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Posted: 18 years ago
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ahah i only watch KZK n KAA dats it lol n KS i only watched a few tymes cuz of Bani n ksbkt crap i hardly watch cuz its gay lol i only like a few characters in that show an dats about it most of my characters r from KAA n KZK
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suhaan

ahah i only watch KZK n KAA dats it lol n KS i only watched a few tymes cuz of Bani n ksbkt crap i hardly watch cuz its gay lol i only like a few characters in that show an dats about it most of my characters r from KAA n KZK


that is why i was having trouble. i dont watch KZK. i know mos of the shows are boring. ektas just dragging them on and on
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Posted: 18 years ago
#73
yea thats why i stopped watchin most of the shows cuz dey keep dragging on n on lol but iv been watchin kAA n KZK for a long tyme now and der are alot of KZK people n my ff so it might get confusing thats why i made the family trees n stuff so people can understand how my characters look n there roles
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74
plz continue soon
and its just awesome
cant wait
and dont make us wait
thnx afshaa
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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
The next day Shiv is sleeping and Saks and Laksh come running into his room "bhia, bhia, bhia!!!" Laksh is screaming in Shivs ear, and Saksham is screaming in the other "wake up 9 sharp bhia!!!" Shiv gets up and says "oh shit" and runs into his washroom 10 minutes later he comes out ready and says "where are we going guys?" Laksh laughs and says "where going to school and your going to the mandhir" "ahaha no I'm not" Shiv replies back and heads downstairs "alright bhia you can act tuff in front of us, but your going to listen to Baa no matter what happens" Laksh says before him and Saks walk out of the house. Shiv sits down across from his dad and is about to eat when he is interrupted by his father "Baa told me your going to the madhir today with her" "actually dad I was thinking that maybe I can go to the office today with you, because all the boys are going to college today and so…" Shiv explains his way out "oh yes that's right college starts today, same college same problems, same stories…" Mihar says Shiv looks up a little confused and is about to say something when Mihar says "your going with Baa today and tomorrow your going to the studio, you don't have a clue about business and I'm not about to humiliate my self by taking you with me" Mihar says laughing and Shivs smiles back and bites his apple. Just then Baa comes down and sits and starts to eat "ready?" Baa says "umm yea well umm can I at least eat the apple?" Shiv replies "bring it with you" Baa replies back and grabs Shiv's arm walks out with him while Mihar is sitting reading the newspaper, just then Nikla walks in and says, "I saw Baa take Shiv somewhere, umm threw the window" "yea you saw right" Mihar replies back with his face in the news. "ummm where did she take him babes?" Nikla asked confused "mandir, biwi ko dekne" Mihar replied back smiling and still with his head in the news paper "what? Kiski biwi ko dekne?" she asked again "Shiv ki future biwi ko dekne" Mihar said fed up and closed his newspaper and grabbed his green apple and walked out just then Bhumi came down "paapa office time" both Bhumi and Mihar walked out of the house while Nikila sat there eating by herself. Samar and Nihaal both come downstairs kicking a soccer ball Nikila is shocked to see them there. "tum dono aur…" Nikila said fed up "sorry mom umm… I went to get the books yday but voh teacher ne mera saat bohut…" Nihaal explained to his mom Nikila but she still sat in shock "teacher ne kya kia?" she then said "she kicked me out before I could get my books" Samar picked up a red apple and began to bite on it. "how dare she do that" Nikila demanded Nihaal an Samar sat down and began to eat "Im going to have to call Prerna and get to the bottom of this" Samar looks up with his clown face Nihaal looks up at him then back down "shhh shhh oye Nihaal shhh…" Samar trying to get Nihaal's attention "shes going to call Prerna Gurukul ki head ko phone…" Samar explains whispering but Nihaal smiles and says "mother there's no need to call Prernaji because she has no idea what happened, and me and Samar are visiting the school anyways later on "magar beta voh teacher ki itne himaat ke…" Nikila explained "don't worry auntyji main aur Nihaal ganna reach the school after we eat, and we will umm talk to Prernaji if we see her" Samar said smiling "umm teek hai" Nikila says and leaves for the office as well. Both Nihaal and Samar pig out on the kitchen table when Nikila leaves Vardhan and Manthan show up after Nikila leaves and all four of the boys get in Nihaals jeep and drive off to Gurukul.

