FF: Kismat: Part 73 (Pg 147) 23/11

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Saba

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Posted: 17 years ago

#51

awesom parti feel so sorry for bani

contine soon

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MrsKhan-Sobti

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Posted: 17 years ago

#52

poor bani....😭

she's suffering sooo much..

n jai😡

waiting for nex part...

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Jazmin

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Posted: 17 years ago

#53

hey there babe...how are you doing now...dont see you online so im guessing you are resting...good...feel better soon...🤗...here is some veggie soup for you to feel better...😳

now to my commento 😉

wah wah...teeno couples toh bohot kaam ke nikle...👏...im sure the girls did all the work while the guys drooled...speaking of drool...ahem ahem...we need to go to SUBWAY...😳😳😳...rano clearly missed to mention the love of her husband...bechari bani...usse bhi kushiyaan doh na yaar......jai is such a jerk...😡😡😡....yup...its official...i call fist dibs to kick chachis a*s 🤬....purva ne nachiket ko nattu bulaya...yeh toh phasi 😆😆😆...pushkar bhi pushy baan gaya...pia bhi phasi...lekin haye...im all 😭😭😭...i want pushkar 😭😭😭...besharam ladkiyaan i tell you..potential...tauba 😲😲...kya zamanna hai...of course...this is guli ff...queen besharam ...jai...baachu...just wait and watch...if i dont have you begging bani for forgiveness soon..mera naam jaz nahin...kyun babe 😉😉

JAZ

ps: i got the back story about doha's "my past" thing...remind me to tell you...its good 😉

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JAN_SA

@JAN_SA

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Posted: 17 years ago

#54

Chachi is so filthy, hate her🤬, I don't like Jai at the moment, her is a spoilt brat, behave more like a teenager.

Like the 3 couples, they are cute, hopefully they will get married quickily and make Jai realise how stupid he is.

Please continue and keep up the great work

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Shireen

@--__Shireen__--

Dazzler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#55

Hey Guli! 😃 Sorry about not commenting lately! i moved out of my house, so no time to even sit on my comp! 😕😭 i just caught up with this FF yesterday quickly before i had to go to work, and i finished, so i'm commenting not! 😆

Anyways, back to your FF! 😛 I'm loving this Guli! 👏 Jai's being a.....😡 and don't even get me started with chachi! 🤬

The couples as so cute! 😳 made for eachother couples 😆

I feel so sorry for Bani! 😭😭😭 she's beent hrough so much, and Jai isn't really helping that much! 😡😡 atleast she'll get a good family after marriage besides her hubby!

loving the FF guli and cont soon! 😃

Originally posted by: jnawaz

we need to do another lunch...ahem ahem...subway! 😳

JAZ

i was going to the next page to read your next update, when i came across the word "subway"! 😆 you see, now whenever i see that word, i have to see what's up, so if you and jaz want subway for free, give me a call or tell me when you want it and i'll get it for your for free! 😆 just don't tell my boss! 😉😆

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Vanita

@*Guli*

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Posted: 17 years ago

#56

Part 6

Sorry guys for the delay! didnt have the part written!!.... Here it is!!.. This FF will be updated Mon-Fri!!!!... Not on Sat/sun!!!!!......

The following morning had come….. and Jai was in bed still!!… he had come home around 2 am!!…. He didn't have a hangover… cuz he doesn't get drunk!! He knows his limits!!……. He had woke up…. Cuz he knew he had to wake up!!…. it was Raksha Bandhan today!!… so he had to wake up early!!… And besides if he wanted to avoid Masi's lecture on not going to clubs and drinking… he definitely needed to get up!!!!…

He had hit the showers…and he had gotten ready!!… Anu was waiting downstairs and getting everything ready!! Man her brothers were always late!!… they were suppose to be down by 8 and it was already 815!!!……. She was pacing back and fourth and up and down!!….. They always took forever!!……

Finally… after like ages….. They had made their way down!! All 4 of them!!!..

Anu: What took u guys soo long?

