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Achelvi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Awesome update... waiting for next part... thanks for PM

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mommyangel55

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Thank you so much for your lovely comments guys. Here is the 3rd part of my FF. Hope you all like it.

'Our Love Has No Boundaries'

It starts with Rishi walking towards the direction where Tanu was fixing the bulb.Rishi saw Tanu in the twinkling lights of the bulb and he get lost in her. A smile appeared on his face and he gets a sudden flash in his mind about him meeting with tanu. He feels strange about the flash and looks at tanu. Tanu wasn't able to fix the bulb and Rishi was moving towards the ladder. Tanu sees Rishi coming near the ladder. The moment she saw him in the twinkling light of bulb she keeps looking at him. Her hand was on the bulb and she jerks her hand with a sudden shock of bulb. Rishi comes too his senses.

Rishi:Mai theek kar deta hoon. Tum neeche aa jao and he forwards his hand towards her. Tanu looks at him and gives her hand to him. Their hand touches and they both get shock and due to the shock tanu falls from the ladder but Rishi holds her. They were too close to each other and they share a deep eyelock. Ajj Din Chadheya plays in bg...

Suddenly all the lights get off and the both were in the same romantic situation under that one twinkling bulb. They were so busy in looking at each other that they didn't notice that the hall was full of darkness

Their eyelock was interrupted by Ahana. She looks at them and gets shock as her Tans Di who never let any boy come near her is in the arms of some boy.

Ahana:Diii...

They both comes to their senses and Rishi puts Tanu down. They both again look at each other with a strange look.

Ahana:Dii...Dii tum dono itne andhere mei..

Tanu:Haan..vo...mai ye bulb theek kar rahi thi aur ye...

Rishi:Vo maine dekha ke is se bulb theek nahi ho raha tha to socha ke help kar doon

Ahana:Haan vo di achanak power supply chali gayi isiliye hall ki sari lights band ho gayi and then they both realise that the lights were all off. suddenly they here someone's voice as if someone dodge with somthing. It was manpreet. He dodges with the table

Manpreet:Oucchhh...yaar ye kitna andhera hai yahan pe. Rishi bhai aap yahan ho?

Rishi:Umm haan...haan chote mai yahin hoon. All the lights gets on. AhaMan sees each other

Ahana:Oye sukde tu yahan kya kar raha hai

Manpreet:Aee moti mai yahan apne Rishi bhai ko lene aaya hoon aur tum yahan kya kar rahi ho

Ahana:Mai yahan apni di ko lene aayi hoon

Manpreet:Ohh to ye tumhari dii hai helloo he forwards his hand towards tanu but she was looking at Rishi with strange looks. Rishi nods Manpreet in no.

Manpreet:Ab chalo bhai ke sara din yahin rehna hai and he holds Rishi's arm and takes him away

Ahana holds tanu's hand at takes her away. Both TanShi kept on looking at each other.

At Night

In Tanu's room

Tanu was continuously thinking about Rishi. She was feeling a strange connection with him.

Tanu:Ye kya ho gaya hai aaj mujhe. Kyun mai ussi ladke ke baare mei baar baar soch rahi hoon. Mai usse jaanti nahi phir bhi aisa lag raha hai jaise mai usse barso se jaanti hoon. Usse aaj pehli baar dekha lekin aisa lagta hai jaise mai usse pehle bhi dekh aur mil chuki hoon. Aisa lag raha hai jaise uske sath koi rishta hai mera par kya? Jo ladki kisi ladke ko apne aas paas nahi aane dete vo aaj ek ladke ke itni kareeb itne paas thi. Jis ladki ko aaj tak koi ladka choo nahi sakta tha aaj ek anjaan ladke ne usse itna kareeb se chu liya. Mai jo ladkon se itni nafrat karti hoon aaj kisi ki aankhon mei itna kho gayi ke mujhe kuch pata hi nahi chala ke aas paas kya ho raha hai

She looks at moon:Ae chand ab tum hi btao ye sab kya hai. Kyun ho raha hai ye mere sath. Ye kya ajeeb si kashamkash chal rahi hai mere mann mei. Aakhir kya hai ye?

