Tera Ishq Mera Junoon [TanShi FF] [Part 20 Page 28] - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: as55amol

very interesting concept,update soon

hello bro...
How are u???😃
Wo word for liking bro...
Will update ASAP..😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12
Haya...Where r u??? I'm waiting 4 ur update...😳...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: gopsss

Haya...Where r u??? I'm waiting 4 ur update...😳...

wo word yr for not updating...
But soon i will give u update...😳
May be on weekend...😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Waiting for updates 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinushi

Waiting for updates 😳

will give u soon...😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#16
Wo word for late guys...😛
Here's the update...😳

[Part 1]
[INTRODUCTION]


*morning*

Sun rays enters the room beautifully decorated...
white walls with some pictures of handsome boy on it...
there is no mess in the room...
Rays strikes a handsome face..
In sleep he remains curdling on the bed...due to disturbance in his sleep...
Suddenly alarm rings amd he wakes up with a jerk...
He is none other than Rishi Singh Bedi...handsomeness overloaded...

R: oh shit...i m late...mom...mommm...plzzz give me breakfast...i m already late...
Rano:(she has a positive character) it is prepared beta...come fast...i thought u will wake up on ur own...

Rishi comes running downstairs...
He sat on the table and finishes his breakfast...

R: mom i m going...
Rano: ok beta...have a good day...
R: same to u mom...

He leaves for the uni...
On the other hand...
the room is fully messed up...
A girl is sleeping on the bed...
Her mother comes with a bucket full of water and spilled it all on her...
She wakes up with a jerk...
And she is Tanu Shri...a tom boy girl...
Who is all time late...
But she dont even give it a damn...

T: mommm...
Sharda: wake up u lazy girl...i dont know what u will do in future...
T: ufff mom...plzzz let me sleep...future ki future mn dkhnge...

She sleeps again on the bed...but it is wet...she stands up again...

T: mom its all wet...mjhe sona hai...
S: beta i m ur mother...got it??? I know how to wake u up...now get up girl and be ready...mn tmhara intezaar kr rhi hon...2 min mn nhi aai to dekhna...
T: mommm...
S: no mom...

Sharda leaves the room...Tanu wakes up and get ready...
She have her breakfast and leaves for the uni...
Both TanShi at the same time reaches uni...

T: look today our book worm is also late...hahahaha...funny man...
R: and our nerd is always late...hahahah...not so funny man...
T: get lost...

They enters their class room...
teacher was already present...

R: ma'am may i come in...
M: why are u late today...and u miss Tanu Shri...u r always late...will u study like this...
T: ya i will study like this...u dont have to care...

ClAss fills with laughters...

M: shut up u all...and u miss Tanu...soon i will take u to the principal...
T: plzzz tell me date and time...
M: shut up and go to ur seat...
T: u r so loud...

Tanu goes to her seat...

M: Rishi u r first time late...thats why leaving u...but be careful next time...
R: thank u ma'am...i will

He also goes to his seat...
The lecture is over...
All leaves the class...except Rishi...
He is looking in his book...
When someone clicks fingers in front of his eyes...
Yes she is our goon...Tanu...

R (irked): what now???
T: book worm u dont have anyother work to do???
R: no...and u miss nerd u dont have anyother work to do...
Except coming behind me...
T: see i dont have any interest in u...got it???
R: means seriously???
T: ya...

Rishi gives a naughty smile...
He stands up and comes closer to her...
She steps back...he comes more closer...
She is continuously steping back...
And he is continuously coming closer to her...
Now there is no place to go backward..
Bcz she bumped in a wall...
He comes more and more closer to her...
Now only some mere inches are left between them...
Tanu closes her eyes...he bends his head...
making her to shiver...he holds her arms lifts her up a little...
And bends his head more and whispers in her ears...

R: looser...

And leaves her there shocked...
and goes out of the class room...
After sometimes she comes back to her senses...

T: usne kya kiya tha??? And what was that impact on me??? Leave it...jo bhi kiya but ek baat mn jaanti hon...k usne Tanu Shri ko challenge kiya...now u will pay for it mr. Rishi Singh Bedi...

Dany comes in the class room...

D: Tanu what are u doing here???
T: nothing yr...lets move...

They also leaves the class...

