TanShi FF-'Our Love Has No Boundaries'- Part 5 updated page 9 - Page 2

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Lovely concept Mommy, waiting eagerly for new update.
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Thank you so much guys for all your lovely comments. Here I am presenting you the first part of my FF. Hope you all give it your appreciations.
'Our Love Has No Boundaries'

In Bedi House
Sharda was doing her daily routine. She does the aarti and give prasad to everyone. Then she goes to prepare the breakfast. She prepares the dining table. Veerendra comes to for the breakfast. Beeji also comes there. Both take beeji's blessings.
Beeji:Sharda puttar vo tere dono nawaab kahan hai. Itna waqt ho gaya abhi tak neeche nahi aaye.
Sharda:Beeji aap to ache se jaanti hai aapke dono pote kaise hai jab tak koi unhe jaakar utha na de tab tak nahi uthte hai
Beeji:Tu ruk mai abhi utha ke laati hoon khoton ko and beeji leaves
Veerendra:Ek beeji hi hai jo in dono ko ache se samajhti hai varna vo khote kisi ki samajh mei kya aate hai

In Rishi's room
His room was all messed up and they both were sleeping peacefully on bed and it was 10 o'clock already. Beeji comes and sees them sleeping
Beeji:Dekho to khote kahin ke kaise phail ke so rahe hai. Inko to waqt ka andaaza hi nahi hai.
Beeji shouts:Bhookanppp...Bhookanppp...
Both ManShi got scared and wakes up and starts shouting bhookanp...bhookanp... Beeji starts laughing. They both look at beeji
Beeji:Hmm kyun mere lal pyaaron ho gayi tum dono ki neend poori
They both sit on the bed irritatingly
Manpreet:Kya beeji ye kya tareeka hai uthane ka. Abhi hume heart attack aa jata to
Rishi:Aur kya...
Beeji hits both on head:Oyee khoton agar seedhe se aake tum logon ko uthati to tum uthte kya.Aur ab tum log beeji ko good morning kehne ki jagah aise baat kar rahe ho. She makes a pouty face
ManShi:Awww beeji and they both kiss her on cheek
Beeji smiles:Acha ab jaldi se utho aaj tum dono ke college ka pehla din hai aur pehle din hi late jaoge to principal tum logon ko leta dega.Chalo ab utho
They goes to take shower and then comes down on dining table
Rishi:Good morning mom...morning papa ji
Sharda:Morning beta. Vaise aaj itna jaldi kaise uth gaye tum dono
Rishi:Vo kya hai na mom humne socha ke aaj college ka pehla din hai to pehle din late ja ke apna reputation thodi na kharaab kara hai
Beeji holds his ear:Acha aisi baat hai na to chalo ab dono jaldi se khana kaho aur college ke liye nikal jao
They both take their breakfast
Manpreet:Bhai jaldi chalo college mei hot hot ladkiyan humara wait kar rahi hongi
Rishi:Hmm tension mat le chote tere bhai ke jaate hi sab apni taraf aa jayengi
Beeji comes and hits them from behind
ManShi:oouuuchhh...

In Singhania House
Rano was at dining table. Raj comes there
Rano:Good morning ji
Raj:Good morning rano...
Yuvraaj and neha comes there and takes their blessings and wishes them good morning. All sit for breakfast.
Raj:Arre Rano vo ahana aur tanu kahan hai
Rano:Ji vo dono college jaane ke liye taiyaar ho rahi hai
Raj:Lekin taiyaar ho rahi hai itne waqt se
Rano:Ahana to taiyaar ho gayi hai lekin aap tanu ko to jaante hai usko taiyaar hone ko kitna time lagta hai aur koi usse kuch bole to tauba hai...
Raj:Humari tanu dil ki bahut achi hai bas vo apna pyaar kisi ke saamne dikhati nahi
Yuraaj:Haan papa ji bas humari uss ek galti ki vajah se... and all gets sad