Ahana comes:Kahin ye pehli nazar ka pehla pyaar to nahi hai na Dii

Tanu shocks and turns to Ahana

Tanu:Ahana tum...

Ahana:Haan dii mai kya hua itna kyun khoyi hai uss ladke ke khyaalon mei. Kya naam tha uska...

Tanu:Rishi...

Ahana:Woww di tujhe uss ladke ka naam bhi yaad hai haan. Ye to aaj chamatkaar ho gaya. Tu kisi ladke ke baare mei soch rahi hai. Kahin pyaar vyaar to nahi ho gaya

Tanu:Tu pagal ho gayi hai kya mai aur tans ko kisi se pyaar ho jaye vo bhi pehli nazar mei no never...

Ahana:Arre di kya kahin pehli nazar ka pehla pyaar to nahi hai

Tanu:Aisa kuch nahi hai tu chup kar.Tu to ache se jaanti hai ke mujhe pyaar word se bhi nafrat hai mai kabhi kisi se pyaar nahi kar sakti aur kal mai tujhe proof doongi

Ahana:Proof?
Tanu:Haan proof...

In Bedi house

In Rishi's room

Manpreet:Kya bhai jab se college se aaye ho bas is chaand ke saamne khade usse taade ja rahe ho. Kya hua hai aapko?Aaj se pehle to kabhi chaand ko dekhte nahi the aur aaj uss se chipak ke khade ho. Hua kya hai btao na...

Rishi:Chote kuch bahut hi ajeeb hua hai aaj. Aaj mai ek aisi ladki se mila jise maine aaj se pehle kabhi dekha hi nahi. Par aaj dekha to mai usse dekhta hi reh gaya. Uski aankhon mei ajeeb si kashish thi jiski vajah se mai uski taraf khicha chala gaya. Uski khushboo uss bulb ki jalti bujhti roshni mei uska vo chehra. Aisa laga jaise uss se zyada khubsurat iss duniya mei koi hai hi nahi. Jaise koi pari meri bahon mei thi aur mai sirf usse dekh raha tha aur vo mujhe. Usse dekh kar aisa laga jaise vo sirf mere liye bani hai. Aur aaj se pehle kisi ladki ke sath aisa feel nahi hua. Aur rahi baat chand ko dekhne ki to mujhe iss chaand mei uss ladki ki tasveer dikh rahi hai

Manpreet:Woww bhai aap kabse itne heavy heavy dialogs maarne lage. Vaise aapki uss khubsurat ka naam kya hai?
Rishi:Naam? arre yaar chote uska naam to pata hi nahi hai

Manpreet:Kya bhai app bhi jis ladki ke liye itne deep thoughts mei khoye hue ho uska naam bhi nahi pata

Rishi:To naam jaanne mei kitna time lagega. Kal sabse pehle uska naam jaanenge

Voice over says:Aaj ho gaya hai inn do premiyon ka milan aur aaj hi dono khoye hue hai ek dusre ke kyalon mei. Koi rishta nahi hai inka lekin phir bhi ek rishte mei bandhe hue hai. Aaj bhi janmo ke baad ek dor ne dono ko jod rakha hai. Ab dekhna dilchasp hai ke inki dusri mulaqaat mei kya hota hai.

Next Part:TanShi meeting in the college and Rishi sees Tanu slapping a boy

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Divya333

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Nice update...Tanshi meeting is nice...very well written especially dialogues... Loved dialogues n that voice over is simply awesome... Waiting for next update

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Achelvi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Completely loved it...awesome as always...waiting for next update

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Anjaan_09

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Posted: 7 years ago

#45

TanShi first meeting and that characteristics eyelock. Loved it completely.

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mohsin.gamer33

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Posted: 7 years ago

#46

SUPERLY WRITTEN FANSTASTIC UPDATE LOVING EVERY BIT OF IT 👏👏👏 TANSHI

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arya1210

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Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Wow wonderful update.Tanshi meeting .And both tanshi is in love with each other .Love manshi and ahana tanu binding.Rishi finding tanu face in moon was so beautiful.

