FF: Kismat: Part 73 (Pg 147) 23/11

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Vanita

@*Guli*

Stunner

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hello People!!! Yes i am back!!!! again!!!!😛 ur stuck with Guli!!!!!!😆 Sowwie for that!!!!

I am back with FF #35!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kismat!!!!!

Brief Introduction!!!!!........

Kismat...... Who believes in it???? Apparently... not JW!!!....... He's the biggest playboy and the most hardest business man to deal with!!!!...... He loves his life and he doesnt need anyone in it.. but his family!!!... Marriage?? just out of the question!!!!.... He's livin the life....... and enjoying it to the fullest!!!....... He has his bay days... and his good days!!....... but his bad days become his worst days and his good days become the best!!!.....His masi always tells him... to get married!! he always rubs it off....... But she's hoping that her Ghar Ki Laxmi... comes soon!!!.......

He lives in a household of 5 other people!!..... His 3 younger brothers.... Pushkar, Natu and Ranveer!!!... and the Angel in thier lives.... Anu!!! Who is engaged.... to the love her life.. Rohit.......And His Masi!!!!!!

Bani Dixit....... Mom died when she was born and Dad passed away when she was 8 in a car accident!!... She's been living with her chacha and chachi since then!!!... chachi hates her!!!.... She controls her household!!!..... She never liked Bani to begin with!!! Reason??... She doesnt have one!! Bani isnt her daughter.. so she could care less!! Bani never got the love from her........and never will!!

Chachi/Chacha have 3 daughers... Pia, Purva and Rano!!!.......... They all get along with Bani!! Bani is the oldest from all 3 of them!!!..... She loves them like anything!! and same with them!!!........ But the day she gets married...... She doesnt know whether to be happy of her marriage?? Or sad becuz of the circumstances!!! But one thing is for sure...... She's one lucky charm to all!!!

Edited by *Guli* - 17 years ago

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Naazneen

@nsa4657

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

hey... nice intro guli!
post the first part soon! =)

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Person23

@Person23

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Posted: 17 years ago

nice inroduction

u really love writing ffs don't u jaan?😉😆

Don't like the sound of this chaachi

pls cont soon

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nuomi.riceball

@nuomi.riceball

Sparkler

Posted: 17 years ago

hi nice intro

can't wait for the first part

plz cont soon

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aNsHu

@aNsHu_tEjPaL

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

sounds very interesting!!!! can't wait!!!

pls cont soooooon

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Zaara91

@Zaara91

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

heya...guli...your back....i was expecting you to start a new one....grt i'm in love with kismat allready....grt intor...to the charachters....waiting to see how jb willl meet....through their kisma connection....

sonam

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Pachu.P

@Pachu.P

Inactive

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Posted: 17 years ago

Im here jaani!!!😳

Wow!!! What an Intro!!! Lovely!!!!!!!!!!

Hmm..Jai's a playboy!! Hmmm, now thats intresting!!

Continue Soon!!!

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Shireen

@--__Shireen__--

Dazzler

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey Guli! great intro and i'm eagerly waiting for the first part to come! 😃 It sounds very interesting! 👏

btw, the pic isn't purva (Riddhi Nayak) it's the person who plays Kasturi (Shubhangi Atre) 😆 I won't tell anyone! 😉😆 It's our little secret! 😆😆😆

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

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Posted: 17 years ago

first off...im not speaking to you...i am officially mad...you posted a new ff aur mujhe bataya bhi nahin...ahem ahem...😭...mere bina yeh ff kahaan hoti...j/k...sort of 😉😉...

i cannot believe my babe forgot me...no one loves me any more...yeh dard main kahaan rakhoon...😭😭😭...that is why u didnt call me today huh...two time i waited and waited and waited...nothign...i see how it is...my babe has forgotten all about me...she doesnt love me...

jaz with bout her babe is like.......cake with no frosting...😭😭😭...

dost dost naa raha...
mujhe bilkul bhool gaya

JAZ

ps: awesome intro...cant wait for first part...me still no talking to u! *hmph*

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Vanita

@*Guli*

Stunner

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Posted: 17 years ago

#10

Part 1

Starts off with the Alarm ringing at 6am!!!…… It was Bani sleeping on the floor in the small room… all the way in the corner!!!!…… She never really had a room for herself becuz her chachi never gave it to her!!!! Whatever she did…She always did it for her daughters and never for Bani!! Bani wasn't her own! She never treated her like her own daughter like most people would!!.. Bani was always considered the outsider by her chachi!!!…

Her 3 daughters Pia, Purva and Rano…. they love Bani lots!! Bani was their oldest Di!! And they all shared a bond with her like anything! They knew what their mom was doing but there was nothing to stop her!! Chachi was strict and u never wanted to mess with her!! The gals felt Bani's pain and they would always console her!! but that's the only thing she could do!!!….

