FF: Kismat: Part 73 (Pg 147) 23/11

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Pachu.P

@Pachu.P

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#71

OMG, Jai is just plain..RUDE!! Stupid Cow!!! *kem guliben??, remember the word??*

I feel so sorry for Bani, i wish i could do something to help her, uhhh how about just kill off Chachi and put some brains into Jai!!

Loved it Guli-ooooooooo!! 👏

CS!!😃

Quote

KS_addict

@KS_addict

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#72

This is going to be those where Jai will feel guilty big time!

Because whatever he's doing right now... he doesnt know what his future will hold!!!!

He's so mean!! Bani do something about him!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Saba

@stars_shine*

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#73

awesom part

jai the stupid person being so mean to poor bani

continue soon

Quote

Vanita

@*Guli*

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#74

Part 9

Days were passing by and now there were only 4 more days til the wedding!! And all the functions had started!!….. Chachi had gotten everything ready for the wedding within almost 4 days…and she was up day and night planning for the wedding!!!…

It was the day of the haldi ceremony!!!….. The gals had it at their own house and the guys had it done at WM!!… Natu, Ranveer and Pushy were all complaining cuz they couldn't see the gals until the wedding day!! Which was in 3 days!!!… Both had to stay in their own homes… and not see the other one!!!!….

Jai on the other hand didn't care!!!! Hew as just sitting through this only so he could get it over and done with!!! After everything was done he was going to go out!!!!! That's what he was waiting for!!!!! Everyone was applying the haldi on the guys… and Anu and Karuna got a little crazy and over did it on the guys… the guys were yelling at them but they were just laughing their heads off!!!….

Masi: Okay u guys that's enough!! Look at them! Poor guys!!!!! My Poor Sons!! Don't trouble them too much…..

Pushy: Thank u masi!!!!!

Masi: But u guys missed a spot right here!!!

And Masi got them too!!! Everyone was just rolling!!! Masi was something!!!….

Natu: Masi that wasn't cool at all!!!

Masi: Girls gotta have fun u know!!!

They were giving her the look!! And she was just laughing away!!!…. Meanwhile at the other end…. The gals were getting covered in Haldi as well!! Chachi was giving more importance to her 3 daughters… and not so much with Bani!!!…. She mostly just put her on the side!!!…. For a second she didn't want to bother with her even being there but the gals had ended up putting her with them….. and she wasn't so happy about it….. but she didn't say anything!! Bani was leaving what more could she ask for!!!

After the day was almost over.. it was about 7 in the evening… Jai had gone upstairs and he went to take a shower and take all of his haldi off!!! He was going to go out….. and he wanted to make sure that it all came off!!!

He had gotten ready and he headed out in his car and left from there!!!…. He had met up with his friends at the club……. And they were just enjoying themselves!!!

Tarun: Man Jai I am surprised that ur Masi let you out!!

Jai: Heh!! She doesn't know!! And besides…. Its my life! I know she doesn't like but its my life! I am mean I am getting married!! At least she will get off my back for that!!

Tarun: Oh come on how bad could it be???

Jai: I don't want no chick coming into my life and telling me what to do!!! And besides I have already told her!!

Tarun: Told her wat?

Jai: That I don't want to marry her…. And I am only doing this cuz of Masi!! And she better stay within her limits and nothing else!!!

Tarun: Oh come on! What did the poor girl do to u??

Jai: Nothing!!! And it better stay that way!!!!

Tarun: Oh well! Its ur life u can do whatever you want!!!!

Jai: Yup it sure is!!!

The next day….. Was the mehdni ceremony!! Anu and Karuna along with Masi had gone to Chachi's house… for that! Since the guys couldn't be there….. they weren't even suppose to be there…. They had gone there!! Karuna had brought Rhea!!!…. Chachi had welcomed them all there!! The gals were getting their mendhi done!!! Just talking and having a blast!!!… Their hands and feet were turning out really nice!!!…..

