Tera Ishq Mera Junoon [TanShi FF] [Part 20 Page 28] - Page 15

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: arya1210

wow tune itne sare updates de diye .

Foxi all parts are super .Tanshi wow finally rishi confess his love wo bhi nase ki halat mai . 😆 .All parts are super .No words .Tanu ki frd hi mere guess correct tha she is do all this for rishi .
plz jaldi update karna and wo word gor late comment

Aru...🤗
Ya baby mne itne sare update kr diye...😉
Wo word for loving babes...😳
Serious mn tune guess kr liya tha???😲
Thats so cool baby...butterfly intelligent hoti ja rhi hai...😉😛
Will update soon...InshAllah today...😳
Its ok...❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
Sorry guys for late...
Here is the update...
Enjoy...😳

[Part 14]
[SEGREGATION]

Their special moment was disturbed by his friend...
On seeing the num of that detective his facial expressions changed...
He excused himself and went on the corner...

"Hmmm...who's that??? "
He said in a low tone that only his friend can understand...

"Its...Priya..."
After taking a pause...
his friend said...

"Tanu's friend..."

His eyes widened on listening this...

"But why???"
He said all shocked...
Tanu was confused that why he is so tensed...

"Because of you..."
His friend said making him more shock...

"Me???"
He said in trauma...

"Yes she loves you...and she wanted you..."
His friend said and he became crazy...

"I wont leave her...who the hell she is to touch my Tanu???"
He said and anger was visible on his face and in his voice...

"But what will you do??? Kill her???"
His friend said lil bit confused that what he is going to do...

"I'll see...i'll tell Tanu..."
He said...

"She wont believe you..."
His friend said...
but it wasnt TRUE...
she believes him more than herself..
but that changed Rishi's mind...

"Then i will emancipate from her..."
He said sternly...

"What??????"
His friend was shocked on his reaction...
As he didnt wanted him to do that...
He just wanted him not to tell her...
thats it..
but what is he saying???
EMANCIPATE???

"Ya thats my final decision..."
He said now locking all the ways to be back in his mind...

"But..."
His friemd was about to say something...
When he cut him in between...

"No ifs...and no buts.."
He said now obstinately...
And his friend new him very well..
So he gave up...

"Ok!!!! As you wish dude...but be careful...
i dont think its a right decision..."
His friend said in order to make him understand that its wrong...
But he like a stubborn child doesnt agreed and...

"Hmm..."
Was just he said...
He disconnected the call...
Went towards her...

"I m leaving..."
He said coldly...
no expressions on his face...

"But why??"
She said making a pouty face...
Which didnt effect him...
Basically from outside...
but from inside it broke him in many pieces...

"I said i m leaving thats mean i m leaving...dont put your legs in my matters..."
He said lil bit loudly...
She was shocked on his reaction...
what happened to him...
A minute before he was saying her i love you...
hugging her...
And now...what happened to him???
Why he behaving like this...???
She cups his face...

"What happened Rishi??? Had i done something wrong???"
She said now with teary eyes...
Which he cant bear anymore...
He removed her hands...
And said...

"Its none of your business...i dont want tou near me...you are disgusting..."
He knew how he said that DISGUSTING word to her...
He left...
Left her alone...
She watched him leaving...

He entered his car...
she was looking at him from the window...
His sight fell on her sad and teary face...
And he just cant hold on...
He drove the car away...
While driving his tears were flowing...

"I dont hate you...i love you..."
He said now bursting into tears...

"One more time we are strangers...but now..."
He took a pause and then said...

"With memories..."

He stoped the car and rested his head on the stearing...

"Its awkward na...you find love when you least expect to...and you lose it when you are sure that its in your grasp..."
He said with tears flowing down his cheeks...

"Oh God!!!! The person which i never wanted to get hurt...i broke into many pieces...with my own hands...i hate myself for this...i hate myself for this..."
He repeated his last line...

There she ran to washroom...
Tears bursted out of her eyes...
She was enable to hold herself...
And sat on floor holding the door...

"See Rishi...your love which always makes me laugh...
Today it made me cry..."
She said in pain...

"Its amazing na...how can someone break your heart and you love them with every broken piece of it..."
She said...

"Million words will never bring you back i know because i tried...
Million tears will never bring you back i know because i cried..."
She wiped her tears...and said...

"You know...even if you left me na i wont be alone...
Beacuse this loneliness which you gave me will always be with me..."
She said clentching her teeth...
And then again bursted into tears...

And they segregated...
they emancipated...
They split up...
they broke up...
Due to that one person...
He was crying in his his car resting his head on stearing...
And she was crying in her washroom sitting beside the door...

Precap:not yet decided...

Hope you guys like it...
Enjoy reading...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
Wonderful update foxi👏..finally rishi knows about priya..but heart felt when he emancipated tanu😭..very touchy to myself..when they were crying I was also crying😭.. waiting for ur next update.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update Hayu👏!!!
Rishi came to know that Priya is d enemy of Tanu...
He feels angry as she is doing all these only to get him...
Oh Rishi decided to emancipate...
Oh TanShi separation...
Rishi left Tanu with heavy hearted...
Poor TanShi...
When they came closer once the destiny itself split off them...
I got teary while reading Foxi...
Loved it to the core...❤️.
Now waiting to know how TanShi comes out from this situation...as they can't stay away from each other...
Eagerly waiting for next part Foxi...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Tanshi 😭 broke up 💔
Tanu rishi convo😭
he left her crying😭 how difficult that was for him😭
Both r crying😭 shattered
All bcz of priyaa😡 I won't leave her 😭
What plan rishi upto😕
Amazinggg brilliant update hayu 👏
Very excited for next update soon😳
Edited by vinushi - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
so much pain 😭 tanshi .Asisa ku kiya uss priya ki tu .I am sure rishi is not going to leave tanu so easily .its all is part of hos plan .jaldi update kar mujhe priya ka band bajte hoye dwkhna hai
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Posted: 6 years ago
Wo word guys for not commenting to your comments indiviually...
I didnt had time...
And also updating this in haste...
But thank u sooo much for reading and liking...
I have read all ur comments...
Wo word for ur support...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
[Part 15]
[JUNOONIYAT]

She gathered her strength and stood up wiping her tears away...

