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Hello Everyone!

This is my entry for the contest… I have continued from where the episode ended on Friday. I hope u like, coz I liked writing it. I will warn before hand… IT IS LONG!

Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho...

Everyone arrive at the Walia farmhouse for a 3 day break from their hectic schedules. Jai-Bani reach the last and are visibly sulking over what happened,. Jai had picked up Bani from the bus stop and they had headed to the farmhouse. Just watching them drag themselves along, Massi asks Jai why her Bahu's chehra is 'utra hua'. Much to Jai's horror, bani doesn't seem to disagree and smile. Looking at Jai who seemed to be looking at her helplessly, Bani complains like an upset wife that Jai got angry with her coz she forgot to get his laptop and had insisted they went back home and got it. Jai heaves a sign of relief… Massi scolds Jai for getting work along and confiscates his Laptop and orders him to spend time with all of them. Jai looks at Bani to convey(not through words ofcourse) that he is sorry and thank her for saving the day. Bani is simply not interested, see through him and walks away with Massi. An amused Jai stands there watching Bani walk away, unaware of himself wishing she would turn around and give him a look. Bani walking along Massi isnt hearing a word of what Massi had to say, she could feel Jai's gaze following her, she kept telling herself not to turn around… but at the end she does turn around to find Jai's smirking away, she brings back her thoughts promising herself she will ignore him as much as she can. AS IF!!!

Jai tries his best to ease out the tension, Bani is fully aware of this. She wasn't angry with Jai, she could never be… but she decided to play along coz she was enjoying Jai's attention. It made her feel she was the Most Special Person to have ever existed. Jai much to his own amusement had now decided come what may he just had to reel in Bani with his Charm. For reasons unexplained he felt jealous of the people Bani was spending her time with, laughing and smiling. Her laughter had his heart soar far into the blue sky. He had never heard anything as wonderful as her laugh. It made a bit furious at himself for not being the reason behind that Laughter so he decided he would join in. Much to Bani's embarrassment Jai was blatantly flirting with her infront of everyone…he made Massi the perfect excuse for it.

Everyone were a relaxed lot after the 1st day. Tension had eased out between Jai-Bani. They found themselves grinning and smiling without a reason, only to realize the other was on their mind. After a heavy lunch most of the people had retired for a siesta, Bani was with Massi & Dadi who were entertaining her with Jai's growing up days. Listening to the stories made her only realize she was hopelessly in love with Jai. It was late afternoon when Bani decided she would make tea for everyone.

She goes to the kitchen before which she decides to check on Jai… only to find him missing. She had seen him last when he was having a business talk with Aditya. All of a sudden she felt a pang of disappointment take over her. The previous day had as it were changed her entire life. She seemed blissfully happy around this man whose eyes seemed to look only at her, only for her. She didn't have the guts to look into them throughout, but whenever she did, she found the emotions in them had intensified with every moment. She found herself defenseless infront of his smile, which not only lit up his face but seemed to reach his eyes. As much as she knew this was all true she couldn't brush aside the unpleasant memories of the past few days. She is got out of her trance when she hears a galloping sound, she walks to the window and smiles instantaneously. It was Jai but ofcourse… he was on a horse.

She stood there watching Jai's exceptional skills at handling a horse, when Massi comes in. Looking at Bani's questioning glance, Massi tells her that Jai was an exceptional Polo player, infact he had captained his club for a long time. Massi continues to say that Horses are Jai's passion. They even have a stud farm with this farmhouse, and Jai likes to spend his time there whenever he gets the time and the horse Jai is riding now, is his favourite Horse, Chetak. Apparently till now Jai hasn't allowed anyone near Chetak. Meanwhile, Jai rides away… seeing Bani's crestfallen face Massi asks her to go the stud farm as Jai will be there. Massi asks a farm hand to take Bani to the stud farm. As they drive through the farm, Bani is left astonished at the beauty & the width of the farm.
Bani reaches the stud farm and sees Jai checking out the saddles. She was looking at a man who had an uncanny rustic feel to him. Dressed in plain white shirt and brown trousers and dark glares he looked a hands on Rancher and not one bit the Hotelier, Jai Walia who ran his worldwide business from behind his desk. As he hears the jeep draw close he looks up and smiles .He removes his glares and waits for her to come to him watching her without drifting his eyes elsewhere. Looking at him smirking made her uncomfortable coz it looked as if he was expecting her, he wasn't surprised at all! For a moment she thought had he lured her to come to find him, in the 1st place? Almost as if to answer that thought, Jai asked 'Someone has followed me here!!! Missing me. Huh?' As Bani stammers with a lame excuse, Jai's all knowing grin made her give up.

