ff can’t help falling in love(NOTE pg.5)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Can't help falling in love by Jcluvs srk

Insan jab kuch sochta hain, woh usse pura karne ki koshish karta hain. Apni marzi se jo kuch bhi ho jaye, woh achi hain. Lekin joh humari marzi se nahi hota hain….woh aur bhi acha hota hain. Kyun ki uss mein baghwan ka marzi shamil hota hain. (said by Ram from KAA)

Some things are just meant to be….some things like love. Two individuals…who love two different people…are brought together by circumstances…circumstances created by God. Now it was only a matter of time…until they can't help falling in love…with each other.

PART 1

The sun cut through the darkness of the previous night, bringing a new day. The early morning mist slowly cleared, as the birds began their happy chirp. There, on top of a hill, stood an elegant house…no, not a house…a mansion. A beautiful mansion it truly was, a residence that reflected the family full of love living in it. A family that had money, stature, and respect. This mansion was home to the Jaisinghs, one of the richest families living in India.

Someone started to sing…a very sweet voice reciting a prayer in front of God's statue. A girl with long, straight, jet black hair, reaching past her waist. Her brown eyes, almost hazel, framed with kohl. Skin light enough to resemble snow, with just a hint of pink on the cheeks. Her delicate hands holding a platter…her puja ki thali…with the diya burning bright.

She slowly turned when she noticed her parents walk in. she then raised the thali for her parents. She then bent down to touch their feet, getting their blessing. When she stands up you see her face.

Yashvardan Jaisingh: god bless you my child. (he gently placed a hand on his daughter's head)

Suguna Jaisingh softly kissed her daughter's forehead.
Suguna: good morning Ippshita. God bless you. (suguna then frowned) where's Gauri?

Ippshita gave a dazziling smile at the mention of her elder sister.
Ippi: mom she left early today

Yash frowned: this girl will never learn. She just makes excuses to skip puja. Suguna you completely spoiled her.

Ippi: arre nahi dad gauri di was here earlier, but she left before you came.

Suguna gave a satisfied look at her husband: see…gauri may be a little modern, but she doesn't forget her culture.

Yash sighs: I know I know…but I sometimes get worried for her. You know how gauri is.

A girl wearing jeans and a red tank top is shown walking. Hair just as black has ippshitta's, thick waves cascading down her back to stop at her waist.

Suguna: don't worry…gauri knows how to take care of herself.

She bent down to pick up her car keys she dropped. A guy standing behind her whistled. Not breaking stride, the girl slowly stood up…and turned around giving the guy a back handed slap. The guy held his cheek surprised as the girl snapped her finger in front of his face, daring him to whistle again in her presence.

Ippi: yea dad, gauri di may be a little daring, but she knows what's right and wrong.

She reached the top shelf for a shirt that caught her eye in the store. The gesture causing her top to rise a little…enough to expose the tattoo of a rose with vines and thorns…placed on the right side of her lower back. Her kohl layered eyes then noticed a lady in a wheelchair struggling to reach a bag on the top shelf. She abandoned her task to help that lady.

Yash: ok I get the point. (he then smiled because he knew what they said was true. His elder daughter truly was one of a kind)

Smooth, dusky skin that girls envied…and men craved to touch.
Some man shouted: hey! Gauri! Over here!
She turned at the mention of her name. Her dimple flashing as you see her face…


here u go...i kno its short but the next update is gonna be longer...n it'll reveal about the story line as well. 😉
Edited by JCluvs srk - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow, gr8 intro
sounds interestin,
i thought gauri was doin pooja but she has a tattoo instead
its difficult 2 imagine!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 wow JC just thinking i will pm u and ask when u r starting new ff.

ippi as good girl,i dint digest it yaar it will take time 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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really interesting reading the description of the first girl i though that is gauri
gauri is quite different...relly excited for this fanfic
continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wats this?....47 views n only 4 replies...common silent readers comment..please...otherwise i'll think tat no1 is liking it n will stop writing...n for those who did reply....thanks a bunch....luv u guys to bits n pieces.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds interesting
plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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brilliant.. gauri's avatar in this ff is quite a shock. a pleasant shock!

please do continue!!

👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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JC cool!!....

Wow look forward to this one as well 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wht ippy is the religious one 😕 ????tht itself is new!!!loved the way it has took off!!!pls continue soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well its too good 👏 👏 👏
i like it n intresting tooo 😉 gauri's new avtar trying something new !!!!! i liked it 😳u'll have to update soon
plss do cont...soon
we'll be waiting 😃
Edited by koolkitty - 18 years ago

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