ff:bas yeh pal part-11pg21

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this story is about our favourite jodi shiv and gauri.Gauri belongs to a poor class family,after her parents death she is left alone with her cunning her.Shiv is a play,a successful businessman and a orphan.

WHAT HAPPENS WHEN GAURI'S UNCLE ACT AS A PIMP AND SHE IS SOLD TO NONE OTHER THAN OUT DARLING SHIV

plz comment so i can continue my story

ok i'll start my story from there when gauri is sold to shiv but her uncle says that she is just the care-taker of house.

PART-1

Gauri enters the large kapoor mansion,she is welcomed by a servant who takes her to a room.

Servant:sir is waiting for u,there(he points towards a room)

G:ji

as she enters the room,she notices a beautiful bed with silk sheets,paintings,flowers,deep blue curtains with a very attractive window suddenly her gaze turns to a well-built body/brown eyes/black hair as if she has seen a greek god

G(thinking):he must be a savior from god thats why he gave me the job

G(to shiv):ji mein woh yahan

suddenly shiv lifts his eyes and then smiles evilly he starts coming towards gauri which scares her she starts moving back suddenly shiv forcefully catches her arm and says"you'll be a fun" gauri seemed nervous and wanted to pass by but his grisp was too strong and when the next moment she was going to scream she found shiv's lips crushing hers,he held her waist and crushed his body against her chest,he forced his tongue into her mouth as she seemed horrified,suddenly shiv pulled apart and when he saw gauri juicy lips trembling he again had a urge to taste it as gauri was about to escape in no time shiv against crushed her lips with his with double-passion this time

after pulling apart shiv looked inot gauri eyes there were strange and mixed expression which he never saw in any girls eyes 1st it was disgust,shame,grief,and last fear.he said

S:whats ur name??

G(IN TREMBLING VOICE):ga..gauri chatterjee

S;i like it

S:do you know who i am(she nooded negatively)then he said i am shiv kapoor i am your master and now i OWN you

Gauri was shocked,tears formed in her eyes as he said that he stared into her black kohl eyes and said

S:you dont have to do anything you just have to give me pleasure,you have to sleep with whenever i say

Gauri was shocked she started nodding her head negatively to this and started from away from shiv,shiv lost his temper and.....................

PART-2

shiv picked up gauri in his arms and within no time she was thrown on bed,shiv moved back and locked the door behind him,he then started moving towards gauri,gauri was too scared that she started moving back on the bed,shiv then came near the bed and dragged gauri on the bed so as to flattened her,she was begging to let her go,tears were rolling down her cheeks,she pleaded

g:plz leave me i m just 20 and i dont want to loose my virginity

shiv was taken aback by her answer he thought

s(thinking):is she really a virgin?????but soon he brushed his thoughts off and smiled emilly and said:then it will more fun

s:dont worry it wont cause you much of pain,even you may love it

g:plz leave me,what is my mistake,i did nothing wrong to you

s:no you never did,but u are now sold to me

g(IN TREMBLING VOICE):no, i just came here for the JOB of a caretaker

s(by touching her cheeks and scaring her till death):your uncle is a pimp,he solded you to me

gauri was really shocked now,she assumed it as her fate,she couldd not still believe that her very own uncle gave her to a devil,she has almost died,she is like a body which has heart but lacks beat,now she did not protested shiv becoz she knew god is playing dice with her,so gauri did nothing but instead closed her eyes

shiv was astonished that gauri has stopped protested but again devil came over on him and he took off his shirt and then pulled away gauri's dupatta off her shoulder and started kissing her voilently he then unzipped her dress and started kissing her leaving not a single part untouched and then the screen goes blurry 😭

next part: next morning

great start nihita

luv the fact that shiv is evil
poor gauri 😆 her uncle's a pimp 😆

awesome start and ctn soon


dammy

nd wot omg likin ur FF evil shiv...plz continuee

neena very nice. great start.
and gauri is sold. OMG man well it will be fun to read more. so keep em coming 👏

nice start
shiv is evil . loved this concept its interesting.plz cont soon

Ok under normal circumstances this storyline should be quite offensive, but hey if its Iqbal Khan playing shiv's role, I will switch places with gauri in a heart beat!! 😆

The job desription should be quite a pleasure if Shiv (played by Iqbal) is the Boss!!!! 😆

Hell, maybe I will start a new FF with Shiv (played by IK) sold to gauri (played by me)!!! Ooooohhh baby! the things I would make my slave do!!! 😈

nihita cool u sorted it out

Kat 😳

Nihita, the story concept is nice, even though Shiv is evil, I am sure that Gauri will turn him into a darling human being. Can't wait for the story to unfold, pls. continue.

this seems like a novel concept.. pls do continue...

dang gauri got sold! that's sumthing new!hehe..evil shiv