FF:Pyarasa LoveStory... Part42 15th July 09

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sunil

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Posted: 17 years ago

#101

awesome part but keep posting sooner
cant wait for longer
really loked your story

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Atma

@akaur

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Posted: 17 years ago

#102

thanx 4 update
it looks like shiv is preety much loosin it!

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bunny_fun

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Posted: 17 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: askap
Hi Bunny_fun, that is one great FF. I just finished reading it and could not hold back! It's great and keep it going this way! Love how Shiv has fallen for Gauri... I hope the feelings are reciprocated soon!

Thankyou so much AKSAP... thanks a lot...i hope in the future parts also i keep upto the expectations... hope you enjoy the rest of the parts too...

both Shiv and Gauri are really reserved when it comes to talking to outsiders... so until they feel that both are ment to be eachothers... they would not be able to communicate with eachother....freely.... i hope you are getting what i am trying to explain....

Thankyou for putting up such lovely comments... please keep sending your comments on the future parts too...

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bunny_fun

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Posted: 17 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi
awsome fic i just read all of the parts it's beautiful,
shiv is already falling for gauri that's great just hope that gauri falls for him soon,i love nikhila in your fic she seems really sweet 😊

please do continue your doing a great job 😊

Thankyou... for saying that you are liking it... Thankyou.... i am feeling a little... shy now.... with happyness... Yes, Shiv has fallen for Gauri but still confused about his feelings...as he has never felt like this before...and he is too reserved to talk about it to anyone...

Thankyou for recognising.... You are the first one to say that.... I was trying hard to make that point to everyone reading the FF...

the bonding...b/w mother and son...father and son... father and daughter... i love that bonding... i hope even others have recognised that too....
how shiv and gauri can understand their parents... and how shivs parents do things that make him happy...the daily conversation.... how they are trying to bring fun into their daily activities.... thats every households dream.... 😊

how there is this little romance b/w nikhila and mahen... their little fights over nothings... is so lovely.... along with the best thing going around... Shiv and Gauri coming close...

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bunny_fun

@bunny_fun

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Posted: 17 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: latisharc
Wow i simply love your story - its so full of innocent romance. so much of romance and love. sugar coated sweet.
Please do continue soon. atleast give us glimpses of whats gonna happen next... 😊
Cant wait for them to bang into each other or may be he even may take off 😳

Thankyou for loving my FF...i hope i keep up to it in future parts too...
I know.... i love that sugar coated romance....with innocence.... i think one should always keep that...undercurrent romance alive .... so that...it brings smile on your face in your day to day activities...although its not always possible... 😊

If i give the glimse then there would be no surprise... in the story...as i have already said the story in the first part itself.... and next thing is there are no surprises...except the things happening to Shiv and Gauri...so, sorry... but cannot help.... 😭

Shiv taking off... its a very intresting 😛 suggestion....i am hoping to use it.... if you don't mind....

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bunny_fun

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Posted: 17 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: amneet89
i m totally in love with story...its seems like sj=hiv ki toh lottery lag gayi hai...yes...very true...shiv has indeed got a lottery.... in the form of Gauri staying at his house....he will be seeing gauri everyday around him for two weeks...is n't that so sweet.... awwee... 😛 well i you are doing agreat job...thankyou ... 😊.... now i have to be more carefull...i hope i keep up to your expectations...SG scenes are so simple and innocents...those fireworks between them...do you feel that when you read the part.... ohh...thankyou so much... that means so much to me....if i am able to make you feel that my work is done... 😛 i love when shiv was talking to himself about gauri's existence in his house...that was my favorite scene...thank you... that part was not there... when i made the draft... i added it just before posting it.... thank you for liking it....that was so cute 😳 ...seems like shiv see gauri everywhere now a days. 😆 yes... he does... 😆

great part 👏 continue soon dear

Asever 😳

Amneet 😉

PS:u better leave an reply in angel next time deari am soor and i left a comment there.... and i have read your reply too... thank you for replying... 😊 ...u read u have to reply there not here and i need a pretty deatiled ones...well as far as continuation is concerned well really had no idea what i was typing...so sorry...will keep that in mind next time U BETTER REPLY IN ANGEL...I WANT TO SEE UR REPLY THERE

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bunny_fun

@bunny_fun

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Posted: 17 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: jiya imdad
such a cute part!!thank you so much... i hope you enjoy the next parts too... 😊
shiv is a total goner and has fallen hard for gauri.yes... shiv ki tho bolthi bandh... 😆 both of them are soo shy as if thinking ten times before talking to each other. thats my fault.. completely... i have made them like that...i love them that way.... 😊 is our naughty shiv missing or is he hiding somewhere 😉 i think from previous part we got a glimse of his naughtynes... may be shiv has a touch of naughtiness... that comesout... at times... 😆
awesome part!! thank you for your lovely comments... please keep giving your views on each part... it helps me in writing further parts... 😊
continue soon 😃

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catafly

@catafly

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Posted: 17 years ago

#108

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww such a sweet part!include more of shiv-gauri n make dure gauri is also feelin da same 4 shiv 😳 do con asap!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

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helen

@Helen24

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Posted: 17 years ago

#109

omg lovin it..plzz update soon..it's so natural and beautiful

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bunny_fun

@bunny_fun

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Posted: 17 years ago

#110

Part : 15

Shiv after the jog in the garden… just sits in the garden…enjoying the scenic beauty of their home garden… and his mind… goes back to remembering… Gauri giving him…water bottle and how shy she was to talk to him…and how she gave a smile to him… he smiles to himself …thinking…how cute of her…