Bani had seen Ria!!…. And she smiled at her!!…. She was in her wheelchair!!!… Bani had asked Karuna to bring her closer towards everyone!!!…… Everyone was just talking to her! Even though she couldn't respond back!!!! Karuna was being really brave on not breaking down!!!…

Bani noticed this… And Karuna just looked away cuz she was looking at Bani!!.. Bani had nodded and told her to come to her…. Karuna had come around her and sat behind her…… and Bani had leaned back a little bit….

Bani: Don't worry Di!!! Ur little girl will be coming back to you!!…. I know you have been waiting and waiting….. but the wait will be all worth it!!!….. Now I don't want you to be all sad about this!!.. Just be happy that she's in front of you!!!….. And not far from u!!!!

Karuna: But I have waited 2 years…. I guess god is punishing me still!!! He hasn't forgiven me yet!!!

Bani: Don't say that di!!!….. Trust me!! Now no more being sad!!!….. You have come for ur brothers wedding!!!…. So its time to party isn't it???

Karuna was looking at Bani! She was something!! She had hugged her from the back… and Bani just smiled!!!

Everyone was looking at the mehndi's on the girls hands!!! And it came out really nice!!!… And they call came out dark!!!!….

Masi: Wow Bani!! Urs came out the darkest!!!! And u know what that means…. That Jai loves you a lot!!

Bani looked at her when she said that!!!….

Bani: Actually Masi… Since I was little….. It had always come out dark!!!……

Masi: Well if that's the case then… you are loved very much!!! And in the future the love that people will have for you will be even more!!!!

She had kissed Bani on her forehead!!!!!

Pia: No Masi!!! It means that jij loves her!!!…..

Everyone was all teasing Bani!!!…. Bani just smiled!!

Bani: (herself) I wish it was like that!! But its not!!! I guess in this life I don't deserve any love!!!!! I never received the love from anyone and I wont even get it from my husband!!!! In this life….. I will live my life like this!! Maybe happiness will come around in my next life!!!…..

Chachi was looking at this! And she was thinking that in her dreams she wishes that she is loved!!!…. If only u guys knew the real story!!!!…. She was just smiling to her herself….. And let everyone be!!!!

Chachi had come teased her along with them!! And she hugged her from the side and she hugged her on life left side… and it was paining Bani like anything becuz that's the same arm that Chachi always gets her at!!!….. Bani was paining right now but she couldn't say anything and Chachi knew it was hurting her but she didn't care at all!!!!…….

Anu: Hey u guys…. Tomorrow is the sangeet right… wat are you guys going to be doing???

Purva: Why?? We are going to have it here!!!… I mean we cant really see the guys until the day after tomorrow right??……

Anu: Why don't u guys come to our place..

Rano: But….

Anu: No buts!! Trust me…. It will work!!!…. U guys have to come!!!…..

Pia: What are u going to do???

Anu: Well I know the guys will be dying to see u gals…… so lets torment them a little bit!!!!

Pia: Ur the little devil aren't u??

Anu: Oh yeah!!! So tomorrow be there at WM!!!…. But call me wen u get there!!!

Pia: Okay we will do that!!

The following day had arrived and it was the day of the Sangeet…. The gals were going to head over to WM!! Don't know how they were going to pull it off of not seeing the guys and the guys not seeing them!!!… When they were ready… they had headed over to WM!! They had called Anu like they were suppose to… and Anu had told them to come from the back… from the garden.. They had come and Anu had told them quickly to come inside her room!!!

Masi: Girls ur here

Anu: masi… SHh!!!! Don't be so loud so everyone can hear u!

Masi: Oh sorry!! I forgot!! The guys aren't suppose to know!!! Well have fun!!

They had all come there…. And no one had seen them!!!! That was a good thing… Anu was just getting ready in her room!!!… The gals were looking stunning as always!!!…

Anu: Bhabhis u guys have to help me! I don't know what to wear!!! This stinks!!

Purva: What do u mean u don't know what to wear? U have 4 out here!! Pick one!

Anu: Yeah but its hard! I like all of them!!!!!

The gals picked out one for her…

Pia; Okay now no more complaining!! We solved ur problem!! GO and change!!