Chachi had done many brutal things to Bani!!.. And one thing was abusing her!!…..!… If Bani never did anything right… Chachi would always hit her!! and that too with a broom!! Talk about worst then Cinderella!! After she would come back from skool… Bani would have to cook and clean the whole house…. and if something wasn't right she had gotten beaten up by her!! TO make Bani's pain worse….. She had always hit her on her left arm!!!…. that side she would keep on hitting her on!!! She has gotten fractures and everything!! It wasn't getting healed properly… And Chachi would make things worst!!!!

Her chacha couldn't say anything about this becuz it was her Chachi who would run the household!!!.. Whatever she said… went!!!…. Bani would always go to sleep around 11-12… and she would have to wake up early the next morning and do everything before going to skool!!! Her sisters were watching this…. But they couldn't do anything about it!!!…. One thing was for sure… if she got married and left the house… it would be the best for her!!…….

That's what chachi's next plan was!! To get her married and out of the house!!!…. that way she didn't have to deal with her!!!…. But who was she gonna get her married off to?? She needed someone!!! But he couldn't be better than who she would pick for her daughters!! Becuz they deserved the best!!!!!!!!

In Walia House….. it was almost 7 am!!!….. And Jai Walia…… The owner of WGI… still sleeping in bed!!….. His whole bed was a mess!!…. His comforter on one end… and he was on the other side…. He heard his alarm in the morning and he put it on snooze!! This man never woke up on time!! Despite of putting his alarm at 7… he never came down until like 9-10!!!….. How was he so successful??? God knows!!!……

His masi always told him to be down early!! And to have breakfast with the family… but he was always in his own little world!!!….. Even his brothers would laugh at him cuz he always…. Got scolded by his Masi!!! She was the one person that could tell him off and he wouldn't say one word!! But one thing he ignored was his talks about marriage!
Pushkar: Oh come on!! U Know its time!! ur almost 27!!!… and think about us!!!…..

natu: Yeah think about us!!… we have to get married to! and until u don't… we are screwed!!

Jai: No one told you not to get married!

Ranveer: Ur the oldest!!

Jai: and?? Anu's engaged!!!

Ranveer: She's different!!!… they arent going to get married for a while! And she's a girl she's out of the picture but do think about us!!

All 3 brothers were ganging up on him!!!! they always would!!….

Masi: But really Jai…. U need to get married!!

Jai: Look Masi I love my life right now!!! I am livin the life!!

Masi: Yeah well don't u think u need to settle down?

Jai: Its always the same talk!!!

Masi: Yeah of course!! I have all of you guys to think about!!

Ranveer: Hey masi.. we can all find someone.. but its ur little Munna over here…

Jai: Oy!!!!..

All the guys were laughing!!! Munna was his nickname from his Masi!!!… everytime she calls him that… the guys would laugh! He always gave them that dreadful look!! But it was still funny!!!!

Chachi was at home!! and she was just sitting around and reading a magazine!!!… They were middle class people….. but she didn't do anything around the house!! She would always make Bani do it after she had gotten back from skool!! Her friends would come by and they would sit and chat!!!!!…….

And the one thing that chachi would always talk about was getting Bani married off!!

Chachi: If she's out of this house and out of my life…. Don't have to deal with her!!!!!

Woman #1: Why don't u then??

Chachi: I cant find the right guy!!!..

Woman#2: u mean a good guy?

Chachi: No!! the right guy… who would treat her the way I would want her to be treated!!…..

Woman#2: What about JW??

Chachi: Who?? Jai Walia??? Are you crazy??

Woman#1: Why???

Chachi: becuz!!!…

Woman#2: I heard that his Masi is looking for someone to marry her nephew!!

Chachi: Not JW!!