WELL FROM HERE ON ITS ALL ABOUT GAURI AND SHIV
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Edited by Suhaan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
plz update soon
cant wait for shiv and gauris meeting
plz update soon
thnx for the wonderful update
afshaa
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
nice part 😊
eagerly w8n 4 da next part
plz plz cont soon
looking farward 4 shiv nd gauri 1st meeting 😳
plzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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"Baa will it kill u to walk a little bit faster" "yes it will kill me… wait Shiv we have to go over there an get our blessings first" "if we go over there then we cant by the flowers and everything else that you said we needed" Shiv replied very irritated with Baa "why are you walking so fast are you shamed of me" Baa said very hurt, Shiv stopped turned around fully, took off his shades then said "no Baa its just that if my fans see me at the… mandir… they might… I mean, you know… it doesn't go with the image, so walk faster"
"I don't care we are going to get blessing from panditji " Baa demanded "tera panditji ki toh main…" Shiv said, but was cut off by Baa "oye chup kar jah Shiv he can hear us now " "okay kool, whatever im not scared of him, let him hear" Shiv said mumbling behind Baa now. Both Baa and Shiv walk into panditji's room there they both sit down and Baa tells Shiv to take his blessings which Shiv does and Baa begins talking about a suitable girl for Shiv and Shiv gets mad and walks out of the room leaving Baa and panditji laughing Baa shows some of Shivs horoscopes and then panditji says "this will be a very lucky day for our Shiv" FLASHBACK SHOWS Shiv walking outside putting his blue shades back on slow motion style (whoever watched Shivs entry in KAA understand wuh im talkin bout) "he will meet someone special today" FLASHBACK SHOWS Shiv walking right threw a crowd of people throwing his black blazer on covering his white tank top underneath "he will meet someone who will guide him when the time is needed, love him, and take care of him" FLASHBACK SHOWS the mandir staircase (imagine a camera is taking u up the staircase slowly and into the mandhir) "but who can she be" Baa asked "she will be our Shivs first love, first wife, the mother of his children, all 200 poles holding up your mansion she will be the first bahu in the Kapoor Mansion Baa" FLASHBACK SHOWS the girls eyes opening slowly "she will be the perfect choice Baa, she will change Shiv for the better, she will take the responsibility of everyone" FLASHBACKS SHOW Shiv smiling and looking around, then going up the staircase "but where will she be" Baa asked "she can be anywhere today, even here" FLASHBACK SHOWS Shiv up the staircase and taking off his shoes "how will we know if she's the one panditji" FLASHBACKS SHOW Shiv walking into the mandhir with his hands together "we will never know Baa, until Shiv knows" FLASHBACK SHOWS Shiv walking towards Gauri Maa's Statue And praying "what if he never knows" Baa says FLASHBACKS SHOWS Shiv standing still behind a girl praying "don't worry Baa Shiv will know everything" FLASHBACK SHOWS the girl turning around slowly and Shiv opens his eyes slowly and see's her turning around… both eyes meet and the wind starts to blows all the bells in the mandhir back and forth the girls diya is glowing and she quickly puts her hand on it to cover it from burning out, but Shiv beats her to it and both stay standing still hand on hand with eyes locked………
Edited by Suhaan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#79
awesome its just fabulus
but it was short we wan a long one
plz update soon cauze u take alot of time
thnx afshaa
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
Suhaan, I'm reserving this spot... Will definately come to read~

Cheers,
dc

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