(mausum pyar ka) ff on shivgauri pt4pg7 - Page 3

nice part!!!shiv already admiring Gauri 😳 thts nice!!!pls continue soon

Hey, I just read both parts to the story and I luv it, Gauri is a doctor and Shiv is already latoo for her 😆 waiting for next part.

Originally posted by: crystalclear

i like your ff. its great. lakin yaar update ko kuch lamba karo. so gauri is a doctor. hmm looks like shiv is falling for her already. like kitty and sumi di cont soon 👏

n now who will be the next one to say that like sumu diii kitty n maria update jaldi karna😆😆

plz update soon
we all r waiting

thankyou everyone for their lovley comments this is the next part😊

Part 3

''hey baccha kaisi ho''
''teekh hoon bar aap se bohut naraz hoon'' said a little girl around 6 upset
''naraz, kyun maine kya kiya''
''aap ne kahan ki aap jab ayengi aap sab se pehle mujhe akar milengi, bar app to aye hi nahin''
''oops (biting her tongue) I am so sorry beta I totally forgot please forgive me'' pleaded gauri
''ok, ok aaj maaf kiya bar agli baar nahin''
''thank you my angel''
''waise aaj aap late kaise'' questioned the little girl
''long story so forget about it, what did you do all day''
''play with my Barbie dolls, you know I got Kenny and Barbie married today''
''really, ek din aap ki bhi aisi hi shaadi hogi''
Making a face ''no ways''
Gauri laughing '' kyun''
''because boys are irritating''
'' sab larke ek jaise nahin hote''
''aap kyun shaadi nahin karti''
''kyunki mujhe apni sapnon ka raj Kumar nahin mila''
''aap ki sapnon ka raj Kumar hoga kaisa'' the little girl questioned
''mere sapnon ka raj Kumar. Emmmm…… voh handsome hoga, chocolate brown eyes which is filled with love, jo mentally aur physically strong ho aur sabse important mujse haad se zyada pyar karne vaala hoga mera sapnon ka raj Kumar, my prince charming'' said gauri with a sweet smile on her face
'' dr. gauri Mrs. Mehta one of your patients are waiting for you'' said a nurse from behind
'' teekh hai tum jao mein arahi hoon (now facing the little girl) and you my angel take your medicines and got to sleep ok''
''ok….(kissed gauri on the cheek)goodnight''
(kisses the girl on the cheek)''goodnight''
Saying that gauri left and after a while shiv came in, he had heard every bit of the conversation gauri had with the girl ,for some reason he can't keep his eyes of gauri and wanted to know more about her and the only way he thought of was talking to the little girl he went in and so the girl getting ready to go to bed
''hey''
''hi'' the little girl said with a smile
''aap ka naam kya hain''
''muskaan''
''muskaan, what a pretty name''
''thank you''
''so …. Muskaan voh jo dr aunty abhi yahan se gayi''
'' kaun gauri aunty''
''haan, kya aap mujhe unki bare main kuch bata sakte hain
''kyun''
''Emmmm…''
Seeing the worried expression on shivs face she got the idea
'' I know you love her'' muskaan shouted out
''ssshh………….'' (he put his hand over her mouth)
''aap ko kaise bata chala''
''it so obvious uncle''
'' so are you going to tell me anything about her''
''kya batau''
''kuch bhi, unki adatai''
Muskaan started laughing at the word adatai
''kya hua, tum kas kyun rahi ho'' said shiv confused
''voh ek baat yaad agayi''
''kya''
''ek din hospital mein ek admi ayata voh takla tah''
''haan tho''
''gauri aunty jab bhi ek takle ko dekhti hain to unki haaton mein kujli hoti hain aur us insaan ko saar pe marti hain, so us din………..''
Muskaan didn't have to finish the sentence because shiv had understood what she was going to say and started laughing along with Muskaan and thought that gauri is such a kid .

Originally posted by: crystalclear

i like your ff. its great.thankyou lakin yaar update ko kuch lamba karo kya aur kitna lamba karu. so gauri is a doctor.yep she is i thought of doing something different with her character hmm looks like shiv is falling for her already.ofcourse who wouldn't like kitty and sumi di cont soon i already did👏

Originally posted by: gujibabe

great part!!!
continue soon plz!!!
😊

thankyou

Originally posted by: shivgauri

nice part!!!shiv already admiring Gauri 😳 thts nice!!!pls continue soon

thanks kuku. yep he is afterall she is his gauri😳 .btw i really like your username😊

Originally posted by: Jenna Dutt

Hey, I just read both parts to the story and I luv it, Gauri is a doctor and Shiv is already latoo for her 😆 waiting for next part.

thankyou😊 . yeh gauri is a doctor and shiv already mad about her , i am sure whereever this girls goes she makes everyine fall in love with her and to make shiv the hotty *droools* 😳latoo as you say she has to be special.

Originally posted by: koolkitty

n now who will be the next one to say that like sumu diii kitty n maria update jaldi karna😆😆

i have updated😊