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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
awesome.........
i wish i would have got this idea

nidha
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
👏 i really really lyke ur concept 👏
evil shiv but lyke him 😳
plz plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow, Gauri is already becoming Shiv's caretaker in every sense 😆, that gal has got brains and good for her that she is using them. Keep up the great work Nihita.
Cheers,
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
poor gauri
hope she is successful in her mission.
plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
poor gauri
i feel bad for her
pls cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
hey nihita gr8 concept....thnx to Kat im readin it now 😃
evil shiv!luvz it 😳 😉 😆

update soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART-4

As shiv left for his work,gauri stomach started shouting like loud music system,she made her way towards kitchen and brought some parathas for herself,after finishing her breakfast,she wondered what to do in this big haunted mansion(hehe)she started thinking

gauri:this person(shiv)is a hard nut to crack,i have to take extra care and be extra good to him,then only his guilt will increase and he'll realise his mistake,but i'll make sure in doing so,i never hurt him,bcoz i know he is not bad but the circumstances which had made him to be so.........

her thoughts were interuppted by a phone call,she got up from the dining table,and made her way towards the telephone
gauri(picked up the and said):hello!(in a sweet and melodious voice)

the person on the other side was taken away by her melodious voice and so he never responded

gauri:hello?who's this?????

then the person on the other hand came out of the trance and said

person:hello

gauri identified the voice and said:shiv

shiv wondered how gauri knew that it was him,his thoughts were disturbed when said

gauri:shiv is everything ok

there was a concern in her voice,shiv immediately said

shiv:n..no.actually i forgot my file of mittal group of industries on my study table

gauri:ok i'll get it

shiv:no you give it to the driver,he'll come and give it to me

gauri:where is your study-room??

shiv:right beside,my bedroom........

gauri:ok...anything else????

shiv:no..ok... i'll now hang up the phone.

and with this he kept the receiver down

shiv in office:
shiv(thinking):i fail to understand what this girl is made of,yesterday what i did to her was the most worst thing that can happen to a virgin girl and despite that,she never said anything to me but instead she taking care of me and my needs,why she's able to make me insane with just a word,her intoxicating smell is still there within me,she's just treating me as a husband,no doubt she's the definition of a good wife..(he started smilling at his thoughts)he shook his head and said:wait shiv stop thinking about her that way....

shiv very well knew that girls he had slept with in his past,never had such a impression on him,FIRSTLY,those girls were already used one SECONDLY,they always treated him as their another client,but gauri was different from all those

meanwhile gauri got his file and then proceeded towards the gate to give the file to the driver,but she found no sign of him,she asked the guard and he replied

guard:his wife has suddenly got the labour pain,so he went there,you need anything ma'am

gauri:no its fine,thankyou

gauri(thinking):may be this file is really important,i think i should go and give it to shiv........

gauri took the cab and went to kapoor industries,when she reached there she asked the receptionist about the way to the shiv's cabin but in response what she got was receptionist's odd stare,she then looked down towards herself,finding her suit a little torn and shabby,in hurry she never realised this and moreover she was not having any extra clothes.She did not want shiv to feel embarassed in his very own office because of her so she said to the receptionist:could you plz give this file to Mr.Shiv kapoor....

r:fine.. by the whats your name????????

g:ga..gauri chatterjee......

r:okkkkkkkk

with this the receptionist took the file from her hand and made her way towards shiv's cabin,she knocked on his door,when shiv asked her to come in

r:sir,here yours file(she handed over the file to shiv)

s:ohhh.....so driver came(he started going through the file when receptionist said)

r:no sir..some lady came,i forgot her name....

s:lady????????(he the immediately said)

s:was it gauri(surprising himself how her name came on his lips)

r:yes sir exactly.....miss gauri chatterjee

s:then why didnt she came inside

r:i dont know know,may i leave sir.......

s:yes plz

s(thinking):gauri came to give the file,why???????

shiv then dialled phone to the the guard's booth (which is outside his house),when guard picked it up,shiv said

s:shiv,here....

guard:yes sir...

s:where's miss gauri????????

guard:sir she went somewhere,she never told me.....

s:was she carrying something ??????????????

guard:yes sir her purse and........and.ya some file......

s:how did she go???????

guard:sir cab......

s:what where's driver????

guard:sir actually..

without waiting for his reply,shiv kept the receiver down and started thinking:why did she took the pain,she was not supposed to,why this girl has to be an angel,in this world these people are only crushed(but to ide his inner emotions,he added)why do i care....but deep down inside his heart he knew he cared for her

Edited by nihita - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
i am confused... well gauri want to change him... does she think he will change only if he feels guilty...???? welll 😆 i think its a nice means of taking revenge.... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
oh he started caring for him 😃 !!nice part!!!pls continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
great part moving along nicely!!....Shiv get weak!! 😳 😳 😳 ...

Now i hope he get her some clothes! 😉

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