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Posted: 15 years ago
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Story III

Tujhe Dekh Dekh Sona - 2

Tujhe Dekh Kar Hain Jagna

Maine Yeh Zindagani

Sang Tere Bitaani

Tujhmein Basi Hain Meri Jaan Haai

(jiya Dhadak Dhadak - 3

Jaayen) - 2

Tujhe Dekh Dekh Sona

Tujhe Dekh Kar Hain Jagna

Maine Yeh Zindagani

Sang Tere Bitaani

Tujhmein Basi Hain Meri Jaan Haai

Jiya Dhadak Dhadak - 3

Jaayen

Jai sipped his whiskey, he just could not believe it, his wife is pregnant, his wife Bani is pregnant…Is this a joke, why is God being unkind to me, what have I done to be once again ridiculed in this marriage, first his fiance ditched him in the alter and now his wife whom he married for the sake of his image, the elder sister of his fiance is pregnant…no there is nothing wrong with his manhood only that they are yet to consummate their marriage, drained and fatigued, he just wanted this world to end…..

It has been only for last two weeks or so they were getting close, coming to an understanding, he was feeling this girl is not at fault, what will she do if her sister chose to leave me in a lurch, today because of her I am saved my grace, my family name. He was in fact toying with the idea if he should at all go ahead with this marriage instead of freeing Bani from all obligations, after all she does deserve better, but then his heart was not with his mind, whenever Bani happened to be near him, his heart went thud, thud thud…..he wanted to tell her so many things but his tongue got tied, how to proceed how to break the invisible barrier which was still there in the shape of his hesitation and her fear of his wrath…..

That evening he had bought a single rose from the man selling flowers at the traffic signal much to the amusement of Aditya, who looked on with his brows raised…..it is never too late to start Jai and I should be a happy man…..

Jai did not say anything, he kept quiet trying to imagine Bani's face when he hands over the flower….

Tujhe Dekh Dekh Sona

Tujhe Dekh Kar Hain Jagna

Maine Yeh Zindagani

Sang Tere Bitaani

Tujhmein Basi Hain Meri Jaan Haai

Jiya Dhadak Dhadak - 3

Jaayen

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Mubarak ho Mubarak ho Aditya, tum nana banne wale ho Jigyasa greeted them as soon as they entered the house…..

WHAT? ANU? Tum kya bak rahi ho Jigyasa, Aditya could not keep his voice low…..

Apne beti ko aise math samjho, she is my daughter, I have instilled some values in her, tumhara muh boli beti, Bani is going to become a mother…..

WHAT? Now it was for Jai to ask…

Oh Jai bhaiya you have come, congratulations your wife is pregnant, I happened to go for my annual checkup when the nurse handed over me this report saying same house if I will take it, the pregnancy report of Mrs Bani Jai Walia……pregnancy test positive, Jigyasa waved the report in front of his face, he grabbed it well indeed it was so……

Bani? He called in a thundering voice….

Ji Mr Walia….she answered calmly from somewhere……

He held the report and his temper rose seeing she was not looking guilty…..

Mr Walia I can explain…..

Explain indeed, don't you think I had enough, Oh Bani Jigyasa was always right you will show your true colour one day…..Tony just go up and shift my things to the guest room…..

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Mr Walia …..

This is the last straw Bani, I had thought I would give our marriage a chance see I bought this rose for you, but then you do not deserve it….he threw the flower on the floor and stamped on it…….

Why should you go out of your own bedroom Jai Bhaiya let Bani…..

Yes yes why should I, Jigyasa just ensure she is out of my sight…..

Jai I think you should give Bani a hearing at least…..Aditya said softly

Not again Aditya please stop shielding her, mai bap banne wala hu and I do not know this is the ultimate a man can take….he turned and entered the study closing the door with a loud bang….

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Finishing the last sip with a long drag he threw the glass on the floor it shattered into pieces……just then with the clicking of the door, Aditya entered…..

Jai….Jai please get up and stop Jigyasa she is simply going to kill the girl….

She deserves every bit of it Aditya

But Jai, I mean you have been drinking too much lately, you know sometimes these things happen without your knowledge, I mean…..

Aditya you are father of three children and don't tell me you have no clue as to how they were conceived….

