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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
ooo thanx for that Suhaan 😃 😳

all day guys 😍 except mihir 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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dude......u gt all da hotties here locked up in ur ff 😳 😳 gud 4 us init.....shiv eku lakshya shaksham nihaal.......*sighs* 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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We stay fly no lie ballin!!! music blasting outta his speakers in his red jeep. Nihaal makes his entry with his boi Samar. A cold beer in one hand and a bat in another, Nihaal walks towards his brother Shiv with a big smile on his face. "What's up bro, long tyme no see…" Nihaal looks around and see's laksh and continues walking towards Shiv "wuh u up to bhi" Nihaal hugs Shiv, but Shiv smiles and quickly grabs the bat saying "baseball team join ki kay?" Nihaal laughs it off and says "team toh hai bhi… magar kuch aur game hai meri" Shiv smiles and give the bat back to Nihaal. Mihar is very upset with Nihaal behavior in the house and is about to say something but Nikila stops him and says "mere beta ka phela din hai, no drama of yours please…" Mihar stops and smiles and tells the whole family to join for lunch. Nihaal laughs and says "papa I already ate at Samar's house" and walks towards Samar and taps him "yea umm.. .We ate at my house sorry" Samar says. "Its alright Nihaal" Shiv says smiling and the rest of the family sits down and starts to eat. "papa I have to make a quick stop and pick up my books, college starts tomorrow" says Laksh and Saks adds onto it by saying "mujhe bhi" Mihar smiles and says "alright go ahead." Both boys get up and leave and Shiv says "take your brother Nihaal with you to" Saks smiles and says "alright bro" and Laksh mumbles "if he would actually study maybe we would've asked….. " but Saks stops him from saying more and takes him away. Shiv is confused, but Baa starts to feed him, and Shiv smiles. Outside of the Kapoor Mansion Nihaal and Samar are getting drunk in there jeep, Samar gets up on the pole and says "loverboy" Nihaals starts laughing looking at Laksh, both Sakz and Laksh walk away. The two brothers get in one car and drive off leaving Nihaal outside with Samar. "soo dude what r we ganna do?" Samaar asks "I dunno, wanna race them to campus?" Nihaal says laughing, Samar smiles and both drive off after Saks and Laksh. Shiv sees this from the deck outside and is confused, just then Bhoomi enters and says "don't worry about it star" "worry about what?" says Shiv confused, "worry about them three…" replies Bhoomi, "why should I be worried?" asks Shiv confused "because no matter how much they hate each other, there still brothers inside the house" Bhoomi says smiling…
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Posted: 18 years ago
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On the highway Saks is driving his blue Ferrari and Nihaal is driving his red jeep behind them. Laksh looks out threw his window and starts laughing, Saks smiles looking at Laksh laughing, but when Saks looks out the window his laughter disappears, "these two will never change" says Laksh lokking out the window again "even after Shivs arrival, you'd think they would stop with there games, but no…" Laksh continues. "Just chill yaar, we should be happy to see Nihaal driving this fast to school" Saks says, and Laksh laughs it off. Saks slows down his car to let Nihaal and Samar win the race, Nihaal and Samar get out of there jeep screaming and drinking beer, "loser loverboy lost again" Nihaal screams out and throws the empty bottle towards Laksh, but he moves and the bottle hit's the ground. Nihaal gives Laksh an angry look and both Samar and Nihaal head inside the school. Saks and Laksh walk in behind them just a few feet. The lineup for the this years books was packed with student, Saks and Laksh get into the line, but Laksh's attention was somewhere else "looking for KT again…" Bani says from behind them, Saks laughs and Laksh smiles.
"yeah, did she tell you when she's coming?" Laksh asks Bani worried, "well she said that she wont be attending college this year sorry" she replies, Saks is smiling, but laksh was confused and ready to cry, Bani laughed and said "look at you , no wonder Nihaal calls you loverboy…" bani and Saks start laughing together "she's coming tomorrow take a chill pill, I'm here to pick up our books" Bani clarifies all three of them wait in line. Nihaal makes a grand entry with Samar and Jai (kayamat) and Vardan (kzk) and Mantan (ksbkbt) and walks in front of everyone to the check out table. Nihaal whistles at the teacher and says "my books please, and thank you" the teacher then says "please Mr. Nihaal you have to wait your turn" Nihaal and his bois start laughing out loud Nihaal breaks the table with his bat the teacher moves back Nihaal says "sorry madam, my bad I don't think you know who I am, my name is Nihaal Kapoor, I'm Mr Mihar's son"