*lunch time*

T: yr is Rishi ko to lesson dena hai...wo bhi acha wala...
A (Ahana): q ab kya kiya usne???
T: kya kiya??? Wo hr wqt hi kuch na kuch krta rehta hai...
V (Vijay): hmmm Tanu is ri8...lets teach him a lesson...
D (Dany): so guys anyone have plan...
P (Priya): yes i have...

They all discuss the plan...

Vijay comes to Rishi...
Rishi is sitting with Manpreet and Abhay...

V: hey u all book worms...i need ur signs...
R: but why???
V: we are organizing a program and we need signs of our all class...and unfortunately u all book worms are in our class...
Ab (Abhay): ya ya whatever...
R: give me...

Vijay gives them pen and paper...they all signs it...
And gives back to him...
Vijay comes to Tanu...

V: here it is...
T: now u will see mr. Rishi Singh Bedi...

Rishi is looking at Tanu...

R (in heart): i know its u...but i want to see what u r upto...my babes...

A small smile escapes his lips...

*off time*

All goes home...

Precap: Rishi saves Tanu from accident...

Hope u guys liked it...
Do comment and hit the like ...😉
Edited by HayaZehra313 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17
I loved it hayu.❤️ Nice update👏
tanu is in a new role bikul hatke 😉n rishi has some feelings for her😳. N ur precap wow😛 so plz update soon i am waiting
Edited by Smita_rawat - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Smita_rawat

I loved it hayu.❤️ Nice update👏

tanu is in a new role bikul hatke 😉n rishi has some feelings for her😳. N ur precap wow😛 so plz update soon i am waiting

wo word for loving it lemon...😃
Ya our Tanu is a goon now...😆
Heee...😃wo word again...😳
Will try to update soon...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#19
[Part 2]
[A SAVIOUR]


*morning*

Rishi gets up and leaves for the uni...
On th other hand when Sharda comes to Tanu's room...
she was like...😲
Tanu was already woken up...and getting ready...

S: Tanu tu sudhar gai??? Tu jaanti nhi hai mjhe kitni khushi horhi hai...
T: oh mom...plzzz come on yr...u even dont know ur daughter...mn kbhi nhi sudhar skti...

She winked at her mom...😉

S: to phr tu aj itna jldi q uth gai??? Uni nhi jana kya aj???
T: arey mom...jana hai...but aj mn excited hon jane k liye...
S: Tanu tu ne phr kuch ulta kaam kiya hai na...
T: come on mom...ab hi to seedha kaam kiya hai...acha acha bye...mn chlti hon...

She leaves...

S: ufff God...is ne phr koi ulta kaam na kiya ho...

She reaches uni...
Everyone is like...😲

V: hey buddy...tum itna jldi kese agai??
T: chal kr...
V: abey...i was saying k tum aj jldi uth kese gai???
P: aj mom water bucket jldi le aai thin???
T: just shut up u idiots...aj to ana hi tha jldi...aj to scene hoga...
A: ya aj to fun day hai...
D: lets move guys...class start hogai...
T: han chalo...

They goes to their class...after sometimes principal comes in class...
All of them stands up to greet him...

Pr (Principal): sit down...

All settled down...principal shows some charts on which funny drawings of principal are drawn...
Whole class laughs out loud...

Pr: silence...or is k peeche apko pta hai kon hai???

Whole class is looking at Tanu and her group...

Pr: no ur guesses are wrong...its our star student...mr. Rishi Singh Bedi...

All are shocked now...😲

R: whattt????

*Tanu's flashback*

At ni8 their group comes to the principal's office with the drawings of principal...they signed the backside of charts with Rishi , Abhay and Manpreet's signs...and rubs them a little...
It was looking like someone signed it...then tried to erase the signs...
They all shared a group high five...
T: ab ayega maza...

*flashback ends*

Pr: what happened Rishi??? Shock lga??? Tb nhi lga tha jb ye hrkat ki thi...
R: but sir i didnt...
Pr: stop it Rishi...tum star student ho iska mtlb ye nhi hai k kuch bhi kroge...jo rules sb k liye hn...wohi tmhare liye hn...u will be punished...
R: but sir...
Pr: no but...and u two...Abhay and Manpreet...i want u also in my office...

He leaves the class...

