1sT CONTEST:JAI-BANI MADE FOR EACH OTHER- - Page 9

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Posted: 19 years ago
#81
loved ur scene MT, it was just rocking😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
#82
Hi Everybody,

I'm regular reader of this show.....the updates given by everybody is just fantastic.....
This is the title what i think of
LAHME TERE MERE - JAI BANI 🤗

Best of Luck to all!!!!
Edited by ruch - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#83
MT... 👏 👏 ...It was soooo romantic...When will such a day come on Kasam Se? I felt like I was watching Jai n Bani onscreen..I cud picture everything...Wonderful story...Keep them coming!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#84
wowwwwww i jus love Jai and Bani it is realy romantic 👏 😃 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#85
OMG everyone's entrys were sooooo good!! I really hope scenes like this happen on the real show!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#86
Well done guys! 👏 I can see we have alot of romatic ppl around. 😳 😆

@ MT: awesome fanfic dear. 😃 I just loved it. Excellent writting skills. You portrayed everything very nicely. It was like I was watching it on screen lol. Hope to read a big fan-fic of you soon. You're very talented! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hello all,

I feel all of ull are doing gr8 job.
I am here with my story of the romance between B and J.
Here it is


DO DILON KA MILAN

Its a nice morning and Bani gets ready fast to go to office. While she is leaving Maasi says
Bani tu kuch khake jao, Bani says " nahi Maasi ek zaruri meeting hei mujhe abhi jaana padega".
then she hugs Maasi and leaves. Later in the office we see that Bani is busy in some work and
has no time even to take a short nap. Jai is talking to some business deligates in front of Bani's cabin
and they see Bani busy with her work. The delegates say to Jai that he is very lucky to get a
wife who is beautiful as well as very dedicated to her work. Jai keeps watching at Bani and
turns to them says yes, I am lucky. Then later Jai goes to her cabin and says that its enough for today and
she can go home. Bani just plainly says yes. Outside the office Jai is waiting for Bani in the car,
Bani comes out and looks at Jai and calls for a taxi and leaves. Jai is angry, sad, confused and all.
He just goes behind the taxi. And after they come to home they both enter the walia house and
Maasi says lo yeh dono aa gaye. Maasi seems very happy and excited seeing her Jai says " Kya huva
Maasi aap bahut khush dikh rahe hein". Maasi says "haan beta woh abhi abhi dadi aur mein soch rahe hein
ki kal ek party rakhe. Woh mei toh tumhare shaadi mei nahi aa saki isliye yeh party.( We all know Ekta mai
need not have any occasion to have a party.., Jokes apart). Jai smiles thik hei and says aacha thik hein
jaisa aap chahcte hei waisa hi hoga. And Bani smiles and is walking towards her room and climbing the steps
and Jai is behind her and suddenly Bani cant see anything and faints straight into Jai's arms. Dadi and Maasi
run near them seeing bani faint. Jai keeps saying Bani utho kya huva but she doesnt respond.
Maasi asks munna bani ne kuch khaya hei ki nahi then jai says wohh mujhe pata nahi.
Jai carries bani to the bedroom and keeps her on the bed. Doctor is called and he says that
its just a weakness as she did not eat anything the whole day. the doctor leaves and maasi
is in very bad mood and says to jai that he should take care of Bani, and also tells him not
to make bahu work so much in the office as she also has to take care of the house.( Bechari meri
pyari bani aur kitna kaam karegi). Jai just stares at Bani and also she does stare at him.
Maasi leaves and Jai says Bani tumhe apna khayal rakhna padega. Bani trying to get up from the bed
says woh aaj bahut kaam tha isliye lunch nahi kar saki., then Jai says toh kya huva .
Bani turns to him and says " mei kisiko shikayat ka mauka nahi dena chahti and goes away.
Jai is looking at her with no expression.

Next day in the morning Bani and jai are in the bedroom and Maas comes in and says that Bani is
not going to office today as she is not feeling well. Jai says ok and Maasi says to jai" Munna
aaj Bani tumhare saath nahi rahegi apni Maasi ke saath bitayegi aur yeh tumhara saza hei
Bani ka khayal na karne ke liye. Bani is all the way blushing and gives a look to Jai and leaves
the room with Maasi. Its been long and bani is waiting for jai to come for breakfast.
He is not yet coming and Bani is worried what is he doing so long in the bedroom.
Maasi says to Bani " Beta tu ja aur dekh Munna kya kar raha hei, abhi thak woh aaya kyun nahi".
Bani says " thik hei mei jake dekhti hoon". Bani enter the room and sees Jai talking to himself.
He is saying " arey Jai tum itne bade business man ho aur apna button bhi thik tarah se nahi sila sake".
and is irrtated to himself.Bani laughs and goes near him and says " Mr. Walia dejiye mei sila deti hoon.
Jai says " nO mei kar sakta hoon and is seriously takes the needle and tries to stich, but not able to do it properly.
Then bani just pulls the needle from his hands and starts stitching it. She doesnt even look at him and is very serious.
Jai just stares at her not able to shout at her or do anything. His anges turns to a affection and concern.
Bani is done and moves near to him to cut the thread with her teeth.Jai feels awkward and but bani gives him a look
with some chilbul smile in her eyes and is trying to cut the thread. And then as she is done she just takes a step back and looks
straight into jai's eyes and his button, and gives a smile. then she says woh aapke liey sab breakast pe intzaar kar rahe hei,
jaldi aayiega. Jai says thik hein and Bani goes out laughing.BAni and jai come near the table. They are having their breakfast and
dadi says arey aaj tum dono ko kya huva , pehle Jai puttar tu toh neeche nahi aa rahe the aur bani ko bheja toh woh bhi nahi aa rahi thi,
kya kar rahe the kamre mein. And Jai and Bani are staring at each other and Jai says nothing woh meii.. and Maasi says thik hei
hum samajhthe hein and dadi and Maasi laugh. Jai is totally embaressed and Bani just smiles lookng at Jai.Jai gets up and says Mei office ja
raha hoon and is looking at bani. (He says to dadi and maasi but he is looking at bani).( Daal mein kuch kaala hein. Khadoos ka dimak chalne laga).
Jai is in the office but he is not able to concentrate n his work. He keeps walking in the office and comes across Bani's cabin.
He feels as is bani is there and smiles but the next moment knows that it is his imagination and thats it..
He thinks " yeh kya ho raha hei , Mujhe har jagah bani kyun dikhai deti hei. Aisa lagta hei ki woh meri nazar ke saamne rahe har
waqt." He is confused and goes away. He keeps remeberting the button scene and laughs to himself.( there is a song in the background " Aisa lagta hei jo naa huva
hone ko hai, warna dil kyun dhadakta ssansein kyun rukti ").\\