To avoid Jai, she begins looking at the horses, they are the most magnificent, beautiful animals to see up close. Despite all the horses being equally splendid, there was something different about Chetak, A black Stallion. There was an aura of Royalty that distinguished Chetak from the others… Chetak had to be special, He was Jai's favourite after all. Amused at the interest Bani is showing in Chetak, Jai asks her if she would want to meet him. Bani squeals in excitement just like a small kid. Jai gets Chetak near Bani and very proudly shows to her his horse. He also says that Chetak at times is very moody and only he can handle it. Bani comments "Lagta hai ap jaisa hi hai, Khadoos!" amused with that comment Jai, dismisses it with a wave. He asks Bani if she wants to be feed Chetak. Bani nods. Jai gives her a couple of Sugar cubes to feed the horse. Bani though takes it, feels very scared to actually go near the horse. She keeps putting her hands back & forth coz she is scared. Suddenly she felt his hands hold her hand gently yet firmly and takes it forward to feed the horse. Seeing herself so close to the huge animal she closed her eyes, when she felt Jai's protective arm around her shoulder, she looks up at him and he smiles an assuring smile… she turns back the horse who is gulping the sugar cubes from her hand. She felt the fright leave her as she patted chetak's face and cuddled it coz Jai's protective arms were still holding her. Chetak seemed to have taken a liking to Bani immediately and was extremely well behaved. Jai smiles to himself and says "Lo chetak bhi bachnahi paya" perplexed Bani asks him "Kisse se?" and Jai closing in the distance between them almost whispers into Bani's ears "Tum se.. Tumhari Jadoo se, tum tho kisse ko bhi apna bana hi leti ho!" Bani blushed but couldn't probably say anything more as his closeness had taken her breath away… even as Jai continued to maintain his gaze at her she only hoped in silence her eyes will speak for her heart… she lifted her head and Jai had locked her eyes with his brooding intensity.

A moment later they snap out as they hear Chetak… Bani is embarrassed but Jai seemed quite pleased. Bani gets back to looking at the horse, when Jai asks her if she wants to ride the horse. Bani horrified, refuses. Jai tells her she should try it and is sure she can manage it coz it must be in her genes. Bani wonders how could that be in her genes… Jai tells Bani her mom was an exceptional horse rider. Bani couldn't believe it, Jai tells her about her mom's horse riding exploits. One hearing her mom's stories a new found confidence urges Bani to try it out. She agrees to give a try and wonders which horse will she ride. Jai says "Chetak, ofcourse!" A surprised Bani tells him that Massi told him he is very possessive about chetak and wont share him with anyone. Jai adjusting the saddle says "mera jo bhi hai, wo tumhara bhi tho hai" and looks at Bani who is looking down to avoid him… he smiles to himself and says cheerfully, that the saddle is ready now. Now Bani begins to panic, she backs out refusing to sit on the horse. Jai tries to calm her down but Bani is being hysteric, Finally Jai holds her looks into her eyes, "Main hoon tumhare saath, tumhe kuch hone nahi dunga." Puts his hands forward and says "Ab chalo" Looking at Jai's reassuring presence she takes his hand. He helps her sit on the horse while he holding the reins and walks by the horse. They take a few steps, he is talking to Bani and she doesn't reply, he looks up at her and finds her sitting like a statue with her eyes tightly shut. He breaks into a chuckle and Bani opens her eyes, he tells her not to worry so much, they are just walking and the horse is not galloping. Bani relaxes a bit and begin to enjoy her ride while Jai tells her about his polo playing days… they seemed like walking into the horizon which awaited them holding in it life's promise for them.

