new ff , chap 3, pg 3, 10/30

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello all!!!!!!
I know it's been a while since I have been here. So much has changed.
I was meaning to continue my old ff- Justajoo, but it's been so long since I last updated (sorry), I have forgotten what I wanted to write to continue the story 😆, so it's going to be a while before I get back to that one.
I decided to post another ff, hope you will like it. It is loosely based on my friend's love story and I do hope you like it. There are no real negative characters in this one, just simple story. I left out all the juicy masaledar stuff that went on in their family, lest she reads this ff and I get in big trouble.😉
Do leave comments, I would love to read them. Also if you have any ideas for my ff, Justajoo (if any of you out there still remember it 😛 ), please do let me know.
CHAPTER 1

Rano looked at his photo with tears in her eyes, they had been engaged for over a year now but were no closer to getting married. He had left to America to do his higher studies, shortly after getting engaged. She had waited patiently for him, but having to stay away from each other was slowing taking its toll on her. The uncertainty, the waiting, her fears were slowly getting the better of her. Just then her phone rang, she wiped her tears and picked it up. It was Krishna, her mother-in-law.

Her mother and Krishna were the best of friends since school days. They had grown up in the same village, went to the same schools, and ended up marrying two best friends. When Rano was born, Krishna had impulsively said that she would make Rano her daughter-in-law, that she would marry her to Ranveer, born two years before her.

Though Rano and Ranveer grew up knowing each other as family friends, when they occasionally met at parties, it wasn't until they both finished college, and met at a family wedding, that sparks flew. Love can never be rushed, it seemed, but neither of them realized when it crept up. Fatefully it was at that very wedding when Krishna asked Kusum, Rano's mother whether she would give Rano to her. The arranged marriage became a love marriage, and everyone couldn't have been happier. Ranveer was set to go to the US for his higher studies, and it was decided that he would engaged before that and they would marry soon after.

But things don't always turn out the way we want it seems. The oldest member of the family, Saroj Walia had proclaimed that Jai, who was older to Ranveer by 2 years, would marry first. Her word was law in the Walia family, and was immensely respected. She was a bright, intelligent daughter of a very rich landlord. Her father passed away just before she turned 10, leaving her to the care of her uncles, who immediately stopped her schooling and got her married. She had a son a year later, and when she turned 15, her husband passed away. Her uncles stole everything from her and left her destitute. But, she did not lose hope; she struggled by herself and made sure her son never wanted for anything. She never left her principles behind, and remained tough but loving with her family. Nobody wanted to disrespect her, and nobody wanted to go against her.

The problem was that Jai was not interested in marrying, he liked his freedom. He was always busy working, and although had a number of women friends, never had a relationship with anyone. He was quiet, respectful and hardworking, very much an introvert. He was quite unlike Ranveer, who had a zest of life, who liked to live large and to party. Nobody really thought that Ranveer would be the one to settle first, but it seemed that he had met his match in Rano. Jai had even pleaded with dadi to agree to marry Ranveer first but to no avail. She remained stubborn as ever, even when Rano had unintentionally cried in front of her.

Although Jai had said he would marry the girl his parents chose for him, he always found a reason to reject each and every proposal his parents brought to him, even before meeting them. Jai was considered the most eligible bachelor, even at 29. He was tall, handsome and had started making waves in the business world. All the girls he ended up rejecting, got married to friends of his, which made his mother even more upset when she saw newly married couples or their children in every function she attended.

Jai had decided early on that he never wanted to meet any girl face to face, because that would mean rejecting them to their face, and he couldn't bring himself to do that. He remembered how his sister Anu was paraded in front of everybody, when they weren't as rich. She was the shortest among all of them standing at a mere 5 feet, when the rest of them were close to 6ft. She got lots of proposals, but was rejected after people came and saw her, because she was too short. He remembered the hurt look she had after every rejection. He had vowed that he wouldn't do the same to any girl. It was a while before she got a proposal from Rohit, who had said yes the moment he saw her.

Ranveer was to come home in four weeks, and there was still no sign of a bride for Jai. Krishna decided it was time to get more proactive. She wouldn't let Rano and her son suffer anymore. She would find a perfect bride for Jai and she would have him engaged and set to marry before Ranveer got back home. She sent Jai to Delhi to meet Anu, where she was to take him to her friend's place to see their daughter Bani. Jai had first refused, but Krishna had sat obstinately in front of him crying profusely. He couldn't bear to see his mother cry, and reluctantly agreed.

