really made
Sunidhi:
Sanu Ekwari Ekwari Tak Mahiya Ve
Sanu Ekwari Tak Bas Ve
Tu Kudiya Tutiya Rakh Mahiya Ve
Sanu Ekwari Tak Bas Ve

O Sade Ute Bhi Ankh Rakh Ve
Sade Ute Bhi Ankh Rakh Ve

Chorus:
Ekwari Tak Le Sanu Ekwari Tak Le
Ekwari Tak Le Sanu Ekwari Tak Le

Harry:
Sanu Ekwari Ekwari Tak Soniyee Ni
Sanu Ekwari Tak Bas Ve
Tu Duniya Dekhi Lakh Soniyee Ni
Sanu Ekwari Tak Bas Ve

O Sade Ute Bhi Ankh Rakh Ve
Sade Ute Bhi Ankh Rakh Ve

Jai standing with his mouth wide open watching all of this is just keeps on looking with an open mouth. I think he is awestruck to see Bani in anything like that and acting like that. He just keeps looking. Then Jai sees everyone come together even Dadi and Mausi and they are dancing to the song "Pia Pia" from Har Dil Joh Pyar Karega. With Dadi and Mausi boogying with them. As they are dancing though the carpet moves under Bani and she falls back. Jai seeing this drops his Binoculars and runs out of his room and down the stairs. Sahil calls from the room
Sahil: Kahan jah rahi hoa Mama Ji!
Jai: Main aya!
Jai runs to the guest house door with his spare keys in his hands and opens the guest house front door. He runs upstairs having forgotten he was spying on the women just a few minutes ago and opens the door to find Bani on the floor and everyone helping her up. Jai helps her up and while holding her up says
Jai: Bani! Tum teek hoa? Kahin chot toh nahi ayi?!
Bani gets up and forgets she is wearing the dress and says
Bani: Haan main teek hoon Mr. Walia. Mr Walia! (She looks at him in horror and everyone else and she pushes her self away from him and runs to the bathroom. While Pia and Rano hid behind the curtains. Jai just stands their in shock at what he has done.)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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too good too good!!! awesome. please cont. soooooooooooooon!!

atleast in fiction, but seems like jai lost a lot of weight! he must have run pretty fast to reach in time to help bani off the floor! 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow...what a detailed fanfic! Good job! 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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oh man!!! that was sooooo funny!!!

Mr. Jai walia.... arent you ashamed on spying on ur wife? 😆 😆 😆


that was good! please cont soon!
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halia praina, i was laughing so hard that i almost coked 😆 i think pia, bani, and rano should give jai a punishment 😆 shame on me he is grown man, spying on his wife and salis 😆

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