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Posted: 16 years ago
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AWwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so sweet. this JW was being khadoos though.. no conversation but work and constantly on his blackberry.. I think somehow he will end up saying yes.. ok at least i hope so.. maybe they will meet again? Im glad Anu liked her though.. do continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
heyyy...
great part....
loved the way bani said..."he's nice man, but khadoos"
plzz cont.soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmm
I wonder if jai gone agree for this marriage or not?
Will be waiting for the next update
byebye
Love Perveen
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey Bdev that was a good part
bani calling jai a khadoos
and poor jai was more shy than bani
but when it came to work he chats non-stop
hope yeh rishta ho jaaye
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hehe khadoos JW :P
aww hope jai accepts the proposal
very nice part
cont soon
SA
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lol.. BD i am intrigued highly to know what happened next.. how does jai agree.. lol.. great part yaaar.. continue sooon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That was a great part - I can't wait to see how the story progresses.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi guys
Hope you all are doing fine. I don't even know if any of you still remember my ff's, but I hate to leave things unfinished, even though it takes me forever to get it done!!! I will try to update Justajoo tomorrow- yes that's the other ff I left midway. Sorry, I am so out of good excuses, hope you like the update, two more parts and this one is done. Comments and suggestions always welcome.....
When they were in the car, Anu spoke, So bhaiya how did you like Bani? Jai kept quiet pretending to ignore her. But that did not deter her, and she continued, I loved her, she's beautiful, and very sweet. Tell me no Bhaiya please, did you like her? She's too young Anu. Oh come on Bhaiya, she's only 10 years younger, that's not a lot. Anu, Jai's voice rumbled with an air of finality, she's too young, now let it go. Anu kept quite, she knew when not to push her brother.
CHAPTER 3

Jai stared angrily at his cell phone, the battery was dead and he was lost. He had a meeting that he was supposed to be at and he seemed to have taken a wrong turn. It didn't help matters that it was pouring outside, and he couldn't find anyone to ask directions. The last three weeks had been taxing. His mother was upset, because he had refused another proposal, hell the girl was younger to him by 10 years, she had just turned 19, he wasn't going to be labeled a cradle snatcher. But, his mother, she had to be filmy, and cry for a whole day on hearing his answer, and then make matters worse, refusing to have any kind of conversation with him, and only answering him in monosyllabels. Now, he was back in the very same place, for a meeting. What more could happen?

He stared grumpily ahead, and caught sight of some kids dancing in the rain in a corner street. What the heck, he mumbled, at least he saw someone, he would just go ask them. He stopped the car and walked slowly towards them. As he neared them, he saw flashes of blue. He blinked to get a clearer view, and saw a girl laughing and dancing with them in the rain. He smiled at the sight, she looked familiar, but he couldn't place her. As he got closer, he recognized her- Bani, the same Bani, the reason for all his misery. He chuckled to himself, what luck!

He stopped near her, but she danced oblivious to the world, her back facing him. He coughed slightly and said, Excuse me, Maam. She jerked and turned towards him, looking shocked. Sorry to bother you, but I need to get to Narendra Villa. I seemed to have lost my way, could you direct me there? Bani smiled at him first, Sure, no problem, you just have to'..she suddenly stopped midway, and he saw a look of recognition flash on her face. Suddenly the look was replaced by nervousness, and of embarrassment. She lowered her eyes and tried to pull her dupatta tighter around herself. A small boy spoke up, Didi he came too far na, he said tugging at her when she didn't reply for a while. Yes, Yes, she replied nervously biting her lips. You have come too far. You need to take the second left and then at the end of the road make a right. You will see the driveway as soon as you make the turn. Jai nodded, thank you and turned to go. He heard her breathe a sign of relief. He smiled to himself and walked back to his car.

As he turned the car to go back, he found himself glancing at his review mirror at Bani in the rain. She was pulling at her scooty, and getting ready to leave. He chuckled to himself. He thought back to her dancing in the rain, so innocent, so happy and then the varied emotions on her face, when she recognized him and thought she was going to get caught. Maybe he should have told her that he recognized her, he found himself laughing to himself all the way to the meeting.

He was in a good mood when he walked in to his house, only to notice his mom waiting at the door. He looked up enquiringly at her, and she smiled at him and hugged him. Ma, he asked surprised. You went to see Bani again, I am so happy. But, you should have told me beta, we could have gone together. I also want to see the girl who has such an effect on my son. She laughed. You told me you had to go out of town for a meeting, but it was to see Bani. She let go of Jai, and smiled, tell me everything beta she said, happily. Jai took a deep breath. Ma, it's not what you think. I did go there for a meeting, and I lost my way. Bani just happened to be there and I asked her for directions. Did she say I was there to meet her? he asked suddenly angry. No, his mother replied, confused. Savitri called me up to tell me that Bani had seen you and to ask whether we had plans to come down again. I just assumed'', suddenly his mother got quiet. Mom, I told you before, she is too young for me. She seems like a very sweet and nice girl, and I am sure she would make a great wife, but just not for me. Krishna suddenly looked up at him, and then and went to her room. Jai shook his head when he heard it lock. Mom, he said and walked to the door, what childishness is this he asked irritated. I am going to stay in his room and not eat anything till you decide to see her again. Mom, please be reasonable. I want to see her personally, if I feel she is too young, I will not pressurize you anymore, Krishna replied. Mom, please he said, don't be unreasonable. Jai, I told you what I want, now you decide. Mom, mom, he called out, but Krishna wouldn't answer. Jai walked away angrily to his room.

Krishna waited for a while and then dialed Savitri's number. Savi, she whispered, we are coming soon. Jai agreed? Savitri asked happily. No, not yet. But he will. Krishna, if he doesn't want to get married to Bani, then'., but Krishna interrupted her. Savitri, I saw something in his eyes when he spoke of Bani, I have never seen it for anyone else before, and he has had a number of proposals. I thought I saw a fondness for her even when I asked him about her, the first time he met her. But today, it was clear. He likes her. I would never force my son to do anything he didn't want to do, she said. Trust me Savi, a mother knows. Okay, I have to go now. Jai will be here any moment. I will let you know the details later okay.
Just as she was hanging up, she heard a knock on her door. Mom, she heard Jai call out. I give up, I am ready to see her again. Krishna opened the door and smiled. She hugged Jai, I knew you wouldn't let me down. Jai frowned at her, Just remember your promise, if you think she's too young, no more childishness like this, no more forcing me. Yes, yes, Krishna readily agreed. Oh, I have to pack, we leave tomorrow okay. But mom, Jai said frustrated. No, no excuses, we leave tomorrow afternoon, now go pack. Jai took a deep breath to control himself and marched to his room, almost slamming the door. Krishna smiled and went back to her room.

Jai sat in his chair staring out the window. Why did he have to agree, there was no way he was going to get out of this now. His mother would just love Bani, he was sure of it. Maybe she would wear her salwar again, and looked very young in those. He smiled, maybe there was still a way out. He flashed back to her dancing in the rain. He smiled. What was about this girl that made him angry and happy at the same time?
BD
Edited by bdev - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
Thanks for continuing this ff.

Looks like mom knows...jia is attracted to bani even though he doesn't want to admit.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20

Hey, welcome back after a long time.

And thanks for the update, it was great.

Can't believe JW let his mother blackmail him to go see Bani again.

Continue soon, story is too good.


P.S. glad you want to write again, and finish what you started.

All the best and take care.

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