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Posted: 15 years ago
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Dear Friends,
Thank you for all your comments. I launched https://alliswell.express-forum.net to write about different stories other than Jai Bani. Well I just posted one of my popular stories there in the writers corner here as it is a non-Jai Bani story https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/writers-corner-books-stories-and-poems/1409416/story-the-veil You can check it out if you so desire.
Now the IVth story of JB series...

Story IV

Tujhe Dekh Dekh Sona - 2

Tujhe Dekh Kar Hain Jagna

Maine Yeh Zindagani

Sang Tere Bitaani

Tujhmein Basi Hain Meri Jaan Haai

(jiya Dhadak Dhadak - 3

Jaayen) - 2

Tujhe Dekh Dekh Sona

Tujhe Dekh Kar Hain Jagna

Maine Yeh Zindagani

Sang Tere Bitaani

Tujhmein Basi Hain Meri Jaan Haai

Jiya Dhadak Dhadak - 3

Jaayen

As it is sharing the room was difficult specially with a man who was not only unknown but who was not too fond of her, he hated her presence but for the sake of his Masi he decided to bear with her, as soon as the door closed the mask vanished, he looked angry more with himself than with her. He virtually grabbed his nightsuit, went into the bathroom changed and came out and lay on his side turning his face away, she too did the same…they looked at their respective walls till sleep overtook their senses. As they say in hindi, ghee aur aag sath sath rahe toh pigalna shuru ho jaye now who was ghee and who was aag…..

They now knew some of their routines, he gets up once in the night and drinks water before getting back to bed, she likes to sleep on her right side, while he snores softly, she sleeps quietly, sometimes Jai feels he is alone in the room, till he sees the outline of her form on the floor….the arrangement was working fine till one day Masi walked into the bedroom …..

What is this, who sleeps here she asked seeing the bed which Bani had made for self…..for the first time they exchange glances in their bedroom, Jai stammers aah Masi it is like this….

I am having back pain so………Bani completed….

Yes she…I mean the doctor advised…he was a bad liar and even worse actor, he discovered that himself….

Is your back really bad, I did not notice you are having any problem throughout the day….Masi almost snapped

Yeah yeah I mean ….I did do a course of medicine and some exercise….

You mean you are much better now……

Bani swallowed looking at Jai for some help…..

Yes yes she is much better now…Jai concluded it for her…..

So Bani shift into the bed, you are newly married you should not be having separate beds, it is in this bedroom you get to know each other after all living in joint family has its minuses, except for bedroom you get very little privacy….

Bani was now profusely blushing, inspite of himself Jai watched her cheeks turn red…..

Bani somehow managed to raise her eyes and look towards him….

Ha Bani I have been telling you to call up the doctor to ask…..he suddenly started enjoying it

Areh baath baath me doctor ko kyu call karna hai specially if you are feeling well and want to sleep with your husband…..I think you better put the mattress back on the bed…..

Umm ..umm…Bani hesitated not sure of his reaction….

Mai help karu, he volunteered….

I can manage she squeaked ….

Areh Jai help karna, mil baath ke kaam karne se pyar barta hai…masi directed….standing with her hands on her hip to ensure they do it….

jiya Dhadak Dhadak jaye, jiya dhadak dhadak jaye…..

The worked silently making the bed…..avoiding to step onto each other but very much conscious of each other's presence, watching each other through hooded eyes…..

See it is so easy, Masi's words startled them…..

Ji, he ran his fingers through his hair, she opened the cupboard to take out his nightsuit, Mr Walia your change….

Areh bedroom me bhi Mr Walia…abhi toh Jai bulaya kar…..

Bani was now pink, her tongue frozen Jai could sense….

Aarree…Bani can I have the other night suit, the cotton one, keep this one for winters….

Ji…ji…ja…Jai…..

Goodnight bachcho sleep well Masi exited with a wink pulling the door shut…..

