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Posted: 18 years ago
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"voh mera haat…" the girl said very nervously with her eyes looking at the ground "what, oh yeah umm sorry" Shiv replied smiling and looking straight at her. Shiv lets go of her hand and the girl begins to walk towards the stairs "I know what your thinking" Shiv says to the girl who then stops right away and looks at him "umm I know what your thinking, a guy like me like I usually don't come here voh meri Baa hain nah yea she brought me here today…" Shiv tries to explain to the girl who looks confused, Shiv begins to walk to the girl slowly and starts to take his shades off "I usually don't come here, actually I never go to the mandhir because of my reputation an all" Shiv reaches the girl finally and the girl is looking at him very confused "after all I'm Shiv Kapoor and people like me usually don't come to the mandhir, we never have the time to, but Im very very glad I had the time today, or else I would have never met such a…" the girl is looking at him disgusted "by the way what's your name again" Shiv said smiling "I never told you my name" the girl said "yeah forgot so what is it" Shiv said with his cool guy attitude "what's the point in telling you my name Mr. Shiv Kapoor you just said that you never come to the mandhir, and that we would have never met any other place, so it would we very very pointless to tell you my name, because we may never meet again right" the girl said smiling and walked down the stairs but Shiv stops her half way and says "what if we met again" "wouldn't that ruin your reputation, I mean seen two times at the madhir…" the girl said and continued walking Shiv catches up to the girl an touches her shoulder and she turns around quickly "how dare you touch me" Shiv is shocked "just because you're a spoiled brat from a rich family, you think you have the right to touch anyone anywhere" everyone is looking at Shiv and the girl fighting on the stair case "you don't know anything about me how dare you insult me like this" Shiv says very angrily to the girl who then said " I don't need to know anything about you your Shiv Kapoor that stupid rock star that I like oops sorry that I use to like" Shiv is very angry and tells the girl with his cocky attitude "wow so you think just because I loose one fan im ganna go cry in my room ahah you must be crazy every minute a new fan of mine is born ahah your nothing to me" the girl is shocked to hear this and walks off "aww gave up that soon basanti ahah" Shiv screams down the staircase and then goes back to pandijis room where he sees Baa and then says "Baa lets go my head is hurting" Baa is shocked and gets up and asks him if he's alright "yea I was surrounded by fans everywhere outside and my head just started hurting and I ran here" "okay we can come to the mandhir another day don't worry Shiv" "no no I don't need to come here again I'm kool" Shiv says and both Baa and Shiv leave the mandhir. At the Kapoor Mansion Shi goes straight to his room an sits on his bed and Laksh walks in "hey bro what happened?" "nuffin dude how was college?" Shiv asked "same old same old…" Laksh answered back looking at Shiv confused then asked "Bhia why are u sitting on the bed I mean don't u have anything better to do then just sit around wait wait aren't u here to make another cd, don't tell me you're here just to sit on beds…" "chup kar yaar I cant answer al that" Shiv said very irritated "umm is everything alright?" Laksh asked very worried about his brother "I met some stupid girl at the mandhir today when me n Baa went she was soo stupid so extra ruined my mood" Shiv explained and Laksh started laughing "why are u laughing u think its funny/" Shiv demanded an answer "no no bhia its nah funny but iv never seen u get all worked specially over a girl umm wasn't it u who told me girls come an go and not to stress about them.." Laksh said laughin an walked out the door leaving Shiv on his bed to think more about that girl. Nihaal an Samar both cross paths with Laksh in the hallway upstairs "hey loverboy where was Kt today huh?" Nihaal said laughing "yeah where was she romeo" Samar added on "Bani told me that she missed her train this morning" Laksh told the boys and Nihaal smiled and said "that's a shame she should've called me I mean me n Samar could have picked her up poor girl missed her first day… so sad nah?" Nihaal said looking at Samar who then said "ahah yea me n Nihaal could've went poor poor girl so sad" "arre nah Nihaal bhia its alright she can take care of herself you two don't need to worry about her, she's in Bombay by now im sure n in safe hands so why don't you both you know like mind ur own business kool' Laksh said and walked into his room leaving Nihaal an Samar speechless yet again. "okay dude swear ur brother is ganna to get it nicely from me one day no jokes' Samar said with his bad boy attitude "ahaha naa Samar don't worry I'll get to him first before u can" Nihaal n Samar laughed an walked into there room. Meanwhile in Laksh's room he was woried and grabbed the phone just then Saks walks in biting on an apple "hey what's up lil bro whats goin on?" Saks says right when he walks in "oh umm nothing" Laksh says worried an puts the phone back down right away "its okay yaar call her maybe she made it to Bani's house by now you'll never now" Saks said smiling really big an biting the apple "umm should I cal I mean, don't u think it will be wird like you know she know si like her but I never told her I like her like we jus there is no relationship yet n I don't wanna sound soo desperate for her you know" Laksh tried to explain to Saks who was sitting on the bed an biting away the last remains of the red apple. "okay okay chill dude umm u are desperate for her n by now im pretty sure there is a bloody relationship between u two maybe not as lovers but as really good friend i mean you've always been there for her even before she got into trouble and you have every right dude to check if she had a safe trip or if she's even in Bombay yet these things are very little to the amount of stuff u didn't for her so far" Saks tried to explain to his little brother "nah im naa ganna call her this will give another reason for Nihaal t make fun of me an another reason for Bani an you to joke around about forget bout the stupid call I know my KT shes probably sleeping right now anyways" Saks gets and smiles "anyways we'll see 2morrow if she comes to school or not' Saks adds on an walks out the door, Laksh sits down on his bed.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
thnk god u updated
well it was good
and the fight between shiv and gauri was awesome
and offcourse shiv will go again to mandir
to meet her as till now she would be all over shivs mind
thnx
afshaa
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
great updates... wow they meet and that argument was cute