Its night and there is party at home. Everyone is down in the hall and Dadi is as usual pulling Jigs legs .
Maasi and Jai are talkng to the guests. There is lightly music playing in the background and Maasi says are jai
Bani abh thak kyun nahi aayi. ( shayad aaj ek na ek toh late aane ke liye soch liya). Suddenly Jai sees Bani getting down the steps
in a red saree with full of zardosi work. ( Goddd believe me she looks awesome girls in my imagination hahhahaha).
Jai is spell bound and looks at her with his mouth opened. Jai hears a guy behind him saying wowwwwwwwwww kitni sundar lag rahi hei
Mrs.Walia. Sahi mei Mr. Walia bahut lucky hei". Jai looks at that guy and turns back to look at bani.
Seeing Bani Maasi goes to her and says arey wahh beta, tu baht sundar dikh rahi hei kahi meri nazar naa lage tumhe.
Party is on and everyone comes near Jai and compliments his wife., and Jai is looking at bani all the time.
He is not able to remeove his eyes from her. In between Bani is also watching him. They both are talking with their eyes.
Some guy comes and asks Bani if he could dance with her. She smiles and is dancing with him and jai is not able to take it.
He feels angry at that guy and also jealous. Aditya goes and takes bani and is dancing with her. Bani keeps looking at jai
and then Adity goes and leaves bani to Jai. Both are dancing and the music stops. Bani releases herself and is trying to go when
Jai catches her hand and takes to the place remember guys ( where Pia and pushkar kissed each other).

Bani doesnt understand what is Jai upto and just keeps looking at him and says " aap mujhe kaha le ja rahe hei Mr. Walia".
He takes her and leaves her hand as they reach that place. Bani is looking at him with a question mark in her face. Jai slowly lifts
his head and looks at her and keeps staring at her. ( the wind is blowing hard and its very silent). They both can hear their heart beats.
Jai slowly starts walking towards Bani looking straight into her eyes. Bani not understanding anything is standing like a statue.
Jai goes close to her and looks straight into her eyes and puts his hands on her shoulder.( Not very hardly but he touches her with
some sort of softness deep inside).Both still looking at each other. ( Background music starts AAnkhon se tune yeh kya keh diya
dil yeh deewana dhadakne laga)". And its again silent. Jai face is very close to Bani's and he says in a very soft voice " Yeh kya hei bani",
Bani says " Mei kuch samjhi nahi", Jai says " tumhare aur mere beech". Bani is calm and looks into his eyes.
then Jai lifts his hand and touches Bani's face gently and he says " Bani jab tu chali jaati hei toh mere nazre tumhe dundhthi hei".
Bani is almost totally melted down and might fall in his arms anytime. Jai then catches her face in both his hands and says " Mei tumhe
khona nahi chahta Bani." Bani and Jai are almost very weak in emotion and about to break down. Then Jai releases his hands and Bani turns her back to him to
hide her tears and emotions from Jai. Jai catches her hand and pulls her towards himself and Bani just turns around and hugs him tight.
Jai then asks Bani shall we dance and she says yes just with a smile. They are close to each other and are dancing and ( Background music Pyar tune kya kiya,
yeh pyar tune kya kiya... ek hi pal mei achanak di hei nayi khusiyaa). They aging hug each other and both of kiss each other.......( hahhaha)
( cute love birds.. Kisi ka nazar naa lage).

Thats itttttttttttttt.

Hope u guys enjoyed it.
Hope u guys enjoy it.

Luv u all
Savi.


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Posted: 19 years ago
#88
👏 👏 👏
savi that was wonderful and romantic 👏 👏 👏
i hope ekta does something like this 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#89
👏 👏 gr8 job everyone very creative and romatic stories 👏 👏
A SPECIAL BOW FOR MT UR FAN-FIC WAS BRILLIANT I WAS SMILING LIKE AN OAF READING UR FAN-FIC MY MOM NOW THINKS I HAVE BECOME NUTS SMILING AT THE COMPUTER SCREEN!! 😆 😆 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#90
only few more hrs are left out to send the entries!!!!!!!!!after that the contest will be closed for entries submission-
and out esteem judges will give their judgement-
best wishes to all participants.
KS IF DEVOLPMENT TEAM-
Edited by monika.goel - 19 years ago

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