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mad

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Posted: 18 years ago

#221

wow.....shiv is soooo nice 😊
i didnt expect him to be this nice 😆

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prab_rockinn

@prab_rockinn

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Posted: 18 years ago

#222

*"mujeh ilm hai tum kya soch rahi ho. Kya mujh se aisi tuwako karti ho? Mujeh to khud se bhar ke tumpar aitemad hai kya tumhe mujh pe yakeen nahi. Pagli koi apni zindagi ke noor ko yun andheron me badal sakta hai. Me to zindagi ke akhiri lamhe tak tumhara intezar karon ga. Tum jab meri ho jao gi. Us se kabal me tumhe chuon ga bhi nahi."*
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amazin lines maria.... jus tooooooooo good!!!!!!
but i'm a little confused... y did the sentence in the end,end so abruptly!!!!!!

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kitty

@koolkitty

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Posted: 18 years ago

#223

bass hogaya mera abb main kya kahoon just a word is enough for mohobat *awesome* 👏
u rock it girl 👏 👏 keep it upp
*"mujeh ilm hai tum kya soch rahi ho. Kya mujh se aisi tuwako karti ho? Mujeh to khud se bhar ke tumpar aitemad hai kya tumhe mujh pe yakeen nahi. Pagli koi apni zindagi ke noor ko yun andheron me badal sakta hai. Me to zindagi ke akhiri lamhe tak tumhara intezar karon ga. Tum jab meri ho jao gi. Us se kabal me tumhe chuon ga bhi nahi."*
hay hay these words were jus killing me shiv is soooooo over it!!!! 😳pabs im with u i loved these words😳 *daydreaming*😳

nothing more now jus the thing update soon😆😆

kitty😉

Edited by koolkitty - 18 years ago

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KAT

@Catwoman

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Posted: 18 years ago

#224

Maria!! 👏 ...i love this FF!! your finest yet...the urdu is mind blowing!! and such passion!! 😳 😳 😳

Kat 😛

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suni

@sum2005

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Posted: 18 years ago

#225

maira umair kitne rommantic haina......just got to know in the update.

wow did he know u r using his mohabat wali alfaaz in this ff.

loved it and ur urdu is mindblowing...nanana....umair urdu is mindblowing 👏 .

kitne pyari insaan hai shiv aur woh zaroor gauri ko kushrakega. please dont bring that shashank into the story anymore . 😡 😡 😡

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mintfresh

@mintfresh

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Posted: 18 years ago

#226

awesum part
ur command over urdu language is too good .
keep it up.loving these romantic updates.looking forward for more.plz cont soon

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kitty

@koolkitty

Voyager

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Posted: 18 years ago

#227

finally finished reading all was too much behind 😆 😆 😆
ok when is the next part coming make it fast "mohobat in demand" 😆 😆

all of them were awesome from both zainu too👏👏👏

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maria

@crystalclear

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Posted: 17 years ago

#228

part 14

I took hold of his hands. "shiv na mein tum se dar rahi hon. Na shak karti hon, mein tumhari hon or humesha tumhari hi rahon gi, mar kar bhi nahi." he quickly covered my mouth with is hands. "yun na kaho gauri… mujhe tumhari zindagi bohot azeez hai." when he came to drop me home he was going to leave from outside. I tried to persuade him to come in the house. But he started making excuses. "shiv agar tum ami se mile bag hair chale gaye to shayad wo kuch aur sochien jis mein wo haq bajanib hon gi. Iss liye chai pi kar jao, balke yeh to khane ka waqt hai." "acha." he laughed. "phir to mein khana kha ke hi jaon ga." ami was very happy to see him. As soon as he finished he asked permission to eat. "aunty abb chalta hon… haan yaad aya aunty me app ki ijazat ke bag hair ap ki beti ko apne ghar le gaya tha. Asl mein kuch kaghzat lena the, aur phir mujhe lamba chakar lagana parta. Issi bahane unho ne ghar dekh liya" he wanted to clarify. "koi baat nahi beta" said my mother. "lakin ghar to is ne pehle bhi dekh rakha hai" "kab" he asked shocked. "mein is ke saath thi" ami smiled. "lakin kya chokidr baba ne bhi isse nahi pehchana." my heart started beating fast. What if ami came to know we were alone there. Maybe she will believe me but she thoughts for shiv will be negative. "lakin na inho ne bataya na unho ne. lagta hai koi chakar hai." he changed the topic by joking. On which I let out a relieved sigh. "waise bhi us din to beshtar kamre bund the jis din hum gaye the." she told. She seemed relieved.