They stood staring at each other as Bani bowed her head and looked away, the spell was broken, Jai went into the bathroom to change…

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As he lay on his side, he could feel Bani still sitting huddled in one corner of the bed, she was shy and uneasy, he was having a peculiar sensation….god what is wrong with me…I am a man of 40…he switched of his bed side lamp, the room plunged into darkness…

Tujhe Dekh Dekh Sona - 2

Tujhe Dekh Kar Hain Jagna

Maine Yeh Zindagani

Sang Tere Bitaani

Tujhmein Basi Hain Meri Jaan Haai

(jiya Dhadak Dhadak - 3

Jaayen) - 2

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The fell asleep eventually, both of them uneasy and uncomfortable, tongue tied and not knowing from where to start, they knew the other was awake, they could hear each other's sighs and breath, they knew they were pretending to be asleep, finally the tension, the fatigue overtook their feelings and they fell asleep….

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It is towards the morning, Jai felt his hand limp, he tried to move it, it felt heavy then a sensation hit him, he opened to see Bani was sleeping on it cozily, so close so near, for the first time since their marriage, for the first time he was seeing his wife so very near to him and for the first time he felt she was so very innocent….her eyes flickered, she tried to go back to her sleep but then she too must have felt something, she opened and looked into his eyes watching him…..she did not turn away, she did not believe he was so near and so close and looking at her without anger or hate..the time stopped for them……then the cuckoo clock announced the time, breaking the spell, she sat up with a start….

I am sorry …Mr ….

It's alright Bani, please do not apologize…suddenly he hated the word sorry….getting up, he picked up his watch, putting it on he noted the date, 19th June…..

As he went towards the bathroom he watched her sitting through the corners of his eye….sitting with her head bowed trying not to stare at him….

Tujhe Dekh Dekh Sona - 2

Tujhe Dekh Kar Hain Jagna

Maine Yeh Zindagani

Sang Tere Bitaani

Tujhmein Basi Hain Meri Jaan Haai

(jiya Dhadak Dhadak - 3

Jaayen) - 2

Tujhe Dekh Dekh Sona

Tujhe Dekh Kar Hain Jagna

Maine Yeh Zindagani

Sang Tere Bitaani

Tujhmein Basi Hain Meri Jaan Haai

Jiya Dhadak Dhadak - 3

Jaayen

The end……………..

Kantaben is giving me good fight, will try and beat her over the weekend, but also busy with new non JB story and watching Grey's Anatomy, chalo dekhte hai....

Edited by tintiny - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

Hope they lock their door from now on. Awesome update.


Ladies check out Tin intriguing story,

"THE VEIL" at http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1409416 and


don't forget to check out her forum at http://alliswell.express-forum.net


Edited by cupidlicious - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33

thanks to masi!!!

lovely SS...plz write more!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely SS! Great version of that scene with Massi telling Bani to sleep on the bed and their first time sleeping on the bed together. I loved it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
well that was short and sweet😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
first time on the same bed
soo cute
cant wait for more stories
SA
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Posted: 15 years ago
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The Buttonhole (Story V)

As he entered the hall he knew she was not home, anger shot through his body, this is height, she is upset as she has come to know that it is his car which had hit his mother and killed her and he was driving it. From that day he fell from the pedestal on which she had set him…



He was an ordinary man, just like any other man he had his feeling, his issues and his ups and downs, he did not want to sit on the pedestal, it is her who put him there and now….



Munna tu a gaya …Masi beamed…..



Ji …his eyes scanned the house…



Err Munna Bani abhi atehi hogi, she has gone to Pia's house, you know Pia can be unreasonable at times….



Hmmm, he failed to give his customary smile ….



Areh before going she has made naasta for you, with her own hands, told me to serve you when you come home, let me bring it, you will just love it….



He wanted his drink instead he flopped on the sofa, if he does not eat it, Masi will get upset and of course if Bani comes to know….kya musibaath….



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It was kheer for him, he was not too fond of sweets but Bani makes damn good kheer which he does not mind a bowl, this was definitely not her kheer…not the kheer he loves to eat…



Achhi hai, Masi asked….



Ji he nodded, he did not want to offend her….Masi smiled, Jai noted the time in his watch….



Masi flustered, she will return any moment, mai Pia ko phone lagati hu….she got up going towards the house telephone….



Has she not taken her mobile, he asked…..



Ummmhhmm, yes yes she has, how silly of me, I will phone her, Masi went hurrying across the lobby….