Then Shiv…sees some flowers.. and goes and plucks a few of the roses and brings them and comes to his mom and gives the flowers… to his mom and says… 'mom yeh aapke liye..' and goes of to his room.. climbing…

Nikhila thinks… 'He has started liking flowers… I know beta… hota hai…hota hai… eisabhi hota hai…' and smiles to herself…thinking 'jo mein soch rahi hu…. Who such hoto kitna acha ho…'

He gets ready…messes up his room with clothes as usual… and comes down for breakfast… and says.. 'Good morning Dad…' and mahen says 'Good morning beta…' and then they talk about some office work… when nikhila says… 'Kitni bar kaha hai..breakfast table par office ki batein mat karo… kabhi tho aram se breakfast kiya karo…'

And putts the allu paratha and orange juice glass to each one… and Shiv takes a bite of the paratha…and without thinking..says… 'Mom.. aaj allu ke parathe bahut ache bane hain…' and Nikhila says… 'Acha… lekin.. aaj parathe… mein ne nahi… Gauri ne banaye hain…' and Shiv sees Gauri bringing some more parathe… and coming towards the table…and becomes calm… and mahen on seeing Gauri says.. 'beta… aaj parathe tumne banaya..' and Gauri smiles and says 'ji.. uncle..' and mahen says 'bahut ache banehain beta…' 'roz roz tumare aunty ke hatse bane parathe khakar… bore hogaya hu…Kalse sirf tumhe banana beta…' and Gauri nods her head and smiles… but on seeing nikhila and then mahen look…she …starts to laugh…keeping a hand on her mouth… and Nikhila gives a querky look at Mahen and Shiv and Mahen give a 'Hi-5' to each other… and suddenly Shiv and Gauris eyes meet while laughing and both compose themselves and become calm…
And shiv starts eating his food quietly… and Gauri… feels that maybe I am disturbing their private time..thinking so, she starts to go from there…

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Part : 16

and Nikhila says.. 'beta… kaha jarahiho… tumne apni breakfast nahi kiya hain na…' 'Aaajo …beyto… breakfast karke phir jana..' and Gauri says… 'nahi aunty… badme karlungi… abhi bhook nahi hain…' and gives a small smile…and Nikhila says.. 'koi..bahana nahi….' And looks at mahen and shiv and says… 'yeh… dono… kabhi nahi puchenge… ki ..kya hum ne khaya ya nahi…bus inke liye breakfast ready kardo… bus… khake chelejayenge…' and gives a quzzing look to them…
And mahen and shiv are dumbstruck… nikhila continues to say… 'inke liya tum kyun apna bhook chupa rahi ho…' and Gauri… defends saying… 'Aise.. koi bath nahi hai aunty…sach me bhook nahi hain…' and was about to say something else when phone rings… and nikhila goes to lift the phone and signals her to have her breakfast… and mahen says.. 'ajao beti..breakfast karlo… varna tumare aunty tume chodenge nahi..' and shiv is looking at her… and Gauri gives a quick glance at Shiv..and when she notices that he is staring..she lowers her eyes and just sits down and serves herself… and is about to eat it… when nikhila says… 'beta… tumare papa ka phone hai…ek bar bat karlo..' and brings the cordless to her… and gauri, the moment she listens to the sentence has a big smile and gets up, walks fast and takes the phone ….. Shiv did not miss to see her big smile…..he stared at her…. and Gauri….says… 'papa… aap kahase bat karrahe hein…?' and Alok replies 'Beta…mein… France airport se bat kar rahahu…' 'dusre..flight janekeliye abhi waqt hai..' and gauri… says… 'acha…tek hai papa…pahunch thehi … phone karna papa…' and alok says… 'tho..keisi ho tum… sub kuch tek hai na…' and Gauri says… 'haa papa mein bilkul tek hu… nikhila aunty aur mahen uncle mera bahut kayal rakthe hain… aunty tho… bilkul maa jaisehi hain…' and Gauri continues about all the things she did from yesterday till today… forgetting that she is in nikhilas house and all are listening to what she is speaking… Shiv sees her and thinks… 'how innocently she is talking to her father…like a small child… and how matured she does things otherwise…' and smiles to himself…
And Nikhila and Mahen look at eachother and smile about gauri …then Nikhila signals Mahen to look at Shiv… and mahen understands and looks at shiv… and they see.. Shiv has stopped eating his paratha and is staring at Gauri… and smiling to himself… and mahen looks at nikhila and they smile at eachother…and nikhila then says… 'Ahem..Ahem…' and Shiv comes back to this world and looks at his parents… to see if they caught him… and sees that they are busy eating their breakfast and nikhila is serving mahen…so he finishes his breakfast and washes his hand and leaves for the office… saying.. 'Bye..Mom…' and while going out of the house he looks at Gauri who was in her own world talking to her dad....and then smiles and goes to office.... then Nikhila says… 'aapne dekhana…' in a exciting voice… and mahen says… 'Haan mein ne dekha… kuch bat zaroor hain..' and Gauri has kept the phone and walks towards the table to complete her breakfast…

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I am sorry I didnot have enough time to make the parts as intresting.... and also sorry i couldnot reply to your posts.... thankyou one and all for your lovely comments.... please keep posting your comments and opinions.... i would love to here what you are expecting in the next part.... when you read this part.... I am going out of Ideas.... So, If you suggest some Ideas... I can use them.... here....

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