My gentle generous and very caring khala passed away today I am feeling very sad. I miss her the most in her own house. She recently got her daughter married. She had been through a lot. But right now I'm seeing her in front of me. Lying t here lifeless. But there is a smile on her face. She had never said anything to anyone. Even if someone has hurt her badly. She died while praying. Never said anything to anyone. She has left me with a question . A question which has become very important to me. That is it possible that your mind is at ease your death will become painless. If your mind is relaxed your death will come you will not know not say anything to anyone and just leave this world.?

Finally I hav given forth years exam and I am free right now. I decided to go back home. I greeted everyone. Joyfully. It was just about time for lunch. I too sat on the table with rest of them. Sitting opposite my dad. Oh how I love him….. "kya karna chahta hai mera beta." abu ji asked looking at me. Everyone was quiet at there seats. "kuch samujh me nahi araha abu.." I said seriously "na koi parhayi likhayi ka kaam karna chahti hon. Na kuch seekhne ka mood hai. Bas bore hoti hon, bohot akela mahsoos karti hon. Kuch aisa kaam jis me zehen sakoon mehsoos kare…. Koi bohot excitement wala kaam karna chahti hon…" every one finished lunch dad called ami in his room. Servents were picking up the dishes I came outside in the balcony. Some while after mum called me in her room. She was picking up things in her room. I sat on the bed. I picked up the pillow and held it to my chest. The pillow smelled very familiar but not of the perfume abu used. "ami yeh kon sa perfume abu lagate hain. Jis ki itni pyari khushbu hai. Bari manoos si khushbu hai." ami turned around. Teher was a different colour on her face." gauri beti tum ne itne pyar se takiye ko apne saath kyun laga rakha hai." "bas ami" I said gently. "yun hi khayal…….aya ke iss takiye par mere abu raat ko sir rakh ke sote hain" "lakin tum to apne abu se Keechi Keechi rehti hon" "nahi to ami mein to un se bohot pyar karti hon" I felt tears on my cheeks "aray ro kyun rahi hon. Jantii hon tum apne jazbat ka izhar nahi kar sakti is liye aisi ho. Tumhare abu bhi jante hain. Or raha perfume ka sawal to yeh shiv ne gift ki thi. Zabardasti" I let go of the pillow as have been caught stealing. Ami laughed. " tumhari boriyat ka ilaj ho gaya. Hum soch rahe hain ke is bar shiv aye to tum dono ki shadi kar di jaye,"

I ran out of the room. This was too much for me. I was not able to face my mother all day. I did not know that they would come up with this idea. I was happy. At dinner I sat on the table with rest of them when dad said. " phir humari beti ko humari tajweez pasand ayi ke nahi?" "abu kya tajveez." said kaya. "agar app in ko kahin bejh rahe hain to hum bhi jaye ge." " tum har jaga jane ko tayar raha karo. Said hadi. "agar abu baji ko kunwien me phenk aye to tum bhi saath chali jana…" "hadi!" shouted ami and abu. Very angrily. I looked up "koi baat nahi bach hai" I said siding hadi. "agar abhi bacha hai to bar kab ho ga." if I had nto come in middle abu would have killed him today. Hadi apologized and every one started eating again.

hello every one i am back and soo happy. i am so lucky to have you guys. you all have been amazing. thank you very much for everything you guys have done. i have missed you guys loaddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd dddddddddddddddddddddddddddsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssss. sumio di kat mad amneet kitty this is for you. i am sorry i took so long to coem back. i am very very soryy.........😆. once again love you alllllllll

Edited by crystalclear - 17 years ago

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Amnu

@Eternized_Blues

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Posted: 17 years ago

#229

WELCOME BACK DI🤗.🤗.. how are u...missed you a lot...i really hope you are fine 😊and you need not to thank us we love and care for you and now i can say my famous line that i will try my best to update on time...haven't said while u were away...i so happy yo see you back...this just made my day🥳

gonna read and comeback

i am a total goner after reading this part di....the perfume scene was so funny and adorable...sound like we are going to hear the wedding bells soon...can't wait...i am so excited that youa re back that i can't even think of words rite now di...lol...continue soon👏

Detective Amneet😉

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desi chic

@desi chic

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Posted: 17 years ago

#230

MARIA!! OMG!🤗 Welcome home jaan!! Hell, we've missed you like craziness... How are you feeling? I hope things are better... Gosh woman, you scared us shit... But we know you're a fighter😃 I'm so proud of you!! I am so excited *does a jingle*... I will read your update and comment soon!

~ Will edit.

Cheers,

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