Anu had gone and she went to go and change!! The gals were sitting on her bed just talking!!!…

Pushkar had ended up knocking the door… and he yelled for Anu… But the gals had to keep quiet!! They were looking at each other!

Pushkar: Arre anu.. wat are u doing in there?? Open the door I don't know what ur doing in there!!

He was banging on the door!!!

Anu had stuck her head out

Anu: I am changing!!

Pushkar: Arre let me come in!!!

Anu: wait give me a few mins I am in the bathroom!!!

Pushkar OH my god! Women!!! U take forever!!

Anu had told the gals to hide in the bathroom… the gals had gone and she opened the door….

Anu: What?

Pushkar: wat are u doing?

Anu: Changing!

Pushkar: Ur still not ready yet?

Anu: No I didn't know what to wear…

Pushkar Oh god!!

Anu: What are u doing in here??

And then there was a noise that came from the bathroom!! Something had fallen in the bathroom!!!… Pia had dropped the hair spray on the floor!! Which made a loud sound!!!

Pushkar: What was that?

Anu: What was wat??

Pushkar: That noise!!

Anu: What noise??

Pushkar: Anu!! Whos in the bathroom?

Anu: No one!!!

Pushkar looked at her funny… and he walked towards the bathroom!

plz comment!!!

Have a nice weekend!! Will be back on Monday!!!

Quote

Pachu.P

@Pachu.P

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#75

Man..i really feel so bad for bani..poor gal..wont get love from Jai, like she deserves..sighhh

Loved it ben.👏.continue soon!

Jazu...ahm ahm..i win!🤗

Edited by ~Pachu*n*Abhi~ - 17 years ago

Quote

Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 17 years ago

#76

*sigh* missed it today

not fair pachu...you stole my spot...chor...CHOR!!! 😉😉

ok now to you update 😃

so i see we went with the haldi ceremony first...😆😆😆...omg...the best part of your brothers wedding...is getting him bad with the haldi...and i mean BAD...just as my bhaia...😛...he was all 😡😡 and i was all 😳😳...choti behen hoon...aap kuch nahin kaar sakte...haq banta hai mera 😆😆😆...even massi..wah wah...tarun is such a wimp...he was on the right track when he asked what bani ever did to jai...umm HELLO...you are supposed to tell your bff not to be a jerk ...useless...all of them...i feel bad for karuna...aww...she needs a hug 🤗...poor bani...so pessimistic...aachi baath nahin hai...so young and so negative......tauba...pushy...anu is changing aur tu keh raha hai let me in...chi...i know...yeh saab pia ki assar hai 🤢🤢🤢...bloody cow 😆😆...

and now...for my babe...i think you need a hug too 🤗...ok maybe more than one...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗...hope you have a better day on sat then you did on fri...miss you mucho...love you mucho too...😳😳😳

JAZ

Edited by jnawaz - 17 years ago

Quote

Person23

@Person23

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#77

gr8 part

Jai is sooooo stupid

straighten him up will u? 😆

pls cont soon

Quote

Zaara91

@Zaara91

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#78

hey guli grt part...the guys too cool...jai your an ediot...wat evaaaa...😒

continue...

sonam

Quote

Taz234

@Taz234

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#79

Hey Chameli...me is here😃...took a while. Just read all the parts. Great ff once again.👏 Cinerella type tale..lekin yahaan prince charming ke alag hi rang dhang hai. 😕Chachi se milkar Bani se shaadi karne ke liye ready...but he doesn't love her. 😒

Poor Bani...her chachi is so mean..hurts her constantly too.😡 Thank god there are no ugly sisters here...sab acche hai and they are all marrying the walia family too..😊 Guess bani will have some support with her..and she has her new brothers too. 👍🏼

I think Bani will help that little girl Riya to recover...Bani seems to be a lucky charm for Jai and their family...hope he realises it soon.
Duffer plans to party on his wedding day...oh god. I hope Masi finds out and keeps him at home!😡

I wonder when Jai will realise how special Bani is...how lucky she is for him..he got all them deals because of her na?😉

Great ff...👏

Tazoo

Edited by Taz234 - 17 years ago

Quote

Vanita

@*Guli*

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#80

Part 10

Pushkar: What was that?

