FF:Pyarasa LoveStory... Part42 15th July 09 - Page 9

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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
wow!! da stories is infact gettin more intrestin!gauri stayin with shiv n his family 4 2 weeks!i sure cant wait 2 know wat will happen!!!do con1!1 šŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!! šŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

last part was jus Showin Shiv might be interested and this part is Definite proof that Shiv toh Gaya kaam se......

Gauri will stay for 2 weeks In Nikki's house....
now Shiv might not even go to the office..... šŸ‘

good work.....



thankyou for reading it....and adding such lovely comments....
Shiv tho gaya kamse.... šŸ˜‰
What do you want it to be like.... should he go to the office...? or should he not....? 😊
i hope i keep with your expectations... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: amneet89

bunny,

i just loved it. thank you... i hope i really brought out what i wanted to say...shiv wants to know all about gauri...yes he does...but why?? šŸ˜‰ he was asking his mum about her...so cute...i think mahen was right...we have all the rights to see wonderful lovedovey scenes between SG...Yes we do... it was unfair that our dreams of them being together (IQ and pallavi) was not fullfilled... but why just regret... we can do that here and enjoy.... so, keep writing... i can't wait for next part and dear i will be updating angel today hey i read angel and i think the continuation is missin...other wise its perfect... and i loved the new part... šŸ‘ šŸ‘

WONDERFUL PART
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thankyou... 😳 ... you are making me blush...



Asever 😳

Amneet šŸ˜‰

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: catafly

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! thankyou... you all are making me blush... 😳 thankyou for your lovely comments... šŸ˜› shiv wantin 2 know bout gauri!! curious!! šŸ˜‰ do con asap!!! Sure...i donot want to disappoint you.... i will surely try to keep with the posts...on time... 😊 šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: catafly

wow!! da stories is infact gettin more intrestin!gauri stayin with shiv n his family 4 2 weeks!i sure cant wait 2 know wat will happen!!!do con1!1 šŸ‘... i hope i give a good...in the next part...love your comments....thankyou for spending time to write comments for me... 😳 😊 Love you.... !! šŸ‘ šŸ‘

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Posted: 17 years ago
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shiv is so in love!!!wonder whether he realizes it!! when will Gauri get attracted to him???pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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When are you gonna update! its lovely. so filled with honey. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part : 12

So gauri went to freshen up and Shiv came home… he called out.. 'Mom Coffee for me… I am Home..' and was running to his room to change his clothes and freshen up and come… He went got ready and came down…Nikhila brought his coffee.. and Gauri had got ready
And came down the stairs wearing a chunidar…. And her dupata… swinging on her shoulders…. Gauri did not see shiv... she was just coming down thinking of helping Nikhila… But Shiv was sitting in the living room sofa and watching TV changing channels… when he felt some one is coming down the stairs he turned his head to see… and then went back to seeing TV after a minute… he jerked his head as if he realized something and looked at the steps again… and had a shocked face 😲 …. On seeing Gauri… there… coming down…

Gauri when she came down…. Looked around and saw shiv looking at her…she looked at him for a few seconds and gave a samll tight smile... and lowered her eyes and just walked to Nikhila… to help her….

The food was ready … and Gauri was helping arrange the table for dinner…

Shiv then looked in the direction Gauri was walking …looking at her for few minutes then turned to face the TV and just sat there staring… thinking…
'Gauri yaha pein…' 'nahi nahi hohi nahi saqta….' 'aaj kal mein Gauri ke kuch zada hi sapne dekh rahahu…' and looked back again to confirm whether it was just his imagination or was Gauri really there…. And then pinched his hand and said 'Ouch…' 😵 [ šŸ˜† ] and then said… 'uff…uff…' was blowing air on the place where he pinched himself...[ šŸ˜† ] and turned again to confirm…. When he saw Nikhila talking to Gauri… then he smiled thinking 'its confirmed Gauri is here…' … and thought…'Gauri iswaqt yahein kya kar rahi hein…' 'Aur…. Who mama ka madat kyun kar rahi hain… dinner table par…' 'Kya aaj Gauri aur Alokji hamare sath dinner kar ne wale hain…' 'Gauri …. Is looking so sweet in that chunidar….' And then said to himself in a little angry tone… 'Stop it shiv… if you keep on thinking about Gauri…you will make it obvious to people around you that you are staring at Gauri…' 'Control yourself..!!!'