I mean

I may be drunk but that does not mean I will not have the knowledge when I make love to my wife for the first time, I don't just simply recollect one such incident and Aditya the days of Virgin Mary are gone, I am too old a man to believe in such stories, somehow I don't see Bani to be Mary……he added sarcastically…..

Just then the study door once again opened, who the hell is disturbing me, he shouted, leave me alone…..

Mamaji, Bani Mami is leaving the house, Anu cried is desperation….

So?

Mamaji why should she leave the house….

Aditya ask your daughter to stay within her limit, I am the head of the family and I don't deem it fit to reply to her….

But why should she leave the house when she is not pregnant….

What Jai stood up, the report, where is it…here it is, you mean to say this is a lie….

Not exactly Mamaji, it is not a lie…..

Anu, I am your Mamaji I do know about the birds and the bees and now both of you leave me alone, just get out of here…..

Oh well, well I mean the report is not a lie, because the report belongs to me, Anu Bali and not Bani Walia, I used her name as she wanted me to saying I am not married and well there I said it…she caught me first and insisted on accompanying me ….I …..

One moment ….Bani is not pregnant Jai asked in a voice of disbelieve and relief…..

You are pregnant Anu, you mean you misused the freedom and trust we gave you, Aditya shouted simultaneously…..

Bani is not pregnant, Bani is not pregnant, the pain seem to leave him….it is Anu….ANU, a knife again was pierced…..ANU how could you he turned…..

Mamaji I will explain, I promise but please stop Bani Mami…..

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He stood in the doorway, she was locking the suitcase and as she picked it up, he caught her hand…she looked up to him, he stared back..I am sorry he said, I know you have every right to be upset with me, I did not trust you but he could not say further……he lowered his eyes, yes he should have given her a hearing after all they are husband and wife it whatever sense it must be…..when he saw Bani holding the battered rose in front of him…..

He looked up, she was smiling, not exactly a happy one but then ……I know how you feel Mr Walia, just like this rose, beautiful but battered just like our marriage, the moment we seem to know and come closer to each other, something happens our trust level is shaken, we retreat to our shell…..we move apart

Jai took the flower, if we cannot trust each other then it is our fault why blame others…..but it seems to me that I am always at the fault…..

She touched his mouth with her hand….

Not always….she whispered, she had a mysterious glint in her eye

He raised his brow in question….

I…I did not like Roshni coming too close to you…she confessed….

Jai laughed aloud, taking her hand and bringing her closer….. if you have told me I would have chased her out of the house long back….he whispered….

Bani blushed……

Raising his hands he pushed back her hair, cupping her face with his hands he said, Anu said she is pregnant you are not, I was relieved to hear it Bani, is it wrong? To be relieved to hear it is Anu and not you…..

Bani lowered her gaze, Anu is like your daughter I know but I understand what it is to find your wife could be pregnant with someone else's child…

He traced her lips with the rose……Bani can we take an oath today whatever it may come you and I will at least talk and hide nothing from each other…..

"On this day of June 19th, 2006 we take an oath that as we move forward in our marriage we will ….they took the oath and then Bani said, don't you want to seal the oath Mr Walia….

Jai needed no further invitation he lowered his lips to capture hers

Jiya Dhadak Dhadak Jaayen…..the end….

I am taking a brief break now as one non JB plot is disturbing my peace so have to take it out from my system hence started writing it, I will of course write few more of these time to time before June 19th and will post it once I do...till then thanks and love Tin

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Posted: 15 years ago
#22

great 3rd story- i wish i had seen da actual epi!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
Thanks Tintiny for this lovely story again. You are mahan.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

cute story

hope to read more
cont soon
SA
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25

I loved this. It really brought KS back to me. I missed these days. Beautifully written!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
lovely update................👏.......thanx............... wud definately waiting 4 more...........😃..........continue whenever its possible..........😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
good old ks days are back , thanks for another wonderful story😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
Hi
Nice to see so many versions of the June 19th. I am sure all us would have wished something of this sort had actually happened in the KS drama. But the creatives had squashed such a lovely story. But it is wonderful to read such stories. It kinds of remind the good old days of KS.
Bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
nice story
expecting to read more
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30

Ah, the magic of story telling, you've got the touch Tin.

Incredible SS.

Take care.

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