It is getting a bit cooler as the evening is setting in. Bani asks him where they are going, he tells her there is lake at the other end and it is a beautiful sight to watch the sun set into the lake. Bani has had enough of the horse ride and wants to get off and walk with Jai. She tells him she wants to get off. When Bani is getting off, Jai literally picks her off the horse and lands her on the ground, safe. They walk towards the lake, Bani wonders where could the lake be, she hasn't seen any. On their way, Jai leaves the horse with a farm help and asks him to take it back to the stable.

The scenic beauty around them increased with each step. As they walked, they spoke quietly to each other, as though they had secrets to share. Whispering in hushed tones, they had to stay close to hear the words. The winds carried with them elusive scents of the wild flowers scattered around the place. Jai looked at Bani and felt her honest eyes imploring him, her quite smile touch his heart, her warmth filled his soul with the essence of life. His Life had found a new meaning, a new purpose… It was in THEIR TOGETHERNESS. He puts his hand forward and Bani looks at him overwhelmed… she quietly places her hand in his and they walk together.

A song in the back ground… from the soundtrack of Fanna

Mere haath mein tera haath ho saari jannatein mere saath ho
tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan tere pyar mein ho jaaun fanaa
mere haath mein tera haath ho saari jannatein mere saath ho
tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan tere pyar mein ho jaaun fanaa
mere haath mein tera haath ho saari jannatein mere saath ho
Bani: tere dil mein meri saanson ko panna mil jaaye
tere ishq mein meri jaan fanaa ho jaaye



There was still no sign of the lake, Bani wondered what could be so special about the place. They walked their way through trees when Jai slowed down and Bani looked in front to find the most breathtaking scene. The scenery looked stunning and tranquil with a small but unbelievably clear lake, fed by the melting water of the nearby mountains. (Now I don't know where Jai's Farmhouse is situated!!!) Acres and acres of tall and evergreen tress lined the shores of the lake. The Sun was about to set.. the entire scenery looked draped in a beautiful orange.

Looking around, bani is surprised, at the lighting the sun has cast all around them. Not quite daylight, yet far from the darkness of night, there spoke a light of truth, understanding and love. Almost a heavenly light. Jai stood by Bani as he watched the beautiful magic of heaven on earth with the one who walks with his heart

Song Cont in the background:.
jitne paas hain khushbu saans ke
jitne paas hothon ke sargam
jaise saath hain karvat yaad ke
jaise saath baahon ke sangam
jitne paas paas khwaabon ke nazar
utni paas tu rehna hamsafar
tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan
tere pyar mein ho jaaun fanaa
mere haath mein tera haath ho saari jannatein mere saath ho


Jai just watched Bani's face as it reflected the happiness in his heart, Her happiness had made him joyous that he could have ever imagined. Bani looked at him questioning when Jai pulls her close to him and says "janti ho Bani main jab bhi apne apko tanha pata ta to main yahan chala aata ta. Es jagah ke kubsurati mere bechain dil ko pal bhar keliye sukon deta ta. Lekin aaj mujhe yeh har bar se zyada kubsurath lagrahi hai, Janti ho kyun? (Bani shakes her head, with a smile on his face he looks towards the lake) Kyunki aaj tum mere sath ho… Tumhare pass hone ka ehsaas mujhe mere har tanhayee, har dukh, har dard se dur kardiya hai. Ek naya ehsaas, ek naye kushi, Ek umeed ne mere es dil ko bhardiya hai. Aaj en nazaroon mein wo kubsurathi nazar arahi hai jo maine kabhi deki nahi te…" There is a sense of chock in Jai's voice.

Lines from the song:
Rone de aaj hamko do aankhen sujaane de
Baahon mein lene de aur khud ko bheeg jaane de
hain jo seene mein qaid dariya woh choot jaayega
hain itna dard ke tera daaman bheeg jaayega



Bani overwhelmed by Jai just hugs him, promising herself she would never let Jai feel any pain and fill his heart with her love and happiness. She laid her head against his chest With her ear close to his heart, she felt her world slide into place. All the stumbles and falls through her life had brought her to this moment. This is where she was supposed to be…. In the arms of the man who she loved and who loved her more.

