(mausum pyar ka) ff on shivgauri pt4pg7 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

awwww 😆 😆 😆 how cute....so its luv at first sight for shiv....i like it 😛 ....hehehe n i'm still laughing over gauri's weird habit...hehehehe

yep it is love at first site for shiv i am glad you liked it😊that habit was taken from a movie called tirchi topi wale i found it hilarious so i decided to use it on this ff

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Posted: 18 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: mintfresh

nice update
shiv is cute
plz cont soon

thankyou😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: koolkitty

gauri has a really weird habbit 😆 😆 😆
i like that sweety muskaan 😃 she is cute n intellegent too 😉
i'll be waiting 4 the next one
n make it soon up 😉

yeah she does 😆

she is really sweet and isn't she

i'll be updating soon😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: amneet89

baap bimaar pada hai hospital mein...aur shiv sahab ko ishq ladaane ki padi hai...aaj kal ke bache 😆 i know aaj kal ke bache hote hi asai, but can you really blame him for falling in love with gauri😳
that was a nice update. thankyou😊
muskaan is such a sweetheart yep she is
gauri ke bins ye hoapital chalta hai ya nahin,jisse dekho gauri ko bula raha hai what can i say everyone loves her
this is jus brilliant. 👏 i love this ff.plz cont soon thanx soooooooo much i will contiue soon😊

Edited by iqbal-pallavi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

haila, Muskaan is going to play a cupid for Shiv-Gauri, that is so cute, but unfair to Gauri, as She doesn't know anything about Shiv, the takla part was so hillarious 😆 anyways waiting for the next part.

gauri will gradually know about shiv too so don't worry, yeah the takla part was funny i am glad yoou liked it, the neaxt part will be up soon😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#46

Part 4

shiv and muskan were talking about gauri and her habits and were lauging at some of her weird habits when kashish came in the room
''muskaan tum abhi tak soyi nahi''
''emm voh...''
''actually i wanted to know something so i came to talk to her'
'shiv inturrepted
''you wanted to know something, aisi kya baat hain jo sirf muskaan hi baata sakti hain''
''gauri aunty ki bare mein''
shiv and kashish looked at muskan, shiv looking embarssed and kashish looking confused
''matlab''
''he wanted to know about gauri aunty''
''about gauri, but why''
''because he looves her, he wants to kiss her''m
uskaan started singing
shiv looked totally embarresed and kashish started laughing
''muskaan i think you should go to sleep now''
''ok''
kashish put muskaan to bed and kissed her fore head
''goodnight muskaan''
''goodnight aunty, goodnight uncle''
''goodnight'
'said shiv smiling
after putting muskaan to bed shiv andkashish turned to leave but muskaans voice made them turn around
''kya huan''
''shiv uncle, good luck''

shiv smiled and left and kashish followed
''do you really love gauri''
''i don't know, i don't know what love is but one thing i do know is that gauri has blown me away with her innocence with he beauty, no other girls have been able to do what gauri has done to me''
''gauri has that kind of magic that makes everyone fall in love with her, she is a very sweet girl''
''yeah, she is, i wish i could know more about her, she is one of a kind''
''go and talk to her, try to know her''
''how can i just go and talk to her , she'll think i'm weird, i need an excuse''
''you do''
'' i do'' shiv looked at kashish confused
''yes you do''
''ohhhhhhh i know, thank alot kashish''
''your welcome''
shiv goes from there leaving kashish in her thought tumhe to help milgayi bar who's gonna help me get my love my sujal(rajeev khandelwal)..........

knock knock
''come in''shouts gauri
the door opens and the most sexiest man alive steps in the room lightning the atmosphere
''mr shiv kapoor aap''
''haan mein emmmmmm...actually i came here to talk about my dad''
''mr kapoor your dad is absaloutley fine now don't worry but aaj apki dad bach gayi lekin agli baar baghwan na kare bar shayad voh bach na paye''
''matlab'
'shiv asked confused
''shiv..i mean.. mr.kapoor''
''it's o.k you can call me shiv''

gauri smiling ''shiv....(now with a straight face)apki dad par kisine attack kiya hain and they will try to attack him again thats why i suggest you should keep a bodygaurd for him''
''your right but......... you don't know my dad he's very stubborn he will never keep an bodygaurd''
''well you have to make him understand........shiv i know how it feels to lose a father it hurts alot,i seen my mam breaking when she saw her husbands lifeless body,jin haathon mein kabhi churiya bajtiti ab vohi hi haath suni hain, jis maang mein kabhi sindoor sajayata ab vohi maang kali hain, you know it hurts alot when you see your mother like that, kabhi deekhati nahi lekin mein janti hoon ki mama har pal papa ki yaad mein roti rehti hain....... shiv if you don't want to see your mother like that you have to make mr.kapoor understand''
''i am so sorry to hear that...vasai how did he die''
shiv was curious
''you probaly know om khandelwal''
''the name sounds familiar but i can't remember''
said shiv
''well he was one of the top buisness man and had a lot of rival but none of us ever thought that buisness rivalry could go to the extent of killing some one......
it was a friday night papa had some work to do so he stayed back at the office to finish the work, once he had finished the work he came out the office and thats when he got shot and he died on the spot''
gauri was narrating the whole story to shiv with tear in her eyes but she never let them come out because the last thing she wanted was to break down in front of a stranger who strangley did not seem like an stranger to her she felt as if she had known him for ages
on the other hand shiv was thinking that gauri is so strong she's been through alot but never broke down, there another quality of hers god this girl always manages to amaze me.
''i'm sorry i'm boring you are'nt i''
''no no absalotley not''
''emmm do you want coffee''
''uhh yeah sure''
gauri called the peon to get coffee for her and shiv while shiv was looking around the room, it was really beautifully decaorated ,mauve painting with beautiful canvas on the wall. beach effect furniture around the room with vase of gorgeos flowers on top of them, a small leather sofa pushed against the wall and on them snow white cusions were scattered, there was a coffee table infront of the sofa with a bowl of floating candle on it and under the table a white furry rug and in the centre of the room was her table very well organized with some files on one side and photo of her family on the other but the one thing that caught his eyes was the small madir with the statue's of baghwan shiv and gauri at the other end of the room...
shiv thinking shivgauri perfect couple
shivs thoughts came to an end when he heard someone calling out to him
''shiv.....shiv...(a bit louder)shiv''
''huh...haan kuch kaha tumne''
''haan apki coffee''
''oh thanks''
''welcome.....waise kah n khi gaye tai''
''kahi nahin i was just admiring the decoration of your cabin..it's very beautiful''
''thankyou''

scene fades to a darkroom where a man is sitting in a rocking chair and talking on the phone with another man who is looking scared

''sir, he is still alive''

''tum logo sei ek bhi kaam achi tara se nahin hoti abh yeh kaam mujhe kudh hi karna padega

thankyou to everyone who commented,😊 i am really sorry if this part wasn't that good.i really suck at writing fanfics

Edited by iqbal-pallavi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
aww..... thats an awesome story you got going.. please do continue!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
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it was tooo good plss do cont......soon as possible 😃 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
great part!!!
continue soon plz!!!
😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
muskaan is so funny she told everything to gauri's friend 😆 😆
nice part 👏 👏

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