FF:Pyarasa LoveStory... Part42 15th July 09 - Page 10

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Posted: 17 years ago
#91
i m totally in love with story...its seems like sj=hiv ki toh lottery lag gayi hai...he will be seeing gauri everyday around him for two weeks...well i you are doing agreat job...SG scenes are so simple and innocents...those fireworks between them...i love when shiv was talking to himself about gauri's existence in his house...that was my favorite scene...that was so cute 😳 ...seems like shiv see gauri everywhere now a days. 😆

great part 👏 continue soon dear



Asever 😳

Amneet 😉

PS:u better leave an reply in angel next time dear...u read u have to reply there not here and i need a pretty deatiled ones...well as far as continuation is concerned well really had no idea what i was typing...so sorry...will keep that in mind next time U BETTER REPLY IN ANGEL...I WANT TO SEE UR REPLY THERE
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Posted: 17 years ago
#92
this story is soo cute with simple and sweet quiet romance. wonder when shiv n gauri would ever talk to each other!
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#93
great story
upate soon
keep it up
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Posted: 17 years ago
#94
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#95
awesommmm!! continue soonnnnnnnnnn 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#96
awsome fic i just read all of the parts it's beautiful,
shiv is already falling for gauri that's great just hope that gauri falls for him soon,i love nikhila in your fic she seems really sweet 😊

please do continue your doing a great job 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#97
Hi Bunny_fun, that is one great FF. I just finished reading it and could not hold back! It's great and keep it going this way! Love how Shiv has fallen for Gauri... I hope the feelings are reciprocated soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part : 13

Nikhila… came and said… 'Shiv … tume bhi jakar sojana chahiye… beta…' and shiv said… 'ok..Mom..' … 'goodnight papa..' 'good night ..mom' and started climbing up the stairs… two stairs at a time…and … going up… turned back a little and said… 'sweet dreams too Mom… 😳 ' for which Nikhila quickly got the hint… and she looked at Mahen.. to know if he got the hint… But Mahen was seriously engrossed in the paper… Nikhila felt a little irritated… 😕 so she went and pulled the paper from his hand…and said.. 'Aap ko paper padneke..sivaye..koi aur kam nahihai kya… aapko ghar mein kya horahahai..koi khabar hain ki bhi nahi…??'
Mahen knew its better to only listen now than talk..so he said..calmly… 'kya bat hain nikhila… batavo to sahi…' 😆

And nikhila excitedly told… shiv never told her 'sweet dreams' in his life till now… and today he told that… and mahen put a expression which said… 'for this you took away my paper..' 😕 … and nikhila understood that and explained him why she is saying so… and then mahen said to her, donot come to conclusions with little things… lets wait and see… and said… from now on even I will keep an eye on him…is that ok…and nikhila felt satisfied… and nodded in agreement…

Shiv..came to his room… got into his bed…and kept staring at his room…Gauri's smile came infront of his eyes…and he smiled… at it…and then again..it vanished..and shiv kept searching in the room… with his eyes wide open… then …he realized … and thought..to himself… 'why this is happening..to…me…' although same question he is asking… from so many days…he had no answer for it… he closed his eyes tightly… even then he could see Gauri… he felt… like… 'what the hell is happening to me..???' 😕 he thought to himself… 'what is all this…??' 😕 .. 'I have seen so many girls..in my university…and office…but why do I rememeber her so much…there is something about her…'.. 'but why I keep thinking of her…all the time…the more I see her …the more I think of her… the more I avoid her…the more…I keep remembering her…' 😛 😳

He wants to speak to someone… about this..but doesnot know..to whom..he cannot speak to his friends..as they will tease him… and he has never talked about a girl before to them …and the left over are mahen, nikhila and vivan..

He starts thinking 'shall I talk to dad…' then thinks… 'no, no… what will I say him…I donot know myself what I am feeling now…I think first I need to figure out myself… then speak to Mom or Dad…about it…'

'What I am feeling is it… attraction or affection …???'

He keeps thinking this and doesnot get an answer... and scratches his head.... and slowly drifts into sleep…

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Part : 14

He wakes up in the morning… and then goes into the balcony… it's a clear sky.. we can see the Early Sun rising in the sky… and birds are flying..with chirping noise … and flowers are fresh with dew drops floating on the petals… cold winds going by…. Waking every person…on its way… 😃

He smiles to himself and goes to wash his face and then get into the daily routine of going for a jog... in the garden… around the house… 😛

So, he wears his track pants… comes down to take water bottle from the refrigerator… hoping his mom to be around… cooking the breakfast… but…

When he comes there… Gauri is there making the dough for the paratha's and Nikhila is cutting vegetables… he backsoff for a second 😲 then comes back to senses…and stares at Gauri… 😳 . She looked like she had already got a bath and was looking really beautiful… 😳 he then goes in… is taking a bottle of cold water from the refrigerator …and says to Nikhila… ' Mom..i am going for a jog…iwill be back in half an hour..' … 'Nikhila smiles at him and nods…'
😃 And Gauri… is making the dough…listening to his talk..but doesnot look at him… So, he walks from there… then Gauri goes to Nikhila… and says… 'Aunty…itna subha… tanda pani pinese…(cold water) sardi aajayegi… aapko batana chahiye…' 😳 (how sweet..) and Nikhila smiles at her and says… 'Thanks beta..mera tho dhyan hi nahitha…'.. 'par mein zara busy hu na… tu jake zara batade use…'.. 'aur zara wahase.. normal pani…leke use dede…'
😳 And Gauri…felt… numb… she was not used to speaking to boys a lot…even in her college days she used to keep away from boys… 😕

But, not to say no to nikhila aunty…she nodds her head and comes walking from there… when she walks into the living room… Shiv is starting to go out of the door… So, she walks a little fast and then… is behind him few steps away… and shiv bends down to tie his shoe lays… So, she comes there is standing behind him… and doesnot know how to call him… she is moving her hand forward… to call him and thinks it's a bad idea… then she says… 'suniye…' 😳 in a very low voice..which Shiv doesnot listen…. So, she increase her voice a little and again says… 'Suniye..' 😳 to which Shiv gets a shock and turns around in a hurry… 😕 (as if some one scared him…). And huffs out and then looks at Gauri… and Gauri lowers her head and lowers her eyes and not looking at him… brings forward her hand with a bottle and says… 'Itne subha… tund mein … tanda pani pina nahi chahiye… sardi lag sakthi hain…' and holds the bottle for him to take and Shiv…keeps staring at her…thinking… to himself… 'Is gauri..really talking to me… 😆 😳 '
And smiles and takes the bottle… and turns to leave… even gauri turns and starts walking slowly… Shiv takes a step and then stops and turns and says… 'Thanks for the suggestion…' 😳 in his husky voice .. Gauri… who was going … turns back and gives a small smile 😊 ..to him…. And he smiles back at her and leaves… and Gauri goes back to the kitchen…

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Sorry, for the delay..was busy with work... Please forgive me you all... and hope this part is good....I am also so sorry i could not reply back to your comments... thankyou all for posting such lovely comments about the FF.... I hope i make it more intresting...

Please Keep posting your comments...i will try and reply over the weekend...but donot know... have lot of work....



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Posted: 17 years ago
#99
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
such a cute part!! shiv is a total goner and has fallen hard for gauri. both of them are soo shy as if thinking ten times before talking to each other. is our naughty shiv missing or is he hiding somewhere 😉
awesome part!!
continue soon 😃

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