Song continued:
jitne paas paas dhadkan ke hain raaz
jitne paas bundon ke baadal
jaise saath saath chanda ke hain raat
jitne paas nainon ke kaajal
jitne paas paas saagar ke lehar
utne paas tu rehna hamsafar
tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan
tere pyar mein ho jaaun fanaa
mere haath mein tera haath ho saari jannatein mere saath ho



It is said "love always finds those with a lover's heart" Love had found them even among tears, disappointments and cynicism in the sparkling dusk from heaven above. Not a word is spoken, for none are needed No words could ever describe the beauty of the moment or of emotions of two people who had just pledged their lives to eachother with love and commitment. In the distance, the sun settled, the waxing moon rose, the wind rose to a thrilling pitch and the night wrapped the lovers in peace and promises yet to be fulfilled….
Lines from the song:
Adhoori saans thi, dhadkan adhoori thi adhooren hum
magar ab chaand poora hain falak pe aur AB POORE HAIN HUM!

THE BEGINING
!!!!!

God Bless.
Lots of Luv
Anu.

Edited by anushka_5 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#92
wow ,
gr8 stories Kasam se and Anu.
Just loved reading them.
I was smiling all the way.
😃 😛 😳

wish these all come true.

luv,
savi
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Posted: 19 years ago
#93
wow amazing..............n good luck to all the perticipants 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#94
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wonderful stories Anu and Kasame Se 😛
Both of them were so amazing and romanticing 😳 😛 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#95
good luck to all others my entry comming soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#96
Hi guys, here is my part.
Btw, I'm sorry if I typed some things wrong in hindi, cuz I'm not Indian.