Kat 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
All 3 brothers or lying on there beds and thinking about tomorrow, Laksh is thinking about Kt an if she will come to school and Saks is thinking about P2 and how he's ganna meet her because she's always on the other side of Gurukul an its hard to get there because he's a guy an will get spotted and Shiv well Shiv is defiantly thinking about the basanti he met in the morning. The next morning everyone is up and eating breakfast Samar is pigging out while Nihaal is talking to Vardahn on his celly and Mihar is reading the newspaper and discussing matters with Bhumi and there next big final deal, and Baa is feeding Laksh and Nikila is looking at them smiling and Saks is laughing at Laksh and Baa. Shiv makes an entry "good morning dad, mom and Baa… hey Bhumi, n what's up lil broz…" "hey bhia good morning" Saks says almost right away before Shiv can sit down and everyone else says good morning back "so are u planning on working or just sitting at home" Mihar asks Shiv who then smiles and says 'I guess im ganna have to cuz no one can see me in peace specaily in this house" "that's not true beta do what you want I raised you to be your own man" Nikila says then Baa adds on "beta agar koi kham nahi hai to phir mandhir chale" "arre nahi nahi bohut kham hai aaj sorry Baa Im loaded with work so much work that I couldn't sleep last night" Shiv explained and Laksh started laughing no one else at the table understood and continued eating Mihar folded up his newspaper and kissed Nikila on her forehead and said "lets go Bhumi we have a lot of work cut out today and voh Alaap ko phone karne hai aaj he never does anything on time he has to be at this meeting no matter what tell him to bring his files he will be more useless if he doesn't bring them with him" "yeah dad I left him an email he will join us at the office" both Bhumi and Mihar walk out then Nikila gets up and says she has to go to her charity event planning as her charity party starts next week and that she will be busy all day leaving Baa and the boys eating and joking around. Nihaal hangs up the cell phone an looks very pissed off he whispers something in Samars ear who then looks up with a clown face and looks at Nihaal very scared Shiv see's this and says "whats the matter Samar is everything kool…" "umm yes bhia we just have to go to college a little early today…" Nihaal answers for Samar and both boys get up and run outside. Baa is smiling and the Laksh and Saks get up at the same time and tell Baa that the have to go to college a little early to and the boys leave also leaving Shiv and Baa to look at each other. "Shiv are you sure you don't want to come to the mandhir maybe this will inspire you to creat another song of your…" Baa asked Shiv once again "nahi Baa I think iv already been inspired enough yesterday…" Baa looks confused then gets up and the driver person takes her away. Shiv is left sitting around all day he watches a little bit of tv plays soccer with one for the servants then goes to his room and comes back down with nothing much to do. "maybe I should go to the studio today…" he says to himself "or maybe tomorrow is a better time…" again to himself "why am I talking to myself…" "okay I think I should go for a drive…" Shiv leaves and gets into his blue ford mustang he sits down in the car and puts his blue sunglasses on and blasts the song party like a rock star and drives off down the road. At Gurukul the boys arrive at the same time and Samar and Nihaal meet up with Vardhan and Mantan who look very pissed "hey whats up guys" Nihaal says and Mantan snaps at him "whats up we havnt been going to school that's whats up my parents found out I wasn tin school yday" "so big deal where in school today" Nihaal explained with attitude "We don't have any books don't know which classes to attend to… we have to talk to one of Gurukuls heads" Vardhan explains and Samar agrees "wait wait lets just talk to Prerna" Nihaal says smiling and Jai walks into there conversation "its alright iv talked to her and explained to her what happened everyone's books are in my car" Samar is smiling all the boys are happy and Mantan says "jai without you man…" but jai interrupts him and says "don't worry about it Mantan you guys are like my brothers this was nothing compared to all the things you guys did for me" all the boys are thinking real hard "we never did anything for you in fact we usually jus used you to get outta trouble" Vardhan says an everyone agrees and Jai smiles and says "yeah but I remember the first day when I was getting picked on and all you guys showed up and helped me out; Jai explains and Nihaal adds "yea your lucky I was in a good mood that day or we woulda left your ass der" and everyone starts to laugh and take there books out of Jai's car. The bell ring and the boys go to class (they all have the same classes except Jai because he is a year younger then all his friends in fact he is the same age as Laksh and Kt) Jai walks into his class and he finds Laksh and Prachi and Kt all sitting tethers and joins them. (Laksh doesn't have a problem with Jai and Jai has no problem with Laksh they are infact good friends because Kt an Prachi are good friends) meanwhile Bani is sitting in class and Nihaal and all his friends walk inside and Nihaal sits beside Bani while his friends sit behind her the teacher asks all the boys to stand up an explain why they weren't in class yday and Samar tells the truth and the boys sit down. Bani is feeling out of place but doesn't move and still waiting on Saks to save the day but he is nowhere to be seen.


