1sT CONTEST:JAI-BANI MADE FOR EACH OTHER- - Page 8

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Posted: 19 years ago
#71
Wow MT!! loved your story...it was like i was watching the whole thing!!!
thanks for the compliment Suku! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#72
FANTABULOUS JOB MT... i just loved it .. i have goose bumps right now .. whew... i cud imagine the whole thing.. it was WOW 👏 😉

Great going gurll .. when do we see the next phase then??
Edited by Culture - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73
wow nice work nibbles

lots of entriess ha
😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74

this is not my entry but of ana16 .

title: Romance with the flu.

by: ana16



This episode begins with jai and bani returning from a party... and its raining heavily. But no matter how bad the weather is... They both always look fantastic... as usual! They had to go a party for one of jai's friends. They are walking out of the car. Suddenly bani slips because of the rain... And jai grabs her... They stare at each other for a long time bani in jai's arms.. Jai holding bani in his arms... *sigh*... what a scene!! Then a dadi comes and says. Jai puter.. And teases him. That what a scene… it's just like a movie I saw with rani mukherjee and sharukh khan!! They both blush and go inside. Later on in the week… bani gets up to get ready... And notices that jai isn't ready yet... she goes to him.. and notices that h has a very high temperature! She quickly goes downstairs to tell everyone when she notices a letter on the table! It says that everyone had to go to the temple to pray with bua. And they were getting late so then they couldn't take them along.. So as u mite notice... jai and bani r in the house all alone.. With jai sick as ever. So then bani quickly prepares some tea… then gets some wet towels for his head. And she goes to him. Jai is awake and he tells her no need .. I am fine. I don't need any help. Bani says that she called the doctor.. he will be here soon. So until he comes he is her responsibility. She helps him get up. They stare at eachother.. for a while then bani gives him some soup.. and later she puts wet towels on his head. Then the doctor comes. He says that jai has a fever.. but with his beautiful wife aroud.. he is sure to recover faster. Jai looks at bani.

Then when the doctor leaves bani says that she will b rite bak.. as she has to give his prescription to the one of the waiters/or servants.. w/e u may call thm.. and to get his medicines. Then as she is bout to leave.. jai grabs her hand and says.. bani thank you.

Thn everyone comes home and notices jai.. they all get worried.. but he got better… thanx to bani. And then later when he is feeling much better and as his usual self.. he tells bani thank you for taking care of me.



Edited by doyelpakhi - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#75
MT , U R JUST FABOULOUS!!!! 👏

balaji should definitely hire u!!
😊


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Posted: 19 years ago
#76
aww...very, very sweet ana!!! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#77
MT ! I just loved ur entry,Great work 👏 👏
I hope ur story should come as one epsiode in KKasam se's future telecasts!!:-)
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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
that was brillant ....loved it 😊
Edited by zara18 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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10bluebookman antiqua

Hi all 😊 U have done a great job, all very creative. 👏

Keep it up. 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#80
lolz........great job...... 👏 👏

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