Kasamh se, humko pyaar hai sirf tumse

Bani is discussing something with Mausi, when Jai walks in talking on his mobile. The ladies remain silent, till he finishes his conversation. 'Namaste.', he says and hugs Mausi. Mausi smiles and looks from him to Bani. Jai somehow understands the hint and he bows over to Bani. 'Hello jaan.', he says and hugs Bani. Her cheeks go all red and she doesn't know where to look. Jai takes a seat next to Mausi and doesn't care to look at Bani again. She on the other hand, is almost fainting out of shyness. 'Excuse me, I'll make some tea.', she whispers and leaves the living room. In the kitchen she tries to wash of the red colour of her cheeks, but that won't disappear before she calms down. She sighs and starts making the tea. She is getting carried away and is almost forgetting they are putting up with this act for the sake of Mausi. They don't want anything bad to happen to her. Bani tries to ignore the fact that she actually likes it this way. This is the way she wanted her marriage to be. A man who loves her and dares to show it in front of others. 'Auch!', she yells when accidentally spilling the tea over her right-hand. She angrily thanks the tea for making her realise it is all fake. She cools off her hand with cold water and then walks back into the living room with the tea. Bani takes a seat and starts pouring the tea in the cups. She hands over a cup to Jai, who grabs it, without even thanking her. Mausi sips from her tea and smiles. 'It tastes lovely. Thank you, Bani.', she says and smiles. 'But, we should get back to our conversation.', Mausi says seriously. Bani stares at her nails and doesn't dare to say something. 'I don't understand why you are against this. I cannot see a problem that should bother you.', Mausi continues. 'What are you talking about?', Jai interferes while keeping his cup down. 'Nothing.', Bani quickly whispers. Jai's eyes do not trust her and he turns his face towards Mausi. 'What is it? What are you talking about?', he asks, this time in a demanding tone. 'Jai, dear. I'll tell you, but I don't want a word about this to reach other ears than mine, yours or Bani's.' Jai promises he will keep his mouth shut. 'Sahil yesterday told me he wants to get married and he is seriously ready for it.', Mausi whispers while her eyes perfectly spot every corner, in case somebody is listening. 'What?! Are you serious?', Jai says while bringing a great and happy smile on his face. 'Sahil! Our Sahil? I can't believe he is so grown up to take such a decision.' Bani stares at Jai, hi smile brings sparkles in her eyes, but she feels sad, knowing Jai will be disappointed. 'Shhh, don't yell.' Mausi puts her finger in front of her lips. 'So then what is the problem?', Jai asks. 'We will have to get the approval of your wife, before bringing this news out.' Jai looks at Bani and then at Mausi. 'Main kuch samje nahin.', he whispers with a confused face and for a moment it looks like he doesn't want to understand. 'Why do you have to get Bani's approval for Sahil's marriage?', he asks in such a way, as if he does not want anyone to answer that question. 'Arre, silly! Because he wants to marry Rano, of course.', Mausi says and starts laughing out loud. Bani and Jai don't seem to get the joke. Jai immediately gets out of his chair and walks up the stairs in a hurry. Bani and Mausi hear the door slammed behind him. This was exactly what Bani expected. An angry Mr. Walia who would again accuse her of a lot sick things. 'Bani-dear. I think we shocked Jai a bit by telling him this. Go and check out on your husband.' The word husband makes Bani shiver. She knows she cannot live like this for a long time anymore. It kills her to pretend this beautiful marriage is true. Bani obeys and walks to the room. With every step she gets closer to the room, she feels her heart beating faster. She opens the door, feeling her heart is almost bursting out of her chest. There he is. Standing in front of the window, loosening his tie. Bani stares at him, feeling she is doing a wrong thing by coming here. But to make sure she wont lose courage and walk back down stairs, she closes the door behind her. Jai now notices her and walks towards her in an intimidating way. He pushes her aside and locks the door. The key he puts in his pocket, while walking towards the closet. Jai undresses himself. Bani's eyes grow big and she quickly turns her face towards the wall. When Jai is finished he grabs her arm and pushes her towards the bed. 'Sit down.', he commands while fasting the last button of his pyjama-blouse. 'Now listen carefully. This side of the bed is yours and this is mine.', he says while pointing. 'Now I am going to sleep. I do not wish to hear you snore, laugh, cry or even turn around. Tomorrow is an other day and you perfectly explain what I heard today. Understood!', he yells with anger in his eyes. Bani is scared and nods her head.
