FF:Pyarasa LoveStory... Part42 15th July 09

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bunny_fun

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Posted: 17 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: akaur
the last 3 updates were really good
poor shiv he has got it bad
i hope gauri soon falls in luv with him 2!

Thank you.... yes , poor shiv...he is going through a tough phase... i hope so too... Gauri...please donot make him more upset... 😛 .... keep reading... i love to read the comments... keep posting comments...

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prab_rockinn

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Posted: 17 years ago

#52

Shiv abb toh tu gaya kam se..... 😉 😆 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

#53

shiv has already fallen for her!!!waiting to see them romance!!!pls continue soon

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KAT

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Posted: 17 years ago

#54

Wow Bunny enjoying this on!! 😃 😃

love the song 😉

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bunny_fun

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Posted: 17 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: shivgauri
shiv has already fallen for her!!!waiting to see them romance!!!pls continue soon

you need to wait a little long before you can see both of them romance...but there are lot of encounters...so keep reading... i hope i keep with the curiousity... with which you are reading this...FF... thank you so much.... please keep reading..

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Amnu

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Posted: 17 years ago

#56

arre shiv ke saath saath main bhi gayi kaam se 😳 😳 😳 ...bunny dear this was an fantsctic update...shiv's eyes spotting her everywhere she goes...well can't wait to see more romantic parts...love is in the air... i m in love with this ff

pls update dear...don't kill me
👏

Asever 😳

Amneet 😉

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bunny_fun

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Posted: 17 years ago

#57

I am posting parts 8 and 9 at a time as both are small.... Hope you enjoy reading it...!!!

Part : 8

Then, everyone was enjoying the party and food and gauri was chatting with some of the guests at the party standing with Nikhila when some one went by pushing her… and the food spill on her dress… and Nikhila said her to go wash her dress and change into some of her saree or chunidar… for now…in her room… so gauri made her way to nikhilas room… and she was going by shiv's room looking at her dress…and shiv who was sitting on his bed with his glass of juice saw some one go by and came out of the room to see and found… gauri walking by humming a song
'Tum bin jiya jaye kaise…
kaise jiya jayea tum bin…
sadiyonsi lambi hain ratein…
sadiyonse lambe huye din…
aa ja lotkar vapas…
yeh dil keh raha hain…'
thinking that no one was around…as she only hummed songs when she was alone…

She was singing really sweetly …and there was no one in the house… due to which the song was beeming in Shiv's ears…

Shiv kept watching her go to nikhila moms room and he was listening to the song… and felt his heart jump with joy listening to her sing…he wanted to listen to it more… 'but …why did he want to listen to it more…' … 'why he was feeling this unusual feeling…from the time he saw her…'

Then she went into nikhila's room… went into washroom and washed her dress and then went to nikhilas cupboard and took out a light peach color saree… which had embedded light embroidery… in it… and took it changed to saree and came out… and Shiv stood there for some time.. and then went to his bed and sat down again… and recollecting the song gauri was singing… and thinking… 'why is all this happening to me… ' he was feeling confused…

Then Gauri came out of nikhila's room and was walking to the stairs… when she passed shivs room… again shiv cameout… to here her sing…

'Hum bewafa hargiz na the ….
par hum wafa karnaske…
hum ko mili uski saza…
hum vo katha karna sake…'

and shiv saw her in saree from behind and then when she got down the stairs he saw her from side…she looked adorable…in the peach color saree… and he thought… 'Wow… She is so beautiful… 😛 ' and then immediately thinks… 'what has happened to me…??' 'I have seen more beautiful girls before….???' 😕

He took his empty glass and came down behind her… gauri did not know shiv was there in his room…all the while…

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Part : 9

Gauri came back to the party… and found most of the guests have left and it was nikhila's family and relatives that were there… and then looking at them talking..she went to nikhila and said 'aunty I will leave now..i will bring this saree tomorrow..' and Nikhila said..beta… 'Thodider aur rukjao.. phir jaana… aao…mere sath beyto…aur yeh saree tumpar bahut jachti hain..' and Gauri couldnot say anything just nodded and smiled…

And then all the young crowd from the relatives joined together and all girls and boys started playing 'Antakshari' (the famous game..right)

And they took gauri in too..and shiv and vivan and all were there… in the boys gang…and gauri along with others in the girl gang…

Gauri was sitting behind everyone… as she did not know anyone..much… and was feeling a little lost…but she enjoyed songs and hence was enjoying all the songs that were being sung… and Shiv who was sitting along with vivan in the first row was looking at her from the corner of his eye from time to time..

The girls were stuck with 'tha' letter and not knowing what to sing..

and were confused…so one of them asked her and she said 'tujhe dekha tho ye jana sanam' and every one started to sing…and our shiv being shiv …said.. 'jiska gana hai..vahi gaye… varna koi aur gana gaye.. 😊 ' and every boy supported him… and all girls requested gauri to sing..but she was all shy and not willing to sing..but finally she sang… and the moment she started every one became calm…

Gauri's eyes were down cast as long as she sang the song…

'tuje dekha tho yeh jana sanam …
pyar hota hai dewana sanam…
ab yeh hase kaha jaye hum…
teri bahome marjaye humm….
Tujhe dekha tho yeh jana sanam….'

Gauri closed her eyes in the end and shiv was looking at her as she sang…and the moment she completed every one clapped for her and girls said..you have a sweet voice… and gauri was in smiles… 😊

They played for some time…then every one started to leave… and gauri also left after some time with alok… and shiv kept on looking at her all the while … from the corner of his eye… without anyone noticing him… and smiling to himself from time to time… 😳

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Thankyou all for your lovely comments...i am trying to reply to all your comments but work keeps me busy... Please donot get disappointed if i donot reply back to your comments...

Please... keep commenting... your comments are my inspiration.... 😊

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Amnu

@Eternized_Blues

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Posted: 17 years ago

#58

me first😃

gauri dear let me tell you that you have secret fan who is totally fida over your singing...loved when shib said, "jiska gaana hai wohi gaaye."😳😳and i would die to have those glances from him...well i still imagine shiv as iq...so i always imagine them with him...lord this would have been so cool with them

FANTASTIC👏 👏👏update soon dear

Asever😳

Amneet😉

Edited by amneet89 - 17 years ago

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jiya imdad

@jiya imdad

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Posted: 17 years ago

#59

loved the parts!!
it's so amazing the way story is progressing slowly and shiv falling for gauri more n more as he kept stealing glanes at her! love is in the air yet our gauri is unaware she has a secret admirer 😳
ontinue soon

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Atma

@akaur

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Posted: 17 years ago

#60

aww that wz so cute
gr8 parts

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