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RANJANA_RRJ

@RANJANA_RRJ

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Great story But Jai is a jerk of the first order!! Okay they had an open relationship but to doubt the parentage of that child is absolutely the lowest thing. SLeeping with her before he wants to end the realtionship is a close second
And then the speech about what a traditional girl does??? Please!!! What was he doing with an unmaried girl? singing bhajans? If he cares so much about being untouched then he should have kept his hands to himself and his hormones in check😡

Great story!! Byebye Ranjana

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Perveen

@Heartbreak

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Jai ur a jerk u a***

Hey I love that dear it was good and ad but cant wait to see what happens in the little leap ur gone do please update soon will be waiting..

byebye

Love Perveen

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Kashish

@..kashish..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

hey ABCD...

loved the ff...

interestng story line...

wonder what will happen next...

will Jai marry Roshni or will Pronita/Bani do something??

continue soon pls!

eagarly awaitin the nxt part!

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shobana

@Ammukutty

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Hey,

Great part! 👏👏 He is an arrogant jerk…How could he insult her in such a way? I want to slap him…😡 hate him ….I'm not getting words to call him….Poor Bani, feeling bad for her........Beautifully written part!! 👏👏

Ammu.

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btkr

@btkr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Fantastic writing, ABCD. Can almost feel Bani's pain; and Jai's disbelief. He is totally messed up too - thinking that Bani has been with another man is driving him crazy...

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sush

@sushups

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+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#36

plzzzzzzz do continue soon

feel really sad for her

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Hima

@j&b84

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

ABCD brilliantly written part yar, jai as usually is jerk.. feel so bad for bani can't wait to see with will happened nw, pls pls update soon yar nt like the last time