Bani gets up as careful as possible, trying not to wake up Jai. She stares at his face for quite some time. Now she sees he actually is a very handsome man. His face is perfectly drawn. She bends down in front of him and gathers all the courage she possesses. With a naughty and somewhat sweet smile on her face, she glides with a finger over his eyebrows, playing with his nose and then reaches his lips. Just when about to touch his chin, he turns over. Bani quickly gets up and walks to the door as fast as she can. It doesn't open and that reminds her that Jai had locked it and kept the key with him. Bani opens the closet and looks for the trousers he was wearing last night. She checks the pockets but there is no key in them. She sighs and checks the whole closet, but there is no key to be found. Then finally a bell starts ringing in her head. 'Maybe it's in the pyjama he is wearing now.', she thinks and walks towards the bed. She carefully lifts the blankets and laughs about the state Mr. Walia's legs are in. Bani doesn't seem able to stop laughing about the way he is lying in bed. She then tries to reach for his pocket, but every time she gets close, Jai turns over. Bani has no choice then to just wait for him to wake up; as she has not forgotten what he told her yesterday. She sits on the bed and just enjoys herself staring at him. Even though Mr. Walia can't see her staring at him, her face has a colour of a shy little girl. Bani stares at him for a long time while thinking about how it would be if Jai loved her. Then out of nothing Jai's eyes open wide and meet Bani's eyes who is for the first time in her life, not shy to look at him. Till a little smile appears on Jai's face, she quickly gets up and walks towards the window. 'Kyun? What is there to see? I'd almost say you were enjoying the view over here a lot more.', he says smiling, but sounding sleepy. Bani is blushing as never before and stares at him while he's getting up. He looks very goofy when his hair isn't combed. 'You better get ready.', he says while searching for a suitable casual something to wear. 'Why? Are we going somewhere?', Bani asks. It's her day off after all, so she doesn't have to go to the office. 'We have to talk and don't ask me about what. Just get ready.' Jai opens the door and walks out of the room. Bani isn't feeling so good, but gets freshened up and changes her clothes. Meanwhile Jai is waiting in the car. Bani gets out of the house and takes a seat next to him. 'Ji, where are we going?' 'Sttt.', Jai commands and drives away from the house. After a while he breaks the silence that has been bothering Bani. 'Where do you wish to have breakfast?', he asks in an arrogant manner. 'Thank you, but I'm not feeling so well.' Bani is staring out of the window. 'You haven't eaten, that's why.' Jai parks the car in front of a little restaurant. 'Get out.', he says, while turning the car off. Bani carefully tries to open the door, but feels it costs her all her power. She doesn't understand why she has gotten so weak out of nothing. Jai who has already gotten out, walks towards her and helps her open the door. 'Faster please.' He looks at her with mean eyes. Bani is trying to move out of the way, so he can close the door. At that moment she grabs her head; feeling dizzy. 'Mr. Walia. I'm not feeling okay.', she whispers and breathes heavily. 'Yeah, sure. When are you going to stop complaining? I know you are just saying this to avoid the chat I want to have with you.', he says and pushes her aside to close the door. Bani leans at the car and tries to ignore the pain that is shooting by in her stomach. She tries to find a place to sit down and get some fresh air. Not too far she locates a little park. 'Can we go there?', she asks, while sweat is playing on her for-head. Jai leads her to a bench and they take a seat. Bani closes her eyes. 'Now we should talk. How dare Rano seduce Sahil! Isn't it enough what Pia did to me? Let alone Pia; isn't it enough what you did to me? If you want money, you should just say so. There is no need for playing with peoples feelings!' 'Mr. Walia, please give me a second. I'm not feeling well.' Now Jai stares at her face and sees she is not lying. He quickly gets up. 'I'll be right back.', he says and leaves Bani alone. Not too long he is running back with a bag. When he opens it he gets out some breakfast for Bani and tells her to eat it. She thanks him and starts eating. When she is finally finished she cleans her hands and stares at Jai who is still eating a sandwich. 'Look, Mr Walia. I cannot help it if Sahil and Rano love each other. You cannot expect me to tell my sister the way she should feel for a guy or the way she shouldn't. Sir, I can hold my sisters back for doing things that could bring us all disaster, but I cannot ask them to give up love. Love is one thing I always taught them to fight for.' Jai had listened to her all the time, while eating. 'Seems this food made you feel much better.', he says and smiles. 'Now you look, Bani. I do not want the same thing happened to me, to happen to my nephew. I wont get in the way of Rano and Sahil, but listen to me carefully, if one of you three sisters hurt my Sahil, you are the one paying the price Bani. And I'm not joking. Oh and as a matter of fact, I also learn my family to fight for love. But there are sometimes other things I place above love. So stop bragging.' Jai cleans his hands, while Bani is laughing. 'Hard to believe.', she says and gets up. 'You think that is hard to believe?', Jai asks. 'Mr. Walia talking about love and understanding love…Yeah that sounds unbelievable to me.' 'Well, I have never been more insulted in my life, miss Bani. You're calling me a liar in my face. Well then I'll just have to prove to you that I actually am a great fanatic of love and show you what your sister Pia is missing.' Bani doesn't know if she should laugh or remain silent about Mr. Walia bringing her sister up. She decides to just smile. 'You feel like dinner tonight?', Jai asks while walking with Bani towards the car. 'Kyun? Koi special occasion hai this evening?' Bani stares at him with her innocent eyes. 'No, nothing special.' Bani agrees and they drive away.'
