ff:bas yeh pal part-11pg21 - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

164

Views

19.7k

Users

37

Likes

10

Frequent Posters

Rock_Star thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#11
her uncle is so bad...and shiv is so evil
i feel bad for the poor girl
different concept...i really like it
damilola thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 18 years ago
#12
yo nihita
ctn soon yea
i wanna know wat happens nxt
Edited by damilola - 18 years ago
damilola thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 18 years ago
#13
omg !!!!!
awesome part two !!!!

awww she realised wat her uncle is so she stopped to protest
i feel so sad for her

awesome part neena and ctn soon

ps: make it longer nxt part yea?


laterz
dammy 😛
Edited by damilola - 18 years ago
Asthuox thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 18 years ago
#14
aaaaaaa shiv u evil fink 😡 but i still love u 😳
mintfresh thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#15
nice part
really feel sorry for gauri
eagerly waiting for next part
Jenna Dutt thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#16
😲 😲 😲 omg Shiv is such an evil man 😡 poor Gauri 😭 😭 😭
nihita thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 18 years ago
#17

PART-3

NEXT MORNING

as sun hit the room gauri started opening her eyes to discover the familiar surroundings then she realised that she is not at home,she felt a pair of arms around her waist she looked to see the person and automatically tears welled up in her eyes.

she recollected the last night events SHIV TELLING HER THAT SHE HAS BEEN SOLDED BY HER UNCLE/HE OWNS HER/HE FORCES HER ON BED.

gauri suddenly took the sheet and cluntched it to her breast and without giving any second thought she grabbed her clothes and quickly made her way towards bathroom(with the sheet)

gauri pulled away the bedsheet and turned on the shower,she started questioning god
gauri:why it happened to me,i never did anything wrong to anyone then why its me,maa said "everything happens for good"what now what is ur(GOD)wish;but what happened to me will not happen with others i'll make Mr.Shiv Kapoor a human who'll know to love and to be loved,within one month not completely but yes some good changes will be there within you,i'll put everything on stake for changing you,as much i know(as shiv is a well known personality)you never got true love so you dont know the meaning of love and life,but i'll teach you that i promise,you'll come across the colours of life and from today i'll put my plan into

gauri made her her way of the bathroom in yesterdays clothes only,and found shiv sleeping

she made her way downstairs without making any noise..........

in the room

shiv opened his eyes and found no sign of gauri

shiv(thinking):where the hell she is!!!!!may be she ran away early in the morning...nah its not possible i OWN her,she's my property ,but what if she had done something wrong to herself...maybe suicide wait why i am so concerned,may be i should just go and get myself fresh first,then i'll see to her

with that he mde his way towards bathroom

after 15 minutees shiv came from the bathroom was dressed in casual wears ,he quickly made his may downstairs for the breakfast,then he saw something and started shouting

shiv:teddy????teddy?where are you

(teddy is shiv's servant)

in response what shiv received was silence,he again shouted for his name,then he saw a beautiful creature coming out of the kitchen,shiv at once recognised and said

shiv(questioning look):what are you doing in kitchen ,and where's teddy(he then noticed the juice in her hand)and said with confusion"what are you upto and parathas teddy knows i dont like it"

gauri(politely an in a low voice):actually sir.. teddy was not feeling well,so i asked him to take rest for sometime,i said i'll prepare the breakfast but i forgot to ask what you always want for the breakfast and it was then too late he already left the place,so i made parathas(she almost said the last line in a whisper but shiv heard it)

shiv was now staring at her in disbelief she had the opportunity to run away but she never did that,she was taking pain for a stranger who is a servant and fter yesterday's incidence still she is polite,calm and composed(his thought were disturbed when he heard gauri's sweet voice asking something)

shiv(immediately):huh????......what did you say????????

gauri:if you dont like parathas then tell me what you want to have i prepare that si...sir......

shiv:firstly stop calling me sir and with his attitude he said i have a name that too very influential,its shiv and for now toast and butter will do fine.

as gauri left shiv started thinking :is she belong to this world only?today when everybody is being selfish,this girl is actually living for others she is too good for this world.wait what the hell i am thinking i should not think about her and to convince himself he said:OK i own her thats why she's rendering her services...oh!!!!!!!!!ya..... this the only reason nothing else

after sometimes gauri brought shiv breakfast,shiv noticed that while having his breakfast that gauri is not having her breakfast and is busy in doing dusting of the whole house but shiv being ARROGANT shiv never bothered to ask about it and after having breakfast he quitely left for the office

Edited by nihita - 18 years ago
akaur thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#18
i feel bad for gauri bein sold by her own uncle!
thanx for the update
Catwoman thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 18 years ago
#19
nihita honey im hooked!! great ff!!

Gauri really want to change him and it working!!
love the concept!

Keep it up! 👏 👏 👏

Kat 😳
139271 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#20
just read everything together now!!!! very different story and very interesting!!! pls continue soon.

and thanx to Kat who asked me to read this fanfic 😃

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".