T: ooo!!!!! Look our star student the nerd Rishi Singh Bedi did worst to the principal...now the book worm will be punished...
A: ooo!!! Thats so sad nerdy nerd...hahahhaa...

Tanu's group shares a high five...
Whole class is laughing on Rishi , Abhay and Manpreet...
Abhay whispers to Rishi...

Ab (Abhay): is this ur so called love???
Mp: hate u Rishi for loving her...
R: guys relax i will handle her...
Ab: ya ya...just like we dont know how u will handle her??
Mp: itne salon mn to kr nhi paya ab krega...
R: guysss...
Ab: khr leave it...hm q lr rhe hn???
R: sahi pehle is matter ko solve krte hn...
Mp: ya lets move to the princy's office...

They goes to principal's office...

R: sir may i come in???
Pr: yes come...
R: sir i want to apologise...
Pr: listen Rishi...whatever u say u will get punishment...
R: ok sir i m ready but dont give punishment to Abhay and Manpreet...they hadnt done anything...
Pr: ok...but inki punishment bhi tmhe leni pregi...
R: ok sir i m ready...
Ab: no sir...give our punishment to us...
Mp: yup we were with him...
R: no sir...i said na i m responsible...
Mp: but Rishi...
R: Manpreet chup...
Pr: ab tm logon ka hogya...Rishi if u r saying i will give u the whole punishment...Abhay and Manpreet...u can leave now...
Ab: but sir...
R: guys leave...

They both leave...

Pr: Rishi go and take round of the whole ground 20 times...
R: ok sir...

Rishi also leaves...

He is taking the rounds of ground...ground is very big...
He is continuously runing while someone is watching from far...ya she is Tanu...

T (in heart): i m sorry Rishi...i shoulnt had done this...ufff Tanu u have gone mad...but i did worst to him...ufff God help me out of this...

Thinking of Rishi she is unconciously moving towards him...
Rishi is taking the rounds...
Tanu is continuously moving towards him...
Suddenly he tripped from stone...
He was about to fall when someone holds his hand...
And he maintains his balance...
When he looks up he founds his love holding him...
He is lost in her...she is lost in him...
They share a deep and passionate eyelock...
Their precious moment is disturbed by Manpreet and Abhay...
Who comes there to see Rishi...
Tanu leaves after seeing them...

Ab: Rishi tu ne aisa q kiya???
Mp: yr apni halat dekh...
R: its ok guys...ye problem meri waja se create hui...to solve bhi mjhe hi krni thi na...and i m fine chill up guys...
Ab: yr Rishi...u r our jaan...

Abhay hugs Rishi...
Manpreet also joins them...
Trio shares a hug...

R: ok ok my senti girlfriends...lets move...i completed my punishment...
Ab: shut up idiot...
R: hahaha...chalo...

They leaves the place...

*off time*

Tanu is thinking about today's interaction with Rishi...
She is still lost in that moment...
Walking on side of the road..
she didnt noticed...but she unconciously comes on the center of the road...
A car is cmng from behind...driver was beeping the horn...
But lost Tanu didnt heard it...
She was still walking all lost in him...
When the car came near her...
Suddenly someone grabs her from her waist places the other hand on her eyes and pulls her aside...
In such a way that she collided with him...
And he almost back hugged her...
He is none other than her hero...Rishi...
She comes to her senses...
But when she tried to reveal the face of her saviour...
he didnt let her do so...and placed the hand on her eyes tightly...
He bent a little and whispers in her ears...

R: u will never see my face...its a challenge...

It creates a special sensation to her body...
She shivers under his touch...

R: u r my life...u r my breath...and i love u...

She slowly says...

T: who r u???
R: a mystery...ur hidden lover...

He gives a peck on her cheek...
Which makes her shiver...
He leaves her and disappears...

T: who is he??? His voice?? I think k mne kahin suni hai ye awaz...but i cant remeber...ufff God help me...who is he??? A mystery...or my mystery...

She goes to her house..totally confused...

Precap: Tanu's birthday party...

Hope u guys like it...
Do comment and hit the like...😳
Edited by HayaZehra313 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#20
Amazing updates both parts r amazing loved it just loved it😳
My god rishi love the way rishi save his love n that classroom scene step back step forward 😳 my god my heart skip while reading that 😳👏⭐️ words nahi hai hayu😳❤️ jaldi jaldi update kar can't wait😳 ...

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