Tanshi ss:star crossed lovers completed pg9 - Page 4

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Rishi is gng towards some party venue

Man: bahi wr r u going

Rishi; I don't know chotu..i feel like coming here..lets go

They went inside

Kittu n jiyu went to party

Akki felt happie as jiyu came

He went n received them

He wishpered in kittu ears: y u came idiot...i called jiyu to talk personally

Kittu glared

Kittu: oy stupid...I came here as my jiyu asked me to come...don't do over action...

Ok im leaving

She abt to leave

Akki stopped her; arey yar I was joking..cant I tease my bestie

Kittu: don't cover up..u idiot...I know u called jiyu to confess ur love..if u do extras..i vl tell jiyu to reject

Akki folded his hands infrnt of him

Akki: meri maa..plz spare me

Kittu: hmm that's goods

Kittu; ok tell me how u decided to confess ur love

Akki; I decided to sing song n propose her infrnt of all

Kittu: wow cool idea

Then wat ur waiting fr go

Akki: ok u both stay here I vl come

Kittu n jiyu waiting

Some grp of guys saw kittu n jiyu

One guy; yar she is krits na

Another one: yeah

Guy: today vl c her..how dare she ..she slapped me infrnt of all in our clz

Another guy; she slapped u as u teased a girl very badly..wats wrong in that

Guy: idiot..y u r supporting her...wat ever..today I vl show wat vl happen if anyone mess with me

He saw weightier taking juices to them

He gave money n spiked the juices

Kittu n jiyu drank them

They started feeling slight drowsiness

N that time akki came singing song

Na jiya zindagi ek pal bhi
Tujhse hoke judaa sun zara
Bin tere mujhse naaraaz tha dil
Tu mila hai toh hai keh raha

Main toh tere rang mein
Rang chuka hoon
Bas tera ban chuka hoon
Mera mujhme kuch nahi sab tera

Main toh tere dhang mein
Dhal chuki hoon
Bas teri ban chuki hoon
Mera mujhme kuch nahi
Sab tera, sab tera.
Sab tera, sab tera

She got some flashes like dancing with some oneKittu heard that song

Her head is spinning

Akki came towards jiyu

He kneeled down infrnt of her

Akki: I love u so much jiyu...vl u marry me

Jiyu smiled

She nodded her head as yes

Akki felt so happie

He took her hand n kissed on her fingers

He kept ring to her

He asked for her to join hands for dance jiyu joined him

They started dancing

And all the couples who r in party joined

All started dancing

While dancing one couple unknowingly pushed kittu

She abt to fall

Some one hold her

Kittu looked at him

She was shocked seeing herself in known stranger hands

Kittu with stammering voice; uuu y ur coming again n again infrnt of me..i know ur my dream...y u r disturrrbing me...y I feel I knowww u already...plz don't confuse me go ...

U r not dreaming tanu...im real...he said .tear escaped frm his eyes

Kittu is shocked

Kittu: wat

She pinched herself ..ouch its paining...she saw him...she is inside his arms

Kittu: omg that means ur real...leave me she abt to push him

Don't try tanu...u know na u cant winover rishi...by saying this he pulled her more by holding her waist

He took her to the stage

rishi made her dance ..she danced looking into his eyes

Tere sang yaara
Khush rang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitara

O karam khudaya hai
Tujhe mujhse milaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai

O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitara

O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Main tera ho jaun
Jo tu karde ishara

Kahi kisi bhi gali mein jaaun main
Teri khushbu se takraun main
Har raat jo aata hai mujhe
Woh khwab tu.

Kittu again got flashes

she rembered some one filling her head line with sindoor...n tiening mangal sutr n taking pheras..n promising to each other that they wont leave each other

kittu hold her head

her eyes r closing

rishi got tensed

kittu pushed him

rishi abt to hold her

she again pushed his hands n rushed from there

even jiyu feeling drowsiness akki brought her aside n made her drink som water

rishi followed her

he missed her

kittu is abt to go

gang of guys came n stopped her

guy; arey sherni wr r u running

kittu: guys...im not feeling well ...just give me a way

she said holding her head

guy: omg im scared...

guy started acting

kittu got angry

guy is coming closed to her

kittu saw some spray there..she hit that on him

he started cshouting

she is abt to run

other guys hold her

kitu cant able to escape becz of alcohol effect

that guy is coming towards

her

kittu with half conscious: idiot don't dare to come towards me..if u come towards me...I don't know wat I vl do

bt still he is coming

he abt to place his hnd on her

he was stopped by strong hands

ofcourse he is our hero

rishi thrashed the guys

he rotten them in hell

by d time kittu became totally unconscious

rishi took her in his hands

man came to him

man saw her

he was shocked n same time felt happie

man: rishi bhai...mera bhabi...u found her bhai...wow...im so happie..bt wat happened to her

by that time akki came to them

he saw man n rishi

akki: u both here

he saw kittu

akki: omg krits..wat happened to her

rishi: akki do u know her

akki: ofcourse..she is my bestie kritika

rishi: kritika

man: nbhai that means in this birth tanu bhabi name is kritika..so nice..kriti n rishi...that means krishi..wow..i got ship name

rishi smiled at him

akki looked at him confusing: wat janm? Wat ship? Wat u both r talking

rishi: ye sab chod dho...tell do u know her house

..she had alcohol

Akki: uff I think some one spiked her juice even jiyu was unconscious

Man: ye charcter kaun hai

Akki blushed

Akki: woh woh

Rishi: yeh woh wo h kya hai

Man: bhai didn't u get ...that's y I say u buddu...akki is blushing

Rishi: hoo I got it

Akki: actually she is krits sis..im loving her frm 1 yr today only confessed..she to accepted

Man shouted

Man: bhai...then saali hai wo thera

Akki looked them confuseingly again

Man: uff don't give those expressions..i cant tell story to u now...first bring her v vl drop them in their home

Akki shouted: nooo

Rishi n man shocked : wat happended

Akki: if hitler sees them in this postion she vl kill me first

Rhe said with puppy face

Man: then wat v vl do now

Akki: lets take to our house

They agred

In car rishi made kittu to sleep on his lap

She slept peacefully

After they reached

He took her in arms n place on the bed

He placed kiss on her forehead n her cheeks

He spent entire night just looking at her

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Liked raj ahana encouraging rishi to bring back his tanu.liked krithika sharing her feelings with jiyu.that whole paragraph off dialogues were beautiful.like jiyu said krithika should not back out if she really loves him just to prove that rebirth n all is a superstition.rishi imagining tanu dancing...rishi dancing with tanu n kiss were romantic.their conversation was so emotional.like tanu said in rishi's dream that she has come back to u in real too tanu has come bak as krithika 4 him

Is this Dadi?