The teacher looks at him and smiles "listen mister I don't know what you think you are outside of this college, but in this college you're my student, so show me some respect or get lost" Jai stops Nihaal for making matters worse and says "sorry madam" and takes Nihaal and every at the end of the line. Nihaal looks at Laksh smiling away and throws his bat in his direction, this time it hits Laksh but Saks stops Laksh from fighting and the teaches call the security, they came and took Samar, Nihaal,Varadan, Jai and Mantan and threw them all outside of the college and told them to come tomorrow with a better attitude. The boys are all on the ground just then Kaya shows up and is laughing at Samar's stupidity but Mantan gets up and stops her path and says "better watch it…" Kaya is scared just then someone taps Mantans shoulder from behind, Mantan turns around and its Shiv everyone is shocked specially Nihaal and Samar who quickly get up and start wiping all the dust off there clothes…
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Posted: 18 years ago
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"Better watch what…" Shiv says smiling just then Eklavya shows up and is looking at Mantan in very angry way. Eklavya takes Kaya inside then comes back out again to settle Mantan's case, Shiv see's Nihaal and Samar and tells them to go home right away. Nihaal walks away smiling towards his jeep, but Samar starts saying things like "please, he's one of our friends, he wont do it again his names Mantan, me and Nihaal know him" Shiv turns around to Nihaal and says "he's one of your friends?" Nihaal smiles and says I guess, if Samar says so, Mantan is shocked "if you do anything like this again I swear…" says Shiv and takes Eklavya away. Mantan and Nihaal get into a little argument because Nihaal didn't defend him in front of Shiv, But Nihaal laughs it off by saying "you should have never done stupid things like stopping kaya in the first place…" Mantan laughs and says "so what if I stopped her" Nihaal looks shocked and says "dude you should be praying that my brother tapped you first before that Eklavya did" Nihaal sits in his jeep and so does everyone else, they drive off leaving Mantan and jai there. Jai tells Mantan not to do anything like that again because Eklavya is a very strong person, that loves his sisters a lot, Mantan starts laughing and says things like "I can take both these losers, I was just worried I didn't want Nihaal to get mad that I knocked out his brother in front of him…" Jai is laughing at the fact that Mantan said something like this and walks away. Inside Laksh, Saks, and Bani finally get there books they spot Kaya getting her books and all four come outside Saks sees Jai siting on the bench and walks over to him "thanks for taking my brother outta there before he made things worse" Saks said to Jai, "don't worry bout it mate" Jai answers and walks away. Kaya spots her bother Eklavya sitting in his car waiting for her and tells everyone that she has to go now. Saks, Laksh decide to drop Bani off at her place, before they head home. Everyone leaves the campus lot at Bani's house she asks Laksh and Saks to some inside they didn't want to, but some how Bani got them both inside. Bani said that she will make cha for them after she changes. Saks is walking around the house and looking at pictures he spots a picture of a really beautiful girl that he couldn't take his eyes off of. Just then Prerna (kzk) walks in she knows Saks and Laksh threw there father Mahir both Prena and Mahir met each other threw business related cases so she often visit's the Kapoor Mansion, she was delighted to see both of them sitting there.



Edited by Suhaan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
wow the story line is going just too great
i love the characters
so much hottness is here damn
i cant take take this heat any more
but i will happily take this risk
as i lov it
i love your ff
thnx
afshaa
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: afshaa!!!

wow the story line is going just too great
i love the characters
so much hottness is here damn
i cant take take this heat any more
but i will happily take this risk
as i lov it
i love your ff
thnx
afshaa


thanks for loving my ff lol yea I tryed my best to put all the gud characters in this fanfic and thanks alot for liking it I will updates soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey i am a little confused
and the confusion is tht when eklavya met shiv for the first time he said his name is eklavya virani
and eklavya is gauri's brother then her name also should be gauri virani
then why is it tht her name is gauri dixit

thnx afshaa
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59

wow all hotties in the ff...

nice ff suhaan

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: afshaa!!!

hey i am a little confused
and the confusion is tht when eklavya met shiv for the first time he said his name is eklavya virani
and eklavya is gauri's brother then her name also should be gauri virani
then why is it tht her name is gauri dixit

thnx afshaa



yea lol its supoose to be like that its a twist which reveals later on hes not really there brother... the girls are from a different father and ekus from a totaly different family and lives with them
Edited by Suhaan - 18 years ago

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