TanShi FF-'Our Love Has No Boundaries'- Part 5 updated page 9 - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovely build up to the story. Thank you very much Mommy for updating and sharing it. Please keep on updating it, will be waiting.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved it...tks for PM...waiting for next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Omg yar what a mind blowing interesting start kash ye tv pr chal rha hota or lead pair krasha Ahaman to maza a jata but I imagine while reading buhat maza ata please next update sooner I am excited to see next part 😃 Thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Kasam season 2. So different.. I like it.
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Its Fantastic lovely writing new feel differnet and fresh👏👏 ... ( send it to cvs if you can never mind they will screwed this up too 🤣)
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Nice update... Loving all the characters... Waiting for next update
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Love the first part ayu.Tanu is totally different from the story.Love this new bold tanu.Rishi is same . Eagerly waiting for next part.Plz update soon.Can't wait more to see tanshi in this form.(with tans)Thx for pm
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If shown on TV,how beautiful it would be with our krasha,I even can't imagine.. Please update next part sooner dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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brilliant starting
loll manshi & their naughtiness 😆
beeji know how to wake them up 😈
oops tanu is really rude but her families knew the reason of her rude behavior 😭
only Abhishek know how to handle tanu 🤗
lets see how tanshi will meet & what their reaction would be
continue plz
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you so much for the lovely comments guys. Here we go with the second part of the ff. Hope you all like it.
'Our Love Has No Boundaries'
In College
Rishi and Manpreet enters the college. They step out from the car. Rishi removes his shades. Everyone look at Bedi bros. Girls falls for Rishi the moment they saw him. Many of the girls come around Rishi and Rishi starts flirting with them.Manpreet takes the opportunity and starts flirting with a girl but she shows no interest in him and eyes on Rishi. Manpreet feds up and leaves from there. Rishi sees this and goes behind him leaving all the girls.
Rishi:Hmm to kya hua chote?
Manpreet:Kuch nahi bhai. Humne to socha tha hum sabhi ladkiyo ke sath milke flirt karenge par aap to akele hi shuru ho gaye
Rishi:Ab kisi ladki ko tu pasand nahi aaya to isme mai kya karoon
Manpreet looks at him angrily and turns his face
Rishi:Acha sorry. Arre pagal ye jo itni saari ladkiyon ke number maine liye hai usme se aadhe tu le lena aur aish karna
Manpreet excitedly: Sachi bhai sachi mei mujhe number doge
Rishi:Haan chote tere liye kuch bhi chal ab class ka time hone wala hai
Rishi and manpreet meets with one of their friends in the college

On the other side Tanu's car stops and she stepped out of the car. As she steps in the college wind starts blowing. Tanu feels the wind and felt something strange. On the other side as tanu stepped in Rishi too feels the same feeling. They both start walking looking here and there as if finding someone but don't know who
Tere liye hum hain jeeye plays in the bg...

TanShi comes at opposite side of each other and their feeling got stronger and their heart starts to beat more fast as they were so close to each other.There faces were opposite to each other. Both turns and was about to see each other when Manpreet comes in front of Rishi and Ahana turns Tanu's face to herself.
Manpreet:Bhai kya hua yahan kyun ruk gaye chalo abhi class mei jana hai
Rishi:Haan...haan chote chal chalte hai but he was still feeling strange

Ahana:Dii kya hua kise dhoondh rahi hai
Tanu:Han...vo...kisi ko nahi chal hume class attend karni hai
Tanu and Ahana starts to walk towards the class. Boys sees tanu and get mesmerized. Some collides with each other and some fall on the floor. Even girls started feeling jealous to her.
Ahana:Di dekh ladke kaise taad rahe hai tujhe. Jaise kabhi koi ladki hi nahi dekhi
Tanu:Dekhi hogi par tans jaisi nahi dekhi hogi. Dekhne de vaise bhi mujhe ladkon mei koi interest nahi hai. You know na..
Ahana:You hate boys. I know
Tanu:Correct

Rishi was already sitting in the class talking with his friends. As Tanu entered the class one of his friends sitting on the back to him turns him and they both couldn't see each other once again but once tanu entered the class they both feels the same strange connection. Tanu looking here and there sits on the bench which was on front to Rishi. As she sits Rishi looks forward feeling strange. Their heart beat once again gets faster.

