SS: 19th June Series, Mora Piya,Story VI uptd 17/6

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johnangad

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

reading ur lovely stories is always a delight!

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Kashish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

aww di that was a cute one!!....poor jai...missing out on feeling their baby..but glad to see that she forgave him!! cant wait to read mre ss..

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Shamu (my brother calls me that)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

I loved this SS! It is so cute! Please do write more.

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Rose

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

these ffs bring back sweet ks memories , thanks again

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visma

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Looks like I missed some stories in between. It is lovely to read which reminds us of the golden days of KS. I wish something on the ines that were written in the forum actually did happen in the serial.

Great reads hope to read more.

Bye

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Purnima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

awesome ones....................👏 👏 👏 👏 👏brilliant.................👏...................loved all of them...........😃 😃...............................
& me too.........tin.... missing ur JB ffs..................long time...........u wrote one................i think it was........power jealousy,.........that was last i read...............😃 😃

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Shreshta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

aww i really loved the last scene

please dont stop writing

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jayati

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

Dori

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Hamsafar Chaahiye Umr Bhar Chaahiye
Hamsafar
Chaahiye Umr Bhar Chaahiye

Hamsafar Chaahiye, Umr Bhar Chaahiye
Hamsafar
Chaahiye, Umr Bhar Chaahiye
Aapke Pyaar Ki Ik Nazar Chaahiye
Aapke
Pyaar Ki Ik Nazar Chaahiye
Dil Hai Beghar Ise Ek Ghar Chaahiye
Bas
Yun Hi Dekh Kar Muskuraati Raho
Hey Hey Ey Hey
Bas Yun Hi Dekh
Kar Muskuraati Raho
Bas Yun Hi Dekh Kar Muskuraati Raho
Ye
Sahaaraa Mujhe Umr Bhar Chaahiye
Dil Hai Beghar Ise Ek Ghar Chaahiye
Hamsafar
Chaahiye Umr Bhar Chaahiye
Aapke Pyaar Ki Ik Nazar Chaahiye
Dil
Hai Beghar Ise Ek Ghar Chaahiye
Bas Yun Hi Dekh Kar Muskuraate Raho
O
O O
Bas Yun Hi Dekh Kar Muskuraate Raho
Bas Yun Hi Dekh Kar
Muskuraate Raho
Ye Sahaaraa Mujhe Umr Bhar Chaahiye
Dil Hai Beghar
Ise Ek Ghar Chaahiye
Hamsafar Chaahiye Umr Bhar Chaahiye

The music was loud and coming out of Anu's room, she did not believe hearing anything softly but it was good, the radio also announced the time, the family members got ready hearing it, just like the olden days where radio was the first thing people switched on after getting up….

Jai climbed down the stairs, he watched Bani moving around the hall, setting table, getting his breakfast ready, the lyrics of the song floated into his ears he watched her, she was busy, he knew she has heard him coming down, no she does not look up to see him but she knows, he knows that she knows, as he heard the song, he kept on staring Humsafar Chahiye, umar bhar chahiye….yes he wants a partner, somebody to spend life with, somebody to grow old with….

Bani was much younger to him, about 17 years, she was not his chosen bride but substitute on behalf of her sister who fled at the end moment….she was the most hated person on his list, more than his business competitators, the people who give him hard time, he vented his anger and did not miss an opportunity to do so. She tries to remain invisible, working in the shadows, taking care of him, his masi, dadi, Aditya are so happy with her , he could not remain unaffected, he started seeing what others were already ….

Areh wah kya gaana hai, Jigyasa suno, imagine me singing this to you but then you know and I know…Aditya mocked coming down to join him, Jigyasa gave a scathing look…don't blame me Aditya, taali ek haath se nehi bajti….Jai was observing Bani, she stopped and gave a brief glance to Jigyasa.

What is she thinking, Jai wanted to know for a second he felt like reaching out and holding her hand, Bani listen to the song, can we not atleast try, he stepped towards her…

Hamsafar Chaahiye Umr Bhar Chaahiye
Hamsafar
Chaahiye Umr Bhar Chaahiye

Hamsafar Chaahiye, Umr Bhar Chaahiye
Hamsafar
Chaahiye, Umr Bhar Chaahiye
Aapke Pyaar Ki Ik Nazar Chaahiye
Aapke
Pyaar Ki Ik Nazar Chaahiye
Dil Hai Beghar Ise Ek Ghar Chaahiye
Bas

Jai bhaiya you don't seemed to be in a hurry today to have breakfast and go out, aren't you feeling well….

Bani finally turned to look at him, her soft eyes on him, he could feel his blood rushing in his veins….

As expected by Masi, he turned to take his customary leave from her before he went out of the house, bye Bani, he said softly, sham ko milte hai, he added after a second, her face was so readable, she could not hide her surprise hearing the words….

Bye Mr Walia, sham ko milte hai, she smiled….