Pushy: What?? We were just getting ready!! We have to go to the office!

Anu: What time do u guys wake up?

Natu: I woke up at 7!

Anu: Took u an hour to get ready? What are you a girl??

Natu: Well no!!! but still!!…

Ranveer: Well we are all here!!

Anu: I Guess soo now sit down!!!…..

All the guys had sat down in a line… on the couch!!…. She was doing the aarti for each one of her brothers!! She had started with Jai 1st…. cuz he was the oldest… then she made her way down!!….. She had tied the rakhri's around their wrists… and fed them sweets!!!!….

Jai: Okay…. So this year… we didn't get u anything!! We are sorry for that… but whatever you ask for…. ur wish is our command!!!!!

Anu: Anything??

Ranveer: Anything!

Anu: Hmm… let me think!!! But Jai bhaiyya.. u don't have to get me a gift!!

Jai: I don't?

anu: Nope! Becuz ur already giving it to me!!

Jai: I am!

Anu: Yes!!

Jai: U sure?

Anu: Oh yeah!!!

Jai was happy!! He didn't have to give her a gift! He was off the hook! He was just chillin back and relaxing!!!

Anu: Okay so whatever I want… I will get??… from u 3 now!!!!

Natu: Huh? What?? What does he have that we don't!!

Pushy: Yeah!! Wats he giving you!! Oy.. are you planning something we don't know about!

Jai: No!!!! but she has my gift!!! so.. HA!

Pushy: Then what are you giving her that we don't have??…

Jai: I don't know!! Beats me!!….

Anu: Who do u think he's giving me??

Pushy: who??

Anu: Uff!!!!

She had come to Pushy… and she whispered something in his ear!!

Pushy: Bobbies?? Eww! U want Bobby!!…

Natu: Huh?? Who? Bobby?? Tauba Anu…Bobby Darling??

Ranveer: Wait til I tell Rohit!!…… U and Bobby Darling!!

Anu: Huh? What?? I didn't say Bobby!!!

Pushy: Yes u did!!!!… I heard it!

Anu: Go clean ur ears!!!!….. I didn't say that!

Pushy: Then?

Anu: Duh!!!.. I said Bhabhi!!!!!!!

All the guys were looking at each other!!!!!

Pushy: But how..

Anu: Oh come on!!… is it sooo hard to give me what I want? You guys said I can have anything I want! Well that's what I want!

Natu: But..

Anu: No buts!!…

Ranveer: how..

Anu: No excuses!!!

Pushy: Its not that easy!!

Anu: Why not?? Don't u have ur gals picked out???

She was looking at them!!!!…. She had a smile on her face!!… and the guys were looking at one another!

Anu: Oh come! I know u like them!!… please!!

Pushy: Anu…. U have to calm down.. I mean we are just talking to them… its not like….

Anu: What? But I know u guys want to be with them!! and spend ur whole life with them!!…. why don't u guys just admit it that you guys want to be with them??? and u will be happy!!…. cuz I know it and I can see it…. The way u guys are around them and what not!!!…..

They knew she was right!!… they did like the gals!!… but wasn't it too soon?!…. they were telling her that but she didn't want to hear it from them!

Anu: All I want is a yes or no from u guys!!

Natu: to wat?

Anu: That u guys will marry them!!

PNR: What?????

Anu: Yes or no!! or else I will look for suitable grooms for them and it wont be either of u!!!

Pushy: Oh heck no! Not happening!…

Natu: I know no way!!…

Ranveer: You cant do that!

Anu: Watch me!!

She had got up!!! And she walking away from them! the guys were stumped!! Whatever Anu said she always meant it!… So before she did anything they had all stood up and they all said Yes!!!…

Anu had stopped and she turned around and she looked at them!

Anu: What a yes??? is that a yes I hear?

Pushy: Yes!!

Anu was jumping for joy!!…

Anu: My plan worked! Yes!!…….

She had called out the gals and they were there the whole time! and the guys were shocked!!.. Masi had brought them out…. and the gals were looking down!!