Anu: What was wat??

Pushkar: That noise!!

Anu: What noise??

Pushkar: Anu!! Whos in the bathroom?

Anu: No one!!!

Pushkar looked at her funny… and he walked towards the bathroom!!!

Anu was shocked!!!!

Anu: Bhaiyya…. Masi is calling u!!!!!!

Pushy had turned around!!!!

Anu: Masi is calling u!!!

Pushy: I didn't hear her!!!

Anu: Yes she is!! GO!

Pushkar was looking at Anu! She was sure acting weird!!!

Pushy: I think ur hiding something from me!!!

Anu: No I am not!

Pushy: Yes you are! Why are you so nervous???

Anu: Its u!! Why do u want to go in my bathroom?? U have one

Pushy: There was a noise!

Anu: Arre so my hair spray bottle dropped on the floor!!

Pushy: Just like that??

Anu: Hey it can happen to anyone!

Pushy: Not when there's no one in the bathroom!!!! Omg! Is Rohit in there??

Anu: What? NO way!!! He wont be coming til later on!!

Pushy had gone… and Anu was like omg! What a snoop when he opened the bathroom door there was no on in there! But he saw the spray on the floor!! Anu was like omg!!!

But then he had come out!

Pushy: There's no one in there!

Anu: Huh? There's no one in there?? I mean… duh!!! There's no one in there!!!…… Its only me! And I told u I was changing in the bathroom!! Now let me finish getting ready for the Sangeet!!! U go away!!!

Pushy had left from there and she closed the door and she locked it!! Anu had gone in the bathroom!!

Anu: Where are u guys???

They were all hiding in the bathtub!!!

Anu: Man that was a close call!!!

Pia: UR telling me! I was hiding behind the door!! Thank god he didn't see me!! U know I think this is still a bad idea for being here!

Anu: Arre don't worry!!!!!

Meanwhile Pushkar was thinking about Anu!! And he sensed something was fishy! Since he was all ready he had come down!!!!…… The others were down as well!!…

Natu: Pushkar what are u thinking about???

Pushy: Anu!!

Ranveer: Why what happened?

Pushy: She's acting funny!! I think there's someone in her room!!!! And they were hiding in the bathroom!! But I wasn't sure!!

Ranveer: What? Is it Rohit??

Pushy: That's wat I thought!!!

Then Rohit had walked in from the front door!! And he said Hey Guys… they had all turned around and saw him there…. So then it couldn't be him!!!!… Jai had come downstairs! He was wearing a Sherwani…. And he had come downstairs…

Jai: Hey Rohit! U know I heard Anu talking I thought it was u!!!!

Rohit: Nope! I haven't talked to her!!!… I mean I did… but that was in the morning!!

Pushy: That means there's someone up there!!

He had gone back upstairs… And he put his ears against the door…… and he had heard the gals voice!! And he informed the guys that the girls are here!! Man the guys were thrilled!! But Jai wasn't bothered at all!!

Pushy: So that means they were hiding in the bathroom!!! Man those little tricksters!!! Wait til they come down!!!! I will get them!

Ranveer: How???

Pushy: Just wait!!

The guests had arrived for the sangeet!!! And it was a grand affair!! There were loads of people!!!!! The gals had come down!! And they were around there somewhere!! Bani was the only one that still upstairs!! She couldn't play a joke like this!! There was no point!! There was no fun in her life…. So she had made an excuse that she was going to come later on a bit… that she was gonna do touch up on her make up! The gals told her to come down soon!!!!

Sangeet had started and Anu had sung a song and she danced!!!….(just go with it… any song … )… and she was dancing for her brothers and what not… and she was all into it!!…. And then the gals were there… but there faces were covered… infact their heads were covered!!…

After she was done with the song.. Pushy was nudging the guys!! Indicating that those gals were them!!!….

Pushy: Wow!! Look at those hot lookin babes!!!!!