Intresting precape plz update soon.Thanks for pm

Edited by arya1210 - 7 years ago

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MUNAZZA - SHAHID MALIK HUSSAIN

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Posted: 7 years ago

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👏 👏 buhat buhat buhat zayada acha likha hai moyu I am in just love with your story amazing bhai kab sy khary chaand ko taarty ja rhy ho made me laugh 😆 I am again saying kash ye epi tv pr laga hota kitna maza ata cv sy bhi acha likha 👍🏼 please update soon thanks for PM

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cuteariya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#49

Wow tanshi finally met & their meeting was really amazing

Both couldn't understand the connection between them

Tanshi were so lost in each other they didn't know the light went off

Ahaman came their then tanshi came back in sense

Loll ahaman start their tom & jerry fight but tanshi couldn't take their eyes from each other

Even at home tanshi were thinking abt each other tanu was so confused abt her behavior

As she never let any boy come near her but she got so close to rishi

Hope tanshi will find their way to each other

Continue plz

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mommyangel55

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Thank you very much for your lovely comments guys. I am so glad that you are liking my ff. Keep showering your love. Here we go with the fourth part.

'Our Love Has No Boundaries'

At morning in Bedi house

Manpreet tries to wake up Rishi

Manpreet:Rishi bhai utho yaar kitna soyoge dekho time kya hua hai

Rishi still in sleep:Tu aaj itna jaldi uth gaya. Ab tu uth gaya hai to mujhe to sone de and he turns his side on bed

Manpreet:Arre bhai mujhe koi shaunk nahi hai subah jaldi uthne ka vo to mai aapke liye utha hoon. Rishi still doesn't wake up and manpreet hits him with pillow. Rishi gets irritated and hits manpreet with a pillow and goes to sleep again

Manpreet furious:Theek hai sote raho mat utho. Phir mujhe mat bolna ke aapki maina ko koi aur tota uda ke le gaya

Rishi wakes up hurriedly:Arre haan yaar aaj to uska naam janna hai mujhe aur tu khote de puttar mujhe itni der sone kyun diya

Manpreet:Arre bhai itni der se aapko isiliye utha raha tha lekin aap ho ke...

Rish icups his face:Arre sorry chote kaan pakad ke sorry vhal ab mai shower le ke aata hoon aur jaldi college chalte hai

At Dining Table

Rishi and manpreet were having their breakfast hurriedly

Rishi while eating:Chal chal chal jaldi kar chote aur kitna khayega jaldi kar

Manpreet too while eating:Arre bhai haan kha raha hoon abhi to shuru kiya hai

Beeji hits them both:Oyee khoton itni jaldi kya padi hai tum dono ko jo itni tez kha rahe ho kaunsa hathi ya bhoot tum logon ke peeche laga hai

Manpreet:Arre beeji bhoot nahi bhai ka dil peeche laga hai

Beeji:Kya?

Rishi covers manpreet's face:Kuch nahi beeji ye to pagal hai aise hi bolta rehta hai. Chal ab breakfast ho gaya ab chalte hai and they leave

In car

Manpreet:Bhai vaise to aap beeji se har baat share karte ho lekin aaj kyun nahi bataya

Rishi:Chote agar mai beeji ko btata ke mujhe ajeeb si feelings aa rahi hai to vo to has padti na mujhpe. Unhe to yakeen hi nahi hota ke mere jaisa ladka kisi ek ladki pe tik sakta hai. Aur vaise bhi chote abhi mujhe khud pata nahi hai ke kya ho raha hai mere sath.Zaroori thodi na hai ke mujhe pyaar ho gaya ho arre attraction bhi to ho sakta hai na

Manpreet:Hmm baat to aapki sahi hai bhai chalo kuch dino mei pata chal jayega aapko ke ye attraction hai ya pyaar

In Singhania house

Tanu was having her breakfast calmly

Ahana:Di tu itne araam se kaise kha rahi hai?Pehle tune taiyaar hone mei itna time laga diya ab dheere dheere kha rahi hai hum college ke liye late ho rahe hai di

Tanu:Ahana mai Tans Singhania hoon aur mujhe jo acha lagega mai vo karungi. Tujhe late ho raha hai na to tu ja

Ahana:Par dii...

