FF: In Dino The Year 2020 (UPDATE PG 13)

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Hello everyone my name is Suhaan I'm from New York City and I HATE Ekta lol she ruins my day every time I watch one of her dramas. . . Well I only watch them for the leading ladies but some how I always get caught up in the story lines lol and they disturb me a lot like the story starts off really really good but Ekta has to ruin them all!!! so I came up with this idea to write my own fanfic and I'm not just writing about KAA but I'm also going to be writing about KZK and KS and KSBKBT so you all will see familiar characters in my fanfic the characters that strike me the most in these four dramas will all be in my fanfic called "In Dino The Year 2020" this will have all 4 of Ektas "K" serials combined in one keep in mind that it's the year 2020 an so therefore technology changed a lot… its not your average Bombay no more;)

In Dino The Year 2020...

As he sat in front of his laptop in Caf Delhi, everyone could see India's heat was getting to him. He was new to Delhi… we knew this because he had packed his whole life in his suitcases. I stood staring at him didn't know what to address him by my boss stood staring at me waiting for me to take this mans order, I slowly walked up to him he shut his laptop and smiled, I was about to open my mouth but he said "one coffee please" I wrote it into my pad right away and looked up and smiled at him. I turned towards my boss and the man said "and make it fast, my trains about to arrive" I turned around once again and smiled. I didn't know why I kept smiling after I left the lobby, I just kept on smiling, I made the coffee and placed it on his table with the bill on the right side the man quickly said "I'm knew to India and I have no cash, do you take credit cards?" I smiled and said of course we do sir and he said "its Shiv, Shiv Kapoor" I stood there staring in shock, he passed me his credit card, and smiled. My boss walked over right then, and used the credit card and took out 12 rupees for the coffee. I passed it back into Mr. Shiv hands and left. I watched from a far distance, he got up and placed his laptop in his baggage and threw his blue blazer on his shoulders and grabbed his bags and walked out towards the station out front. My boss came over right then when Mr. Kapoor walked out and congratulated me on my first customer. I jumped in joy and screamed out "do you even know who that was" he stared "that was Shiv Kapoor, the rock star! Shiv Kapoor" my boss stood staring at me, "Shiv Kapoor was my first customer!" my boss left me jumping in joy…

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Suhaan thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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soo lol how did i do was is good or bad
should i continue or just stop lol? 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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It is good 👏 ... do continue.. I will be reading..and looking forward to the next installment... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Do continue.... its a nice take...! Will look forward to the next installments of the story ...!

Cheers!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank you for commenting on my FF and yes i will surely continue it 😃 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW WHAT A NICE START N PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONT SOON WILL BE WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART 😛
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yeh definately continue...great start, its a different concept

xxxx
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thats a good start Suhaan 😳 😆

am surprised credit cards still existt in 2020 😳
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Originally posted by: Anisha7

thats a good start Suhaan 😳 😆

am surprised credit cards still existt in 2020 😳


yea lol credit cards do exist lol Shivz jus to rich to be walkin round with all that money money money!!!
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Shiv walks into the train station and turns and walks to the ticket counter "ek ticket to Bombay please, and thank you" the ticket man says "arre shab aap please apke turn wait karo" Shiv replies "arre main to first hoon" just then someone taps Shiv's shoulder and says "agar tu first hai to main?" Shiv quickly turns around and says "please let go of me, mujhe train board karni hai" the man says "just chill yaar, mujhe bhi train board karni hai" and laughs and says "we'll both board this train don't worry" Shiv smiles and says "alright" and both the men ask for two tickets to Bombay, the ticket man looks at his computer and says "there is only one seat available in this train to Bombay" and both men look at each other, Shiv says "please I need to arrive to Bombay in 2 hours this trains the closest ride I have that will get me to Bombay in time" the ticket man says that "I have no problem with you boarding this train but ask the man behind you" Shiv turns around and says "please" the man says "look dude I have to arrive in Bombay too" Shiv looks down towards the ground sad, the man says "but… I can arrive whenever I want however, you have to arrive in the next two hours, so here take my ticket" Shiv looks up and says "thank you so much, by the way my name is Shiv, Shiv Kapoor" the man laughs and says my name is "Bond, James Bond" Shiv looks at the man confused, he doesn't know if the man is joking or serious, so Shiv just smiles and picks up his bags. The man bursts out laughing and says "sorry ahah my names Eklavya, Eklavya Varani" Shiv shakes Eklavya hand and leaves to board his train. Inside the train Shiv cant find his seat, he asks a young girl for help and she screams out "oh my god, Shiv Kapoor" Shiv stands there and smiles at her she says that "your seat is right here across from me" Shiv looks at the two numbers and says "right" both him and the girl sit across from each other. Shiv takes out his laptop again and starts to type, he sees the young girl staring at him from the corner of his eyes but he's to busy typing to talk to her. "Hi" Shiv looks beside him the girl is sitting right there now, Shiv says "ummm hello" and turns right back around, the young girl says "hi, my name is Bani" and is smiling at Shiv "hey, my name is Shiv" and smiles right back at her, the girl starts laughing and says of course your Shiv, I'm like your biggest fan" Shiv replies with a "thank you, Bani" and the train starts to take off…

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