Nikhila then called Shiv for dinner…and Shiv got up and started walking to wards the table thinking… 'I will not look at Gauri now…' and Gauri was smiling at Mahen and keeping plates.. he walked towards the dinner table and he did not look at Gauri…even Gauri did not look at him… She sat beside nikhila and Shiv sat beside mahen… Shiv did not lift his head nor did Gauri lift her head…
And No one was talking… So, Mahen asked Shiv 'how was your day beta…' and Shiv said… 'teek tha dad….' And then they continued talking about some projects how they were dealing and other things…and nikhila looked at both of them a little angry and said… 'kitni bar kahahain…kam se kam khane par tho business ki batein mat karo….' 'Jab dekho business ki batein… tum dono ko tho… jungle mein bhi chod dona tabhi betike business ki batein karo gein…' and gave a frown to mahen… 😳

And Mahen said… 'Tum bhi na Nikhila… jungle mein hum kya business kar sakthe hein…' 'Haan… sirf lakadi bech sakthe hain….' And gave a smile to nikhila and Nikhila kept a face which said… 'tumara kuch nahi hosaktha…' and Shiv gave a high-fy to Mahen and laughed while Gauri smiled …. šŸ˜† And then while laughing Shiv looked at Gauri and became calm and Gauri too stoped smiling…and then they went back to eating…

and later Gauri helped nikhila to keep all the things in the kitchen… after the dinner was over….then Shiv was sitting in the living room sofa along with mahen … playing with the remote in hand and looking at Gauri from time to time.. and thinking… 'Mera man kyun har waqt use dekh neka man kartha hain…. '

'Tujhe chune ko dil karein..
Tujhe pane ko dil karein…
Jo bat mere dil mein chupi…
Jo bat mere dil mein chupi….
Woh bataneko dil karein…
Oh piya … Oh piyaa….

Yeh roop mehka…
Yeh zulph bhikaree…
Yeh dil lubana tera….
Madhosh mujh ko karne laga hain..
Yun muskurana tera….
Yun muskurana tera…
Tere dadhkan mein aaj tho …
Bas jane ko dil karein…

Jas bath dilke phir aaj badlein…
Moosam hain rango bhara….
Phoolokein jaise khilthe badan ko….
Aaa chuum luoon mein zara….
Aaaa chuum luuu mein zaraaaa….
Tujhe chune ko dil karein…
Tujhe paneko dil karein…
Tujhe chune ko dil karein…
Tujhe paneko dil karein…
Jo bat mere dil mein chupi…
Jo bat mereee dil mein chupi…
Woh batane ko dil karein…
Oh piya… Oh piyaaa….

Popsong by sonu nigam…
playing in the back ground….

'why am I not able to stop myself from looking at her…??'

Gauri finished helping Nikhila and was heading to her room when Nikhila called her and said 'beta hamara walk per janeka plan thana… kya tum aarahiho…'and gauri smiled and said… 'ji aunty aarahihu…' and she came to Nikhila and both headed out… and shiv was all the while staring at them leaving…once they had left…. Shiv asked his dad… 'Dad…' and mahen who was reading paper…. Said.. 'hmm…' not lifiting his head from the paper…
And Shiv asked .. 'Gauri … yeha kyun hain…??' and Mahen lifted his head
and said… 'Ohh… Gauri… is going to stay with us for 2 weeks… Alokji US gaye hain…kisi business ki wajase…Aur woh parishan who rahethe… Gauri ko kis ke sath chode… toh…Nikhila ne Gauri ko yehan rehne keliye kaha…' and went back to reading his paper…

And Shiv had a smile playing on his lips… 😃 his heart was jumping with joy… šŸ˜› 😳 and he was sitting there and waiting for them to come back… Gauri…was smiling and talking to nikhila when they were coming back…
Gauri at first did not see Shiv and was laughing and talking to nikhila…but the moment she saw him…she composed herself and became calm…and said to nikhila… 'good night aunty… sweet dreams…' and nikhila greeted her back… 'Acha beta… good night …'and gave a small kiss on her cheek…for which gauri gave a smile and then gauri walked a few steps and said … 'Good night uncle…'and Mahen lifted his head from his paper and said … 'Good night beta…' and gauri gave a smile to him and then climbed the stairs fast … without looking at Shiv… went to her room…

Shiv… saw her… how she composed herself when she saw him… and felt a little happy… that's one thing he also maintained… becoming composed when someone was around… and felt happy she also did that…

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Thankyou for all your lovely comments... I hope I have lived upto your expectations... Love to read your comments on this part too... So, Please leave your comments.... 😊 šŸ˜›

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow i simply love your story - its so full of innocent romance. so much of romance and love. sugar coated sweet.
Please do continue soon. atleast give us glimpses of whats gonna happen next... 😊
Cant wait for them to bang into each other or may be he even may take off 😳

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