Woman: Yeah but he's playboy!! He's been around many women!! As far as I heard… he doesn't want to get married anyways!!!!!… And I have a feel if he does get married… he wont treat his wife good anyways!!!

That got Chachi to think!! Maybe it wasn't a bad idea after all!!… If she got JW married to Bani….. she was thinking!!!!! That made her think!!!

After that… Chachi got a few sources and kept to date on JW…… and it was still the same!! Masi was still looking and he was saying no!!… One day she had gone to WGI… And she gone inside his cabin!! He wasn't doing anything….. just looking over some files!! He had heard a knock on the door…. And he had said come in…..

Chachi had walked into his cabin….. And he had looked up! He never met her before… she was a new face…..

Jai: Yes?? who are you???

Chachi: JW??

Jai: Yes!!!

chachi: Hi!!!…

Jai: Can I help you?

Chachi: Yes you can!!….. I have heard lots of about u…..

Jai: Oh!

Chachi: I have been finding out things about you!!! and don't get me wrong I am not a stalker…… but I found out.. that ur Masi is trying to get u married!!!

Jai: are you one of her friends??

Chachi: No!! I don't know any of ur family!! I just have my sources!! You don't have to worry about that!!!…

Jai: So ur here for a proposal???

Chachi: Yes!! For my niece….

Jai: Look!! Thanks for the offer…. But no thank u!!!!

Chachi: Look…. Its for both of our benefits….. You get married…. ur masi will be on top of the world!!!….. and for me.. she will be out of the house!!

Jai: Whats the catch?

Chachi: Catch?

Jai: Yes!! there has to be a catch!! You want something?

Chachi: There is no catch!!!.. I don't want anything!!! If you marry her.. I will be happy!!! I get rid of her that's all I want!!!!

Jai: I cant trust you!!

Chachi: Why not?? I don't want anything! I don't want money I don't want anything!! If you do this…. I will be happy!!

Jai: If you think that I will marry ur niece…

Chachi: Look if you keep her happy or not… I don't care!!! I don't care what you do!!…. I don't even want to know!!…. Its ur life!! Once u get married to her u can handle her however you want!!!

Jai: I wont love her!

Chachi: Not my problem!!

Jai: No touching! No kissing no lovey dovey!!!
Chachi: I don't care!!!! Its for ur own good! u want ur masi off ur back…. Marry my neice!!.. Ur Masi will stop bothering you… and I will get rid of my burden as well!!!…

Jai was looking at her! She meant business!!! She looked like a sharp lady!! but why did she want to get rid of her niece???

Jai: U are a crazy lady!!!!

Chachi: Think about it!! Here's my number!!!… Call me!!…. Trust me u wont regret it!!!…. Or if you want… better yet.. I will send her in ur office in 3 days!!… then u can decide for urself!!

She had left from there! Jai was looking at the phone number and dumped it on the side!!!… he didn't want to think about it!!!…..

Few days later… Jai was on the phone!! He was at home and he was yelling on the phone…. He was trying to get this contract…. And it wasn't working!!…….. Chachi had sent Bani to WGI!!…. … Chachi threatened her a little bit….. to keeping her mouth shut and what not.. .and not to talk much!!….. …

Bani had arrived there and she took the elevator to the 11th floor that he was on…. She had asked for him and the lady pointed….. She had knocked on the door….. and he said come in really loud!! And Bani got scared!!…

When she had walked in the office….. Jai had looked up!! He figured who she was and he looked away!!….. and then all of a sudden…..The guy on the phone…. gave him the contract!!!…

Jai: What??

Guy: Yes its urs!!

Jai was on cloud 9!.. He got it! He was arguing with this man for 2 hours!!! And he convinced him to change his mind!!!…. Jai was happy!!….. He had hung up the phone and looked at Bani! Bani was looking down!!!.. Jai was looking at her up and down top to bottom!!……

Jai was getting phone calls after phone calls…. And he didn't have time for Bani!!… He had told her to leave… as he didn't have the time!!….. Bani didn't say anything and she ended up leaving from there!!…….

When she left from there.. Masi was there bringing him lunch… and saw Bani coming out from his cabin!! And she wondered who she was!!….. She came inside and asked Jai…. And Jai said no one!!!….. But Masi was thinking about something!! And Jai knew what she was thinking!!!!

plz comment!

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