New Short FF: 'Ajnabee' Part 5, pg.21 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Catwoman

OK first of how can u every disappoint me???? 😕 😕 .... NO Way sweetie!! 😛 ... Never!!!...

Hehe... thanku Di! I hope I don't😕

Wow im hooked on this

What need had she for such things... She had no connection with anything... anyone... Ajnabee shehar... Ajnabee log... Ajnabee hasrat... She was but a mere... Ajnabee.......

Me hooked remembers me of that song in Dil se...SRK plays that song on the radio..... 😍 ... "Hai Ajnabee"... 😳 😳

huh? what song does he play? where??😕 😳

OK me hooked and geared up for this ride... Hell Yes!! lmao... okes, u're such an encouragement!!

Billo

BTW.... Cheers for this really... now i'm having this Shiv!!😉 haha... I have no problem sharing anything... but Mirchi... chalo, just cause you'd requested this...😕

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

oooooohh I like it, I love her expressions, her feeling, mouthwatering stuff, Di, tussi dinner nayi keeta?😆 jk... u're expressions are dil dharka-ing😆

give it to me baby, 😳 😳, I have so much stuff on word which i am to read, yet. lmao... that reminds me of an old song... oh god!!😆😳

Hopefully I will keep up with this, keep writing, Ajnabee is such an expressive name in itself makes u wanna read. loved what I read. I'm smiling like a langoor... u're wunnerphul Di... ehniyan tareefan na kariya karo, me not worth it!😳

cheersxoxo

btw r u sure it is not a poem, 😳, it is so like, limrick erm...😕 as far as I know... it's not...😕😳

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: Rock_Star

dii don't be sad i was also feeling very guilty yesterday...i am fine now...anyways i loved the preview...it sound really interesting
can't wait to read it

meri rocker, thanks yaar... I'm ace, dont'cha worry😃 just had a moment. glad u liked it, u're a star!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

glad ur startin a new fic.....actually i think i'm gonna do a jig right now..."stands up and dances around the room".....ok i'm done hehehee....its a great begining....man i really envy ur choice of words.....each one has sooo much depth...keep up the great work.

hogaya right?... now sit in ur chair... take a breath and start punching keys, cause the clock is ticking and my danda is itching... and itni tareefien unke liye sambhal kar rakho, jo inke layak ho... u're such pagli... but I love u nonetheless😃

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: amneet89

party over here,party over there...neetu di thanks for starting a new ff.
this one sounds very deep and interesting
i m looking forward to it 😳



Asever 😉

Amneet 😳

Amnu!! My putt!! You're too kind to ur crazy di here😆 tere muh vich khand mishri behna!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: ash9

hey dc
where is the rest of the story???
im sure kat likes this 1
she will never say no to a FF 😉

Ash, it was just a teaser, show is on the way... I hope she does! haha... will she never!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: gujibabe

just read the intro!!!
such a good use of words!!!
plz continue soon!!!
😊

thanks guji, I tried!😛

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: tonkrox

thanks DC, you are a wonderful writer, now as for ajnabe, a girl in a strange place, strange sorroundings, how does she fare with life and fate, I am looking forward to it.

tonker ji, thank u for the time and wunnerful commentos!😳 yeah, I hope I don't disappoint... eeek!😆

Cheers,

dc