Anu: So now.. we will have 4 weddings on the same day!!!!!!

The guys were like what the…. They didn't know what had hit them!!…. But one thing for sure was…..they were getting married along with Jai!!…. Masi was going to talk about it… with Chachi…. The sooner the better!!!….

The guys were like omg!!!!…. Bani was there as well!!…. She was with the gals….. But Anu and Masi were happy!!…. Anu was thrilled she was getting 4 bhabhis!!!!!! She was jumping for joy!!….

The guys wanted to go by the gals… but they stopped themselves!!… They had stood there! the gals were just standing there…… And they were looking at the guys.. while the guys were doing the same thing!!!……

Masi had called the gals over… and told them to sit by the guys!!… They were all shy… but then they had listened to her… and they all sat down next to their soon to be husbands!!!

Anu: Bobby Darling?? Are you insane???…. I don't swing that way!!

Pushy: U sure?

Anu: Pushy???

Pushkar was laughing!!.. Everyone was!! Anu had looked at Bani…… Bani's face seemed to be sad!!… Anu had stopped laughing….and looked at her!

Anu: Bani Bhabhi whats wrong??

Bani: Huh?? Oh nothing!!

Anu: Yes!! U arent laughing?? Whats wrong?

Jai looked at her!! He was thinking whether she was going to open ur big mouth on him!!…..

Pia: Well today…. she will be like this Anu!…… Today Di will def be sad…. Becuz today is a day for brothers and sisters…. But her brother had passed away when he was 8!!!……. So….

Pushy: Wat? Bhabhi are you serious???

Bani nodded her head yes!!..

Bani: He died of Lukemia!! …..

Everyone was looking at her!!…. esp the guys!! Jai didn't say anything! He had no face expressions!!!… He was just there!!

Pushy: Bhabhi is that ur problem???? I think we can fix that right now!!!..

Bani was looking at them!!!… She had a confused expression!! How will they help her??? ..

Pushy: We can help her right guys????….

Then Pushy, Natu, and Ranveer all extended their hands out in front of her….

Masi: Uh Oh!! Bahu… now you have a bigger problem!!!

Bani: How??

Masi: Who will you tie it on 1st????

plz comment!

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 17 years ago

#57

me first 😃

ha ha...i beat you PACHU 😉

ok that bobby darling part...hilarious 😆😆😆...i told you i needed to call you...you know im too lazy to type up all that stuff we talked about 😉😉😉...but so sweet...ghaar mein char char shaadiyaan ⭐️⭐️⭐️...lots of fun...but poor bani...her brother...aww...and haye...the guys are so sweet...they are bani's rakhi bhai's 👏...so nice of them...

cant wait for next update 😳😳

and shireen...yaar...if only you knew why i want to go to subway 😳😳😳...i was there...on sunday and let me tell you...someone gave me extra avocado 😉😉😉...mujhe free sandwich nahin chahiyeh...but but but...kuch phone numbers chahiyeh...can you do that 😛😛
JAZ

Edited by jnawaz - 17 years ago

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Pachu.P

@Pachu.P

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Posted: 17 years ago

#58

Jazu! Just cuz i had to wake up EARLY today, you are first!! Humph!! So NOT fair!!

Lmao! The bhabhi's part was cool yo! Anu got da brain jaani!!!😉 She knows how to get her things done! It was hillarious!!😆

Loved it! Poor Bani though, her bro, but glad PNR are gnna be her bro's..so jai, watch out!!!😛

Ahm, about extra AVACADOS, Jazu, dont even talk about that!!

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KS_addict

@KS_addict

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Posted: 17 years ago

#59

Now Bani has 3 brothers who can protect her! So sweet!!!

Bani you may have lost a brother but you have gained 3!!

Please Continue Soon!

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Zaara91

@Zaara91

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#60

ohhhhhhhh guli...i loved this part...so emotional...the guys are sooo cute...so bani has 3 bros now...bani's poor bro died i'm sure its cuz of that chachi😡...continue..

sonam

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