ff can’t help falling in love(NOTE pg.5) - Page 3

shiv is gauris' sisters boyfriend how did that happen?
gr8 update i just hope sg end up together

jc that is shocking
gauri-shashank 😆
ippy-shiv 😆
well i jus want to read the next part
god cant wait for the next part

wow that part was soo good! 👏 i ca't wit till SG meet!! plz cont soon!! 😊 😊 😊

jc u turned the whole thing around gauri modern and ipshi cultured. it was gr8. i would like to read more so cont sooon. i am sure it will be as good as last one. 👏

shiv-ippy,gauri-shanky something is wrong with these pairs
and shiv is so different from the guy that gauri is describing
can't wait for them to meet...continue soon

Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

Can't help falling in love Haal toh humara bhi kuch aisa hi hai jaaneman... Can't help but fall in love with your works... by Jcluvs srk

Insan jab kuch sochta hain, woh usse pura karne ki koshish karta hain. Apni marzi se jo kuch bhi ho jaye, woh achi hain. Lekin joh humari marzi se nahi hota hain….woh aur bhi acha hota hain. Kyun ki uss mein baghwan ka marzi shamil hota hain. (said by Ram from KAA)

Kya dialouge hai, wah wah!! Kaunsi movie se liya??😆 (Ram ne) Jokes apart, very beautifully stated. Indeed, joh khush unjaane se mile, uski toh baat hi kuch alag hoti hai.

Some things are just meant to be….some things like love. Two individuals…who love two different people…are brought together by circumstances…circumstances created by God. Now it was only a matter of time…until they can't help falling in love…with each other.

Abey oye, marwaane ka irada hai kya? Apun ko laga ke dil ka circuit zara zor se laga re😳

Firstly, the plot... Ipshitta, singing... long black hair... snow-like skin (uff... don't go in the sun... I like a bit of a tan😳)... Lol, sorry. Nice... a nice change from what we see onscreen for sure. Gauri, hip and happening... Lord, I LOVE that. Very refreshing... Not that I don't like her as she is, but I like the different dimensions here. And right... the pig-head... Ok, me drifting from that before my BP shoots the roof.😳

Gorgeous execution. You've really experimented this time. The descriptions are very nicely conveyed. I've been an admirer of your way of being able to get the characters to speak without opening thier lips... And now looking forward to whatever comes along.

I'm ready baby, bring it on!

👏

Cheers,

dc

omg...tht was soo good...i love the whole concept...do continue soon. i love shiv's description...haii

o0o0o cant wait for the next part!!!!!

yay, shiv came!!!!
great part!!!
continue soon plz!!!
😊

awesome story
can't wait for you to continue
please continue soon 😊 😊