Yuvraaj comes there

Yuvraaj:Arre tanu tumhe jana nahi hai kya college. Itna late ho gaya hai

Tanu:First of all bhai aap jaante hai ke ek aap hi hai jo mujhe Tanu bula sakte hai and the second thing is that Tans ko late jana pasand hai to vo late jayegi aur usse koi kuch nahi keh sakta. Vaise mera breakfast ho gaya ha to ab hum ja sakte hai

Tanu and Ahana hugs Yuvraaj and leaves

Yuvraaj:Mai jaanta hoon Tanu ke ye attitude ye ego jo tum dikhati ho vo sirf ek dikhava hai sabse apna dard chupane ka. Andar se tum bilkul akeli ho. I wish ke tumhari zindagi mei koi aisa aa jaye jo tumhare akelepan ko door kar de aur tumhare dard ko pyaar se mita de

Rishi was desperately waiting for Tanu in college ignoring all the girls behind him

Rishi:Arre chote vo abhi tak aayi kyun nahi yaar

Manpreet:Arre bhai relax aa jayegi na and he was flirting with the girls

Rishi shakes his heaf:Tu inke sath time pass mei laga reh

Rishi sees Tanu's car arriving and smiles broadly. His heart starts to beat fast and he don't know why was it happening

Tanu steps out from the car with Ahana. She starts to walk and sees Rishi and stops. They both shares an eyelock and keeps looking at each other. Tanu smiles unknowigly. As they both were looking at each other their heartbeat was getting even faster. O soniyooo plays in the bg...

Ahana sees TanShi and shakes Tanu. Tanu gets alert

Ahana:Di kya hua abhi to college mei enter hui hai aur abhi se shuru ho gayi

Tanu:Aisa kuch nahi hai ahana maine pehle bhi tujhse kaha tha

Ahana:Haan tumne to ye bhi kaha tha ke tum aaj mujhe proof dogi ke tumhare dil mei uske liye koi feelings nahi hai

Tanu:Haan doongi zaroor doongi

Tanu walks towards Rishi's direction and rishi smiles. Tanu comes near Rishi. Rishi forwards his hand but tanu passes by him. Rishi looks on..

Tanu hits with a boy

Boy:Oh you mai tumhe hi dhoondh raha tha. Actually mujhe kehna tha that I love You. Mujhe pehli nazar mei h tumse pyaar ho gaya tha. So...

he holds Tanu's hand and bend on his knees and offers her a Rose

Boy:Will you be my girlfriend? Rishi feels jealous

Tanu:Will you please stand up once?I'll give you the answer

The boy stands up and tanu slaps him hard and throws the rose on his face

Tanu looks at Rishi

Tanu:Tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe hath lagane ki. Aaj tak koi meri permission ke bina mujhe hath nahi laga sakta aur tumne mujhe hath lagane ki galti ki hai. Aaj pehli galti thi isiliye mai zyada kuch nahi kahungi tumhe kyunki vo kya hai na ke tum jaise idiots ke sath waste karne ko mere paas time nahi hai. Lekin next time agar tumne mujhe touch karne ki koshish bhi ki to vo haal karungi tumhara ke kisi aur ladki ke layak nahi rahoge.

She said all this indicating Rishi and Rishi understood this. Tanu leaves from there

Manpreet:Arre bhai aap iss ladki ka naam jaanna chahte ho. Kal to aapne ise girne se bachane ke liye touch kiya to aise bhadak gayi. Aap to iss se friendship karna chahte to socho aapka kya haal karegi. Bhai mai to bolta hoon chodo isse

Rishi:Nahi chote ab to isse bilkul nahi chodunga. Ab tu mujhe isme aur interest ho gaya hai. Ab agar Rishi Singh Bedi ko kuch chahiye to ye ladki chahiye aur kuch nahi. Isse to mai apna bana kar hi rahunga chahe jo ho jaye

Manpreet:Par bhai aap socho to sahi isme kitna ego attitude bhara pada hai aapko apne paas bhi nahi aane degi ye