Here Tanu is getting ready (Just imagine the scene of Kabhi Khushi Kabhi gham where pooja was getting ready)
Ahana comes to tanu
Ahana:Dii aur kitna time lagega tujhe already 2 ghante se taiyaar ho rahi hai aur mai dekh 15 minute mei taiyaar ho gayi hoon.
Tanu turns to Ahana and she was looking beautiful.A modern girl of todays world.
Tanu:Wo is liye ahana madam kyunki mai tumhare jaisi nahi hoon boring si. Mai sabse alag hoon sabse unique hoon. Koi bhi ladki mere jaisi nahi ho sakti
Ahana:Haan jaanti hoon Tanu di par... Tanu stops her in middle
Tanu:Kya kaha tune mujhe?Tanu di... Kitni baar bola hai tujhe maine ahana k mujhe is behan ji vale naam se mat bulaya karo. Mera naam Tans hai tanu nahi. Pata nahi kya soch ke mom dad ne ye tanu mera naam rakh diya
Ahana:Acha sorry tans ab chale hume college jana hai
Tanu smiles and they both comes at dining table
Tanu and Ahana wishes everyone good morning. Tanu hugs yuvraaj and they sits for breakfast
Tanu sees aloo paranthe on the table
Tanu angrily:What is this? Aapne ye kya banaya hai mom
Rano:Beta ye aloo ke paranthe hai
Tanu:Vo to mujhe bhi dikh rahe hai par aapne ye kyun banaye hai
Rano:Khane ke liye beta
Tanu irritates:Ugghhh..mom mere kehne ka matlab hai ke aap ache se jaanti hai ke mai ye sab nahi khati phir bhi aapne ye banaye
Rano:Oh sorry sorry beta mai to bilkul hi bhool gayi thi. please beta aaj tu ye kha le kal se main tere pasand ka hi khana bnaungi
Tanu:What?What you mean?Mai...mai tans ye sab khau. No ways aap kya chahti hai ki mai ye sab khayun n mera figure kharaab ho jaye. Sorry mai ye nahi khaungi aap sab log khaiye mai ja rahi hoon college
Rano:Arre beta meri baat to sun na...
Ahana:Mom jaane do aap to jaanti hai ki di kisi ki baat sunne to vali nahi
Abhishek comes there
AK:Sivaaye mere. He takes raj and rano's blessings
AK:Hmm tanu mere alaava kisi ki baat nahi sunegi. You don't worry aunty mai usse kuch khila doonga pakka
Ak calls tanu:Tanu...tanu
Ahana comes to him:Ye kya kar rahe ho di ko tanu nahi tans bulao vrna tum par bhi bhadak jayengi
Ak:OH sorry...Tanss..tanss... chlo college ke liye late ho rahe hai
Tanu comes down and hugs abhishek.
Ak:Woww you are looking beautiful
Tanu:Well thank you...
Ak:Aaj to college ke sab ladke tumhe dekh kar hi mar jayenge
Tanu irritatingly:Acha hai mar jayein at least duniya se kuch ladke to kam honge. I just hate boys

In Bedi House
Beeji:khoton jab dekho tab ladkiyon ke peeche pade rehte ho. Kabhi to koi dhang ki baat kar liya karo
Manpreet:Arre beeji aap samajh nahi rahe agar aaj college mei hum dono ko koi ladki pasand aa gayi to shayad vo iss ghar ki bahu ban jaye and laughs
Rishi:Bahu...what rubbish shadi aur abhi no ways. Aur rahi baat ladki pasand aane ki to RSB kisi ko pasand nahi krta sab RSB pe marte hai
Beeji:Lekin puttar agar aaj aisa kuch ho ke tujhe koi aisi ladki mil jaye jise dekh kar tu dekhta hi reh jaye aur tujhe uss se pyaar ho jaye to...
Rishi:Hmm beeji agar aisa hua na to mai uss ladki se poori shiddat se pyaar karunga. Uske naam apni poori zindagi likh doonga.Uske alaava kisi ladki ko apne paas tak nahi aane doonga. Itna pyaar karunga usse ke vo apne sare dard bhool jayegi aur yaad rakhegi to sirf mujhe aur mere pyaar ko

In Singhania House
Ak:But tans...agar tumhe koi mile jis se tumhe pyaar..
Tanu:Pyaar...its all rubbish. Pyaar sirf films ya phor books mei padhne se acha lagta hai.Real life mei pyaar ki koi value nahi hai. Aur vaise ladkon ko sirf dil todna aata hai pyaar krna nahi. Vo log sirf ladkiyon ko use krte hai apne matlab ke liye aur jab unka matlab poora ho jaye to unhe chod dete hai. Pyaar vyaar kasam vaade sab bakwaas hai. Inpe jitni stories ban jayein vo utni hi entertaining hoti hai lekin ye sab asal zindagi ko bilkul pheeka bana dete hai

Voice over says:Ek ko hai pyaar ki talaash aur dusra hai pyaar k khilaaf. Kya ajeeb jodi hai lekin ek aisi jodi hai jiska milna kismat ne tay kiya hai aur jise milvane ki saazish puri kaynaat ne rachi hai. Ek purab hai to dusra pashchim. Lekin ye dekhna bahut dilchasp hai ke inki kahani aage kya mod leti hai.

Next Part:TanShi hits n misses in college but they both feel each other. AhaMan tashan

Thats it guyss. Hope u all like it. Do hit the like button and don't forget to comment. Thank you😊
Edited by mommyangel55 - 7 years ago

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