Who will tell him that Bani had a nasty fight with Jigyasa today, when Jigyasa accused her for ruining her brother's life, Bani lost her cool if I am ruining one life he has ruined 4 including my father's, our mother was the lifeline of our family….saying so she ran out of the house…Rano went after her…Masi was upset…Jigyasa she is carrying your brother's child, kuch to rehem kar….

I doubt if Jai Bhaiya is the father….



Well don't insult your brother, he is sure it is his child, the only thing is Bani is upset with him and not letting him near her….



Wohi toh, mai bhi teen bachcho ka ma hu, I always fought with Aditya but during this time your hormones play havoc and you want to be close to your spouse….but seeing Bani's attitude….



Masi left the scene, wanting to speak to Rano, who will make Jigyasa understand?



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Rano was not picking up the phone, it stopped saying no reply, Masi watched the back of the man sitting on the sofa still, she knew his ears were alert…



Ha Pia mai Masi bol rahi hu, ha ha Bani nikal gaya hai kya or is she still with you all …oh then she must be coming, oh Rano bhi toh hai saath me, Masi said it a bit more louder into the blank phone….



She did not answer her phone or what he asked as Masi disconnected….



No no I mean I did not call her, I mean I called Pia…just in case…..



Oh Jai bhaiya you have come, aapki ladli toh subah se gayab apni mejaj dikha kar…



She went out in the afternoon…Masi quickly added



Before lunch…Jigyasa replied back…..



She did not have lunch, in this condition….Jai sat up looking worried and angry….



Areh nak me makhi nehi baithne deti, she has become so rude nowadays….being a mother I wanted to share some tips, lekin nehi…..



He became silent and withdrawn watching his watch more frequently, Jigyasa went on and on, I did call up Pia but then she did not go there, little while ago Pia called me to ask if she has reached…na where is she….



He flickered a gaze towards Masi, masi did not know where to look….



Just then footsteps were heard and Rano and Bani entered….they saw them and stepped towards the stairs….



Bani ruko, he called out…..Bani stopped her jaws grim, Rano looked at masi and then walked away….



Bani tum…..Jigyasa started



I will ask Bani whatever I need to know he stated firmly…..



Let me ask Tony to serve early dinner, Masi got up….



Jai glared at Jigyasa and flicked his head….Jigyasa went away grumbling…he got up and went stood before Bani….



Where were you Bani? He asked softly but firmly…..



She looked away…..



Bani I am waiting for an answer…he asked….



Her lips shook, no words came out…she moved away, she cannot make nuisance of herself in the hall….



Her dupatta caught ….Bani stopped, she was more upset, trying to control her tears and her emotions, she looked back glaring at him….



His hands were by his side….Puzzled Bani stepped back to come face to face with him, it was caught with his button of the jacket…God does not want you to move away from me….he said…....Bani swallowed, he did not waste the opportunity, reached out pulling her closer to his chest…..



I was indeed driving the car, It was raining heavily, barely visible I was not drunk and had pressed the break also…



I know she squeaked, her nose was virtually touching his chest….



How ? he asked very very softly….



I had called up our lawyer a little while ago, infact Rano had, he was Papa's best friend, he said and also said Mummy jumped in front of the car, she was suffering and mentally upset, papa could not accept she might have committed suicide…Jai watched her she was ashamed of her past behaviour with him, blaming him for the miseries, then we went to the mandir to offer prayers…



Jai pulled her closer to his body, with his arms tightly around her….he whispered into her ears, I want to feel you, I want to feel our child, aaj mai jaldi nehi sona chahata hu Bani…



Jiya dharak dharak jaye…..…the end…
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38

Everyone should have an aunt like Masi.

Awesome SS Tin.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39

I want to feel our child, aaj mai jaldi nehi sona chahata hu Bani…that was very sweet...poor dude must have missd them badly...got the oppertunity now he wont let go...

that was really nice ss Di...please write some more on JB, you have stopped writing on JB, i missing your ff...your ffs were the biscuts of my mornning tea...... meena
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
awwwwwww!!!
very cute!!!
the button scene was adorable!!!!
please make more!!! they are amazing stories!!
thanks,
Sanju

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