(mausum pyar ka) ff on shivgauri pt4pg7

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i have been inspired by great ff writers to try my hand on writing one aswell, it won't be that good as it's my first time writing one. please leave comments good or bad so i can decide if i should continue or not and if you have any suggestion on what he ff could be named please do tell me😊

Mehan and Nikkila Kapoor -head of the family and parents of four childrens Samar, Anupam , Shiv and Kushboo. Mehans a business (owner of S.A.S Enterprise) who has now retired and enjoying his life with his family , his better half Nikkila is a traditional housewife who loves all her children a lot and her husband is her life. They are both very loving characters.

Samar Kapoor -eldest son married to kaya chaterjee a Bengali girl. He is one of a kind, all ways jokes around you would never think he is a successful businessman , he loves his family a lot his better half kaya is totally opposite to him she is always serious and very strict everyone in the family calls her Hitler. have one 7 years old daughter called Tannu

Anupam and Nandini Kapoor- Anupam is the second eldest son and Nandini is his wife , they are the most romantic couple of the family, love each other a lot since college days. Anupam along with his two brothers takes care of the family business and has become a successful business man like his elder brother Samar, whereas Nandini helps her mother-in-law with the housework. Both of them treat Shiv and Kushboo like their own children and could do anything for them

Shiv Kapoor- the most eligible bachelor in Mumbai, successful business man at the age of 23 , biggest flirt , changes his girlfriend practically everyday because he thinks keeping one girl for days is boring , he is very romantic but he stays within his limits because he is reserved for his sapnon ki rani, Shiv Kapoor is also know for his raging anger once he's angry only a miracle could stop it.

Kushboo Kapoor and vaid Garewal- love each other a lot but keep on fighting for the stupidest thing ever, study in the same college, Kushboo is a very traditional girl whereas Vaid is a total flirt but only loves Kushboo and will beat the hell out of the person who will hurt her.

Yashoda khandelwal-mother of two childrens Kavya and Gauri, she is very sweet and loveable her childrens are apple of her eyes. her husband om passed away in a car accident

Kavya and Anjali Khandelwal- they have been married for two years love each other allot, Anjali is very sweet and bubbly and very loving bahu and bhabi loves gauri like a little sister she never had. Kavya is very romantic guy has heart of gold loves his family a lot especially his sister gauri , he is very possessive when it comes to her, he is a very successful business tycoon and own KG Enterprise.

Gauri Khandelwal-very loving, bubbly, sweet and elgant girl who is a doctor by proffesion but acts like a total kid,she talks alot and nothing can shut her up,loves her family alot and shares every secrets with her bhabi who is like a big sister to her.gauri also has avery bad habit whenever she sees a bold person she has thing of going upto them and hitting them on the head(taken from a movie called tirch topi wale)

Edited by iqbal-pallavi - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice intro so many of them are my favs...continue soon

ps: character sketch is same for kavya-anjali and gauri i think you made a mistake 😊

Edited by Rock_Star - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx 😊
i've edited the intro
i will continue a soon as i have got enough comments 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice start!!!
continue soon plz!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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please please please please please please please please please continue sooooooooonnnnnnnnnn 😳
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great character sketch!!!just waiting to see Gauri hit Shiv on his head 😃 !!!pls start soon
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cool yaz welcome to the club!! 😳
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wow gr8 intro!! 😊 😊 plz cont!! šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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another ff.....
grt...
can't get enough of them!!!!!!
go ahead!!!!!
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thankyou all for your comments and special thanks to JCluvs srk who thought of a beautiful name for this ff mausum pyar ka thanks

PART 1

It's a rainy season in Mumbai, the lights are out, everyone is enjoying ,dancing and singing in the rain with their respective partners from old to young to even little childrens. Not caring about anything happening in the world, lost in themselves , lost in the world of love, passion and desire.
Away from all this is a beautiful young women in her 20's looking down at the amusing sight in front of her from her bedroom window and humming in tune with the rain and listening to songs on the radio and slow dancing to them and laughing and enjoying herself like the couples, lost in her own world when all of a sudden her alarm clock goes off . The girl quickly runs to the alarm clock and screams
'' oh s**** I'm late''
She rushes to the bathroom freshens up and changes into beautiful churidaar suit, comes back out dries her hair and goes out her room
''gauri !'' shouts a middle-aged women
''Ji mama ''
''where are you going''
''hospital ''
'' itni raat gaye''
'' haan night shift hain mama ''
'' tujhe night shift karni ki kya zuroorat hain''
''mama please I'm getting late I'll talk to you tomorrow….. Bye I love you''
'' sun to meri baat''
gauri has left before her mam could say anything else to stop her from going……….


Gauri is driving to city hospital while listening to her favourite song maule mere on the radio
And singing with it.

Maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere - 4
aankhein teri - 2, kitni haseen
ki inkaa aashiq, mein ban gayaa hoon
mujhako basaa le, iname tu
(ishq hai
maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere - 2) - 3

ki inakaa aashiq, mein ban gayaa hoon
mujhako basaa le, iname tu

mujhase yeh har ghadi, meraa dil kahe
tum hi ho usaki aarzoo
mujhase yeh har ghadi, mere lab kahe
teri hi ho sab guftagoo
baatein teri itni haseen, main yaad inko jab kartaa hoon
phoolon si aaye, khushboo

rakh loon chupaa ke main kahin tujhako
saayaa bhi teraa naa main doon
rakh loon banaa ke kahin ghar, main tujhe
saath tere, main hi rahoon
zulfen teri, itni ghani
dekh ke inako, yeh sochataa hoon
saaye me, inake main jiyoon
(ishq hai
maula mere, maula mere maula mere, maula mere - 2) - 3

(meraa dil yahi bolaa, meraa dil yahi bolaa,
yaara raaz yeh usane hai mujh par kholaa
ki hai ishq mohabbat, jiske dil mein
usko pasand karta hai maulaa) - 3

The song ended at the right time because now gauri was in front of city hospital which she call her second home , here she met nice people and not so nice people, made good friends but no enemies because everyone loves her so there is no chance of making enemies.
Gauri was thinking of all the moments she spent in her second home with her colleagues who are like her family when all of a sudden she got put back into reality by a knock on the car window , she rolled down the window to see her best friend khashish shouting and screaming at her for being late.
''what is this gauri you are late again, I am sick and tired of saving you all the time , next time I'm not going to save you''
Gauri gets out of her car and put hers hand around khashish shoulder and says
''sweetheart I know you , you will never do anything that will get me into trouble….right''
''tell me again why are we friends''
Gauri replies'' because you love me''

Khashish gives her a look saying you are impossible and then they head inside the hospital.

Edited by iqbal-pallavi - 18 years ago

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