BD
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kooliio thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyyy....
lovely ff...
cant wait to read more...
plzz cont.soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Very nice start...looking frwrd for JB meeting....although, im a little confused...Is Krishna more concerned about Ranveer than Jai? It seems like she's more concerned about getting RR married than anything else...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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New ff??? 😃 Unwilling Jai being dragged to "see" a girl. Nice guy that he doesn't want girls to feel hurt and rejected! Now what? Waiting....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey bd.. wow a new ff.. waise which one is ur froend bani or rano? just curious.. lol.. hmm soo how will our JB's love story go about.. lol.. awwwnn i feel bad for rano lekin kehte hain na that behind every bad thing theres a good thing involved in it.. great part yaar.. hope u post the next part earlier then ur other ff parts.. lol.. j/k..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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YAY bd!!! I love ur ff's :) Cant wait for a the next part.. whats this JW doesnt want to marry? hahaha all will change with Bani na? :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey bdev
thats a gr88 start
plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
waiting for JB to meet
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice part
waiting for jb to meet
cont soon
SA
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Posted: 16 years ago
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You came back with a FF!!!!!!
So glad, but you eventually have to update Justajoo because I am dying to find out what is next in tsore for J&B.
Can't wait to see how Jai's first meeting with Bani goes - will sparks fly?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you koolgal, yeh_ada_143, btkr, phool527, divan, Hkaurk22, jeenal20, ducky_euro, janu-2006, Heartbreak, Chickster and jeevikagurl 88 for your wonderful comments. I really appreciate all of you for taking the time to comment.
My friend is actually the Bani character in this ff, I hope I do her character and story justice. As for Krishna, although she want's Ranveer and Rano to get married (she feels for Rano, afterall she has been wating for a long time for Ranveer), she is actually getting more desperate for Jai, she want's to see him settled, she want's to see her grandkids from her first born. I am sorry if I gave the impression that she is more concerned for Ranveer than Jai, Ranveer and Rano have just become like a catalyst for her plans for Jai.
Here's the next part, now none of you can say I take a long time to post 😆
She sent Jai to Delhi to meet Anu, where she was to take him to her friend's place to see their daughter Bani. Jai had first refused, but Krishna had sat obstinately in front of him crying profusely. He couldn't bear to see his mother cry, and reluctantly agreed.
CHAPTER 2

'Bani', her mother screamed for the umpteenth time. She lazily opened one eye, 'Just 5 more minutes, ma, she mumbled and snuggled into her pillow to make herself more comfortable. No, she heard her mother's voice closer now, shaking her. Get up right now, you are going to get late. Maaaaaa, Bani called out irritated and sat up on the bed. I asked for 5 more min, she said rubbing her eyes grouchily. Your 5 minutes never end, her mother grumbled pulling her sheets and folding it up. It has been 20 minutes since you first told me that. Now get ready. I am tired of doing this everyday. Okay mom, no need to get so upset, Bani said rolling her eyes and walking to the bathroom to freshen up. In 20 min she was ready and at the table eating her cereal. Drink your juice her mother quipped when she stood up. Ma, I am getting late, Bani pouted. That is your mistake, now drink up. Bani made a face and drank it. Okay ma, I am off she said and pecked her on her cheeks. Now, don't be late beta, there are people coming to see you today. Bani nodded and said absentmindedly, Ji and left for college.

Bani Dixit was a bubbly, vivacious girl who had just turned 19. She was doing her engineering and always took things lightly, never really studying too much. She did well enough in her exams though and was well liked by her classmates. Everyone would come to her with their problems, as she was easy to talk to. She had a few friends who she was close to, and she would become a chatterbox around them. She was always in a good mood, always smiling. Her father passed away when she was 10 years old, had left them with some money and a hotel. Her mother quit being a teacher and took over the hotel after he died.

Her mother started thinking about her marriage as soon as she entered her teens. Bani was a beautiful girl, large eyes, long hair and beautiful complexion. Being a single woman with a daughter, she had many sleepless nights worrying about Bani's marriage and future. When Bani turned 19, a mutual friend mentioned about Krishna looking for a bride for her son Jai. Soon after, Krishna had herself called to speak with her and a few weeks later, it was decided that Jai would come to see Bani, and plans were being made by the two ladies.

When her mother first mentioned it to her, Bani was down in the dumps.She felt she was too young to be thinking about getting married. But, she eventually consoled herself, she wanted to be a dutiful daughter, she wanted to alleviate her mother's fears. She saw her mother struggle single handedly to bring her up, and she never wanted to disappoint her.

