Tanshi SS - Just you .. PART 2 updated

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Hi All
I am not seeing many fan fictions on this forum. Though am not a great writer. But writing one. Hope you all like it.

Bedi Family
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Rano - dearly loves her sons and want a better future for them
Raj - kind hearted and work hard for his family
UV -34 yr old 1st son who takes care of his restaurant. he is obedient
Rishi -31yr old 2nd son who is fun and active . He has a successful career as a pediatrician.
runs his own small hospital close to his house. he is a playboy who always flirts with women.
Manpreet -27yr old 3rd son who is calm and mature and shy. He works as a reporter in a news channel run by his father's friend Saxena


That's the bedi family.

Tannu - 29 yr old. A naive girl. her house is just a block away from Bedi's house. she lives alone..
Bedi's treat her like their family member.
Helps Rano in house chores.Spends most of her free time at Bedi's house . She also works at Rishi's hospital as a nurse. She likes rishi a lot.


PART 1 : Page 1

PART 2 : Page 2




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Posted: 8 years ago
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it is a different concept of tanshi
hope u would post the next update soon
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PART 1
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Rano is busy in kitchen preparing breakfast. she keeps looking at the door and cursing why tannu hasn't come today. It's past 8 AM. I have to do all this work before everyone comes to the table. Meanwhile Raj shouts for Rano from his room asking that he couldn't find his favorite shirt.

Rano shouts back saying wear whatever you find. I can't help you with that. I have only two hands to work. Raj didn't bother to hear her and kept calling for her as he keep pulling all the clothes from the closet. Rano hurriedly drops the flour on ground as she is about to rush to help Raaj. She couldn't do anything but helpless cursing her sons who are so grown up and can't help her in anyway. She kept saying that she should get a bahu who can share her burden a little but these useless sons are good for nothing. I have to manage everything for them as if they are toddlers. as she hopelessly looks at the flour spread all over the floor tannu walks in. tannu says 'aunty' ..what happened ?? what's all this .Rano takes a sigh and asks tannu to take care of kitchen as she needs to help raj. Tannu assures her that she will do the work and asks rano to go ahead.

Rano rushes to her room only to find all the clothes spread on bed and raj still finding for his favorite shirt. rano looks at the closet and find the shirt that raj was looking for. Raj happily takes the shirt and praises rano for her managing skills as rano keep staring at him for the mess he did. Raj realize what he has done and silently escapes to bathroom to take shower. Rano starts organizing all the stuff.

Meanwhile tannu is busy cleaning the kitchen. she clears all the mess and start making breakfast.
Rano finishes her work and returns to kitchen and delighted to watch tannu who finished all the work in a neatly manner. she praises tannu and tells her what would she do if she is not there to help her in this home. and starts cursing all of her three sons. neither they help her not get a bahu who can help her. Tannu continues to arrange the food as she patiently hears rano's complaints about her sons.

Rano questions tannu whether she gave a wake up call to rishi!! tannu gave pat on her forehead herself and says oh no..i forgot aunty. I got late today so i just rushed to kitchen to help you. Rano request tannu to go and check whether rishi has woke up or not. rishi never comes on time for breakfast if you dont wake him up. she also tells tannu to check on her other two sons as well. tannu gives a nod and goes to UV's room. she stands at the door and shouts UV bhaiya ...wake up.
UV responds after a minute assuring tannu he vl come down soon for breakfast.

she enters rishi's room as she didn't find any response for her call. she is not surprised to see both rishi and manpreet sleeping sound. she asks manpreet to wake up and drags him from the bed and pushes him to the bathroom. a sleepy manpreet starts brushing thinking what time is it that tannu is already waking him up. he hears tannu shouting rishi wake up. he nods his head as this is a routine for tannu and rishi. rishi never wakes up easily and he always gives hard time.

rishi resists tannu as she tries to take off blanket from him. he pulls it back requesting her to let him sleep for some more time.tannu looks at the wall clock and asks rishi to get up as he needs to open the clinic. they both engage in blanket fight as tannu keeps pulling it and rishi keeps taking it back. manpreet nods his head tired from listening to their everyday fight as nothing is gonna change their routine. meanwhile rishi holds tannu's hand and pulls her towards him. tannu falls on him at once and looks at rishi's face who is still sleepy head and hasn't opened his eyes yet. she steals glances at him and goes quiet for a minute. she quickly moves a away from rishi as she realizes that she is just a breath away from rishi's. her heartbeats fast. she composes herself and requests rishi to wake up as she struggles to get up from the bed. all her struggle goes in vain rishi still holding her arm. rishi asks tannu to sleep for some more time and let him sleep as well. manpreet comes out of the restroom who has been listening to their conversation since a long time. he looks at tannu who is lying next to rishi on his bed. an embrassed tannu kicks rishi and gets away from him. manpreet goes and beats rishi asking him to get at once.he asks tannu to go and help rano.rishi screams in pain and curses manpreet that how can he beat his elder brother.

Manpreet questions rishi how can he behave like that with tannu. you can't treat her like that. he warns rishi not to do this again and leaves to take a shower. rishi is puzzled why manpreet is behaving odd. he stops finding the logic and looks at the clock. he is dazed and keeps banging the bathroom door asking manpreet to come out quick.

Tannu goes to beeji's room with coffee and helps her finding her glasses.she blesses tannu and praises her saying she is not sure when she became a part of their family. this house looks life less if she don't see her everyday. Tannu smiles and asks beeji to have coffee first and she is not going to give her any sugar for sugary words. beeji pats on her head and tells her she is saying the truth. tannu asks beeji not to hit on her head again. it looks so childish. to her disappointment beeji assures that she would always do that as she loves her dearly and she is just like her grandsons to her. tannu gets emotional and looks at beeji. tannu composes herself as she hears rano calling her and rushes out to kitchen.
PRECAP : Rishi holds tannu's hand and asks if she likes him

As I said I am not a great writer..hope you all like it 😊
Edited by pesi11 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was nice update
Hope u would post the next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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lovely chapter
loll rano cant do anything without tanu's help πŸ˜†
her husband & sons r really useless not helping at all 🀣
loll tanu always get hard time to wake up rishi πŸ˜†
oops tanu's heartbeat got faster when rishi pulled her on him πŸ˜‰
beeji love tanu a lot πŸ˜ƒ
continue plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaimymv

It was nice update

Hope u would post the next part soon


thanks for liking ..vl update part 2 soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

lovely chapter
loll rano cant do anything without tanu's help πŸ˜†
her husband & sons r really useless not helping at all 🀣
loll tanu always get hard time to wake up rishi πŸ˜†
oops tanu's heartbeat got faster when rishi pulled her on him πŸ˜‰
beeji love tanu a lot πŸ˜ƒ
continue plz


appreciate ur comment dear ..😊 ..thanks for liking it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow nice loved reading it plz do continue soon!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome story... looking forward for the next updateπŸ˜‰
Edited by _Kamal_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow... loved reading it... loved the way rishi pulled tanu towards him...and manpreet beating rishiπŸ˜† and his words will you beat your elder bro...very nice... precap is just awesome looking forward ...plzz update it soon...

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