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mintfresh

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Posted: 18 years ago

#211

awesum part
shiv is so cute and adorable.loved it.keep it up.
looking forward for next part

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mad

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Posted: 18 years ago

#212

hw cute of him to go n sit with ladies 😆

continue soon 😃 😃 😃

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suni

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Posted: 18 years ago

#213

shiv in between ladies so cute and adorable varna abb kaha miline itne acchi munde ladkhiyoo ki beech baitke gupshup laganewale....now a days all want to be in discos or mohalewale chai ke adde pe ya thash kelethe hai 😳 😕

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maria

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Posted: 18 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: mintfresh
awesum part
shiv is so cute and adorable.loved it.keep it up.
looking forward for next part

thanks mint.i know he was aye. just loved him. hey i will if i get more replies. no one seem to comment. i an staying true to my words about the less people reply the more days i will take to update....😆

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maria

@crystalclear

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Posted: 18 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: ash9
hw cute of him to go n sit with ladies 😆

continue soon 😃 😃 😃

i know. but he was just there. he wanted to near her all day.......😆
i will try my best😆😆😆

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maria

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Posted: 18 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: sum2005
shiv in between ladies so cute and adorable varna abb kaha miline itne acchi munde ladkhiyoo ki beech baitke gupshup laganewale....now a days all want to be in discos or mohalewale chai ke adde pe ya thash kelethe hai 😳 😕

hehehehe di. ur so funny. app ko kis ne kaha. mujeh lagta hai ke ajj kal ke larke ziyada larkiyon me ghuste hain line marne ke liye😆 but shiv was sweet. going there for his sister and gauri. 😆

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prab_rockinn

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Posted: 18 years ago

#217

mashallah kya mohobat hai!!!!!!

😳 😳 😳 is pyaar ko kisi ki nazar na lage!!!!

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Amnu

@Eternized_Blues

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Posted: 18 years ago

#218

maria di
dhamki dene mein mahir ho gaye ho aap shaadi ke baad...
here is my share in comments...
i missed a lot... they are engaged..shashank gone...everything on place and i love you for that
and your urdu...just mashallah...
kripa karke jaldi update keejeega... 😉 😆

Asever 😳

Amneet 😉

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maria

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Posted: 18 years ago

#219

part 13

The car stopped in front of his house rather than mine. I looked at him questioningly. "gauri me ne abhi tak apna ghar khud nahi dekha, khud se shart laga rakhi thi. Kt jis din me pehle din is ghar me aoon ga. Tum mere saath ho gi. So kudrat ko ajj ke din yeh manzoor tha." "lakin bahir to tala laga hoa hai" I told him. "haan chokidar baba do din ko chuti par hain." he told me. "kya yeh itefaq hai" I asked. "nahi subha ghar se chalte waqt inhe phone kar ke kaha tha. Me nahi chahta tha ke wo hume mera matlab hai tumhe mere saath ata dekh kar apni sooch ke mutabik kuch akhaz karien or phir uncle or aunty tak koi galat baat pohenche." I was surprised at his thinking. He thought about it further than I had. His eyes were glittering when he saw his house from inside. " bilkul mere khuwabon jaisa, or taabeer to dekho meri kismat ke tum mere saath ho." at the end we came a bedroom in which there was an enlarge photo of me on the wall which could be seen as soon as the door opened. Shiv went up to it and touched it madly.

"koi faraq nahi mere khuwab aur is taabeer me" he went up to the small fridge in the room and took out orange juice he poured them into two glasses and came back to me. I took the glass and sat on the sofa. Shiv was roaming around the room restlessly. I could not understand his restlessness. "gauri….. Mujhe bilkul yun lag raha hai jaise tum mere hi wajood ka hisa ho aur mera wajood apne hise ka mutlashi……. Me ne barson tumhari chah me guzare hain. Abb meri azmaish ka waqt khatam hoa hai." he sat near me on the sofa. "me tumhe chutey hoe bhi dar lag raha hai ke kahin tum mujhe par yeh shak na karo ke me tumhari tanhai ka faida utha raha hon. Mera dil mere kabu me nahi aur meri soochien mere bas se bahir lakin ajj tumahra karb mujeh gunaah ki dawat de raha hai." I got scared. "magar shiv me janti hon tum mere aitemad ko khabhi thes nahi pohencha sakte, tanha hum pehle bhi bohot dafa mile hain. Ajj noiyat mukhtalif hai lakin gunah ka yeh ehsas khud sakhta hai" "Goya ajj hum jo bhi karien ge wo gunaah na hoga" he eyes were looking at me questioningly. Not looking away for one second. "haan shiv." I said "tum ba ikhtiyar ho jo chaho mere saath karo. Me khabhi ehtejaj nahi karon gi.kyunke yahan me zabardasti nahi layi gayi, tumhare sung to me tum par aur khud par etemad ke shahare ayi hon. aur gunah or sawab ke darmiyan baal barabar hi to fasla hai me tumhare kissi iqdam par aitraz nahi karon gi." I closed my eyes and sat back. Wondering what would be his next step. Did he braught me here to take advantage of me?. Like shashank did he want me only on his bed.? Does pure love not exist in world?

Whatever happens to me today. Only I will be responsible. Me who would kill my parents trust on me. They trusted me blindly. They thought I was different from the rest. Why. So I could bring shame on their prestige. I know I will have to face shashank's fiery. But before that this punishment. Is my whole going to be a punishment. "gauri" he said lightly. "ankhien kholo." he was sitting on his knees sitying near me feet. His hands on my knees. "mujeh ilm hai tum kya soch rahi ho. Kya mujh se aisi tuwako karti ho? Mujeh to khud se bhar ke tumpar aitemad hai kya tumhe mujh pe yakeen nahi. Pagli koi apni zindagi ke noor ko yun andheron me badal sakta hai. Me to zindagi ke akhiri lamhe tak tumhara intezar karon ga. Tum jab meri ho jao gi. Us se kabal me tumhe chuon ga bhi nahi." he took his hands off my knees. I took hold of

Edited by crystalclear - 18 years ago