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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: saaniakh

Wow nice loved reading it plz do continue soon!!


thanku dear 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Kamal_

Awesome story... looking forward for the next updatešŸ˜‰


thanks for liking it dear ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Kamal_

Awesome story... looking forward for the next updatešŸ˜‰


thanks for liking it 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shatika

wow... loved reading it... loved the way rishi pulled tanu towards him...and manpreet beating rishišŸ˜† and his words will you beat your elder bro...very nice... precap is just awesome looking forward ...plzz update it soon...


appreciate your comments shatika.. part 2 is almost ready 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PART 2

Tannu goes to kitchen as Rano calls for her. Rano asks her to set the table as food is ready. Tannu arranges everything on table and calls out for family members for breakfast.

Everyone comes to the table except Rishi. Raj questions where is Rishi. He never comes to breakfast on time. Raj asks everyone not to wait for Rishi and asks tannu to go and look for Rishi.

In Rishi's room he is about to open the door to come out and tannu holds the door knob to open. As Rishi pulls the door with little force as he is rush tannu stumbles and about to fall.

Rishi holds her from falling down and asks if she is okay. Tannu nods wondering what happens to rishi that all of a sudden he is showing so much concern.

As she lost in her world looking at rishi he started arguing with her that couldn't she knock the door and enter the room! Tannu thinks herself that I am thinking wrong. He is just as usual. Always bursts out on me.

An annoyed Tannu has no choice but to listen to Rishi's accusations. She requests him to come for breakfast as it's past 9AM.

Rishi and tannu joins the family for breakfast. UV waves bye as he has some work to do at restaurant and rushed out. Tannu silently serves more paratha's to rishi while rishi waves bye to his brother.

As he turns to look at his plate filled with paratha's he knew it was tannu who did that. He stares at her and asks her not to give him more food as he complains how he need to maintain his physic and he has such a huge girl fan following.

Tannu is not surprised at his behavior as it's his routine to flaunt himself about his looks and his charming skills. Rano hits on his head saying not to trouble tannu and ask him to eat food.

Manpreet asks tannu to give him more paratha's while praising her cooking skills. He also tells rishi that he doesn't know how to appreciate and how unlucky he must be as he doesn't eat the food served by tannu.

Rishi calls him tannu ka chamcha and asks him not to bother him.

Beeji shouts on rishi and manpreet and asks them to eat food and not to fight on table. Rishi stares at tannu as if she is the reason behind beeji's taunts. He finishes his breakfast and leaves to work.

Tannu bids bye to all and runs to rishi asking him to slow down. rishi turns back to see tannu who is running to join him. He ignores her and moves ahead. Tannu gets annoyed as she notices rishi going by himself and curses him for doing this with her every day. She expresses her sadness how he never notice her and how he always ignores her as if she is not there. as she lost in thoughts rishi turns back and shouts are you not coming' ?

Tannu snaps out of her thoughts and runs towards rishi. She felt happy that rishi waited for her and her face lightens up with hope that rishi may not show his liking but he cares for her.She boasts herself and ready to express her happiness rajni comes to rishi and hugs him leaving tannu behind. Tannu looks upset as rajni stands so close to rishi.

Rishi flirts with her and asks her to meet him in lunch as he is rushing to hospital. Rajni nods her head and leaves. Rishi then looks at tannu who stands with disappointed face.He asks tannu why doesn't she look happy ! tannu stares at rishi as she doesn't know how to express her feelings. Rishi moves toward tannu and looks at her. Tannu is surprised and taken back as he questions her 'do you like me' ?

Tannu hesitantly tells rishi that nothing like that and moves little away from rishi as she is afraid she may not able to control herself if he stands that close. Rishi laughs and shouts I know. Am just kidding. Look at you!! you are so different than the other girls. He said those words to tannu as he places his hand around her shoulder.

Tannu is not so happy with that yet she pretends to agree with rishi. He points towards rajni who is waiting at bus stop praising how beautiful she looks. Woman should dress up like one and wear nice clothes.Look at you. I don't see you as a woman. You don't care to be dressed up like them. Neither you wash your hair daily. Tannu couldn't believe herself that she is hearing all this from rishi who she dearly likes.

But she never gives up liking rishi as it's not in her control. Rishi and tannu both head towards rainbow children hospital as that's where both work and it's rishi small hospital where he loves to work.Though he is university gold medalist he doesn't like to work under corporate hospitals. He prefers to run his own hospital on his terms which he did and he is satisfied with that.

PRECAP : Tannu looks upset as she watches rishi and rajni sit close to each other and start sharing food

Edited by pesi11 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Wow!!!😊
Such a lovely part of your FF this is! I literally love it!ā¤ļø
I could imagine KraSha's acting šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†while reading your fiction!
OMG I really miss *Pre-leap Rishi after reading this😭😭

Great work ā­ļøKeep it upšŸ‘šŸ¼

PS: waiting for the next part,update it soon!😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
nice loved it...loved to see jealous tanu...actually after seeing rishi ignores her I want to see rishi getting jealous with some other guy being with tanu...
waiting for next part...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I don't like it at all the way tanu behaving
I mean she is behaving like loser
Like in serial it's so irritating me a lot
Rishi doesn't even interest in her but she take all his idiotic behavior &a his ignorance
Doing work at his home like servant
Now he even comment she isn't look like girl what more she want?
It's time for tanu to look after herself & her self respect
Continue plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

I don't like it at all the way tanu behaving

I mean she is behaving like loser
Like in serial it's so irritating me a lot
Rishi doesn't even interest in her but she take all his idiotic behavior &a his ignorance
Doing work at his home like servant
Now he even comment she isn't look like girl what more she want?
It's time for tanu to look after herself & her self respect
Continue plz



šŸ˜†... have patience my dear..it's just love is blind at times.. rishi's turn is not that far either. i promise you 😃
Edited by pesi11 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Avi_MissCandied

Wow!!!😊

Such a lovely part of your FF this is! I literally love it!ā¤ļø
I could imagine KraSha's acting šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†while reading your fiction!
OMG I really miss *Pre-leap Rishi after reading this😭😭

Great work ā­ļøKeep it upšŸ‘šŸ¼

PS: waiting for the next part,update it soon!😃


thanku so much for liking it dear 😊

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