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Posted: 6 years ago
#61
kalyani sharda together was cute.surprised to see smriti as ritika.bcz in kasam her character name was different. ritika is from matsh.nice to see krithika in a modern dress.miss kratika in modern dress.rishi controlling himself seeing her n finding her hot was romantic. krithika realized rishi called her hot...fighting with him n rishi saying that he called her hot as she is hot tempered was funny.ritika as rishi's crazy fan was cute.krithika ahiana hug n both getting emotional was lovely. seeing rishi ritika dance krithika moving ritika aside n dancing with rishi in jealousy was cute n funny.rishi krithika conversation regarding it was funny.thunder hug n kiss were romantic. nok jhok was funny.shocking that krithika got kidnapped for revenge.sad that rishi got shot while saving krithika.but glad that krithika remembers her past life now.kritika confessing her love to rishi n their conversation were so emotional n touchy.hope rishi's operation will be successful.
can you show akku jiyu cute romantic scenes too as in the show their love story wasn't explored.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#62
Another beautiful update.Krashi combo is bom.Loving it so much.Finally tanu remember her past .Now the story has vbecom more intrinteres.Can't wait to see tanshi or krashi.Plz update soonrr
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Posted: 6 years ago
#63
Beautiful and Awesome Chapter

Tanu remembering her past was great
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Posted: 6 years ago
#64
Awesome updates😳
Both part r Fabolous😳
Rishi n kittu cute nok jhok😳
Jiyu n dadi plan😳
Kittu jealousy😳
Thunder scene😳
Savior rishi😳
Every part is beautiful❤️
Waiting for next
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Posted: 6 years ago
#65
Superb updates Harsha!!!! Aww my TanShi😳... Kittu remembered Rishi when he got shot... AhaMan moments😳... Loved it to the core dear❤️... Update soon dear...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#66

Dedicated to Jasmine n bani who r waiting for my updates and sending pms abt my updates😳



sorry guys became busy with studies
so stopped updating
but felt bad for not completing it
came to home town becz of elections
got leave for one day
so decided to complete this story
and i did it
hope u all like it
sry if any mistakes..writig it after so many days..so there is chance of missing anything
plz do like and comment
it means a lot
plz tell wat u liked most in the story..and to which charecter u connected most
and its already midnight here..there will be so many grammitiacal mistakes..n i wrote kratika instead of kritika..will change it tomorrow..right now sleep mode on😆..plz no eggs ...tomatoes ok..pure veg here😉


After some time

Doctor came out

He informed rishi is in out of danger n will get conscious soon

all thanked god

rishi shifted to normal ward

kittu rushed to him

she sat beside him

she got tears by seeing his position

she leaned towards him and kissed on his forhead

kittu: I love u rishi

rishi got conscious with her touch

he slowly opened his eyes

and found his angel infront of him

a peaceful smile crept on his lips

rishi: tanu

tanu felt so happie

in that happiness she kissed all over his face

rishi too kissed her

he is finding difficult to sit

tanu helped him and made him sit

he hugged tanu

tanu to hugged him

tanu: tq rishi...tq for not leaving me..tq for coming back to me by fighting with god..i cant live without u rishi...I might have died if any thing happened to u

she is in tears

rishi kept his fingers on her lips

rishi: never talk like that tanu...before me..ur the one fought with god and came back to me...u brought life to this life less person.god sent to u back to complete our incomplete story..he wont do same mistake again..he wont separate us again...I was alive only to live my entire life with u tanu

they both r in tears

they both hugged each other

by that time they heard door opening sound

they moved apart

bedi family n krats family came inside

they r super happe after watching tanshi together

mann rushed to rishi

mann: bhai thum teik hein aa...

rishi: ha chotu im completely alright now.y not ur bhabi is with me

kratika blushed

all family members inquired rishi abt his health

later kalyani devi went to rishii

she took kritika hand and kept in rishi hand

kalyani: rishi...i m not giving my daughter hand to u..im giving ur wife...ur life to u...till now we took care of ur wife as our daughter..and we waited for her savior and u came...im giving her to u...god bless u both

kratika looked at her shockingly

kratika: dadi...do u know abt rishi before?

Jiyu: every one knows except u

Kratika shocked

Kratika: then y u didn't tell

Rishi: I only told not to say

Kratika; but y rishi

Ahana: becz he don't want u to trouble u..he don't want the truth to effect ur brain..he don't want to c u in stress

Kratika got tears

And till now she was tensed abt rishi so she didn't get chance to talk with ahana

Now after seeing ahana

She remembered her bond with ahana

A fresh tear escaped from her eye

She rushed to ahana n hugged her

Ahana surprised n felt so happie

She to hugged her back

Ahana: kratika

Kratika released hug

Kratika nodded her head as no

Kratika: not kratika...ur tanu di...

Ahana got tears

She hugged kratika

Ahana: miss u di...miss u so much...I cant able to explain how much I missed u..i love u di...