'Bani! Are you ready?', Jai yells behind the door. 'Haan, haan! Ek minute, main aati hoon!' Jai is getting irritated. 'What is it with you ladies?! Always taking hours to get ready. You had all morning and afternoon to get ready. I really don't understand why you women need all the time. You know what the funny thing is? It doesn't even look as if you had spend ten minutes on your looks. I will never under….' Before he can even finish his sentence, the door opens and Bani appears in her beautiful yellow sari. Jai stares at her, surprised. Affection and love are hidden in his eyes while he is admiring Bani. She just looks stunning. 'Shall we go?', Bani asks blushing. 'Can't we stay?', Jai whispers. Bani's eyes grow big. 'Kya kaha aapne?', she asks. 'Kuch nahin. Chalo.' As if it is a normal thing to do, Jai grabs Bani's hand and leaves the house.
'Care for a walk?' 'Oh Mr. Walia, I'm really tired. Let's just go home.', Bani answers while staring at him in the dark. 'I'll buy you an ice cream.', he says and laughs naughty to Bani. 'Well, in that case. Let's go.', she answers and laughs back at him. Jai buys her an ice cream and they walk over a beautiful cliff. 'I always came here when I was a little kid.', Jai says while pulling Bani with him. 'Achcha? What is so special about it, except for being a easy way to kill yourself?', she yells while almost tripping over her sari. Jai doesn't answer till they are on top of the cliff. 'Come here.', he says and drags Bani towards him. He carefully puts his arms around her and covers her eyes with his hands. 'I'll show you what is so special about it. Are you ready?', he whispers. Bani feels she can pass out any moment now. This is too much for her. Mr. Walia standing so close to her, touching her. She smells his perfume and smiles. Her heart beats even faster then yesterday. Bani puts her hands on Jai's and removes them from her eyes. Mumbai. A beautiful view over Mumbai. Bani doesn't say a thing and just looks at the beautiful lights that are everywhere. She just smiles and so does Jai, who isn't even realising he is still standing behind Bani and holding her hands. 'Beautiful.', Bani says. 'Told you so.', Jai whispers in her ear. A little shock goes trough Bani and she loosens herself from Jai's grip. He ignores her. 'I could stand here all night and not get enough of this view. It's peaceful.' 'Yeah, and have you seen the stars.', Bani says while staring at the sky. 'I love the stars and always stare at them. My mother once told me that when you smile to them, they'll smile with you and when you cry, they'll cry with you and support you. I love the stars.' 'I'm a star.', Jai answers. Bani stares at the shape of his face, that is lightened by the moon. 'What do you mean?' Jai smiles. 'Well you are the one who told me that when you smile, they smile with you and when you cry, they cry with you so when you love them…There must be a star that loves you back.' Bani turns her face away from Jai, afraid that even in the dark he will notice her red cheeks. 'You are a special girl, Bani.', he says while grabbing her arm. 'You are just one of those stars. When someone cries, you cry and one someone smiles you smile.' 'And when someone loves, I love.', she whispers; staring at the sky. 'Stars cannot reach for each other. They are only there to help the people.', Bani says with a smile on her face. 'Maybe stars never try to reach for each other. Maybe they actually can reach for each other.', Jai says who is getting closer to Bani. He drags her closer to him. Bani feels his breath in her face and doesn't dare to look up. 'They just have to agree about reaching for each other. About getting closer to each other.', Jai continues in a soft voice. The wind plays with Bani's hair. Jai lovingly gets a few hairs out of her face and smiles to her. 'Stars just need courage.', he whispers while moving even closer to her. Bani now finally looks at him. She has never been so close to him. Only a soft breeze can skip between their faces. 'Now one star is close enough. It's up to the other star what happens next.', Jai says and stares at her lips without even feeling ashamed. Bani is doubting about what to do now, but then she lets her heart win over her mind and she gets closer to him. She tries to reach for his face and stares at him. She then hugs him intensely and doesn't feel like letting go. 'That will do.', Jai says laughing and hugs her even tighter to his chest.
Edited by Tiha - 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: converse_chick

good luck to all others my entry comming soon

hurry up if u have to post ur entry-u have just 2hrs after that this topic (CONTEST)will be closed-

KS IF DEVOLPMENT TEAM-

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👏 👏 👏
that was really amazing tiha.

Cheers,
savi
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wow gud 1.........soundz gud.....great job 👏 👏 👏
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wow arsh sweety...that was just so fab!!!
one thign that HAS to happen in KS, is that someone needs to give Jai some dye so taht he can get rid off the bird poop!!

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