FF: In Dino The Year 2020 (UPDATE PG 13) - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Suhaan


lol yea i like to write stories alot im good at it i guess lol thats why im on a roll lol
imma put the next part up in a minute 😊 im jus trying to get the story moving faster so i can get all of Shivs family involved etc. etc.


can do wid some more hotties😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Himu


can do wid some more hotties😳

like?? Shiv's grandad?? 🤢

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Posted: 18 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Anisha7

comin atcha with dat POOF gun now 🤣


bring it on gal!!
im ready wid ma POOF wand inittttt😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Anisha7

like?? Shiv's grandad?? 🤢


ewww
watz wrong wid ur choice anishaaaaaaaaaaaa😆
dis bhashans takin a serious toll on u gal😆
someday amongst american hunks n dat gona set u rite😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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@Himu--- nah i waz messin wid dat shiv grandad ting 😳

dat wand is wak 😆 ish no contest@
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
The train stopped and Bani was shocked, Shiv got up threw his blue blazer on his shoulders again and grabbed all his baggage, Shiv was about to leave, but looked back at Bani still shocked and sitting there, "umm hello you getting off or what?" "umm oh yea, wait wait your laksh's older brother Shiv?" "umm yea, so are you getting off yet?" Shiv replied smiling at Bani, "yea just wait let me grab my bags." Both Shiv and Bani get off at the platform one after the other, "so your Shiv and laksh is your younger brother" bani said once again confused "yes im Shiv and Laksh is my youngest brother kush, now keep moving" Bani started moving again "so how come your brother never told KT or me about you?" Bani said confused again Shiv was to busy looking around to answer her question "hey you" a voice from behind again, Shiv turned around and it was Eklavya the guy from Delhi "how did you get her so fast man?" Shiv said very shocked, "didn't I tell you I can fly?" Eklavya replied back to Shiv Smiling, "umm… okay" Shiv didn't know again what to say, "ahahaha, I'm jus pulling your leg, I grabbed the back of your train when it took off" Eklavya said laughing it off, "so you sneaked on the train" Bani said "umm who are you again?" Eklavya said to Bani "oh shit sorry, my bad this is Bani my tour guide, Bani this is Eklavya" Both said hi to each other, Shiv asked "Eklavya do you know where I can get a taxi from" "umm yea but all the taxi are taken it looks like, umm wait there's one over there come" Eklavya answered. "Come Bani" Shiv said while walking ahead with Eklavya, "umm I live this way and my fathers probably waiting for me over there some place"
Bani replied to Shiv, "wait Eklavya let me drop her off to her father, and you grab that last taxi" Shiv said to Eklavya, "no no, its alright Mr. Kapoor I know my way around, don't worry you get into that taxi with your friend Eklavya" Shiv looked at Bani for a while and then said "alright, then" Bani replied with "if you feel like seeing Bombay, just give me a call, you have my number" "Shiv touched his blue blazer pocket and said "cool" "yoo are you coming Shiv or what!" Eklavya's voice shouted across the platform "yea yea hold on" Shiv said and looked back towards Bani to say the last word, but Bani beat him to it by saying "phir milenge…" a long silence between the two happened, and Bani turned around and walked into the crowd behind her, Shiv turned around and walked towards the taxi, Eklavya was already sitting at the front, Shiv gave his baggage to the driver who put it all away in the trunk, then Shiv grabbed a seat at the back behind Eklavya, "don't worry, it happens" Eklavya said long silence happened "when what happens?" Shiv said confused , both sat in the car staring at the crowd walking by when Eklavya added "when someone falls in love…" Shiv started to laugh, but when he saw Eklavya's face he stopped laughing. Shiv said "don't worry nothing happened like that to me yet, but I'll tell you when I'm in a taxi with you the next time…" Eklavya laughed but in his mind said "your in love Shiv, but you just don't know it" the driver started the car, and took off.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
it was soo cool
i just finished reading it and it was just awesome
no words to describe
thnx for this so cool ff
and ya shiv falling in love with bani
toh phir jai aur gauri ka kya hoga !!!! o god
pata nahi kya hoga
well jo bhi hoga app ko he pata hai
keep updating its cool
thnx afshaa!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
The taxi took off towards the other side of the platform, and Shiv saw Bani and her family laughing and embracing each other, after seeing this Shiv smiled and rolled his widow down for sum air, Eklavya saw this threw the mirror at the front and smiled. The taxi made it threw the underground parking lot and out threw the back towards Santa Cruz and then the towards Bandra area. "slow down the car" Eklavya said near a really big mansion, he got out and the driver passed him his bag, Shiv also got out of the taxi to say goodbye to Eklavya "so this is it my man, see you around" Eklavya said, "yeah I guess we'll be seeing a lot of each other, I live near by" Shiv replied. Just then a young girl came running out of the house shouting "Eklavya bhi!" both Shiv and Eklavya turned around and Eklavya ran towards her and hugged her while Shiv stood on the sidewalk and watched. Eklavya brought the girl over and introduced her to Shiv "oh my god, Shiv Kapoor!" the girl screamed out "yes that would be me" Shiv replied "oh my god bhi this is the rock star I keep talking about!" the girl said to Eklavya, "well he's my friend Shiv, and Shiv this is my little sister kaya" Shiv said to Kaya. "nice to meet another fan" Shiv replied to Kaya. Both Kaya and Shiv shook each others hand and Eklavya said "Kaya where's Gauri?" Kaya said "Gauri di is inside doing puja" Eklavya smiled and said "how come your not doing puja?" Kaya smiled and ran back inside. Eklavya and Shiv laughed and then Eklavya said "well that was my little sister Kaya and I also have another sister Gauri she's older then kaya, I wanted you to meet her as well, but" Eklavya explained, "don't worry I'll meet her some other day bye" Eklavya laughed and said "alright I'll see you around" Shiv sat in front and the taxi took off again. Shiv and Eklavya waved to each other and Eklavya turned towards his house…
Inside the car after a few minutes the taxi driver says "aap ka ghar?" Shiv says to "take a left from here and another right and just keep driving until I say stop." The house arrived and Shiv gets out of the taxi and throws his blue blazer over his shoulders and the driver hands him his bags, and just then Bhoomi and
and Saksham (kzk) come running out. The driver askz for money and Bhoomi pays him "thanks sis" Shiv says and Bhoomi replys with "that's the least I can do for my lil bro" and then she hugs him Shiv turns around towards Sakz and says 'what's up lil bro" and they hug each other, Saks picks up Shivs bags and Bhoomi takes Shiv inside the house. Inside the Kapoor Mansion Bhoomi screams out "Shivs home!" and Saks quickly takes the bags to Shiv's room and comes back down again. Baa (ksbkbt) comes out from the little madir inside the mansion and hugs Shiv and laksh come out of his room to greet his older bro Shiv.
Shiv ask's laksh "where is mom and dad" and laksh is about to answer, but they come down stairs from behind and hug him. The whole family sits down and begin asking Shiv questions about his life and what he did all these years, and how does it feel being a rock star etc. But Shiv looks around again and is wondering where Nihaal is (kzk)
Edited by Suhaan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
Part 6- Dis Bani girl is so confused 😆 😆

Part 7- We got to read about Bhooomi 😃 😆

I duno any of da KZK characters 😕 Oh well..

Keep writing and updating fast 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
that is the kapoor family tree and also mihars grandmother baa lives with them

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