Kittu wiped her tears

Kittu: now no more tears..ur tanu di is with u...

All felt so happie by seeing them together

Kittu went to raj rano n beeji

She took their blessings

They hugged her n expressed how much they missed her

Kittu went to manpreet

Kittu: first of all I have to thank u manpreet

Ur with rishi when im not there...u looked after him ...rishi is blessed to have brother like u

And I owe to u..for taking care of my sister when I was there..and I can proudly say my sister got best husband in the world

Mannpreet hugged kritika

Manpreet: no tqs no debits no credits bhabi...rishi bhai is my life...how can I leave my life like that..and abt ahana...Im really blessed to have her in my life...I loved her and she agreed to break my face means she agreed to marry me

All laughed

Kratika hugged her parents n jiyu n akki

Kratika; tq so much dadi..ma papa ...for helping me to reach my love

Jiyu: wow from when my kittu di started saying thanks..oy miss tanu sing bedi...may b for all u r tanu sing bedi

Bt for me u vl b always kittu di..dont try to become tanu infront of me

Jiyu warned kittu

Kittu smiled and hugged her

Kittu: no baba im always kittu for u

All r happie

After few days

Rishi is discharged

Bedi family staying with kritika family

Kittu aka tanu taking care of rishi

With kittu utmost care rishi became normal

All family members gathered in hall

Rishi to came there with help of kittu

Beeji : kalyani...any ways rishi is ok now..lets think abt their marriage

Kritika face glown by hearing that

Dadi; ha sarada..ur right...lets call pandith ji

Rishi: beeji ...I think its not good idea

All r shocked especially kittu

Dadi: rishi wat happened

Rishi: tanu studies will be disturbed ...v can think abt that once her studies complete

Kittu left the place with anger

All r worried

Edited by honeyrosid-6 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#67

Beeji: arey wat happened to tanu

Jiyu smiled

Jiyu; I understood...n got clear picture...jiju ur gone...till now u saw kind hearted tanu di...go n c ur lioness kittu is inside...go n face her

Manpreet; jiyu..y ur scaring him..bhai don't worry,,,go n pacify her

Rishi went towards kittu room

He saw room is full of mess everything is scattered

he understud he is in trouble

he saw his tanu who is looking outside

rishi came n back hugged her

kittu pushed him n went to her bad n sat on that

rishi came n sat beside

rishi started searching something

kittu looked at him confusingly

kittu: wat ur searching,...she asked seriously

rishi: arey yar...some tomatoes r missing from kitchen..im searching for that

he looked at her

ha I got it by saying this he moved towards her n kissed on her nose

kittu pushed him: don't touch me rishi

rish: arey wat yar..wat happened

kittu: rishi I know u don't love me

she said by hitting him with pillow

rishi: omg..wat r u talking

kittu: then wat..here im dying to be with u...I want to b urs ..i cant stay away from u rishi..i love u

by saying this she hugged him

rishi smiled

rishi:I love u too tanu...wat u think..dont I want to stay with u...u don't know how much im missing u..bt I don't want ur studies to disturb becz of me..already u took so many leaves to take care of me...

kittu hit her head with her hand; arey pagal ...I came back to this world to complete my incomplete love story...not to complete my incomplete notes...

and don't worry..my studies wont effect...I can very well balance my studies n my marriage life...plz rishi..i want u be with u each n every second of my life

rishi smiled

rishi hugged her

rishi: ok my lord...ur wish will be completed..

kittu smiled

she to hugged him

rishi kissed her cheeks and her nose

he moved towards her lips

and placed his lips on her

she too allowed his tongue to enter into her mouth

kiss became intense

they both r enjoying the kiss

after lack of breath they both moved apart

they both looked at each other

kittu cant able to handle his gaze

she downed her eyes and hugged him

after some time

rishi told their families that they r ready for marriage

akki jiyu ahman pulled their legs for sudden change of decision

jiyu wishpered

jiyu:di...this is too much...ur mrg got fixed...then wat abt me

krits: ok don't worry..i vl talk

jiyu: di...I was joking...don't say anything here..please

krits didn't listen

krits: dadi...my mrg got fixed ..wat abt this idiot

jiyu to herself; jiyu ur gone...uff y cant u keep ur mouth shut..u locked ur horns with devil...now ur done

dadi smiled: u got gem like rishi...let jiyu to get

krits: wat if I say..she already found that gem by herself

dad n kittu parents: wat?

Jiyu closed her eyes n hided behind ahana

Bedi family r curious to know wat vl b kittu family reaction

Kittu; ha dadi..she already choosen her husband

Dadi: who is he

Kittu : wait

She pulled akki by holdng his ear who is hiding behind manpreet

Dadi: akki?'