Rishi:Hmm ego attitude to hai par chote tune uski aankhon mei vo pyaar vo kashish nahi dekhi jo maine dekhi hai.Yaar is ego aur attitude ke peeche iska ek pyaara sa dil chupa hai jisme pyaar hai. Tune dekha nahi mujhe dekhte hi vo vaise hi ruk jati hai jaise mai ruk jata hoon. Ho na ho ye bhi mujhe like karti hai

Ahana comes from behind

Ahana:sochna bhi mat ke meri di tumhe pasand karegi.Kabhi nahi abhi tum usse jaante hi kahan ho. Use ladkon se nafrat hai

Manpreet:Aee moti tum to chup hi raho samjhi tumhe nahi patana hai tumhari di ko patana hai aur vo to mere rishi bhai yun pata lenge

Ahana:Oyee sukde tu meri di ko nahi jaanta. Kahin aisa na ho ke meri di ko patate patate tera bhai khud pat jaye

Rishi:Hmm interesting. Vaise naam kya hai tumhari di ka

Ahana:Ohh naam bhi di se hi jakar pooch lo. Chalo itni si baat ke liye tumhe kyun pitvana mai btati hoon meri di ka naam hai tanu singh...sorry tans singhania

Rishi:Pehle tanu kyun bola?

Ahana:Kyunki meri di ka naam tanu hai lekin galti se bhi usse tanu mat keh dena varna tumhari haalat bigaad degi vo. Usse jab bhi bulana tans bulana. Usse nilkul pasand nahi hai ke koi usse tanu kahe and ahana leaves

Rishi:Oh to miss madam hitler ka naam tanu hai hmm nice name

Manpreet:Arre tanu nahi bhai tans...tans bulao varna aapka huliya bhi uss ladke ki tarah hi bigaad degi

Rishi:Nahi chote mai to usse Tanu hi bulayunga. Dekhte hai kitna chidti hai

Rishi reaches his class and sees Tanu. Tanu too sees him. Rishi slowly forwards to his bench but then thinks to tease tanu. He comes to her and sits near her. Tanu shocks and stands up

Tanu:How dare you? Tumhari himmat kaise hui mere paas aakar meri bench pe baithne ki

Rishi:Tumhari bench?Excuse me...iss bench pe tumhara naam nahi likha hai to mai jahan chahe baith sakta hoon

Tanu:Tans jis cheez ko choo le vo uski ho jati hai

Rishi:Acha? And he holds her hand. Tanu looks in shock and slaps him thinking Ahana's words of loving Rishi but the slap wasn't that hard

Rishi smiles: Ab to tumne mujhe bhi choo liya to matlab ab mai tumhara hua na

Tanu widens her eyes and leaves from there angrily

Rishi calls her:Tanuuu...

Tanu shocks and turns to him

Rishi:Tanu choone ke liye thank you and points at his cheek

Tanu:Tumhe kaise pata ke mera naam Tanu hai? Aur tumne mujhe iss naam se kyun bulaya. Mera naam tans hai

Rishi:Arre kya yaar kabhi bolti ho tanu ho kabhi bolti ho tans ho. Pehle decide kar lo na ke kaunsa naam hai tumhare

Tanu irritatingly:Dono mere naam hai par tum mujhe tanu nahi bulayoge

Rishi:Arre aise kaise nahi. Dono tumhare naam hai to meri marzi mai tumhe jis naam se bulana chahun bulaunga

Tanu irritates:Ughhh...and leaves from there

Rishi laughs:Chote tere bhai ka jadoo jaldi hi chlega

Voice over says:Kya dilchasp kahani ki shuruaat ki hai kismat ne. Ek sata raha hai aur dusra tang aa raha hai. Kitna ajeeb hai ke janmo se bandhe ye sathi aaj ek dusre ko pehchaan bhi nahi pa rahe par dil mei kahin na kahin ek dusre ko jaante hai. Ek aage bhaag raha hai to dusra uske peeche bhaag raha hai. Dekhna ye hai ke kisko kya milta hai

Next Part:Welcome party celebration preparations in college. TanShi do the preparations and Rishi continously teases Tanu

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