He had come to Pia!!…

Pushy: Hey sweet thing…. Wow! U look hot!!!!!!!!!

He was flirting with her and everything! Pia was shocked!! She couldn't believe it!!!

Anu: Hey bhaiyya…. What are u doing??

Pushy: What does it seem like I am doing!! She's one hot sexy momma!!!

Ranveer: U know the one in the orange (Rano) doesn't look that bad!!!

Natu:Nope! I disagree the one in the blue.. she's one hottie!!!!!!!!!

The gals were shocked!!!!

Anu: Oy! U guys are getting married tomorrow!!!

Pushy: Exactly!! We aren't married yet! We have one more day … so now we can fool around all we want 2nite and then after tomorrow… our lives will be ruined and we will be ruined!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U know… I want a kiss from this one!! Please!!!

Pia's eyes were gonna pop out like anything1 Anu was looking at the guys

Anu: Oy!! I am gonna tell Pia Bhabhi this!!

Pushy: Who cares!! She's not here!!! She doesn't need to know what goes on here!!

Ranveer: I agree! The girls don't need to know wat happens here!!! Its none of their business!!!!

Everyone was like omg!!… Masi was shocked! She was telling the guys wat were they doing! But Pushy gave her this look and he winked at her! Masi sensed something was happening!!

Pushy:
Jummaa chummaa de de, jummaa chummaa de de chummaa
Jumme ke din kiyaa chumme kaa vaadaa
Jumme ko tod diyaa chumme kaa vaadaa
Le aa gayaa re phir jummaa-chummaa
Jummaa chummaa de de, jummaa chummaa de de chummaa

The other guys were singing the songs!!! And they were all asking for kisses!!!!!…….. And then….they were standing there…. Waiting to be kissed!!!!…. The gals were getting mad!!! Anu was trying to move them away!! But they weren't moving at all!!…

Then the gals showed their faces! And everyone was like omg!!! Masi was like whoa!!!

And the gals at the same time were like OY!!!!

PNR: GOTCHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The guys were laughing!!!!! Pushy had told them that he knew they were upstairs!!! So they were just messing with them!!!!…. The gals were looking at them!!!….

Pushy: U are here in our territory now….. So now u have to pay the price!!!

Pia: What price??

Pushy: Whatever we ask for!!

Pia was looking at him! What was he gonna tell her to do!!! The gals were all nervous!!!… Pushy is like since this is the sangeet day…. Sing a song… telling me how much u love me!!!

Pia; What????

Pushy: yup! In front of everyone!!…. tell me!

Natu: I agree!!!! Come on!!

The gals were speechless!!

Pushy: Its either that or u literally kiss us!!

Ranveer: Cant we just get the kiss!!! Makes it so much easier!!!

The gals were getting teased like anything!!!…. The guys were waiting!! But they were just standing there… Then the guys had turned around!! They were just smiling… they had no answer!! And then Pia had started singing Bole Chudiyan!! (I am not going to put the words in)

She had started singing that… and she was dancing to that!!!!…And then the girls had joined in and they were all dancing around them!!… And the guys had sang and danced to that song as well!!!

Everyone was clapping and cheering!! Bani had come down…. But she was just away from Jai!! And she went by Masi!! Masi had told her to go in but she had said no!!! They had told her to come in and dance but Bani had just said no!!!…… They left her alone….

And in the end when the music went faster… everyone was dancing and clapping and everyone was having so much fun!! Bani was just watching everything and she wished that she could celebrate like this…. But it wasn't happening! Jai was watching everyone else having the time of their life… and he looked over at Bani!!! Who was just standing there but then she had walked off….. from there and went outside!!

After the song was over… everyone was just screaming and shouting…. Cuz it was sooo much fun!!! They all had a blast!!!!

The scene had faded away and it was the next day… where all 4 couples were taking their pheras…and soon to become husband and wife!!!!!!!!!

plz comment!

Quote

1 ... 6 7 8 9 10 ... 98

FF: Kismat: Part 73 (Pg 147) 23/11 - Page 8

Related Topics

Explore Topics