Suhaan thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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See Gurukul is divided by four years:

1st year - all the new kids like P2, have to stay on the other side with all the other first year GIRL STUDENTS there is also a 1st year boys side as well on the other side of Gurukul and a big wall separates them from interacting Prerna believes that if boys and girls don't interact as much in the first two years they maintain gud grades an in the second year they being to interact an by third year the are mature to make gud dissuasions on there own an also keep gud grades at the same tyme….


2nd year- its still as same as 1st you still have to stay on your own sides but you have a few mixed classes with girls n boys for example like Laksh n Kt an Jai and Prachi but mostly you have to stay on ur sides


3rd year- a little different all the classes are mixed and on a different campus where boys and girls can all interact eat lunch and all classes are mixed for example like Bani Nihaal Saks Vardhan Mantan Samar Kaya


4rh year of Gurukul is the same as 3rd
Edited by Suhaan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
cool
and thnx for updating
plz update nexy part soon
thnx
afshaa
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey hii
plz update soon
cant wait nemore
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
thnx AFSHAA
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part 👏
plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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"Yo kid come here" Saks bosses around a junior "I need your uniform… right now, so take it off… fast" "but its mine an I have to get to my class, I don't wanna be late the first week" the kid replied back to Saks very scared "okay ill give u 100 dollars how's that" Saks tried to bargain with the boy who then said "that's it sirf 100" the kid said smiling back "okay fine 200 kool" Saks bargained again "umm let me think…" the boy said and started wasting time thinking "okay fine 500 please that's all I have" Saks made his final deal and the boy grabbed the money and took off his blazer n switched it around with Sak's blazer. Saks walks in threw the junior Gurukul gates and looks around "man this place changed a lot" he said in his mind and walked inside the caf he saw P2 sitting there all by herself with her nose into her books. "hey babes" Saks said and sat right beside her making P2 very uncomfortable "who are you and how dare you…" P2 said back angry but Saks stopped her an told her "jus chill my names Saks I'm your sisters best friend" Saks said smiling and lookied around for any teachers that might recognize him instantly "you… my Bani di's friend are you crazy her best friends KT so get lost" P2 said back getting more angry with Saks "okay okay jus chill I'm her guy best friend remember I was at your house yesterday …with my lil bro drinking cha and your dupatta… came flying… right to me… laal rang ka tah right…" Saks said smiling really big "oh toh tum ho Saksham sorry I forgot I wasn't paying attention to you anyways that day" P2 said back with attitude which took Saks off gaud "umm yea that's me Saks the one an only ahaha anyways I was paying attention to you that day umm so soo your first year right" "umm if I'm sitting here Saksham what do you think…" P2 said with a lot of attitude this time Saks looked down and P2 started doing her homework again "umm your first year to" she said after a while which took Saks by surprise "umm first year?" Saks said very confused P2 looks up and says "so you just wear the juniors uniform for fun… time pass, don't have anything else to wear?" "nahi… nahi I mean yes I mean yea as in first year at Gurukul" Saks said very scared "what's wrong why are you sweating?" P2 said confused "oh I sweat when umm… when umm, I like… umm I just sweat because its really hot in here… umm want to go for a walk… umm outside jus you n me…umm wait sorry if you want to bring along a friend I don't mind jus a little walk down there" Saks explained to P2 who wasn't interested at all and started pacing her bag up "sorry if you didn't hear the bell rang and my class is about to start sorry" P2 said and left Saks sitting there and thinking "damn that bell" Saks said in his mind and started drinking pepsi then realized if the bell rang that means it rang on the other side as well which means Bani's going to get really mad at him. He gets up and runs to the other side grabs the kid who was talking to his friends both change blazers and Saks runs off "wow you already know a senior that's so kool dude' one of the boys friends said to him "oh him yea were kool like that hes my friend" the boy replies back to his friends thinking he's so kool now that he knows Saks.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
It is good... 👏 do continue 😳

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