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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
hey great ff plz add me to ur pm list really loved all the 3 parts
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 4

Pronita paced from one corner of the room to another, not sure of how to reach him. She tried calling his mobile more than a dozen times, called in Mumbai office, his office in Pune and even his grandfather's house in Pune....but was met with silence. Each message she left said the same thing...Please call.

He hadn't called, whole of yesterday and last night . it was close to 1 o'clock in the afternoon and she still couldn't get his expression of revulsion at her news out of her mind. She did try to rest for the baby but nothing could give her a moments rest.

One thought kept haunting her...Jai believed that if she was pregnant it wasn't his...what kind of trust was that…he really believed she was a tart. The thought sent her on her knees…but she quickly gathered herself when she heard a key turn in the lock. He had come back. He did believe her and was going to make everything alright.

"Jai…" she rushed to the living room only to stop short, seeing a very professional looking woman walk in with four men.

" Who the hell are you?"

" I am Mr. Walia's Facilities Manager. I am here to oversee your vacation of the apartment." Replied the woman.

Pronita barely managed to reach the bathroom, before she threw up what ever little she had forced herself too eat. When she returned to the living room it was to see the men packing her things…or rather the things around that had made this lifeless apartment a home….her home!

" Have you evicted many of his ex's before?" she asked.

The woman was taken aback, but replied "Your relationship with Mr. Walia is not my concern; I am following my instructions and will facilitate you to move out."

Pronita did not want to stand in the same room as her , she already felt violated by their presence the way they went through her things in her home, removing traces of her. She started packing her clothes, she didn't want them touching her things!

Two hours later she stepped out into the living room to see the men surrounded by neatly packed boxes. They were ready to transport the boxes out of the apartment. Where were they taking them….to the lobby or out on to the street.

Suddenly the emotions that had gone numb with Jai's rejection came alive and she shouted " Stop!" shocking the men into dropping the boxes.

" Some of the things that you have packed do not belong to me, and I will not take them with me. You will have to wait while I sort it out."

" I had a very specific list from Mr. Walia's office" said the woman.

" I don't care" Pronita stood straight , making the woman take step back in the face of the determined 5 foot 7 inch frame. "I am not taking his property with me."

They noticed the determination in her and stepped back. It took her 45 minutes to remove sort through and remove everything that Jai had ever give her or bought for her. Everything including the clothes and sexy lingerie. ….anything and everything had to go.

When she was done, there was a pile of objects mixed with crumpled packing paper on the living room floor along with two stacks of neatly folded clothes.

"There is one more thing".

The woman just nodded, her eyes registering some emotion after watching Pronita's feverish attempt to purge her things of all items related to her ex – lover.

Pronita picked up her purse and pulled out the white stick she'd replaced in yesterday after the disastrous confrontation with Jai along with the jewelry case he'd left lying on the table. She dropped them on the pile of lingerie and walked out of the apartment with just her suitcase and carry bag.

Pronita waited a week to hear from Jai, hoping time would calm him and he would see reason. One the seventh day she saw the news and pictures of his engagement to Roshni Chopra in the society section. She did look like a virginal bride…a bit young for Jai, but exactly what he said was required of his wife.

Pronita checked out of the hotel. Arranged for all her things to be shipped to Bangalore, cancelled her contract with the modeling agency. Closed the Pronita Das bank accounts and cancelled the credit cards in that name and brought a ticket to Bangalore in the name of Bani Dixit.

Pronita Das, fashion model and ex lover of billionaire Jai Walia ceased to exist.

A little over two months later, Bani walked out of the prenatal clinic into the cool and mosit air of Bangalore. She glanced down at the Ultra Sound picture of her son…desperately wanting to share this news with some one. Her mother would not be interested so she called her sister…but got her voice mail.

On an impulse she dialed the Mumbai apartment…hoping to catch Jai. Maybe he had come to his senses and changed his mind about the wedding.

As the phone went unanswered she realised that he would be at work. Just as she was about to disconnect she heard a distinctly feminine voice answer the phone "Hello?"

Bani almost dropped the phone. Mustering courage and praying that the voice was of the new housekeeper or maid and not the new woman in Jai's life she asked "May I speak with Mr. Walia please?"

" I am sorry, he is out. But I can help you…maybe pass on a message, I am Mrs. Walia."

Mrs. Walia!! Bani stopped breathing. The arrogant bast*rd had gone ahead with it, married the perfect Miss Chopra while she was pregnant with his child. Funny until that moment she hadn't believed he would actually do it. She just realised how much she had been clinging to that hope….while he had forgotten all about her.

"Hello are you there?"

"Yes"

" Did you want to leave a message for my husband?"

" No. I …." Suddenly all happiness on knowing that their son was healthy and growing well drained away.

" Who is calling please?" the young woman continued.

Because she was so emotionally devastated that she answered without thinking…" Pronita Das"

" Miss Das, where are you? Jai has been looking for you. He is desperate about the baby."

Jai had told his wife about her, about their baby? Bani pulled the phone from her ear staring at it…not comprehending a word of what was coming from it. She cut the phone without putting it back to her ear.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#63

Yay u finally updated! that was a nice update👏

So jai married roshni? i hope not i hope she was lying on the phone and that jai really is desperate to know about bani

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Posted: 15 years ago
#64

Hope Bani is not falling in a trap, to believe the person that answer the phone at

JW house, that he is looking for her.

Just an awesome update, which left us hanging and wanting more.


P.S. ABCD its just wonderful to have you update this compelling FF/story.

Please continue really soon, can't take the suspence.


All the best and take care.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
HEY THAT WAS A MSALL PART
BUT REALLY JAI , I AM HATING U MORE AND MORE NOW
u left bani for the GFN roshni
ghosh thats so absurd
and now he is looking after bani for the baby
plzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
hiiii..
welcom back....
and nice part....
plz con soon ...
sh.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
heyyy...
really happy that u updated the ff!!
it was a great part...
so jai got married to roshni...poor bani
but why the heck is he looking for baby??
cant wait to read the next part...
plz cont.soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
OMG you left us on a CLIFFHANGER!!!?? plzplzplz update soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
Hi
That was a wonderful update after a long time. Jai is married now and looking for her. Something doesn't sound right here.
If he is so desparately looking for her. Why did he go ahead and marry someone else. Something sure is fishy here. And is she falling for atrap set up by Jai or someone else.
Waiting to see what is going around.
Bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
I just loved this update.
I mean has JW really married Roshni?
Bani should slap JW in the face the jerk....
P.S Please cont soon dont make us readers wait to long hunni.........
byebye
Love Perveen.x

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