"Will teach you a lesson Rishi Singh Bedi..."
She said now smiling like a devil...

She ran towards the place where she could find Rishi...
Rishi goes there whenever he is in tension...

"If he is there thats mean something or someone is making him to leave me...lets see..."

She murmured while walking...
She entered the garage of Rishi and saw him sitting on the bonut of the car...
With Manpreet and Abhay surrounding him...
She came closer...
Rishi lifted his head only to see angry young woman...

"How she knew that i m here???"
He said in heart...
Then gave a deadly glare to Abhay and Manpreet...
Giving them the death note...
Both shrugged their shoulders making him to believe they did nothing...

"I wanna talk to you..."
She said standing in front of him with arms folded over chest
..

"But i dont..."
He said now making her more angry...

She held his hand and pulled him...
With a sudden pull he cant balanced his body and jumped on ground...

"What the hell..."
He shouted...

But she didnt give him a damn and pulled him inside the garage where no one can see them...

She pinned him to the wall and stood in front of him...

"What is the matter???"
She said sternly...

"What matter???"
He said showing that he didnt understand...

"Why are you angry on me..."
She said now making a sad pout...
Which he cant bother...

"Nothing..."
He said turning his face on the other side...

"Rishi batao..."
Now she said lil bit loudly...

"Mne kaha na kuch nhi..."
He said more loudly than her...

She left a deep breath...
Came closer to him cupped his face and said...

"Rishi Singh Bedi tmne mera ishq dekha hai ab tak..."
After taking a pause...

"Ab tum mera junoon dekhoge..."
She said challenging him openly...
He was confused...he wanted her to hate me...
But she is not hating...
But saying these words...

"Jesa tumhara ishq tha wesa hi tumhara junoon bhi hoga..."
He said mocking at her in order to make her hate him...
But it didnt worked...

She came more closer to him...
Now their faces were mere inches away from each other...

"Dekh lena jesa mera ishq tha wesa hi mera junoon hoga..."
He felt her warm breath on his face which made him shiver...

She slide her hand in his pocket...
Picked the phone and then left him...

"Tanu give me my phone..."
He shouted at her...
And was coming to snatch it when her words made him halt in his position...
He became statue...

"Rishi dont come near me...or else i will kiss you..."
She said winking at him and warning him...
And he knew how she is...
So he thought its better to stay away...
He tried to see what she is doing...
But was unable...
She texted the number from which Rishi got a call to her cell phone...
Deleted the text from his phone...and gave him back...

"Thank u..."
She said smiling ear to ear...

He was staring at her in shock...

"Bye bye..."
She said leaving a kiss on the corner of his lips...
And he just became a statue...
She...Tanu kissed him...
He closed his eyes on her action...
After few seconds when he opened his eyes...
He found him alone in there...
She was gone after making this crazy step...

He touched the corner of his lips...
A smile escaped from his lips...

Abhay and manpreet entered...
And saw him standing like a statue caressing his lips and smiling widely...

Abhay came and shook him...
"Bro..."

He shouted breaking the reverie of his thoughts...

"Kya hua???"
They said...

"Nothing..."
He said and his cheeks became red...
Which widened their eyes...

"Bhai yahan kuch or hua hai..."
Manpreet said to Abhay...

And they started laughing loudly...
Rishi hit them and then the tiro shared a hug...

*-----*-------*--------*

"Hello..."
She said...

"Who's there..."
The person on the other side said...who was none other than Rishi's friend who was a detective...

"I m Tanu..."
She said...

"Tanu Shri????"
He questioned...

"Yes..."
She replied...

"Oh hello bhabhi...how r u???"
He said now recognizing her...

"Hi...i m fine..."
She said...

"How can i help u bhabhi??"
He said not knowing what is up coming...

"I wanna know the reason why Rishi is behaving so awkwardly after talking to u..."
She said sternly...

"I...i dont know.."
He got confused...

"Please tell me bro...you know its the matter of Rishi and mine life...please..."
She said insisting in a way he coulnt reject...

He told her everything that its Priya who is trying to kill her...
Rishi said he will tell you but i forbid him that you wont believe him...he is doing this to keep you safe...

After listening all the story she became hell shocked...

"Are you sure...its Priya???"
She said confirming...

"Hmmm...damn sure..."
He said...

"Ok then...we will see...and Rishi is so stupid...how he thought that i wont believe him...i believe him more than myself..."
She said cursing him...

"May God keep your couple always like this..."
He said admiring them...

"Thank u..."
Was all she said...

"Bye..."
He said disconnecting the call...

*------*--------*-------*

Precap:Tanu will see real face of Priya from her own eyes...
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Posted: 6 years ago
lovely update😳
tanu's sweet kiss
aur uski bad rishi ka woh confused look
ow mujhe to imagine karkei kitna accha lagraha hai 😳
😉

keep update soon dear😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: TearDrop50

lovely update 😳

tanu's sweet kiss
aur uski bad rishi ka woh confused look
ow mujhe to imagine karkei kitna accha lagraha hai 😳
😉

keep update soon dear😊

wo word moni...😳
Hehehhehe...i m glad that u liked that scene...😃
Will update soon dear...😃

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