Teacher enters the class and introduce himself to the students. Then he starts taking introduction of the students. Tanu's turn comes. She stands up.
Tanu:My name is tan...tans singhania. Rishi feels her voice as familiar. Her voice sooths his ears
Then comes Rishi's turn
Rishi:Hello sir!! I am Rishi Singh Bedi. Tanu too finds his voice familiar and rishi's laugh echoes in her ears. She felt strange but ignores her thoughts. The class finishes and all students went out of the classroom.
Manpreet:Bhai mai abhi aata hoon
Rishi:Kahan ja raha hai tu chote?
Manpreet:Arre bhai samjha karo washroom...washroom...
Rishi:Acha ja

Ahana:Dii mai abhi aati hoon mujhe meri friend se milna hai
Tanu:Acha ja
AhaMan walks in same way. As manpreet was in hurry and they both collide with each other
Ahana:Abey oyee andhe dikhai nahi deta tujhe kitni zor se takra gaya
Manpreet:Aee andha kisko bola re.Andhi hogi tu kyunki tu mujhse takrayi thi
Ahana:Lo bhai aaj kal sukde tillon ko bhi college mei admission mil jati hai
Manpreet:Haan agar tum jaisi moti bhens ko mil sakti hai to mujhe kyun nahi
Ahana:Oyee sukde moti kisko bola
Manpreet:Aee moti tu kisko sukda boli
Ahana:Tujhe boli mai kya kar lega
Manpreet:Aur mai bhi tujhe bola tu kya kar legi and they both starts to fight with each other
Rishi sees them and comes and stops manpreet
Rishi:Chal chote kyun lad raha hai
Manpreet:Bhai chodo mujhe mai iss moti ko chodunga nahi
Ahana:Le jao iss sukde ko varna pitega aaj ye mujhse
Rishi:Haan...haan and rishi takes manpreet away
Ahana:Sukda kahin ka...

Manpreet:Bhai chodo mujhe. Ye moti kahin ki
Rishi:Ab chod usse chal kuch khate hai bhookh lagi hai mujhe
They both goes to canteen. Rishi sees some hot girls there and starts flirting with them
Rishi to a girl:Hey gorgeous wanna join for a coffee today
Tanu comes there and sees Rishi flirting with the girls but couldn't see his face as his back was towards her.
Tanu:Dekh ahana issi liye mujhe ladke nahi pasand. Inka ek ladki se kabhi pet nahi bharta isiliye do chaar aur phansate hai taki inhe koi kami na mehsoos ho lekin ladkiyon ke dil ke baare mei kabhi nahi sochte and she leaves from there

Principle calls tanu
Tanu:May I come in Sir?
Principle:Yes Tans please come
Tanu:Aapne mujhe bulaya sir
Principle:Yes tans. Actually i want to discuss something with you. As you know ke hum har saal passed and new students ke liye ek welcome party organize karte hai so mai chahta hoon ke iss year ki party ko organize karne mei tum help karo as i know your choice is very good. Are you ok with it Tans?
Tanu:Of course sir why not. I'll surely help you
Principle:Ok tans so start the preparations today
Tanu:Yes Sir

Tanu went to the hall and on the lights. One of the light starts flashing. Tanu takes the ladder and climbs to check the light. Rishi was passing from there when he sees someone trying to fix the light from window. He stares at the girl and slowly went towards the door.

Voice over says:Hone ja raha hai in do premiyon ka milan. Ab aage ye dekhna hai k ek dusre se milne ke baad kya naya mod aata hai inki prem kahani mei

Next Part:TanShi meeting and they can't stop thinking of each other

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