Yun Hi Dekh Kar Muskuraati Raho
Hey Hey Ey Hey
Bas Yun Hi Dekh
Kar Muskuraati Raho
Bas Yun Hi Dekh Kar Muskuraati Raho
Ye

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Morning Mr Walia, his secretary Mona entered the room, smelling of expensive perfume and looking like a doll, Jai was standing at the window observing the traffic, often he thinks he should let go of Bani, she deserves better a good girl, stuck with him a much older man and not to speak about his weird sister…..

Hearing Mona's voice he turned, Good morning Mona, oh my my….any occasion…..you in a saree

Yes Mr Walia, today is our anniversary, Sudhir will take me out for lunch and then of course we will have dinner with the family…

Jai smiled, you know you could have taken the day off…

Mona startled but then recovered quickly, err yes but Sudhir has got some important meeting in office in the morning, he had to attend it so I thought what will I do at home alone, better come to office….

Don't hurry back from lunch, I will not be expecting in the 2^nd half, I will inform the Personal Dept not to deduct leave…

Mona was now really stunt but then beamed….thank you Mr Walia, she turned to go, whatever rumours she hears about his marriage it seems to have done some wonders to him, she opened the door and went out.

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As Mona turned to leave, Jai's eyes fell on her back, the blouse she was wearing is crisscrossed with strings (dori), my god how did she tie them? He wondered….

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Mona settled down in her seat, taking out her mobile she quickly wrote down a sms sending it to her husband. Jai Walia was a moody person alright, joked when it suited his mood but never liked anybody leaving office in midst of the day, take off and don't come if you only have to go out, normally Mona took off but her leave situation was not good this year and Sudhir also had something important so they had thought of meeting for a hurried lunch in the nearby Chinese restaurant but then since he is being so kind why not, if Sudhir too can manage……

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Sham ko milte hai ….the words rang strangely in her ears. Initially he did it on Masi's instance, Masi of course had a lot of flowery words to say, ghum ke ate hai, jane ki izzajat do etc etc., but he never said those instead 'Bye Bani…or see you Bani…non romantic and just communicative enough not to displease Masi, very basic and to the point….

Sham ko milte hai….the words sounded so romantic, his voice, today there was something in his voice….

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Today I have to speak to Bani, Jai entered his car, this cannot go on, this has to stop before they grow closer, it is hurting him, specially after Mona left, he spied from his window, Mona running to meet her husband and sitting on his bike with her arms around him. They are married for 5 years and who will say it…still so much in love, he yearned for someone, his body yearned for someone to hold close, his mind yearned for someone to share few words…

Sahaaraa Mujhe Umr Bhar Chaahiye
Dil Hai Beghar Ise Ek Ghar Chaahiye
Hamsafar
Chaahiye Umr Bhar Chaahiye

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Bani unlocked the door of the bathroom, as she was opening the door she heard someone singing a familiar song off tune, it was her husband, she wanted to lock the door and remain in the bathroom but then he must have heard her, he stopped, Bani came out, he was sitting on his favourite place, though she saw his shoes only, she knew in what position, with his hand above his head….

Bani went to the dressing table, the peculiar feeling was back, she could feel his eyes on her but too shy to stare back, she could feel him wanting to say something but too shy to ask what it is….

After brushing her hair, she wore the matching bangles then realised the dori of her blouse was hanging open…Uff Bani thought, Pia and her ideas, it was she who was getting married to Jai, wanted to make all sexy blouses to keep her man interested only Bani was not agreeing, you will stay in a joint family, what will other people think…

Have you seen Jigyasa auntie's blouses Pia had retorted….Bani could somewhat restrict her and this was from one of those blouse decent neckline with a single string, Saree, blouse and husband, Bani thought, she became sad, whenever she thinks, this is not meant for her but Pia…..

Bani tried to tie the string, her hands started paining, was unable to do and she lost her patience, frowning again she tried harder only to feel a pair of hands taking over, startled Bani looked up, his face was expressionless he pushed back her hair, after doing it, he combed her hair lightly with his fingers to put it properly….

Bani wanted to thank him, looking through the mirror, she stared at him, but no words came out….

I want to speak to you Bani…he said…..

Bani swallowed hard, his voice was grave, she was looking forward to his words but now when he said, she knew something is not right….

Bani I have vented all my anger, I am drained now, I have no anger left for you….I know the fault is not yours, you did what you thought was the best for our family, for me….he stopped…Bani waited…..

I think time has come Bani you and I move on, you deserve better, I am too old for you….

He said it…..Jai stopped, feeling the pain and the relief…..

Mr Walia, Bani cried…..Looking upto him, blinking her eyes…..Jai saw what he wanted to see…

He gave a brief smile….so I was saying Bani, as already I am too old, lets not waste anymore time, we have move forward in life….

Hamsafar Chaahiye, Umr Bhar Chaahiye
Hamsafar
Chaahiye, Umr Bhar Chaahiye
Aapke Pyaar Ki Ik Nazar Chaahiye
Aapke
Pyaar Ki Ik Nazar Chaahiye
Dil Hai Beghar Ise Ek Ghar Chaahiye…

Jai did not sing this time, he recited the words, Bani gave a shy laughter, Jai hugged her, Bani's hands went round his neck, she felt the string of the blouse being pulled open……..

The end

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