As Bani was leaving class it started raining. Bani loved the rain. She and her friends ran to the coffee shop for shelter. Enjoying the rain outside, and sipping hot coffee and chatting with her friends, she lost the track of time. Suddenly her friend, Pooja reminded her that she had guests coming over. Bani jumped off the chair and she rode back home as fast as she could on her scooty. She failed to notice the black car parked on the side of her house. She barged inside and screamed. Ma, I am sorry I'm late, lost track of time, and she started twisted her hair to dry it off. She turned towards the living room and her mouth opened wide. There sitting in her living room were two men and a woman and her mother rushing to her side. Bani, her mother squeaked trying her best to keep a smile on her face, we have guests. Bani mumbled a soft hello. Now go clean up and come back down fast, her mother whispered hastily. Bani nodded and giving another small smile to the guests ran up to her room. Her class ran a little late, but she will be down soon, her mother replied to the guests with a small smile. Pakoras lijiye na, she said trying to divert their attention.

Bani came back down 5 min later, her hair was still wet, so she had just tied it loosely. She was wearing a simple salwar suit. Everyone sat quietly and then Anu asked Bani about herself, and Bani replied. Soon, the two of them were talking like old friends, ignoring everybody else in the room. Rohit cleared his throat in a midst of their conversation. Maybe we can let Jai and Bani speak for a moment alone, he suggested looking at Anu, if that's okay with you aunty, he said. Anu blushed slightly, and Bani's mother agreed. Let's go to the next room, her mother suggested, they can stay here. She got up and Rohit followed her. Just as Anu was about to leave, Jai caught her hand. Anu he hissed nervously, stay here, don't go. Bhaiya it will be fine, she said releasing her hand and giving a smile to Bani, and then turned and walked out. Bani bit her lip to stop laughing.

Jai ran his had through his hair and started looking around. They sat looking everywhere but at each other. Finally, Jai's eyes rested on his blackberry and Bani's eyes rested on the window at her side. But after a while, her neck started hurting, and she signed to herself, turned to face him and said Hi, My name is Bani. Jai looked up at her and smiled awkwardly and replied, Jai. Bani smiled and nodded at him. He looked at her for sometime and then looked back down at his phone. Bani made a face and rolled her eyes, So what do you do? she asked. I am in Business, he replied. Mmm, tell me more about your work. Suddenly she saw a spark in his eyes, and he started talking about his work. It seemed this was what he was most comfortable talking about; he was definitely passionate about it. She watched his eyes twinkle and she picked up on the genuine love he had for what he did. She listened patiently as he spoke about what he did, and what new ventures he was hoping to start off with. They were interrupted by his phone ringing. Excuse me, he said. Bani nodded with a smile. Just as he finished talking and hung up, Rohit, Anu and her mother walked in. Jai smiled when he saw Anu. The love he had for her was so clearly visible on his face, Bani thought to herself. Bhaiya, we have to leave now, you're flight's in three hours. You are going back so soon, Bani's mother asked. Yes aunty, I am starting a new project, so there's a whole lot that has to be done. I understand beta, work is important. Tell Krishna I said hello. Ji, aunty, Jai said. He smiled at Bani and turned to walk out.

After they left, Bani's mother asked her how she liked Jai. He's a nice man, but khadoos, he hardly talks ma, she complained. Bani's mother frowned. Now, not everyone can talk nonstop like you, she said. Then she asked slowly, did he not speak at all? Oh, no he had lots to say when I asked him about his work, and she started laughing. Bani's mother also started lauging with her, and a when their laughter died down, she asked, will you marry him? Ma did you like him, Bani asked. Yes, beta I liked him a lot. He comes from a very good family, but more importantly he had done very well for himself, he understands his responsibilities and his duties. He is so respectful and well behaved, also good looking, she said smiling at Bani. But what do you think beta? she asked. I will go with whatever decision you make ma, you always have my best interest in heart. Her mother's eyes filled with tears and she hugged Bani, you are my acha beta, I only pray you will be happy always. Then her mother lit a diya and asked Bani to pray that everything goes well with this rishta. Please let whatever happen be for the good of everybody involved, Bani prayed. But, if he decides not to marry me, I will be very happy, she added unable to control herself. She then took the aarti.

When they were in the car, Anu spoke, So bhaiya how did you like Bani? Jai kept quiet pretending to ignore her. But that did not deter her, and she continued, I loved her, she's beautiful, and very sweet. Tell me no Bhaiya please, did you like her? She's too young Anu. Oh come on Bhaiya, she's only 10 years younger, that's not a lot. Anu, Jai's voice rumbled with an air of finality, she's too young, now let it go. Anu kept quite, she knew when not to push her brother.

BD
Edited by bdev - 16 years ago

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