(mausum pyar ka) ff on shivgauri pt4pg7 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
U named the FF!! cool!! nice song n update!!! 😊 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
great intro and i loved the first part.keep it up.looking forward for more
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
nice start
can't wait for next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
thankyou every one who commented the next part is on the way😊
Edited by iqbal-pallavi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thankyou you so much to the people who have commented
this is the next part
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PART 2
Gauri and khashish head inside the hospital to find crowd of media people who are bombarding questions at a middle aged women and three men around there 20's and three women round about the same age
''what the hell is going on'' shouted gauri
''gauri thank god you are here'' a man replied coming out of the crowd
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'dr. sujal what's going on here, what the hell are they doing here''
''Mehan Kapoor the famous business tycoon, your brother might know him, he got shot by one of his enemies. He's out of danger now but has to stay at the hospital for few days''
sujal replied to gauri's question
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'thank god he's ok, dr. sujal if you need any kind of help, you can ask me anytime''
''actually as a matter of fact I wanted a favour from you''
''what''
''I have to go to Shimla urgently, will you please take care of Mr. Kapoor , he's a very important person and you're the only one I trust''
''ok fine''
Gauri looks towards Mr. Kapoor family and see's that they are getting bothered by the media which they don't need at this moment, so she decides to help them out a bit.
''hey, this is a hospital not a zoo so will you please do me a favour and get out of here'' shouted gauri
''look madam , we are not going to go till we do not meet Mr. Kapoor, this news will be prophet able for our company. It's not everyday we get money making news '' one of the male journalist replied back
''dude, there's a man in there who just got shot and all your thinking is about making money''
''dhekiye madam agar aap hamaari jagaa hoti to aap bi aisi hi karti, paiso ki liye koi kuch bhi karsakta hain''

Gauri rather annoyed by the mans comment replied back '
'aaj mujhe bataa challa ki iss duniya mein insaniyat naam ka koi cheez bhi nahin hain. You all are so selfish, it's disgusting''
''madam……..''
Gauri interrupted '' don't you dare say anything else, I really can't be bothered , I have more important things to do than listen to you, as for all of you ( looking at all the reporter) get out otherwise I'll have to get the guard to kick you out'' shouted gauri

The reporter had left and gauri had went near the family
''don't worry, your husbands going to be absolutely fine'' gauri said to the women who was standing in front of her looking pathetic
After a long pause the lady managed to say
'' thank you''
''Mrs. Kapoor maine kuch nahin kiya , you should thank doctor sujal''
''she means thank you for getting rid of the reporters''
she looked at the man who just said that, he was a well built man, with chocolate brown eyes which will melt any girls heart, black hair which is gelled back wearing pinstripe suit which is making him look so handsome and that killing smile makes him look all the more irresistible.
'' hi, I'm Shiv Kapoor''
'' hi, gauri khandelwal''
''gauri khandelwal……Kavya Khandelwals sister''
''yeah''
'' very nice to meet you''
''nice to meet you to''
They shake hands and Shiv introduces gauri to his family
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'this my mama Nikkila Kapoor , my eldest brother Samar his wife kaya , my other brother Anupam and his wife Nandini and this is my sister khushboo''
''nice to meet you all, oh by the way this is my friend khashish Singhania''
''Hi''
They were all talking mostly gauri trying to console Nikkila that everything will be fine and not to worry about anything and Shiv just staring at her when all of a sudden a nurse informs gauri that one of her patients is refusing to take her medicine and wants to see her so gauri leaves leaving Shiv mesmerised by her beauty

Edited by iqbal-pallavi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
👏 nice update but a small one .....aare yaar inscrease the font size my eyes r paining .....and i dont have specticles also.... 😳

please please please please jaalllldddiiiii update karna 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
same like sumu dii
please jaldi update karna
n fount size thoda increase karna 😆
okk now loved the intro n the 1st n 2nd part as well
do cont soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
i am so sorry about the font size i will icrease it dont worry and thankyou so much for your comments and i will probally update on tuesday as i have an science exam on monday and i have to revise for it.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
i like your ff. its great. lakin yaar update ko kuch lamba karo. so gauri is a doctor. hmm looks like shiv is falling for her already. like kitty and sumi di cont soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
great part!!!
continue soon plz!!!
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