Kittu nodded as yes

Dadi hold jiyu ears n pulled her

Dadi: jiyu I never expect this from u

She said sternly

All r tensed

Jiyu: dadi...woh ...she is stammering

Dadi laughed

Dadi: i vl definitely said no if person is some one else..bt he is akki...infact I already discussed with arun abt akki n jiyu match

All relieved

Jiyu hugged dadi

Jiyu; tq so much dadi

Jiyu n akki took elders blessings

Dadi: bt jiyu don't expect ur mrg to be done early...ur mrg will be only after ur studies

Jiyu: ok dadi...n im not in much hurry like kittu di

She made fun of kittu

Kittu:u...jiyu ki bachi..i wont leave u..

Jiyu started running ..kittu ran behind her

They started fighting

All enjoyed their cute fights

After that while jiyu busy with some work in her room

Akki back hugged her

Jiyu shocked

Jiyu; akki u? wat if any one c

Akki: no problem..i locked door

Jiyu: u idiot...y u locked door..wat if any one c

Akki: ha Its not good if any one c kissing u..so I closed it

Jiyu: kiss? No akki

Akki moved towards her

She went back

Jiyu: no akki

Akki: yar...hitler dadi agreed our mrg..cant u give gift in that happiness

Jiyu: hitler?

She glared at him

Akki: ok super good dadi..plz don't waste this valuable time na yar

Akki moved towards her n placed kiss on her cheek

On her forehead

And moved towards her lips

First jiyu hesistated bt later she too accepted his love and started responding

After lack of breath

They released their kiss

Jiyu hugged him

Jiyu: I love u akki

Akki smiled

Akki: love u too jiyu

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Posted: 6 years ago
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After some days

Kittu n rishi married

With elders blessings

That night

Rishi is in room

He is waiting for his angel

Rishi: omg y tanu is taking that much time

Rishi cool...its first night na...she is girl..it takes time

He is controlling himself

He is imagining tanu coming to him holding milk...n she wore white saree ..looking like angel

Rishi is moving towards her to kiss

He came out world with door sound

He was shocked

He saw tanu in short skirt n tea shirt

She was looking super hot

He cant able to control himself

He want to hug her tightly

He abt to rush to her ..bt something striked in his naughty mind

He want to tease her

She closed door

And came to him

She hold his face with her palms n abt to move towards his lips

Rishi; kittu

She was shocked

She didn't hear kittu from his mouth till now

Kittu; rishi wat happened..y u called me kittu...u call me as tanu na

Rishi: hmm crct..bt today I didn't feel to call u as tanu..ur looking as kittu only

He turned back side n smiled without knowing to kittu

Kittu; wat do u mean

Rishi: I mean...too look hot u r waering westeren dress..bt fr my tanu...saree is enough to look hot

Kittu got jealous

For an instance she forgot she is tanu

Kittu: mr rishi singh bedi...don't underestimate me..i vl look more hot in saree than tanu

Rishi: r u challeneging me?

Krits; ofcourse

By saying this she left the place

Rishi smiled

Rishi: o my tanu darling...u forgot ur tanu..n challenging that u look more hot than tanu..

After some time

Rishi is desperately waiting for his lady love

He heard door sound

He saw tanu in baby pink transparent saree showing her curves

Rishi boweled by her

She is looking super hot

With the lowest temperature he is sweating

She is coming towards him

( thu safar mera..thu hi meri manzil

Tere bine guzara yeh dil hai mushkil

Thu mera kudha, thu hi duwa mein shamil

Tere bina guzara yeh dil hai mushkil)

She raised her eyebrows

Kittu: now tell who is hot

Rishi: my answer wont change...tanu is always my ansr

She pouted her lips

She went towards window

And holded the grills

Rishii back hugged her

Rishi: Meri pyari pagali...u forgot ur tanu..n asking me that u look more hot than tanu.

Kittu bited her tongue n hit her head with her palm

Kittu: sorry rishi..i don't know y I behaved like that...from childhood onwards im like this..i want to b best for anything and that to for my loved ones

Rishi smiled

Rishi: whatever it is...im loving this yar..before u used to be calm..n I loved it...n now ur angry bird ..bt still im loving this..how luck am i..im able to c these many variations

Kittu smiled

Rishi: ok ...I waited so many years...now I cant wait

Kittu; I didn't told u to wait...I even didn't stoped u too

Rishi; I wont stop now

By saying this he took her in arms

And placed her on bed

He stared placing kisses on her face

She too kissed him

He caught her lips

They booth kissed each other like no tomorrow

He left her lips becz of lack of breath

He made her turn her back

He removed her dhori

He placed kisses on her bare back

She moaned with plessure

He turned her front

He placed kisses on her neck

He removed her pallu

And started kissing her

She removed his shirt buttons

He covered her both with blanket

They became together

They completed each other

After 2 years they blessed with baby girl

They named her as Natasha

Jiyu and akki married each other

They all lived happily for ever

Edited by honeyrosid-6 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#69
tq for each and every one who supported me and waited for me with so much of patience..love u guys..will be back in june with new tanshi story after my exams for sure
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Posted: 6 years ago
#70
i send pms ..bt link is not working guys..will try tomorrow mrng again

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